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Posted: 13 years ago
sad update
what happened to geet suddenly
and how could Rajeev do all this
he needs to be punished
Hope geet and the children are all well
please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
very emotional...
poor geet is unconscious ...😭
and maan is feeling helpless...😭😕
waiting to know the next...

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 88
nice part...
my Jaanu can never be wrong...
hope Geet and baby are fine...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
MAAN is so sad yar 😭 me also crying
nyc update

LARAIB⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz plz make geet get better n also want both twins safe...

amazing update...painful at the end...
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Posted: 13 years ago




PART 89



Maan saw Geet sleeping silently she wasn't responding to the treatment and the baby girl inside her womb had stopped responding too.It was almost morning at 5am doctor went to see some improvement in Geet but she was still in that condition only.Doctor came to Maan and said,"Mr.Khurana am sorry ab humein dono bachche ko operation karke nikaalna hoga...nahin toh hum yeh patient ke liye lhatarnaak ho sakthi hai...aur ek bachcha bhi respond nahin kar rahi hai...agar aisa hi huva toh bachche aur maa dono ki zindagi khatre me pad sakthi hai...!!!!!"


Maan was shocked while dadimaa asked,"Aapki decision kya hai doctor...????"Doctor said,"Mere khayaal se aapko dono bachche ko pet se nikaalna hoga..aur uske liye operation karni hogi...aur haan hum us doosre twin ko nikaal kar incubator mein rakhkar hum unhe further develop hone me madat karsakthe hai..lekin aapki doosri bachchi ko shaayad bachaana naamumkin ho jaayegi...kyunki woh pet mein hi apne maa ko respond nahin kar rahi hai...!!!!!!!"


Maan once again collapsed to the chair and tears poured down from his eyes.Dadimaa said keeping her hand on his shoulder,"Maan bete...hosla rakhiye...ek baar geet ko dekhlee jiye...shaayad woh aapke pyaar ko sun sakthi hai...ek baar Maan bete...!!!!!!"Doctor saw them and said,"Mr.Khurana yaad rakhiye...yeh dono bachche aapke biwi ke zindagi ke liye khatra bansakthi hai...kya karna chaahenge..Geet aur bachchon ke beech mein aapko kisse chun na pasand karenge...!!!!!!!Pls jaldi se decide kar leejiye...nahin toh...aap teeno ko shaayad kho sakthe hai...!!!!"


Maan shouted with pain,"No...!!!!!!"On that time the nurse came running to the doctor and said with panic,"Doctor Mrs.Khurana ki dossra bachcha bhi respond nahin kar rahi hai...!!!!!!"Doctor was shocked,"What????"Which Maan heard and his family heard this and doctor ran to attend Geet.Maan ran behind her with panic and entered the ICU.Doctor said seeing Geet's pulse which was not moving and her two babies also.


Doctor said immediately to Maan,"Mr.Khurana ab aapko bahut hi kam samay hai..ab bataayiye...kya mein bachchon ko nikaaldoon ya phir..bachchon ko bachaavoon...tabhi aapko Geet ko khona hoga...pls...!!!!!!!"Maan said immediately,"Geet...!!!!!Par operation shuru hone se pehle kya mein Geet ko ek baar milsaktha hoon?????"Doctor nodded and left the ICU to prepare for the operation.


Maan came and sat beside Geet and said painfully,"Geet pls aankhen kholo kyun itni zid kar rahi ho...dekho mein tumhaari har zid maanne ke liye tayyar hoon...plss aankhen kholo...plss...!!!!!"Maan didn't saw any movement while his tears fell on Geet's hand and her hand moved immediately and slowly.Maan was shocked and shouted to doctor immediately,"Doctor...!!!!!!"Nurse came and saw that Geet's fingers r moving and rushed to inform abt it to her.


Doctor saw the ECG and her pulse which was now giving the indication of the live.Doctor was so happy and said to Maan to be outside to continue her treatment.Maan went outside but still he saw Geet from the glass when she was moving her fingers becoz of his tears.He knew that she can't see him like that becoz her heart would choke immediately seeing Maan in that state.


After numerous treatment which went on for several hours now Geet came to stable condition and the babies also.Geet got consciousness and whispered only one name,"Maan...!!!!!!"Doctor smiled and saw the baby in the scanning screen where the two babies were moving its tiny legs and its tiny hands which were in fists.Doctor wanted to know Geet's movement and gave some injection to know the babies movement.


The baby girl kicked its legs to its mother's womb to show that she's ok and the doctor smiled at it.Geet said resisting her pain holding her raised tummy,"Ouch...!!!!"Doctor smiled and said,"Kaisi hai aap Geet????"Geet opened her almond eyes and saw the screen where her babies were moving it's tiny legs and hands.First time her pale face split to wide smile and saw her babies lovingly.


