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Posted: 13 years ago
More than maan pammi is responsible for his rudeness n attitude...
awsome prt
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey di. Me back⭐️. So sorry for late commnt Di. And nw update was soo sweet one😳. Maan taking care of geet. And hate this maan's mom😡. And geet nw knw the way to cool down maan's anger. Kissy wissy hmm☺️. And maan is such jerk.🤢 Poor geet sharing her griefs and maan busy on phone😡. Uff hopeless. Awsm update di. THnx for the PM. LOV ya di.🤗
-LUV Anyaa😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mel, tere DR ne mera itna dimaag kharaab kiya ki mein pagal ho chuki hu ... i am keep on chanting "not again" ... akhir meri image ka sawal hai, kamini
overall, better to do some justice to my UNCLE or else *glaring & throwing invisible dragger at Mel starts yet again*
tu kahi "rajmata" ke part ke liye toh humse "revenge" nahi le rahi, hai na ???

about this "yet-again-behind-my-UNCLE-hottie" work, tu mere haath se jarur maregi ... forget the updates ... atleast tere twisty updates aur cliff hangs se azadi milegi and beside, tu toh meri janam-janam ki dushman hai *well, Anu is missing toh nishana tu hai*
this Maan is changing his mood more than a prego lady *Sara, here you go again* ... okies, change the topic - this Maan is changing his mood more than the sudden changing season of Delhi these days *good girl* ... accha hua ke Adi ne us chudail ki baat clear kar di aur else ... about the parts (overall, the msg part, the disc part, the monologue, the misunderstanding, the beach scene, the worry, the pain, the hospital scene, the outhouse scene, the caring part, the breakfast scene *Sara can't you say EVERYTHING in one go* *fine, resume it* the whole damn last 4 parts were awesome) ... ab agar sab kuch detail mey likhungi toh lagega ke tere updated parts re-write kar rahi hu ... but you know that Sara loves your work *beside hating you* *tongue out* *wide grin* ... i am damn sure ke Maan ke "arrogant" behavior ke peeche wo "pammi mummy" hai, me thinking ki jarur step-mom case hai or agar real hai toh highly "bigde baap ki aulaad" case hai ... love to see Geet calming him down through kisses and his changing behavior

do cont soon & do PM me
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Posted: 13 years ago
MAAN IS SO ARROGANT BUT STILL HE TOOK CARE OF HER AND MADE BREAKFAST FOR HER
PAMMI ALSO DOESNT LIKE THE THOUGHT OF MAAN HAVING A GIRLFRIED
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb ...loved it

continue soon

thankx for pm


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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan:Mel aach choti ka B-day hain and Maan wants you to update and remember Maan gets what maan wants😉
Love you Choti hope you like your gift and may all your wishes come true. I couldn't stop myself from updating today!!!!
And just cause it's your b-day I didn't stop at any cliffhanger even though I really badly wanted to😆

Part 8
Geet gave Maan a kiss on his cheek and ran upstairs. Maan smiled seeing Geet ran away. Then He started playing whit his phone again. She entered the room. She start looking in the bag and saw a really nice dress:
She wore it and went downstairs. Maan whom was still playing on his mobile looked up. Woh she looks out of this world he thought. He stood up and walked over to her Geet blushed and looked down. Maan put his arms around her and hugged her.

M:You look amazing darling
G:Thank you
M:Hmmm
G:Maan we have to go
M:go where
G:Acadamy
M:Hmmm fine lets go

Maan dropped geet at the acadamy. He went to his friends. Aadi, Romeo and Sameera.

M:Hey guys
S:Hey Maan sorry about yesterday but I just didn't know you where serious about that girl. What was her name
M;Girl acha geet yeah well forget Sam it's okay.
S:So where is she
M:She went to her acadamy she into acting (Mel hites her head no stupid she is into singing)
S:Cool so what do here parents do
M:I don't know
S:okay so she wants to be a movie actress I presume
M:Sam who cares yaar ask her whenever you see her

Sameers smirked she got another plan to end this stupid realationship.

S:Maan my fashionshow is tomorrow you will come na
M:Sure but have to go now
A:Maan where are you going
M:Have yo pick up Geet

Sameera got angery she didn't like it. At the other side Geet had a great day. she had to sing and everyone praised her. She and Pari had a lot of fun. Geet waited for Maan. Maan arrived.

M:Hey darling how was you day
G: Great maan but I really missed you.
M:Really I don't believe it
G:Why
M:Well if it's true then where is my hug

Geet blushed and smiled and gave him a tight hug. Maan smiled and carresed her hair.After a while Geet and Maan broke apart and went home.At night Geet entered her room. She smiled at what she saw. There where two seprated beds. Maan just walked in and hugged her from behind.

G:Maan I love you
M:Hmmm I love you too darling
G:Maan two beds
M:So what did you think I will let you sleep alone in this room
G;Yes
M:What why would I then ask you to stay here
G:Maan your the best
M:I know darling btw tomorrow is Sameera's fashion show we are going
G:Maan I don't like her she called me a keep
M:darling she asked or you where a keep didn't call you one
G:But Maan

Maan put his fingers on her lips.

