jaara hatke please sab bachke pt 16,17/pg137,140

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Posted: 13 years ago

#811

okkk

as my birth day is near so

treat for all

me ready to update this also

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Posted: 13 years ago

#812

nishu U want comment on marriage no murder thread na
lets bargain update this nd I will give u comments there detailed one
golden offer
one 4 each part
ok
think abt it

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Sara Khanna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#813

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

they r at their best dear
they ditched me log nback

no comment aur even hi from them to me😭

Matlab??
Me toh missed you so much. Un teeno ka dimaag kha gayi, tere baare mey puch puch kar.
Chad unhe, mein hoon na.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#814

@Pari- it's SARA, anything for my girlfriend.
@Nishu- mere b'day ka kya?

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---nishu---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#815

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi
@Pari- it's SARA, anything for my girlfriend.
@Nishu- mere b'day ka kya?

sorry yaar

mere health is too down

but now i m here to pay penelty😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

#816

thanxxx to all of you

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Posted: 13 years ago

#817

okkk guys me here

after long health issue

if i lost some where

please forgive me

as you ALL Now

how bad i m at writing

so sab chalta hai for new comers

part - 14

as we all know by now that all the people who is here are best than other in his own way and that is the main problem becose other one know about that so here it

all are ready to move forward and ready to put their best foot forward but before that angels have to see what is going in mind of these to cartoon which by chance or say by rajmata choice lead of their story and they have to be perfect romeo julit which seems like seeing moon and sun in same frame doing hand shake

on the other side rajmata is still not satisfy with his game plan so she decide to join all them in this romantic play which turn in to some what horror and comedy all thanks to her without their knowledge. seems like she got what she want and make her mind to join them on earth in her new roop.

on the other side three angels who r feed up from maan and geet rubbish talk and after over come their initial shock r ready to do some thing which can help them to change the situation in their favour

sara : okkk

so this the plan which rajmata will follow to make us fail in this task . but oh dear she forget that we r not some dumb chicks who fall in her trap and lose hope with out fighting bcose we r here to fight and win this task.

ruchs : you r right dear

but what can we do now. we can change them now .

sara : yes we can'e change them but still we can do something with their cat fight.

anu : and what is that

as maan say make them brother sister and inspite of arranging valentine day we will celebrate rakhi.

sara : yes why not and than again its rajmata who got the crown , let change their thinking as this is the main probem.

anu : why only thinking

we can switch their place

ruchs : yes that is gud idea

this way my maan will become prince and this geet will bcome his maid.

sara : and maan singh khurana will be maan handa and geet will be geet singh khrana and we will lost our task .

so we going to do as i say

so first we have to change their first meet and do something like maan faal for geet in their first meet

anu ; i will make sure that geet will not fall for him

with that they r ready to change some rule of rajmata book but that's in future which show what gud they do.

after their lot of mind puzzle they r able to decide that maan will not be the servent but neighbour of geet with a little twist. so the scene goes like this maan being the maanu sit near one of lake with some random book in his hands

precap :

okkk

guys aage kal

pakkka

give me long comment and get update

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 13 years ago

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#818

🤣 OMG ab yeh angels r competing with geet to get maan...🤣

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Sara Khanna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#819

Nishu, yeh Ramjmata kab se 'he' ban gayi? What was the hurry? Short update with mistakes.

Anu aur Ruchs ko bhi dur hi rakh. Rajmata kum thi story ki maa-behen karne mey ki ab yeh dono bhi kood padi. Kya ideas de rahi hai- 'raksha bandhan' celebration, Geet as maid, Anu replacing Geet, Maan Handa & Geet Singh Khurana *Sara wondering, how the hell will Geet carry Maan out of the water, when some group of girl try to rape him and while saving himself, he will fall*. Horrible. Kya hoga aagey? Overall, amazing.

Do cont soon and do PM me.