KARZ-UPDATED PT 18 PG 76 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part..
maans guilt
geets way of handling rahul..
super
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 5
awesome...
Geet is a sherni...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nyc update.
But ek prblm h. Is story me geet aur maan. Bhai behan h.
Maan ke dad geet ke mamaji lage. Kuch change kr story me
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Posted: 13 years ago



PART 06


Geet joined their friends,Preeto,Meera & Romeo & said hi to them.Romeo appreciated,"Yaar...tune toh us Rahul ko bahut achcha sabak sikhaaya...usne hum sabko nahin choda...!!!!!!"Geet asked curiously,"Usne kya kiya tum logon ke saath...?????"Romeo said grimly,"Meri galathi ye hai ki meine uski girglfriend ko dekh kar drool kar raha tha...isiliye usne mere haathon se apni jootiyaan saaf karvaaya...ragging ke naam par...!!!!!!!"


Geet's blood boiled & thought,"How dare he do that?????"While Romeo continued,"Meera ke saath toh usne bahut hi battammezi se pesh aaya...usne jis tarah us ladki ko kaha kiss karne ke liye ussi tarah Meera ko bhi kaha...par Meera ne mana kar diya then he tried to force her on that time u entered the college which made him see u & his direction went towards u & Meera escaped immediately...!!!!!!!"


Geet's anger went to its peak & she dragged Meera immediately.Meera was scared to see that man once again who had misbehaved with her but now Geet was with her so no need to be scared.When Geet dragged Meera on that time he was troubling other freshers with his cheap ragging.Geet came & stood in front of Rahul giving deadly glare which made Rahul smirk.


Rahul smirked & said,"Kya baat hai Geet Kaur mujhse maafi maangne ke liye aa gayi...waise meri personality hi aisi hai...lekin mein tumhe maafi karna hoga toh tumhe meri ek baat maanni hogi...tumhe mere saath ek raat bithaana hoga...!!!!!!!"Geet stood in front of him giving a smirking smile folding her hands.After his cheap blabbering Geet said to Meera,"Meera...is aadmi ko kaske thappad maaro...!!!!!!!"


Meera who's blood boiling listening to his cheap language was fuming from inside when Geet said those words then her blood boiled & came & gave a tight slap to him.Rahul was so angry & he raised his hand to slap Meera then Geet caught his hand & twisted immediately.Her grip was so tight which made Rahul to scream with pain.


Geet glared at him & said still holding his hand in tight grip,"Tumhaari himmat kaise huyi mere doston par apni buri nazar daalneki...aayinda se agar mein tumhe apne doston ke aas paas bhi bhatakne ki koshish ki to mein tumhe us laayak nahin chodoongi...samjhe tum...ab agar yahan ragging huyi toh tum par sirf ek case laga huva hai...baaki cases mein lagaa doongi...samjhe tum...!!!!!!"She left his hand & said to Meera,"Chalo Meera...!!!!!"And she once again warned to Rahul showing her index finger,"U would better understand...!!!!!!!"


Geet & Meera came back to their group while Rahul stood dumbstruck & angry on himself for not attacking her further.Geet & her group went to attend the classes while Sonali who saw this incident came to talk to Rahul.Sonali was also the best friend of Rahul but she liked Maan for his power & money.She wanted become the one & only owner of the Khurana empire.


So she tried everything to draw his attention towards her but became successful as he always saw a beautiful dream that he had seen an angel.When he went to see her face in the dream then he would woke up or someone would make him come out of dream.Sonali did everything to make Maan see towards her but he always turned his heart from her.


Sonali asked abt that incident which she saw that who's she then Rahul explained everything.He even told her that Maan's decision changed immediately when he listened to Geet which bothered Sonali very much.Maan didn't knew that Rahul & Sonali r the most cunning persons from this whole world.Rahul also told her that becoz of Geet that Maan had broken the friendship of him which bothered Sonali.


While Maan who was feeling guilty tried to correct his mistake & told to the hospital staff to give the best treatment to the boy & all his bills will be pained by KC only.Then Maan came to ask sorry for Geet keeping his attitude beside him.Geet attended her classes & came back to have some lunch.On that time Sonali bumped to her & her books & Geet's books scattered on the ground.


Geet said immediately,"Am really very sorry...!!!!!!!"And she helped Sonali taking her books back by lifting to her.Sonali was so angry that she called Geet as b***h which made Geet so bothered.Sonali wanted to show her her place as she's low which Geet couldn't tolerate that thing.Geet didn't say anything as she went from there taking her gaalis.Sonali was so happy that Geet didn't say anything & was scared of her.


Romeo was a bit confused seeing Geet's behaviour as far as he knows she never takes these types of gaalis but why she's not bothered.Maan tried to meet Geet but Geet was no where to be seen.When he saw Geet then he was shocked to see her like that...becoz all the people were laughing at the scene.Becoz Sonali & Rahul had fell inside the gutter while Geet was standing in front of the gutter in the bike giving accelerator.


