SOUND OF MUSIC-UPDATED PT 07 PG 26

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Infinity.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

superb update
loved it

P.S loved ur ff...pls continue

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ashwimaaneet

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#102

nice update waiting for next plz update soon

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

part 5
nice part dear...
cont soon...

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mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

wonderful update...
very emotional too...
please continue soon...

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Hi geetsrir,Maan, I read your story just now, as

i came to its contact by chance. But if you are thinking to quit

writing pls don't do it. Your story is really

unique, untill now I haven't read anything

so closely related to MUSIC. The minute

details you give about musical instruments,

ragas,songs etc is outstanding. Your story is awesomely

fantastic so pls don't stop it & don't kill

the story. Its a request.

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Tinker ;)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

don't stop writing this ff
i loved this part loads
con..soon

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Ash1991

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

amazing update...

lvd it...poor geet afraid of maan...

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maaneet0887

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PART 06

Geet couldn't tolerate the irritation and pain and she fainted immediately.Adi saw Geet and said with panic,"Geet...!!!!"Maan was alarmed when he heard Adi's panicked voice and turned and saw that Geet had fainted and ran towards her.Maan's heart lurched seeing Geet in that state and was shocked seeing Geet's feet which was red and swollen due to ant bites.

Some of the ants were still biting her feet and Maan bent down and crushed the ants angrily for biting his Geet's feet and untied her and said patting her cheeks,"Geet...!!!!!"Geet didn't answer him and was still unconscious.But when he touched her rosy cheeks then he felt a current run down his spine and saw her intently and he felt peace when he held her inside his embrace.

Maan shrugged of these thought immediately and lifted her in his strong arms and carried her inside the house to his room.Maan said with panic,"Geet aankhen kholo Geet...pls...!!!!!!"Maan lied Geet in his bed and he took a bowl of cold water and some soft cloth and rubbed it to her ant bites.It was turning swollen red due the acid which had entered inside her skin.

Maan said with panic and said patting her cheek,"Geet aankhen kholo..pls am sorry...dekho mein tumhe taanadav sikhaadoonga lekin pls aankhen khol do...pls Geet...plsss..!!!!!!"Geet didn't answer and after sometime she opened her eyes lowly.When she opened then a blurry vision came into her eyes which showed a man sitting beside her keeping his hand on his forehead.

Geet rubbed her eyes and the blurry vision turned to exact adn saw Rajan sitting beside her and Maan in her right side.Maan saw geet had opened her eyes and said,"Geet...tum theek ho...am sorry...!!!!!"On that time Geet was scared hearing his voice and she backed off scared seeing Maan.Rajan saw this and said angrily,"Maan...jao yahan se tum usse daraakar usse sorry maang rahe ho...jao yahan se...!!!!!"

Geet saw her swollen feet which was swollen so much for she can't dance for atleast 24 hrs.Geet was horrified seeing her feet condition and tried to get up from there but she couldn't while rajan said,"Beta..aap yahi kyun nahin araam karlethe...!!!!!!"Geet said,"Nahin sir...yeh mera kamra nahin hai i can go to my room...!!!!!"Geet got up and tried to walk but her swollen feet wasn't co-operating with her and she was abt to fall but two strong hands held her waist.

Geet was scared feeling the warmth and she knew who held her and it was MSK.Maan said,"Geet...tum yahan aaraam karsakthi ho..pls zidd mat karo..agar aur pressure daalogi apne pair par toh woh aur bhi swelling ho sakthi hai...pls...meri baat suno...!!!!!!"Geet said with painful voice folding her hands,"Please mujhe akela chod deejiye...!!!!"Maan couldn't see the pain in those almond eyes and he left her immediately and she was abt to fall but she held the wall for support.

Maan walked behind her trying to help her and he would try stretch his hands to hold her..to help her till she reaches her room but Geet held her hand to stop him in the meaning that she won't need his help.Maan's heart was crying to see her pain while his mind was showing the ego.But his heart won his mind once again and he was once again attracted towards Geet.

Finally Geet reached her room with great difficulty and she lied on her bed feeling pain.Tears poured down from those almond eyes and she was afraid of Maan now.Maan came back to his room which was empty now and remembered today's incident how she was purposely doing wrong step to make him attract towards the dance once again fm alcohol.

