**FLAMES OF DESIRE**#2 MG FF IMP NOTE on page 153 - Page 81

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Posted: 13 years ago
Arti...this is for u...



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Posted: 13 years ago
She still hasn't checked her PM...it is 4 am here...been waiting for the update 😕




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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ratna--

Check your PM 😊...did u get the pics...they are 2 PM'S ...

YUP BABY I GOT UR PIC...N ME SEARCHED MY MOBILE AND PC AGAIN N GOT ANOTHER ONE ALSO...
THANK U SWT HRT...I AM DONE WID THE UPDATE
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Posted: 13 years ago
Arti...more of our nanu pangu Maan...not posting the pics because she may want to use them...




Enjoy 😉...me leaving...bye, ...
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FLAMES OF DESIRE

PART-15

geet sat besides maan pouting her lips...maan looked at her from corner of his eyes...

dadi- "geet beta aap kya soch rahi ho"

"bas kuch nahi...pehale sirf maan ko manana tha ab vicky ko bhi manana padega"

maan spitted out his coffee which he was drinking... coughing...looking terrified at her...he was alarmed now, imagining all her manofying he survived till now...

she looked at him concerned..."kya hua aapko"

dadi- sambhal ke maan...dadi came forward to help him...

"nahi dadi I am ok"

he composed himself...trying to look straight avoiding geet's concerned eyes...geet got up from her seat...

dadi- "beta aap kaha ja rahe ho"

"woh dadi inki coffee kharab ho gayi hai...mai nayi banane ja rahi hu"

maan looked at her horrified, then at dadi...pleading for help...

dadi muffled her laughter looking at her macho grandson pleading for help making a baby face...she signaled him to calmdown...

"beta aap rehne do...mai banati hu coffee...aap yaha baitho maan ke saath...then teasingly...maan would love to have you close rather then you making coffee for him..."

geet blushed hearing this...n maan looked other way smiling...getting the double meaning of his dadi's statement...

geet kept looking down...waiting for maan to make some advancements...as no one was there on dining table other then this two love birds...as dev n NT left after dadi...just to give some privacy to this unusual couple...

maan was not in a mood to get cozy in his own house that to in a dining hall...where any one could come...and this would creat hell of a embrassment for them...he kept pretending to read newspaper...but all the while kept taking glances of his mishty from corner of his eyes...he some how controlled his laughter looking at her cribbing to her babaji...

ohhh god she looked damn cute he thought...he so much wanted to have those cribbing lips in his mouth...savour the taste...relish its juice...squeezing and chewing her lips till they are sore enough...

his mouth went dry with all this wild thoughts...he kept gapping at those plum ones...when geet noticed him looking at her...she shied hard, getting what he was looking at...she looked down, playing with her dupatta...still feeling his penetrating gaze on her...she bit her lower lip to subside the moan, which was ready to erupt any moment if he kept drooling like that...their trance was broken when dadi entered with coffee in her hand...maan looked other way getting embrassed...thinking..."ohh god what was I doing...drooling shameless on her with all those erotic wild thoughts...shame on you maan"...then judging the other way..."nahi sab mishty ki galati hai...she always keeps seducing me with her antics"...he continued his estimations, when dadi broke his trance...

dadi kept the coffee in front of maan and brought tea for geet...she sat their having her's...dadi and maan where chating business and about their new hotel venture of malhotras...maan was telling her his concerns about the backlogs...and how can he finish this much pending work is such a short interval...then dadi was suggesting him to plan his work accordingly without taking any stress...

on the other hand geet got bored with their official conversations...she started tappping her fingers on table in order to pass her time...when dadi smiled sensing her getting bored so she changed the topic...she asked her about which films she saw recently...then asked geet to take along maan some day for film...to which maan made a weird yuck face...and geet smiled delightfully...then glancing maan's rejection her face fell low...she made a baby face...then remembered ohh maan is angry...and what am I doing...

