FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet part 96 new thread - Page 88

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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it!! Geet angry in Muskaan style..too good 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

just read the last three updates, soo many different emotions portrayed in them

i'm glad they are moving in the right direction and i can't wait to see what maan does next
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great updates Muskan! It's nice to see Geet giving Maan another chance, even after all the hurt she has faced ... can't wait for the next update!
-Mahi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey😉
m too ashamed to post a reply here hehe😆
actually i was reading your updates every other day😛 but i had no time at all to post a reply😭
because of my senior year in high school n its just killing me DiCryCry
anwyz😉
i kept admiring you princess👏,.while reading your updates😉
you have got some divine power to write sooo amazingly😍,. mesmerizingly☺️
i really loved all the parts of your writingClapClap
its just a unique piece of writing Di👍🏼
if i start commenting on the parts i didnt comment on😲., it will make a reply lke 2 pages long🤣
so i will say one thing for sure😃 that each n every part of the writing was brilliant😳😳
it was just too good to be praised of😳
i really loved the way you gave a twist to the story through krish's accident😉
but the sad thing is that we lost our khushiCryCry
bravo for geet that she gave up her Khushi for KrishClap.,. lke a trade off😆,. both lives were important but Krish's live was more important than Khushi😳
all these scenes between MaaNeet are wonderfully written⭐️ and well composedClap
awww😉,. geet is mad at our MaanTongue,., but we knew that for sure than she cant leave Maan😆 coz of their strong bond between them❤️,., even though she was mad at Maan😡,. they still😉,., mmmm u knnow what i mean haha,.,😆
im dying to read the next parts DiTongue,., n i promise i will post a reply every time i read your updates🤗,., i feel so guilty right nowCry,., im sorry Di,.,Cry
Edited by jattionfire - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

How do you add pictures Di😛

i made a picture for you n m unable to add it 😭😭
Edited by jattionfire - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
dear




part 91 is

geet is such an

geet - main aap se gussa hoon..she wispered..(resting he face in his chest)
maan - jitna gussa karna hain kar loo...main tumhe mana loonga..(he smiled..holding her closer)
geet - aap haso math..mai sach much gussa hoon..(she turned her face..resting on other side)
maan - teehk hain tum gussa hoo..lekin tum mujh se baath to karoghina..(he just hoped he she said yes)
geet - hmmm!!! iska matlab yeh nahi ..ki main gussa nahi hoon..


geet excused herself to the washroom
she splashed water on her face & recollected wat ever he said...
babaji..yeh mera saath aap kya kar rahe ho...unhe to humhari shaadhi bhi yaad nahi
aise kabhi hootha hain kya? koi aapni shaadhi bhool tha hain kya?
Maan Singh khurana hain kuch bhi kar saktha hain..lekhin main aab kya karoo?
main to inse door bhi nahi rah sakthi..jaanthe hain na..is liya mujhe hurt karthe hain


geet(husky voice)- aap se baath kiya bina nahi rah sakthi ..iska matlab yeh nahi ki
meri koi feelings nahi..I am really hurt..but I don't want hurt myself
further by staying away from u

maan - mujhe to tumhara gussa bhi pyaara laghtha hain oye hoeeeeeeeeeee

geet - main aap ke bina nahi rah sakthi ...she cried in pain
maan - jaantha hoon..
geet - isliya hamesha mera dil thodathe hoo..(she wacks his hand. 2-3times...& her tears roll down)
maan slowly truned her towards himself & kissed her tears...
maan - jan ke kuch bhi nahi kiya main ne..tum to meri jaan hoo..
i could never think of hurting u..she looked into his eyes.

Kaise mujhe tu mil gayi,
Kismat pe aaye naa yaakeen,
Utar aayi jheel mein jaise chand utarta hai kabhi,
Haule haule dheere se,
Gunguni dhoop ki tarah se taranum mein tum,
Choo ke mujhe guzari hu yu,
Dekhu tumhe ya mein sunu,
Tum ho sukoon, tum ho junoon,
Kyu pehle naa aayi tum?
Kaise mujhe tu mil gayi,
Kismat pe aaye naa yaakeen,

perfect song


plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz conti soon











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Posted: 14 years ago

maan - I know..but I know u will let me win ur trusth.
geet hugs him & sleeps in his arms...after geet dosed off..maan thanked his stars...
he could not belive how innocent she was...she was angry yet..she was so close to him
he was happy that all their misunderstandings were kind of cleared but..he did'nt
know how to make up for those 4 years..

