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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ratna--

Divzi 🤗...thank u for the awesome update and PM...omg the pain Maaneet are going thru is killing me 😭...plzzz i beg u end it soon...it is unbearable 😕



FF end karu yaa pain end karu 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
why u r making both suffer 4 lot of time..this time they met let them 2 b 2gether
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Posted: 13 years ago



Heart Of Heart
Part 27


Maaannn...a sound echoed his ears he knew he reached his destination where he was dying to reach living in that hell he will get it after leaving his body in that beautiful heaven...her voice lingered in his ears giving peace to his erotic beats making them slow with the feeling of completion, he surrendered to the battle even before the actual fight was put up


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Doctor...how's he now...??? Please doc do something na please...she tried reach another doctor coming out the OT but again gave no answer just that week smile with that slight node was there again...each and every time she asked an answer was the same reply, or shall i say no one actually replied anything to her yet, she was still waiting for a single word, a single consoling word about confirming his well being, his health, his heart beat, her heart...

she sat back on the chair lifelessly crying holding her face in between her palms calming down but how she can calm down when his heart was inside being tortured with those seizers, needles and threads to conceal it, may be the turmoil inside was too strong to seal back with those stitches and bandages also...she cried, cried her heart out, but whom to say the hustle bustle in the busy hospital premises where no one to listen she tried asking every one but none listen
standing outside the OT since she got him here, she had just one ray of hope, just her baba ji...she closed her lost in that almighty residing in those far skies

She closed her eyes, folded her hands and sat silently fading away those tears and smiled in between her heart and prayed...baba ji you know na I believe in you, I love you more than myself, but I love him more than you...

I always asked for several small wishes day in day out from a single ice cream to being saved from maa's scolding...from that free lecture to a lonely walk with my prince charming on that sweet dew of every morning, baba ji I always prayed for you for everything and anything you always listened I know and always did the best I believe

but baba ji today what, I wnna wish, I don't know is it good for me or not, but I know it will be best for me because without this I won't be able to survive won't be able to live, won't be able to stay what I am, won't be able to believe you

Please baba ji I want my Maan back, back let not to me but i want his life back, don't let me live with him, dont let him stay within my sight, but he will always be in my heart, please baba ji give him back, back to this world, back safe secure to this heart, I want the haert of this heart to be back...will you give it!! Please!!

She opened her eyes and looked with a smiling face to the doctor coming out of the OT removing his gloves and instructing something to nurse, she looked at the huge poster of baba ji on the other wall and smiled with confidence...you'll have to bring him back, and I'll make him come back in the real sense...back to the way I loved my Maan, back from his gloomy loneliness, from his aloofness
you'll have to give back his life and I'll make him live again...
she smiled knowing she can and she will...

Her trance broke when the doctor came and patted her back and said in a soothing way she could have sworn her life for...he is fine, he'll get his conscious in a while nothing to worry just his head injury is a little deep so he will be under sedatives for more 24 hours...those words were enough for her heart to pump that blocked stream of blood to run in her veins again, her glittery eyes and shinning face was evident to the glow her heart was having with the information she got...

She held the doctors hand tight in her tinny wrists and asked with that ever gorgeous smile adoring her lovely face...sachi

doctor laughed a little at the little doll in front of him and pinched her nose playfully...muchi,
acha now tell you his

Friend...Geet screamed in horror to think if he'll mark her as his sister, and that's the impossible thing she could let anyone make out

Doc knotted his eyebrows with the slight smile...

Wo he is in my school, senior to me...Geet looked a little petrified and tried to divert other uncomfortable set of questions...wo shall I contact his home I can get his no. From school

don't worry his dadi maa is our regular patient in fact am his family doctor so his family has been informed and police as well, that's why this little angel dint needed to fill up any formalities...he patted her cute cheeks
can you give the details to police...doc said tiring not to terrify the little girl

But to his utter dismay the anger, the fury in her eyes was made to burn anyone to hell...her cold low voice was evident of the devour running in her veins and who was that not possible when her maan was in such a terrifying situation and just because of that person let it be a mistake she won't take any mercy against the culprit...I will cooperate in any way I could...she said and turned to look into the small glass window of that ICU from where her Maan was visible to sooth her eyes

his each breath was filling her with a new life, his each heartbeat was feeling alive in her heart, she looked back to the doctor for permission when he silently nodded she smiled and enters the cozy room filled with his essence

her each step was making him restless even in the deep slumber he could feel them, her raising heart beats were indicating the one who ruled his heart was there near him, and the touch when she sat beside him silently holding his hand in hers tight was enough to prove all his queries an evident...

She sat near him holding his hand and kissing several times with a smile, with satisfaction and love she always had in her heart for him...

She peeped to his face silently smiling and ruffled his hairs to which his face frowned a little in his sleep, she chucked at his baby angry and kissed his forehead whispering...thank you to come back...

And looked above...thank you baba ji for giving him back...

And again looked back to his face adoring his each feature...

Kissing his eyes one by one she said the words to him she always hid in her heart, protecting her own feeling not from world and him but to herself...those simple yet the most magical words...i love you
the first time she committed this to him in real, face to face her heart was in a new zeal in a new world

she came to his nose and kissed cutely complaining about him to no else then him only...you getting very much angry now a day, keep your anger calm, sometimes you scare me also...she pouted

she looked at his cheeks all bruised a lone tear escaped touching his skin, he flinched a bit, her tears were more painful than those harsh medicines applied on his smooth manly skin...you know how much you scared me, it killed me millions of times to see you here, what do you think of yourself superman, naah iron man...right...that's why you were walking carelessly on that busy road, she frowned kissing his cheeks when he smiled a little and her gaze fell on his lips

she blushed thinking of those perfect lips of those puffy swollen M shaped lips the slight cut at the side of his lip was stuck in her mind and she lost in her trance bent a little and pecked his lips

she sucked the clotted blood and licked to sooth his pain in her calm smooth lips unknown to herself she let her lips linger on her lost looking at his face...her second kiss again to the man she loved, the one she knew she could give away her life to, their second kiss, there wasn't anything like a normal kiss but the single emotion, the feelings, the fears, the turmoil of losing the one whose more dear than your life was evident in it...

The coming footsteps were enough to break her trance and she left him straightening her posture while he frowned in the cutest way making her chuckle

oyee kitne besharam ho aap...someone's coming so you go sleep...
and left his side standing straight when the police officer came inside to check to information

Precap: Geet meeting Dadi Maan 😳


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Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice dear.
loved to see them together n maan reacting to her touch even in unconscious state.
Geet is just too cute.
Hope maan will meet his princess soon.
Edited by shristi1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
It is so cute dear how she kisses his face with so much & his lips...oh i so much liked it...awesome update dear👏
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg!that was awesum...
loved maan's facial expression when she kissed him...
i m loving ds meeting...
i hope nw he will reduce his angry mode..
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update..
geet was so lovely
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thx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
i hope maan felt n heard in his unconscious state which geet said n did...during reading this update i was thinking if maan would say mishti in his unconscious state n geet would misunderstand him that he loves someone else...confused abt the precap...geet meeting dadi i understand bt geet meeting dadi maan means...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update Geet is so cuteee Hope Maan-Geet meet soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow maan enjoying his dream even when he is unconscious also...

wonderful update...


loved it...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

n thank u very much fr d lovely update...

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