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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part 1...Dev proposed to Geet and she accepted it 😲 ...why did she do that 😕...when she is not sure about her feelings and the missing one year...felt so bad for her memory loss and the way she keeps going to the Piazza for the unknown answers...hope she finds them soon...waiting to meet Butters 😊

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Part 2...the whole update was like watching a hi tech spy thriller...from Arthur and Maan's convo...funds...agents...tagging...drug dealers...holographic screens...hand and voice commands...loved the shakedown stare part ...so Sarin is an agent too...what about Dev?...is he the bas***d they are talking about ?...what is G's part in all this ?...why did she leave Sarin?...what did she mean by...

"After the kind of eloping adventure she gets to live for a few months, running all over Europe and living without a care in the world like two smitten teenagers, you don't expect her to forget all that and be happily married to another bas***d...who doesn't do justice in giving her anything even remotely close to those memories she is in the lookout for..."

Was she talking about Maaneet...wonder why Maan is hesitating to go to Geet...is it because ahe forgot him...or is there something more ?...so many questions...waiting to get the answers 😊

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Part 3...the glimpse into the past was lovely...the part where he sits and watches her pics was painful...what does this mean...

the tinge of redness that was spread wildly on her forehead from the sharp streak of red line that disappeared into the side parting of her hair.

Are they married ?...Thor is a balding Brtt with an awesome sense of humour...loved Delilah and her wit...so Maan drugged Geet with a dart and is bringing her to the Crypt...why was G panicking so much ?...this part was awesome...

Giovanna glanced up to the screen and saw that Maan was already at the door and as she took in the woman curling in his arms, an unknown fizz of something fuzzy and clammy rose into her throat. It was the last thing she'd expected to happen that day. There hadn't been anything out of place until the news of Dev's proposal had come through Sarin's call. But indeed, that had been enough to unshackle his cold heart and have it turned upside down to make him walkout in the rain and get her. Only Giovanna, perhaps Thor too, knew how many hours of watching live feed could do that to a man crumbling under his own dense affections for the woman he so dearly loved, but couldn't afford to be within two feet of her living self, if not for the holographic projection of her. She scoffed at the odd play of life then...We were Destiny's children after all...

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Part 4...poor Geet...what a painful struggle with her memory...hate to see her like this...no wonder G tried to help her...but she was not allowed to...what all she had to come up with in answer to Geet's questions...was expecting Maan to drop her home...even that didn't happen...indeed a lot of closed doors 😕

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Part 5...Ok i spoke too early ...Geet is not going anywhere soon...Code 10 Lockdown i see...i am in awe of your writing skills once again...how do u write so superbly in all genres...the convo between the agents and Maan tackling the intruder were so realastic...awesome update my dear 👍🏼...btw i agree with G...Geet should have a say in whatever that is going on around her 😊

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Part 6...i really love G ❤️...indeed a mother hen to the whole brood...poor Maan is all battered and in need of a Doctor...who better then our Geet...waiting for them to meet...plz update soon...Thank for all the 6 awesome updates...love u...TC 😊

This is for our little H...may the ink pot be always full...

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Hasini 🤗...thank u for this lovely story...read all 6 updates...loved them all ❤️...sorry for the late comments...learnt my lesson now...we should never laugh at others...i was joking about Jyoti's one week and look how late i became 😳...made this siggy to show my appreciation 😊

Ah, my banner queen... lovely! Beautiful work.

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Avi 🤗...thank u for the sweet comment 😳

Hasini 🤗...waiting for u my dear...plz update soon 😊

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OMG...this gives me a wierd feeling...when i was making the siggy...the pic for Eathen Hunt and Julia Meade did not show up on the 1st page...i thought it was some problem with uploading...so i googled for their pics ...they were so many...finally i picked the one i used...now today i checked the 1st page and the pics are same ...i am all 😲 😕...can anyone tell me if this pic has always been there in the intro...Hasini what do u think ?...