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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Tyro
ok...first things first...now i get it ..when u said that MSK was not ur inspiration for this maan...

Good! And I'm sure it isn't the glasses that you are talking about...

You can argue at both ends about this Maan...But then he will always be the one who can both annoy and make your knees go weak at the same time.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#452

I'm grinning from ear to ear... 😃

okay so the latest update i guess was much more easier on my poor brain after first part... but i guess re reading the first part again and again may have actually got that resilience back in me 😉

Guess i'm learning the hard way now... May be for my own good 😆

Really loved the update H,

However one question that still lingers is Maan the same with each of his interns or is Geet special here? He did it because he saw some spark in her or its all a part of an unknown attraction to him?

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Posted: 13 years ago

#453

The sense of achievement that he gifted her was priceless. The way of establishing her in his team along with staying within his limits; the staying on the phone for the meeting; the bit of hesitation about the evening events; he sure sends out a lot of messages. I am so loving this. It is so hard to come up with an adequate comment when the feelings that the updates create are so intense and satisfying and rounded. Suffice to say I loved the update. More after re-reads.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#454

Simply no words are coming for you n for this update...
I m spellbound by your writing... The way you described
Everything...

Rewriting the story is not a bad idea. Wen u first proposed
This idea I thot wat more u wanna add as the earlier one
Looked perfectly fine...
But I m glad u have written it for us... Its a treat for us...

You have given more emphasis on Maaneet relations
N its base... The intricate details which were missed out
In the earlier one, now u have given full justice.

Here I have exams starting frm tomorrow, n i
M reading ur updates..
This Maaneet complex n complicated theory
Is confusing me... I had to read many times.

Maan giving Geet a tough time or rather helping
Her for future... His method of guiding is excellent..
Their frndship is building... He wants her to once
Again rise up in front of the team..

Ahh loved their each n every convo... Wether it be
In the corridors or in his office or on the phone...

Maan challenging Geet.. In order to prove him
Geet kaha phas gayi...
He is a perfect mentor that anyone can dream of..

Geet notions abt Maan totally wrong... N was embarrassed
ThatMaan heard everything.

Maan giving Geet a chance in meeting.. She is indeed lucky.
Everyone shocked by Geet's confidence n her statement.

Geet disappointed dat she will not able to see Maan..
Abhi se Geet ki yeh haal?? To phir baad me kya hoga..

I m loving this...
N sorry if the comment is too too long.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#455

I'm sat here with a smile on my face, that update was wonderful! The way he helps Geet, nurtures her almost, to build upon her skills & capability & slowly but steadily teaching her to stand on her own two feet within the company is so enchanting. It's not your typical romance, but if you look closely, it's actually very romantic in its own way. And in the midst of all this, Geet's evergrowing attraction to him, and Maan's awareness of the woman around him is portrayed perfectly - the subtle element of romance in this is what makes not just this story, but your other works so enjoyable as a reader. I salute you.