Maan took his alcohol bottle still feeling her pain and was abt to sip it but her sarcastic words came into her mind saying that man has to work in open or else his credit will be taken by others.On that time his one murky past came into his vision.He remembered how Samyukta saw the talent and took advantage of it and left him in the darkness taking his talent fm him.

Maan tried to concentrate on sipping alcohol but couldn't becoz Geet's scaring almond eyes came into his vision.Maan threw the alcohol bottle to the ground with anger and the alcohol spilled everywhere.Maan now took the glass pieces and was abt to crush it in his hand but a voice said,"What r u waiting for...do it!!!!"Maan looked up and saw Geet apprehensively while Geet smirked at him.

Geet said smirking,"Tum sirf yahi karsakthe ho..tum sirf apne aapko chot pahuncha sakthe ho..naaki unlogon ko nahin jinhone tumhe is dasha mein dakhel diya...kyun maaro apne aapko...pahunchaavo apne aapko chot...aur mar jaavo...tum aaj saabit kar rahe ho ki tum ek waste body ho...lo stab urself...!!!"Geet gave the glass piece to his hand and held it tightly but before it's sharp blade scratch his hand he took off his hands back immediately leaving the glass piece.

Maan shouted at her turning opposite to her immediately,"Tum hoti kaun ho yeh kehne waali..mein apne aapko kyun chot pahunchaavoon...mein nahin karoonga aisa kabhi nahin...!!!"Geet gave the impressive smile and she vanished immediately and Maan turned and saw Geet.But she wasn't there and Maan called,"Geet...Geet...kahan chalo gayi tum...!!!!!"His eyes welled up becoz he didn't saw any warmth today in those almond eyes seeing him.It showed only fear for which his mind and heart were shaked inside to his core.

Maan didn't know what was going on but Geet was slowly filling inside him just like a creeper climb for the strong grip from the strong tree.Maan was foolishly following her but there was a bond of trust between them or rather hv to say fm her.Maan didn't knew that what was the sensation which Geet was developing inside him but this was blissful...it was peaceful...it was so contented that whenever her name came to his lips then he felt a strange content for her.

Maan closed hs eyes to calm his thought but still Geet came to his mind vision and he was now confirmed that he like Geet so much that's y he was getting restless feeling her pain.If he gives punishment to her then it would pain him only.If he scold her for no mistake then he would feel angry on himself.If he try to harm her then he would pain in his heart for now it was beating only for her.

Now Maan realised that what was this sensation which was tying them both again and again and it was nothing but the love which had developed inside them both.Becoz Geet didn't give oppurtunity to hurt himself just she provoked him so that he can stop the act of stabbing himself and punishing himself.Maan saw the difference between Samyukta and Geet.Samyukta never showed the concern towards Maan but Geet is showing the concern in his imagination also.

If it is in real part then how Geet wil react he didn't know am sure she would be crying seeing his state.But ofcourse she was crying seeing his state...this was not a pity but was the love and concern which was overshadowing her heart.She couldn't stop thinking abt himself abt his pain and his state.Her heart was betraying her to love him deeply.Her heart was crying becoz of behaving with him today very rudely when he tried to help her.

Geet didn't know how to wash out the pain inside him but his pain was making her heart melt for him.Geet was thinking of hug him kiss him...console him...make him ready to face this cruel world which can pounce on him any day now if they come to know that he had once again lifted his head in this arts world.Geet was crying so much that she slept on the bed at almost morning.

Maan came to see Geet in her room to know that is she ok or not becoz his heart was beating restlessly and saw her sleeping peacefully in the bed.Maan saw Geet and sat beside her and kept his hand on her head.He felt her soft silky hair which were soft just like her body which he felt.When his fingers touched her skin accidentally then a current run down her spine and she willingly came into his lap in her half sleep state.

Maan was shocked to see her sleeping on his lap and tried to take his lap fm her head but saw she was sleeping peacefully.There was an innocent smile on her face and there was any fear on her face which he observed.Maan stroked her hairs and she cuddled inside his lap smiling cutely.Maan's M shaped lips curved into big smile seeing her cuddling her inside his lap.

Maan saw the innocent but angelic face for he felt that his miseries were washed out from his mind and body.He felt peace feeling her against his body.He was feeling so much calm and peace that he also cuddled up into her embrace and his head slid inside her chest and he hugged her waist tightly and drifted off to sleep.

Precap-Geet avoiding Maan and Maan is feeling guilty.😭

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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago