MG SS: JUNOON - Epilogue, PG 16, 23rd April

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~JUNOON~

-Prologue-

14th, April 2012

2.43 am

@Emergency OT, Army Base hospital, Delhi

A man laying on operation table in pool of blood his chest was pierced with 3 bullets that is in edge of last breath trying to say something in broken words to Senior Dr. Karan Singh Aloovalia, in his mid forties trying his best to save him.

"do din'..Unnis'Unnis'Taariq ko'. Kongka La'border( It is in the disputed India-China border area in Ladakh. This is the disputed area still under Chinese control in the Aksai Chin area)'attack'.. Lieutenant Colonel . MSK.. ko' inform'.karo...Kuch honewalaaa '..aaa'. "

*beep* '.*beep*'..

Dr. Karan panicked for two reasons, one the information is very confidential was given by the man who was alive laying on Operation table few seconds back now he's dead with half opened eyes''second his new assistance who was assisting him in operation stood num and very next minute he heard the faint noise *Thud*

10th April, 2012

7.00 pm

Somewhere in Ladkh Border 'Someone at other end''

" Silver hawk'calling"

"silver hawk 'calling"

"over"

'''*couple of minutes later*

Ladkh Army Base, Captain. Aditya Ranka

"Eagle eye '.over "

"Target is active! I repeat Target is active'Over"

"Whatt!!!...*few seconds silent*"

"Fine! Whats your Position! over"

*bombarding noise in background*

"Silver hawk! Whats your position?...over"

"eagle Eye! 34 degree north latitude. 78 degree south east' We want back up! over"

*there is loud noise of bombarding '.and the line went dead'..*

*long beep*'

"Silver hawk! 'come again! "

"silver hawk! Come again!"'.

Captain.Aditya ranka '.immediately rushed out to give the dreadful news to Lieutenant Colonel MSK'..that something worse is coming!!

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Index

Prologue

Introduction

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Chapter 7

Chapter 8

Chapter 9

Chapter 10

Chapter 11
Chapter 12

Chapter 13

Chapter 14

Chapter 15

Chapter 16

Chapter 17

Chapter 18

Chapter 19

Epilogue

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~Introduction~

Khurana's

Lt. Col (Lieutenant Colonel) Maan Singh Khurana, a 32 years old army officer. He joined army at the age of 18 because he wanted to be a self man of his life alike his grandfather Captain. Prithviraj Khurana and his father Major. Dhanraj singh khurana who is also a retired army officer.

Major. Dhanraj Singh Khurana is only son of Captain. Prithviraj Khurana and Smt. Savithri Devi Khurana. He is married to Bhumi Khurana and have 4 sons and 1 daughter.

Elder Son

Name : Jai Singh Khurana

Status : Married to Sunaina Singh Khurana and have one son and one daughter.

Age : 34

Occupation : Owns Family Business

I Think : The strength of a family, like the strength of an army, is in its loyalty to each other.I love my family to the core and I won't tolerate a word against my brothers coz they are like my sons.

2nd Son

Name : Dev Singh Khurana

Status : Committed to Nandini Handa

Age : 33

Occupation : Air Force Officer

I Think : I don't have much to say about me. I just know that I love my family.

3rd Son

Name : Maan Singh Khurana

Status : Single (Don't want to mingle)

Age : 32

Occupation : Lieutenant Colonel

About me: I hate three words in my life, one - "NO", second - "LIE" and Third - "DARE"

Some bitter incident in past made him ruthless (It's Not Sameera). Due to that he doesn't believe in Love and distanced himself from the people who love him to the core. But some corner in his heart waiting to be loved unconditionally.

4th Son

Name : Vicky Singh Khurana

Age : 29

Status : Committed to Meera Handa

Occupation : Architect, Helps his Jai Bahi in family business.

I Think : Rejoice with your family in the beautiful land of life!

And Lovely Daughter and sister doll of Khurana's

Name : Anwesha Handa

Status : Married to Arjun Handa

Age : 26

Occupation : Doctor

I Think : I'm luckiest girl in the world, why? U will know !

