MG:OS: Missing Beats--Part 3-Pg 19-10th May

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Awesme update

thanx 4 pm

Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

u have just started it and it is finished...😲

u have depicted Geet's thought very beautifully...

everybody was pressurizing her for dance...first it was her passion but later when everybody had expectations from her then it makes her irritated...so she misunderstand Maan also but after knowing his POV she realized her mistake...

very beautiful SS...

thanx for pm...

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disha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

beautiful os...
loved it😊

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Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

that was incredibly beautiful...a fabulous effort to write something so refreshing...
i loved the characterisation of both geet and maan
G being a grey character...and M being the person who had to give up on his passion due to family and societal pressures,

kudos to u for this beautiful story

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-Crayon-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

u have just started it and it is finished...😲

u have depicted Geet's thought very beautifully...

everybody was pressurizing her for dance...first it was her passion but later when everybody had expectations from her then it makes her irritated...so she misunderstand Maan also but after knowing his POV she realized her mistake...

very beautiful SS...

thanx for pm...

Thanks a lot for your lovely comment di!!! 😃

Yeah..It was supposed to be a little SS...well OS!! 😳

I'm glad you liked this one!! 😃

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-Crayon-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: mollycoddle
that was incredibly beautiful...a fabulous effort to write something so refreshing...
i loved the characterisation of both geet and maan
G being a grey character...and M being the person who had to give up on his passion due to family and societal pressures,

kudos to u for this beautiful story

Awww..thank you Reva di... 😃

It really feels so good to read such comments..for a non-Maaneet story like this!!

Well..I downloaded the above mentioned song..all of a sudden..and after weaving 2-3 things together..the final outcome is this OS 😆 glad you liked it!😳

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allibr

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Little_Mermaid.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

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Hira

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

no words to express... simply out standing...

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Remya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Marvelous dear..
when u write i always feel like u r seeing me..
Most of the incident in every ff of urs will bring out my memories ..
Same is the case with dance in this..
I too danced may b last tym when i was in 10th..after a lot of struggle with my family and i do wanted to continue..So that last dance was always a beautiful memory to me and i noe i successed in it after seeing the beautiful smile in my sis face...