Maan came & confronted Geet lifting Sonali & Rahul upwards while asked,"Tum apne aapko bahut bada don samjhthi ho kya ki yeh saara college sirf tumhaara hai??????Tumne in lagon ko yahan gutter mein kyun dhakela??????"Geet said immediately & angrily,"Mein aapko explanation dena zaroori nahin samajhti...poochiye apne doston se ki unhone kya galathi kee hai...!!!!!!!"And she went from there angrily.


Sonali tried to get sympathy from Maan & asked to life her in his arms while he lifted her resisting the gutter smell.Sonali smirked seeing Maan's disgust face & thought that it was for Geet but she didn't knew that it is for her.When Maan lifted her then he felt betrayed...he thought that he's betraying his lady love...becoz when he lifted Geet for the first time on that time he felt contented feeling her on his arms...but now...


He felt suffocated feeling Sonali on his arms & couldn't tolerate & he threw Sonali to the ground & ran from there feeling suffocated.Sonali was baffled becoz of his behaviour which made her anger on Geet.Sonali somehow knew seeing Maan that he had some soft corner towards Geet & she wanted to wipe out from his heart.That's why she provoked Geet by misbehaving with her which resulted to Geet to lose her temper on her.


Sonali wanted to prove Maan that Geet is an attitude,egoist,proud & hot tempered girl but it didn't work.Maan's heart screamed that Geet isn't wrong but his brain had seen the scene which was against Geet.Then Maan quarreled with Geet for injuring his friends.Geet said angrily to Maan,"Mujhe koi shock nahin hai aapke doston ko maarne ka...unhone galathi ki hai isiliye meine unhe sabak sikhaaya...aur kuch nahin...!!!!!!!"


Maan was angry on her & held her wrist angrily & said,"Tum koi judge nahin ho jo yeh sab kare...woh mere dost hai aur behtar hai ki tum door raho unse...!!!!!!!"Geet who was feeling the pain becoz of his tight grip said angrily twisting his hands immediately,"Aap hote akun hai jo mere baare mein order dene waale...aur waise bhi mujhe koi shock nahin hai aapke doston se ladne ka...mein yahan padne aayi hoon...aur mein woh kar rahi thi jo aapke doston ne interrupt kiya hai...!!!!!!!"


Maan saw those hazel brown eyes & he pulled her inside his embrace & he pulled her face towards his face while her both hands were made to be twisted backwards.He pulled her towards his lips & her lips was so near to his lips.He thought of kissing those baby pink lips held it near him.He was so angry that he wanted to crush her inside his embrace.


On the other hand Geet couldn't bare this closeness which was creating havoc inside her.Maan pulled her inside his embrace & squeezed her hand with anger while Geet's other hand was free & she tried to pull herself from his embrace which was creating havoc inside her.But Maan was no where to listen while Geet pleaded,"Sir,leave me...!!!!!!!!"


That was came from her lips which made Maan come to the present world.The sir word bothered him very much...he couldn't bear this & he released her immediately & stood far away from her.Geet was shocked seeing this proximity which was driving her crazy.She banged her hand to her open mouth with shock.Geet couldn't believe that she had made a man to walk near her this close.


Maan made his hair even more messy & turned to opposite to her.First time she was reminded that she's also a girl as her cheeks has become red.First time she was blushing so much becoz of this close proximity of Maan.Before Maan would ask sorry Geet had ran from there feeling shocked but contented.


Romeo came there & said to Maan,"Dude...tum gagalth samajh rahe the...humaari Geet aisi nahin hai woh kabhi bhi ksiko bhi chot nahin pahuncha sakthi...tumhaari woh dost Sonali Geet ko b***h bulaaya tha...aur usne Geet ki maa ko bhi b***h kaha toh woh usse bardaasht nahin huva toh usne Sonali ko sabak sikha diya...!!!!!!!!"


Maan couldn't believe himself that she all did this just for her mother & he was accusing her without any mistake.Now he couldn't bear this mistake & he went from there feeling guilty.Here Geet came to the deserted corridor where she collapsed on the ground & thought abt the incident which went on previously.


Geet thought,"Mein kyun itni kho gayi thi unke baahon mein aur jab unhone mere paas pakada tab mera dil kyun itni zor se dhadaka raha tha...yeh kaisa ehsaas hai jo hum dono ko aise jud rahi hai...!!!!!!!!"After sometime she said to herself,"Nahin...mujhe is ehsaas ko kaabu karna hi hoga...meri destiny toh maa ke sapnon ko saakar karna hai...aur mein in sab mein pad nahin sakthi...!!!!!!!!"


Precap-Geet's first day of her office...encounter with Sasha...!!!!!!!😉



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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


IM TOO VERY BLUSHY SEEING THEY CLOSENESS...LOVELY UPDATE....
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Posted: 13 years ago
update love the way geet made meera slap rahul this sonali good geet threw her in gutter maan throw her at ground maan accusing geet and geet in maan embrence maneet feeling something for each other



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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it 😳
vrinda22 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
geets boldness..every girl should have..
so nice update
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update😊
us sonali and rahul ko acha sabak sikhaya Geet ne😊
Thnx for the PM.
Plzzz continue soon...😊
wen u'l be updating ur another ff Farz..??
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update ,me happy seeing Maan & Geet close 😉

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