M:Ssshh we are going
G:Hmmm

The next day Maneet went to sameera's fashion show. Sameera saw Maan with geet and got angry she calmed herself and ran towards Maan and hugged him.Geet got hurt and let Maan's hand go and turned her back to maan. Maan noticed.

S:Oww I am so happy you are here to support me

Maan pushed Sameera away.

M:Sam no hugs I don't like it when people hug me except when your my GF he said looking at Geet.Geet turned around and hugged him.

G;I love you
M:Never leave my hand again without my premission get it
G;Hmmm sorry
M:Sorry won't work
G:Phir
M:I want a kissy wissy

Geet smiled and gave him a kiss on his cheek.

G:Happy
M:Hmmm

Sameera got angry and walked away.

Two Months past Geet was still staying with Maan. He didn't want her to go, so she told Yash and Meera that she was staying with her BF and they where okay with it. They presumed she had her own life and the right to life the way she wanted to. pammi used to see geet somethings but they never really came face to face cause geet was always in the outhouse and pammi in KM.

Geet was sitting in her room practesing for her singing classes when her phone buzzed. She forgot she had to work again. The dinner where she worked was closed for two months. Ever since Maan and Geet met this would be the first time that she would be working. Geet got ready and was about to leave when her phone buzzed. It was a message from Maan.

Maan:
Darling going out with my friends will see you tonight love you

Geet:
Okay have fun love you too Maan.

Geet entered the dinner and started working. Maan and his friends entered the same dinner. There back where to Geet. So Geet didn't know whom was sitting there she went to there table and asked.

G:Can I take your order si Maan

Geet hugged him.

G:Ow I missed you
S:Maan your GF is a waiter
M:Shut up Sameera she not
S:Maan why are you getting angery on me I am just saying what I am seeing
M:Geet what is this
G:Maan yes I am a waitress what's wrong with that

Sameera smirked ow finally this Geet chapter will end today.

M:What wrong have you lost it your Maan Singh Khurana's Girlfriend you can't be a waitress
G:maan I am not rich I need to work to pay to fees of the acadamy
M:Listen you are quting this job right now
G:No Maan how will I pay my fees
M:dahm it I will pay it
G:No maan I want to stand on my own feet do it on my own
M:Listen your my GF so I will pay and of discussion
G:Yes I am your GF but that doesn't mean that I can try to stand on my own feet sorry Maan I can't lose this job.
S:Woh for the first someone ignored Maan Singh Khurana's order.

Maan got more angry. Geet gave Same a angry glare oww she hated her.

M:Geet I said you are not doing this job anymore get it.
G:Maan
M:No discussion and btw like you will every be a huge actress so get you feet back on the ground and go and resign.
G:Maan singer
M:Yeah whatever

Sameera let out o chuckle oww she was enjoying this. Geet saw her no she wouldn't let Sameera break them up,She took a deep breath she decided not to take Maan's words to her heart she knew he would get angery when she went against his wishes. She also knew how to calm Maan she started caressing Maan's cheek.

G:Maan please you love me na then don't do this please Maan

Maan did calm down a bit.

M:Geet just go and resign

Geet sighed oef her ziddie Maan. She gave a kiss on his cheek.

G:Please Maan pretty please.

She gave him another kiss on his cheek.

Sameera shot her a disgusted look.

G:Maan say yes na or else I will get fired for romancing my BF between work hours

Maan let out a chuckle.Sameera was shocked to see that Maan was calmed down.

M:Darling I don't like you working at the dinner.

Geet carresed his cheek.

G:I know and I won't untill you give premission and you will na you won't break your Geet's heart na

Maan smiled and hugged her.

M:Fine now take my order.
G:Love you Maan
S:What what am I seeing for the first time someone not only ignoring Maan's desicion but also making maan bow for her descion.

Geet knew Sameera would play this dirty game.

G:I am not ignoring or making Maan bow I asked Maan premission haina Maan
M:Yes Sameera are you deaf didn't you hear here say she won't do it untill I give her permission and I did
S:But maan how could you I mean Maan sin

Maan interupted Sam.

M:Whatever I don't wanne listen I am hungry.

Geet shot Sameera a evil glance. Sam was fuming

G:What Can I get you sir
M:Hmmm pasta and as dessert a kiss

Geet smiled. Everyone orderd

When they finshed eating Geet brought the bill.

M:geet I didn't get my dessert yet
G:Maaan
M:Excuse is that a way to talk to your customer and that also when that customer is Maan Singh Khurana

Geet shook her head and gave a kiss on maan's cheek.

G:Sir the dessert will cost you two kisses on both my cheeks.

Maan smiled and gave geet her kisses. Sameera was fuming. Maan and his friends then left the dinner.

Precap: sam talking to pammi (btw pammi is Maan's real mother)

Part 9



Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
wAw lovely update...
geet is just superb yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the way geet calmed maan in fornt of sam...
Nice part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet calming maan sam fuming



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