Doctor observed this and said,"Kyun achche haina..aapke bachche...????"Geet said smiling,"Mujhe twins huva hai?????"Doctor smiled and said,"Haan...!!!!!!"And she showed a pencil to the shape of the right baby which was moving it's tiny legs and hands slowly,"Aur yeh aapki beti hai...bahut ziddi hai shaayad woh sirf apne mamma ke baat maanegi...isiliye zid karke baithi thi that she won't respond to our treatment...lekin uske mummy jab hosh mein aagayi tab yeh seedhe raaste par aagayi...!!!!!"


The baby girl tried to kick it's other twin cutely inside the womb but the baby boy dodged it's kicking by moving it's tiny legs and then only the baby boy kicked it's mother womb.Geet saw the cute quarrel inside the womb and was apprehensive while doctor teased Geet,"Shayad aapki beti bahut badi jagdaalu hogi...jab woh baahar aayegi...!!!!"Geet blushed furiously seeing the baby girl trying to kick it's twin brother.


Geet moved her fingers on her tummy and the baby girl became silent after that cutely which Geet saw that on the screen.Doctor saw her eyes one last time flashing her torch to her eye and smiled and exited the ICU ordering the ward boy to shift her to the ward.Doctor came outside while Maan came forward immediately trying to know the condition with panic.


Doctor said smiling,"Geet aur bachche dono safe hai...!!!!!!"Maan's pale face split to the wide smile and he hugged his dadimaa happily.Maan's family was happy and they sighed deeply.Doctor said,"She's shifted to the ward u can see her there...!!!!"Maan ran to her ward to see her where she was enjoying their babies movements.Maan saw the babies which was shown in the screen and was so happy to see the two tiny babies moving it's fists and legs cutely.


Geet saw Maan and said,"Maan...!!!!"Maan rushed to her and hugged her tightly just like a 10 yr old boy hugs his mother.Maan kissed her all over face and gave a tight smooch to her lips and said,"Geet..aisa kabhi mere saath mat karna...pls i'll die...!!!"On that time Geet closed his lips fm her palm and said,"Am sorry...!!!!"Maan kissed her forehead and said,"Don't ask sorry...!!!!!Meri galathi thi ki meine breakfast nahin kiya aur tum wahan aagayi mujhe lunch dene ke liye...am sorry mein aaj se nahin karooga...yeh galathi dobaara nahin hogi...i promise...!!!!"


Maan pecked her lips for which the baby girl kicked as if she wants the kiss too.Maan bent down to her tummy and kissed the baby girl part and she became silent.Maan's family saw their longings with tears in their eyes and all thought was same that they were praying to god to not to break the couple till their death.Maan saw his babies in the screen while little Vansh ran towards Geet to meet her.


Vansh jumped towards the bed and was abt to kick Geet's tummy mistakenly but Naintara held Vansh and said,"Araam se beta...!!!!!"Dadimaa came and sat beside her and said kissing Geet's forehead with love,"Yeh kya kiya aapne bete...humein toh daraadiya...!!!!!"Geet smiled while Naintara said angrily,"Humaari jaan jhokar mein daalkar aapko chain nahin mila?????"Geet smiled at her anger and said,"Dee galathi hogayi...kaan pakadthi hoon...!!!!"


After the visiting of the family which Maan witnessed sitting in the corner was frustrated that he wanted to hv Geet alone for herself but everyone r pouring to see her and he made an important call to know abt the sabotage which was made in sun city project on Geet.He came to know that it was from Rajeev Khandelwal who had tried to injure him but unfortunately Geet came to his place.


After everyone's visiting Maan decided to stay back with geet while Geet protested that he needs rest.But Man glared at her and she became mum immediately.Maan sat beside Geet and hugged her and without thinking he pecked her lips tightly.He wanted to kiss her passionately & possessively and he kissed her like that.Geet didn't knew that what he had took decision when doctor gave him to choose between Geet and the babies.


Precap-Maan is feeling guilty😭




Previous Part 88-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2979365/jeevan-sangini-thread-5?pn=28



Next Part 90-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2979365/jeevan-sangini-thread-5?pn=37




Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
mind blowing aur emotional part dear...😊
maan ka dilemma and the baby kick and the girl baby fighting in the womb was too good...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem maan choose geet over babies and geet saved but maan felt guilty
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Posted: 13 years ago
di awesome update.. emotional one also.. now Maan feeling guilty oh no another sad one..OMg😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally relieved babies r f9 awsum

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