MG-FF: The 'Captured' Life - # 3 -Last Part-Pg 2 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

Awesum dear...
That was a terrific birthday..
Especially the card wala scene...
Loved the wonderful bonding b/w dev and geet..
Dev got mother,sis,bhabhi,friend,mentor thru geet and same is the case with geet.. The scene i loved the most is maan taking her during her painful days to villages and showing her the reality of life..
This ff s one which is close to my heart..

Awww..thanks a lot Ramya di..
Even I love the bonding between Geet and Dev..!! Friendship is always a very very significant part of anyone's life and yeah those old village wale days..I like them too. 😃
Not to forget this FF..gave me some wonderful friends like you ,though I lost a few of them in between but still thanks for being with me till the end of this whole FF!!
Love you!! ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
I have not read this ff till now. just browsing some thing got to see this ff. read one part and this ff sounds interesting will read all the parts and will comment again.
Please do write more ff.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
The end all ready? Well gonna miss this ff plz do not stop writing i loved this ff it was a awesome concept. Loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
nice update
in this i love that lone in which u says there is always two ways
one is thought and one is ignorance and we choose one way to our self
i just love this line
any this ff is really gud
i must say u r very gud writer
and u hv the capabilities of showing ur thoughts in words
not everybody have this one
but anyway bahut ho gaya bhasaan
waiting 4 epilouge
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Awesome update dear!!!!
D best ws D card in which dere ws imprints of hands...
nd nxt one ws dat lone in which u says there is always two ways
one is thought and one is ignorance and we choose one way to our self...
Loved dese 2 verryy muchh... plzzz cont soon...
w8ing 4 d epi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Love it graphics.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
awesum...superb end
loved it

waiting for Epi
Thankx for pm


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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
nice ending...i liked the idea of pics of handprints of first friendship...
update epilogue soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
wow!!! perfect and very sweet ending dear...👏
really enjoyed the entire journey...you have very beautifully portrayed geet's journey from darkness to life ... and really loved to see how perfectly you blended past and present ...thank you for giving us such a fantastic ff...




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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome ending
loved the card with everybody's hand-printing
wow!!!! Maan proposed
waiting for the epilogue

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