SOUND OF MUSIC-UPDATED PT 07 PG 26 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderful update...
eagerly waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
toh basically maan is jealous...dats why behaving like dis...

beautiful update...


loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n also fr d pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update bt ye sam kaun hai??
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
really nice one dear..
loved ur writing very much..very well described...👏
amazing...
please continue dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
Gosh! Such a nice update!!👏

Felt extremely sad to see Maan in pain!!😭

Samyukta???😕

Hmm seems Geet would be the one who will be able to heal him with her love and of course music and dance!!😳

Awesome Job sweets!!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 04


Geet went to her room clutching her chest which was throbbing violently.Geet's cheeks became red remembering the events which went on in the basement.Geet's heart anticipated painfully seeing Maan's state unknowingly.Geet's heart had started reacting to Maan's movement.His smile...his scent...his eyes which were chocolate brown & showed some kind of pain.She had the every urge to wipe off those pain which reflected in his eyes.


Geet didn't know abt him anything but still she felt he is no stranger to her.His cute killing smile which made her breath take away.His way of dancing with her holding her ever so possessively even in drunken state.His helplessness for not getting some Samyukta back...her heart went crazy thinking abt him.


But her mind had another way of thinking that he's her teacher's son for whom she was given admission to learn the dance.She didn't knew that loving Maan is a biggest sin but her mind stopped her right there of thinking abt him.Maan on the other hand was mumbling in the sleep dreaming abt Sam.


He didn't know that Geet was feeling something to her.On other hand Maan's father saw Geet handling Maan in an drunken state.Maan had some kind of respect to Geet & had a limit on him seeing Geet.Maan was touching Geet with every care & love which he saw in Maan's eyes.Becoz he always behaved rudely with everyone & even with him also and Maan's father was amazed to see Geet handle him perfectly.


Maan mumbled in his sleep with pain,"Kyun mujhe chodkar chali gayi Sam...kya mein itni waste body hoon ko mein tumhaare expectations par khara nahin utar saka??????"Geet felt a slight pang in her heart as if she was feeling a pain.Geet held her heart & saw around her as if someone is gonna crept outside & hug her to soothe their pain fm her.


Geet didn't sleep all the night thinking abt the new sensation which had dawned inside her which is not leaving her for peace & calm.And when she got the sleep then she felt calm when she took Maan's name in her mind.She felt that she's sleeping on his lap peacefully.


Maan's father felt that both of them r loving each other seeing the craving between them for each other.He was happy that he's gonna get a gud bahu as Geet but he also knew his son...he's not gonna accept Geet so easily after having a heart break fm his beloved Samyukta.


Next morning Geet got up & started doing Yoga & instructed the school's students with that activity.Maan on the other hand was sleeping peacefully in his room.The sun teased him reflecting on his face.Maan closed his hands to the sun's rays while he was hearing Geet's magical voice which was instructing them to do some exercise.


Maan yawned widely holding his head which was paining becoz of the overdose of alcohol & thought,"Yaar basement mein bhi roshni aane lagi...!!!!!!!"Then he thought for a second,"Basement mein toh Soorya ki roshni kabhi nahin aa sakthi isiliye toh mein wahan shift ho gaya tha...!!!!!!!"And he saw around him & was shocked that he was in his room.


His room was nice & cozy having the bed in the middle.There was the bedside tables beside his cot where some books were kept which had the tunes of the musical instruments.In the another corner..he had the drum set with sticks kept on the drums.On the another corner a big Guitar was entangled to the wall.Numerous flutes of the high pitches were kept on the table.


Then the violin which he was playing yesterday was kept on the table securely.He didn't know that who cleaned his bedroom & made him to sleep here.Then he saw the glass of lemon water kept aside on his bedside table.Maan took the lemon water & drank it.It tasted just like he preferred...a small smile crept on his lips cutely.


Then Maan got up & saw that his dresses were in his wardrobe here.Maan was amazed & called the servant of the house abt this.Servant didn't knew abt this while he went & took a shower & came outside & wore his pink T-shirt & blue jeans pant & went outside.When he came to the class then the girls were learning dance fm his father.


When he came then everyone saw him with amazement & was mesmerised with his new stature.Becoz he had shaved his chin & cheeks cleanly which showed soft white skin.Geet saw him & her cheeks turned with shy seeing his handsomeness but she shrugged off immediately & concentrated on her steps.Maan came & saw Get who was dancing wearing a maroon color dress.


