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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb Update
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n also fr d pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update dear...
Love it...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

Nishu, yeh Ramjmata kab se 'he' ban gayi? What was the hurry? Short update with mistakes.

Anu aur Ruchs ko bhi dur hi rakh. Rajmata kum thi story ki maa-behen karne mey ki ab yeh dono bhi kood padi. Kya ideas de rahi hai- 'raksha bandhan' celebration, Geet as maid, Anu replacing Geet, Maan Handa & Geet Singh Khurana *Sara wondering, how the hell will Geet carry Maan out of the water, when some group of girl try to rape him and while saving himself, he will fall*. Horrible. Kya hoga aagey? Overall, amazing.

Do cont soon and do PM me.


kya idea diye hai yaar😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
so as you all know
today is special day
so her me again
to update




Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi
the up is really good
lets see what happens next and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago



part - 15

ok as we all know their is little change in everything . as poor sara has tried really hard to move all things according to her idea to make her task hit but as one has said its
always gud to have intelligent enemy than foolish friend
i m not saying that her friends r foolish but they r over smart than each other . who have their own personal motive tp achive which they prefer more than task so let see did situation really come out as sara want aur something which made rajmata more happy. so here it goes
maan is lying near the lake with some random book in his hands.

maan : jeevan kala
aadmi ko ek se 25 saal ki umar tal bhramchari aur uske baad 25 se 50 tak vivahit jeevan jeena chahiye..accha yeh baat hai ,zaara mai bhi dekhu mai kitne saal ka hogaya hu.
mujhe yaad hai aaj se thik 26 saal3 mahine pahle mai apni mata ke andar prakat hua tha aur phir thik 9 mahine baad lagattar kai ghanto ki prasav pida sahne ke baad mata ne mujhe janam diya tha.
kya din tha woh
arre is ke anusaar toha aaj mai 25 saal 6 mahine ka hu.
aaaur maine aapne vivahit jeevan ke mahine aise hi kharab kar diye hai.
ab mujhe jaldi se koi sundar se kanya dund kar apna vivahit jeevan shru karna chahiye.
(way of living
as per book one has to be bachelor till 25 and after 25 till 50 he has to live happy married life . with that he start thinking about his age ,which make him wonder that he already has lost six month of his married life . so now he has to some thing and that too really soon)

just than he hear the sound of laugh which make hi turn and here he saw the sexy geet standing in front of him with anger in his eyes to kill him. as geet is here to have some fun with her friends when maan through his half eaten apple back which land straight on geet head and so aal her friends start laughing on her which is the reason of her anger.
but here after seeing geet,our maanu dear is all lattu on her all thanks to sara magic but poor girl forget to do magic on geet where ruchs did.
maan : arre waha kya baat hei god ji
abhi hi maine apne vivah ke baare mai sochna shuru kiya aur aapne itni sunder pari bhej de mere liye.
(wow god here i think about my marriage and with in a minute you send her for me )
geet : okkk
so you just through this rubbish at me to make me happy.

maan : maine kya kiya hai devi ji
(what have i done)
than one of geet friend speak
friend : kafi besharam lagta hai yeh

maan : mai to sharrif hu besharam to aaplog hai jo in faate hue kapdo mai ghar se bahar aa gayi hai
(its not me but you who come out in this short clothes out of house)
geet : girls seems like he want to get killed by our hands, lets catch him and in place of ball lets play with him aur else through him in water.

maan : hey naari jaati ke naam par paap aap sab
mujh se dur rahiyega,kyoki ab mai 25 paar kar chuka hu toh mai bhi bahut kuch kar sakta hu.

geet : seee itgirls
he seems to be very much proud after crossing 25.
maan : kyu nahi devi
yeh dekhiye is pustak mai saaf likh hai ki 25 ke baad shaadi karni chahiye.
(see in this book its clear that best age for marriage is after 25)
geet ; okkk ,so this is flavour which hit you just now
so did you get any one.

maan ; arre devi mujh jaise ladke ke liye ladkiyo ki kya kami hai
waise mujhe aap pasand aa gayi hai
(girls ,their is no shortage of girls for a handsome boy like me)
friend ; see this man gut yaar
he is hitting straight to geet ,feel like he want to die single.
maan : aaay devi ji
meri jawani ka majak mat baaiye
mujhe josh aa jaayega.
(stop it ,aur else i will do somthing odd)
geet ; hey jenny rahne de
who know ,he might marry you in josh

maan : arre nahi devi ji
inse mai to kya mere dada ji bhi shaadi na kare
par agar aap haan kahe to mai kuch soch sakta hu
(me never, even my grandfather will not marry her,but if you say yes than i m ready)

with this geet got more angry and pushed him which made maan fall i n water as he is in corner and girls run from their.so let see how angels are now

sara : what the hell ,yeh sab kya tha
guys you did that na.

ruchs : we did nothing
its you who make maan fall for geet in their first meet.

sara ; and did also its me
who made geet to react in this manner.

anu ; sara ,i m telling you
we can still change her by some way or other
sara : ooo
its never gona happen
lets go and meet maan as his friends and help him to impress geet

precap :
rajmata ; ok sara if you help him than i m going to join geet
Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nishu, happy b'day once again, girlfriend *jhappi*.
Mere ideas toh unique hai but tere shud hindi dialogue is far more unique. I read it 2 times and at 3rd time, asked my cousin to read for me as my eyes were blur and stomach paining like hell.

God, the best of this work is HIS dialogue. Rajmata ke jawani ke songs and Anu aur Ruchs ki shameless drool session, add to the fun. Damn, that was best part ever. Still muffling my laugh. Loved it, totally.

Do cont soon and do PM me.
nahtani88 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantastic Update
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Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
Both the updates were very nice...

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