"chalo geet ho ja shuru...ab kaise manaye inko...she kept her one hand below her cheek...then looked up at babaji...thinking...kya karu ab...then beaming with happiness like she got her favorite icecream...she winked at babaji...and then gave a dreamy smile to maan, who was looking at her amusingly...

dadi was busy reading newspaper...and maan was mentally praying to babaji..."please babaji aaj bacha lo...this devil is upto something...please aaj bacha lo"

and suddenly he felt something cold moving up his leg...creating tingling feeling...he jerked with sudden coldness...then looked at her suspiciously...but our geet pretended to sip her tea...then looked at him..."kya hua"...she said innocently...

maan made a stern face...looked at his coffee...scared thinking what was that...

as he was about to have his another sip...he again felt something cold running his leg...this time moving in, entering his pants...first he was horrified thinking if it was some snake entering his pants...his eye grew big getting scared...but then that skin to skin cold touch was creating havoc in his body...he could feel its something else...then it struck him, that it was her, her feet...uff her sexy feet is doing wonders on his leg...he looked at her intoxicated, while she was busy smiling feeling his smooth leg, tingling him with her feet...she went down and down under the table, in order to get higher on his leg...she just wanted to tingle him to make him laugh...this was her super idea of manofying him by making him smile...

maan so much wanted to continue with this sweet sexy torcher of hers...but his poor body reacted differently to her sweet innocent seducing...he felt himself getting hard down below...he closed his eyes...thinking how this girls mere touch could make him so hard...he jerked getting up...but then suddenly sat down……….feeling his hard manhood poking to get out of his pants...to avoid further embrassement he sat down hiding it...as it was completely visible now...he left so ashamed of himself for getting so desperate...he mentally smacked himself to control his libido...

on the other hand geet was pouting has maan broke her manofying session...but next moment she smiled evily...thinking she is the best...

maan was still in his trance, relishing her smooth touch...when he again felt something but this time on his hands...he looked at her completely shocked as she was holding his one hand in hers...he tried to free his hand...but she holded it firmly now with both her hands...

she took hold of his palm in her one hand...and the other hand was smoothly caressing it...ohh maan was loosing his control as he was already hard below...and now getting high with this intoxication...her smooth milky velvety skin creating tingling sensation on his palm...

he looked at dadi who was immersed in reading some article...he then looked at geet giving a stern annoyed look...to which she just smiled cutely, showing her milky white teeths...he mouthed "ohh geet you are so dead"...to which she laughed...wishpering
"you are looking so cute"

next moment the tables turned around...and maan took hold of her palm...smirking now who is in control...

he pressed her palm more firmly...squeezing it...making a moan escape her mouth...thats when they caught dadi's attention...

dadi asked geet in concerned..."kya hua beta...aap chillayi kyu"

maan smirked...giving her a mean look...to which geet made a pleading baby face...

"kuch nahi dadi...lagta hai kisi kide ne kaat liya"...geet muffled her laughter seeing his angry face...

maan mouthed "kida"..."abhi dekhata hu tumhe"

he squeezed her palm more tightly...then pulling her towards him under the table...geet jerked hard but could not get out of his iron hold...

she made a baby pouting face...then suddenly smirked...

next moment maan screamed in horror...as geet pinched his hand quite roughly...
geet started laughing madly...and so did dadi, as she got some idea about what was happening under her eye...she gave a teasing look to both maan and geet...

"kya hua maan beta...ab aap kyu chillaye...hum dekh rahe hai aap dono bari bari chilla rahe ho...kya aapko bhi kisi kide ne kata"

"nahi dadi ek kida nahi...ek bada cockroach tha...lady cockroach"

geet made a big O face...then stompped her foot on maan's, making him scream again...but this time not only with the pain caused by geet but also with the burning sensation of hot coffee which fell with his jerk on his own pants...he got up panicking...cleaning the hot liquid off his pants...as the warmth of it was burning his skin down below...uff his manhood was on stake...

poor geet got scared with turn of events...she abruptly got up...and started cleaning his pants...helping him...cleaning the liquid over his thighs...unknowingly moving over his manhood...rubbing it innocently...maan looked at her horrified gulping his saliva..."what is she doing"...he kept looking at her as she continued her sweet torcher by rubbing down below...he was getting harder and harder reaching his threshold...his trance was broken when dadi called out for him...