Maan tried to get a glimpse of her or her eyes warmth...those bright twinkling hazels but all he saw was that she was avoiding him.Maan's heart felt restless when he felt that she's avoiding him.When Maan entered the big hall then every girls eyes turned towards him & started rolling over him but Geet was the one who controlled her emotions.


Maan was feeling disappointed seeing Geet avoiding him.What he has done that she's avoiding him?This question made him restless & he didn't knew that who cleaned his bedroom & made him to sleep in his room.Maan was feeling contented when he was sleeping in his room.He didn't know it was her scent which has made him breathe peacefully.It was her scent which was lingering around him which was making him peace & calm.


Maan's father Rajan Khurana couldn't believe that his son had got up so early & had came there.Maan was observing Geet intently to get a glimpse of her eyes...but he was failing while Rajan Khurana observed him seeing Geet intently.Geet was dancing for the song bho shambho with such an concentration that she ignored Maan completely.Maan's ego was hit becoz of this & was so angry with her.


Maan went to his room & opened his wardrobe & saw a red box.He opened it & it revealed the anklets which he was using this when he was dancing.Maan took it & went to the big hall where Geet ignored his presence completely.Maan's anger went to its peak & he shaked the anklets to get her attention but she ignored him completely.


Maan's anger went to its peak while Rajan was excited to see that he'll wear it or not or he's gonna throw it ages ago.Maan saw her ignorance which hit his ego & tied it to his feet immediately.Maan's father was happy to see that he had tied his anklets.He had a question in his mind will he dance and all his students were seeing him in amazement.


Maan came forward & stomped his feet with a high intensity that made the sound of anklets echo in the big hall.Geet opened her eyes immediately feeling the echo & saw the source of sound.She saw a feet & the person.It was none other than MSK.Maan glared at & gave the expression that she's no match for him in this.Geet gave a deadly glare that she's challenging him.


Maan raise his eyebrows & smirked while Geet also smirked at him which made him disturbed.Then Maan started,"Dad..start to sing...i want to show this attitude girl that who am i...!!!!!"Rajan was shocked but sat in his place happily & started singing the song Bho Shambho Shiva Shambho svayambhoIt is the song sung on Lord Shiva




[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BTw2GMbDxBs[/YOUTUBE]


Maan held his hands stiffly giving hasthas & gave a deadly glare to her & twisted immediately lifting his left leg 90 degrees & gave the Nataraja posture & danced.Geet didn't gave up & she also stood to challenge him & she acted just like Mohini to him.Maan was breaking his concentration seeing those bright twinkling hazels but still holded himself & did taanadav dance showing him that he's strong.



[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uRK9wLLBzOY&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]


Geet gave the competition with him & when she was dancing then she tripped & was abt to fall then she closed her eyes of hitting the floor but a pair of strong arms caught her waist & saved her by falling her.It was Maan & their eyes locked for a brief moment.But they both came to present world feeling around them immediately.



[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nRTh5JNzoiI&feature=results_video&playnext=1&list=PL080BD5E4135A0741[/YOUTUBE]




Rajan was so happy that he sung a song which portrayed the song as ardhanaarishwara.Man didn't wanted to dance to this song but Geet's smirk made him to dance to this song.Maan held Geet's hands fm back & held her waist fm his another hand.Geet felt that a current run down her spine & Maan also felt like her.They both involved in that song & forgot themselves in that song & danced.


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BX0COPkJy3o&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]




At end of the song Geet's legs were on Maan's waist & she had bended forward & he had caressed her body from his hands.Geet's senses driving crazy becoz of his masculine scent.Today for the first time Rajan saw his son's eyes twinkled becoz of Geet.Maan was so happy to have Geet so near him.Geet got down immediately feeling shy where all the students saw them with mouth hanging open.


Becoz Maan never danced with one of the student like this and they thought that they made for each other.But one of the student didn't like this and that is Naina who saw the couple with jealousy.Becoz she always tried to impress Maan but he didn't gave any attention to her but Geet only came yesterday & have made a place inside Maan's heart which intrigued her so much.


Precap-Maan's past is revealed by his father to Geet.Maan's anger on Geet...and after that feeling guilty seeing her state.


Previous Part 03-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2982338/sound-of-music-updated-pt-07-pg-26?pn=13



Next Part 05-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2982338/sound-of-music-updated-pt-07-pg-26



Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
awsem update geet ignororing maneet dance



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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
now moi going to read it from the first as now only i got time to catch this FF
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
superb update. i could feel as though iwas watching them dance. brilliantly written
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
awsome update
loved it
con..soon

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