MG:OS: Missing Beats--Part 3-Pg 19-10th May

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Next : PART 3

Edited by -Crayon- - 12 years ago

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Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

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that was incredibly beautiful...the way u pen down the nuances in each character and i love the way u reflect more of reality in ur stories making them more appealing and making them a delightful read😛

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-Crayon-

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: mollycoddle
that was incredibly beautiful...the way u pen down the nuances in each character and i love the way u reflect more of reality in ur stories making them more appealing and making them a delightful read😛

Ahaa..that was quick , I was still editing and adding some little note at the end of the part 😆 basically about the inspiration which made me write this. Thanks for your comment..Loved it.

Hope you like the next and last part too.😳

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nahtani88

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Amazing Updates
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM

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Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

Ahaa..that was quick , I was still editing and adding some little note at the end of the part 😆 basically about the inspiration which made me write this. Thanks for your comment..Loved it.
Hope you like the next and last part too.😳

hope its a happy ending story..or else my talwar is ready to chop off ur head...😆

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abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

awesome update
loved it 👏

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sdlife19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

wah tat was just amazing..

maan was also a dancer..

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Tabinda Areeb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

though they are away...they miss each other like anything

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

u dont always get what u want in life...

nice ss...

continue soon..

thnx for PM...

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CrazyMaaneetFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Read both parts.
Really intersting concept dear.
Very diffrnt.
I thought its actually a diffrnt Lov Story of Maaneet bt u stated its nt a lov story so feeling bad.
Bt i gues u can change it to a lov story.
Waitng fr nxt.
Sry like tab nt working frm mobile