part 92

maan wakes up & early...admires her for a while...kisses her & she smiles in her sleep
he wispers..I love u..he could see the smile lighting up..
he went for his jog...geet got up after a while to see..a cup of hot tea
& a long stemed rose...it had a note..she smiled & read it...
"Thanxs geet.. ke tum meri zindaghi main aayee"...joota she wispered..
she hugged the rose & slept little longer..suddenly she felt a sweaty warm neck touching her..
ears..caresing her cheek..joot nahi such..& kissed her..
picked her up & took her to the shower..
geet - yeh kya kar rahe ho...
& slowly turned on the water..making sure it was warm...he changed & joined in...
she turned & shied..maan gave her cute bath & wiped her ...wraped her in white towel
she looked white goddess..he looked at her & stood rooted..snapped out of his thougths
made her sit on the bed..digged into her suitcase
geet - kya chahiya aap ko..
maan continued looking for her dress...he pulled out a lovely red dress..matching bangles
bindi..she was about step down..
maan - ek jagah behti nahi rah sakthi..
she made a baby face...with that towel wrapped she looked even cuter..
maan got the dress..& tried dressing her up...
geet - yeh kya kar rahe ho...
maan - chup..bilkul chup..(his wet looks in that white towel..was so seductive..she could'nt say a word)
geet - lekin maan..
maan - mmmm..
geet - wow..
maan - wow kya geet...
geet - koi sirf suit phena tha hain kya?(she snapped)
maan - kya matlab?
geet - pointed..with her eyes...(maan smiled & picked her basic garments & tried to make her wear) he turned the straps around twice & he was still not sure which way it was...he was little nervous tried not to show it..but geet had known..and she laughed, that soft, teasing laugh of hers...she slowly guided his hands..its my first time his voice gruffed..he shied..blushed..
geet kissed his pink cheeks ...& turned ..maan dressed her up & got the ....
the bindi..then put on the bangels..on each hands..they looked so briliant ..deep red..richness..
adding to her beauty..he kissed her forehead ..she could smell his fresh cologne all over herself..
he got ready & said challen..
geet - kanha?..
maan - tum challo ..thats a suprise..
he takes her to the hattu devi temple...as they climed the temple..geet kept looking at maan..
inhe kya suji..mandir agaya aaj...such much babaji..inke dimag main kya chaltha hain..muje kabhi samjh nahi aata maan puts her pallu on her covering her head & puts a garland around her neck..geet was shocked...
pandit ji - beti aab aap inehka gale main varmala daliya..(she was suprised..)
geet just followed looking in his eyes...she remembered the first time..
she was trying to catch a glance of his looks...while putting the mala...
maan very religiously followed all the instruction from the pandit ji..geet was lost in him..she snapped out when pandit ji asked her to walk in front..she realized that she had taken six phera's again..& this time she actually looked only at maan...& after the last phera..pandit ji..
handed over the mangalsuter & sindoor...maan tied the mangalsutar & then put the sindoor with the coin when the sindoor fell on her nose she blushed & looked down like a new bride..
maan could'nt stop himeself falling headover heel all over again..at her gestuers...
they took the blessings..at the temple & maan carried her to the car...he helped her with garland & duppata they drove to hattu peak...It was late morning and after a steep few km drive on a dirt road which was a slush of sharp rocks and mud reached the summit of the hill. It was all clouded and there was a mild drizzle. But then suddenly the rain stopped and as the clouds began to part they had the first view of the snow laden peaks. And after a few more minutes began the almost magical interplay of colors with the sun emerging out from the clouds
and reflections from the snow covered mountains. Now that was a rare occasion when you see different shades every few seconds..yellow ..orange..white.. as the sun was directly on top of the mountains.
maan - bhook laaghi hain
geet was feeling too shy to answere..
maan - aacha challo...
geet (she looked around) - yenha?
maan - umm!!
he unpacked the basket...he had arranged while she was a sleep in the morning..
he pulled out the spread & got the food packs that he picked from the cafe..also pulled out flask..
he opened the door & made her sit next to him...they shared their brunch ..& while sipping the tea..maan lied on her lap...she looked at him..slipped her hand on his hair & shied..
she looked arournd like nature was also conspiring with him..natural spread of flowers on the floor & dew drops settled on then...looked so perfect..
maan - kya hua
geet - aap bhi na kya kya karthe hoo
maan - aab maine kya kiya?
geet bend down & kissed his forehead...kuch nahi...
the whole of afternoon they were their admiring the natural beauty...& their innocent love

precap
romantic night at the peak!!!

part 93 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1465529/ff-pyar-ka-ehsaas-maan-and-geet-part-96-new-thread

happy janmashtami..to all..so we have our krishnakanhia form of maan today...
pattofying his radha...hope u like it..please do comment love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Muskaan...i simply loved this new turn...its just adorable them getting married...Incredible...
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg that was beautiful
awwwww maan remarried geet again aww so sweet
great update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
cant wait to read da nxt update
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Posted: 14 years ago
the last two parts were great! I think Maan made up to her in a great way by marrying her again. Perfect and sweet.!

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