MG-FF: The 'Captured' Life - # 3 -Last Part-Pg 2 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
that was amazing ending
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was indeed a great journey.
You rightly said...I don't want to compare but for me this is your best work. It was all encompassing but for me the best part was it's theme. I loved the optimism which Maan brought in Geet's dark life.
Usually Geet is a bubbly chirpy girl who brings smile to Maan but here it was kind of reversed. Also throughout the FF, you maintained a tone of optimism, of looking up, of accepting and moving on. I loved it...simply loved it.
This FF always lifted my spirits and will bring a smile to my face.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa


commenting for the 1st time in this ff it was certainly

worth it reading this story

the idea of geet to publish maan's photographs in the

magazine was splendid. he was unable to publish them

due to his busy schedule but geet did it!😊

beautiful ending!👏👏

i want epilogue plz 😉

new ff??????????????? plzzz

Awww...Thanks a lot for the comment dear!
I'm glad you liked this FF..😃
You'll soon get an epilogue !! 😳
New FF!! 😆 I have no ideas in my mind right now that would suit Maaneet 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: ritzy09

it was indeed a great journey.

You rightly said...I don't want to compare but for me this is your best work. It was all encompassing but for me the best part was it's theme. I loved the optimism which Maan brought in Geet's dark life.
Usually Geet is a bubbly chirpy girl who brings smile to Maan but here it was kind of reversed. Also throughout the FF, you maintained a tone of optimism, of looking up, of accepting and moving on. I loved it...simply loved it.
This FF always lifted my spirits and will bring a smile to my face.

Aww..thanks a lot for your wonderful comment di.
I simply loved it..Such kind of comments at the end of the FF leave a sweet taste! 😃
Yeah...Even I love this one..It's very close to my heart..It's like this has been along with me...from last 1 year!! My updates sometimes also reflect my mood!! 😳
I'm glad you liked it!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
last part
awesome dear...
so lovely...
liked this from the beginning...
waiting for the epilogue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Geet's monologue was well described. And her surprise for Maan. Handprint was a great idea.

Perfect ending Nam. Wonderful story. Really sad u've ended the story. Hope ull give a epilogue.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
lovely end...

he changed her life n in return she also changed his...

hope u write an epilogue for this...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Beautiful ff !! I just read it in one go !!! I liked Dev a lot & i even envied Geet-Dev's bond as babhi & devar !!! Loved it !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful update..and good to know u hv some fond memory in this update..keep it up

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