"maan aap thik hai"

he looked at dadi then at geet who was bending down cleaning him below...he jerked her away from him holding her shoulders...as he was about to cum in his pants...he ran up stairs towards his room...holding his breath, he entered his room...he closed the door abruptly without locking...leaning on it...taking a sigh of relief...

then right away went inside the washroom...poor soul, forgot to even close the doors behind...

he hurriedly removed his cloths one by one……….n threw it at the corner...

now he was standing only in his boxers, below the cold shower...trying to calm himself both physically and mentally...he leaned on the shower wall keeping his hands on it for support...as he was going weak on his keens with the turns of events took place, since geet started her manofying...

A smile formed on his handsome face...making him look ever so irresistable...he let the cold shower run down his sexy worked up body...to sooth his hardness down below...

he kept standing their, feeling the coldness subsiding the eroctic wild desires of his body...

Poor geet and dadi kept standing their getting astonished with sudden events...dadi patted geets head lovingly...

"geet hota hai beta...maan change karne gaye honge...aap fikar mat kijiye"

geet made a crying face...she thought..."jo bhi karne jati hu sab ulta ho jata"...then to dadi...

"dadi mai unhe dekhane jau...if he needs anything"

dadi nodded and went to her room...geet bucked up her courage to enter lions den...she took slow steps in the direction of his room up stairs...playing with her dupatta...making so many mental notes to behave nicely, like a good girl...she entered his room...finding it completely dead...
"uffo ab yeh kaha gaye"...then heard shower running...
"ohh toh washroom mai hai...jarur saaf kar rahe honge"

she sat on his bed, caressing its smooth texture...then blushed thinking wild...she looked down embarressed...then got up...smacked her head...

"sudhar ja geet...maan ko pata chala toh ki tu unke baare mai kya kya sochati hai...toh who kya sochenge tere baare mai...chi chi babaji"

she walked some baby steps trying to think how will she face maan...when he comes out...kya woh aur naraaz hue honge...lekin unko itna time kyu lag raha hai...may be he wants some help...mujhe andar jana chahiye na....thinking...ha jana chahiye aakhir woh coffee bhi mere wajah se giri thi na....determinantly she went near washroom door...finding it open...she entered it without knocking...then stood there shocked with wide open eyes, gasping at the sight infront of her...

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Precap:- maan getting naughty😳😳😳😉😉😉

phewww...this was the long update...and me had a gala time writing it...please guys, i need long long COMMENTS this time...n more no. of LIKES...i know me getting greedy, but wat to do...it helps me write better n better...

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VARSHA😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Varsha 🤗...thank u for the awesome update...Geet and her manofying is going to literally kill Maan and us one day...the dining table scene was 😆 for Geet and 😉😳🤢 for Maan...all this in front of Daadi 😲...poor fellow...no wonder he ran for a cold shower...here also our jhalli wants to help him 😛...can imagine her expression when she saw him...Babaji save u Geet 😆



Edited by --Ratna-- - 13 years ago
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this Geet will be the death of Maan ... lolz ... poor MSK ...

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Originally posted by: --Ratna--

Varsha 🤗...thank u for the awesome update...Geet and her manofying is going to literally kill Maan and us one day...the dining table scene was 😆 for Geet and 😉😳🤢 for Maan...all this in front of Daadi 😲...poor fellow...no wonder he ran for a cold shower...here also our jhalli wants to help him 😛...can imagine her expression when she saw him...Babaji save u Geet 😆




u r welcome dear...n thanks for the pic once again...
really geet is gona kill maan one day wid her antics😆😆😆😆😆
i felt so pity for maan while writing it🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
i wonder ab shower ke andar kya hogaEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
n will use this pic...for geets expression...it suits so well
thank u dear for this lovely comment😃😃😃
love ya
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anupm04

Waiting for next part

dear will update next one day after tommo😊
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thanks dear😊😊😊

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