Handa's

Mohindar Lal Handa and Dhanraj singh Khurana's are family friends and soon to be relatives.

Mohindar Lal Handa and Rano handa have One Son and three Daughters.

Elder Son

Name : Arjun Handa

Status : Married to Anwesha Khurana

Age : 32

Occupation : Colonel

I Think : I have sweetest sisters in the world.

2nd Daughter

Name : Nandini Handa

Status : committed to Dev Singh Khurana

Age : 28

Occupation : Interior Designer.

I think : You don't choose your family. They are God's gift to you, as you are to them.

3rd Daughter

Name : Meera Handa

Status : Committed to Vicky Singh Khurana

Age : 27

Occupation : Architect, Works in KC with Vicky.

I Think: I can get up in the morning and look at myself in mirror and my family can look at me like i'm lost it.

4th Daughter

Name : Geet Handa

Status: irresistibly in Love with Maan singh Khurana but scared to express it to him coz of his temper.

Age: 25

Occupation : Doctor

About me: I love Three words in my life , one - "YES", Second - "TRUTH" and Third - "CHALLENGE".

She is a angel to everyonel'..what to say ? u all know 'she is bubbly-cute-chatterbox-melodrama queen'what else?...uff'.you all will know 'in future''

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Edited by GurtiWonderland - 13 years ago
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Chapter 1

emergency meeting held @Colonel Office

There are few seniors along with ranked soldiers sitting in their respective places

Brigadier. Suraj kapadia and General. Lohith sharma are busy in reading the primary report given by the Lt. Col. Maan Singh Khurana...immediately after the attack in the Kongka La'border (India-China Border) near Ladkh. Their head shot up when they heard the most coldest and manly voice of Lt.Col. MSK.

Captain. Aditya Ranka, age 30, From Delhi...Who admiers Lt.Col.MSK a lot and treats him as his own brother. Even Maan (oops sorry MSK) treats him like his own brother alike Vicky Singh Khurana. He is Right hand to Maan...whom he trust adi blindly. Adi's (Aditya Ranka) turned to MSK when he heard his Tone which is full of attitude.

Lt. Col. MSK " This is what we get! When we keep quite unless we fight back!...SIR(turning to general. Lohith sharma).*his teethes are grithed* ...we have enough of this shits...and we are gonna fight back this time.! And I am not going to tolerate anymore...*he roared like lion ...while his body muscles are tightened*...I Don;t give an..." *his sentence cut offed by...

Brigadier. Suraj Kapadia.. " Lt. Maan! Mind Your Words!...I..Don't tolerate any indecency...if you..."

General. Lohith... *got up from his place and '.went to MSK's side" '..Keeping his one hand on his shoulder..." cool Down My Boy! This ain't any Game between two countries...Its a WAR and that too third Country is provoking them to do such foolishness...we have to be very careful '..One Wrong Step and that will lead us to Destruction..."

Lt. Col. MSK .. "But sir! Do u know how many of our soldiers are killed in that attack and also they have kept hostages! This is perfect and good reason to declare a war sir! "...*MSK is fuming inside*...

General. Lohith... " if we keep on declaring war on every possible attacks then there will be no species left on this earth son...so calm down and try to understand the situation '...i know u are best and you will soon come out with some plans to get back our jawaans...i know you are furious coz of the dead jaawans...but don't let your anger rule over you! '.as I know u are very good at executing the plans...i hope u will understand the situation...SON!..." '..*this made MSK to cool down a bit*

Lt.Col.MSK '. " FINE!!!!" ...turned his face to Brigadier. Suraj Kapadia '.and said with greeted teeth ' "SIR!!"... " we will Be right back with proper plan this timer!"...

Lt.Col. Msk... Dispersed the meeting for half an hour '...followed by Captain . Aditya Ranka...

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Edited by GurtiWonderland - 13 years ago
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Chapter 2

NOTE : There are lot of grammar-spellings mistakes, Please ignore the mistakes. I haven't edited this chapter.

A girl is struggling with her sadi pallu to wrap it around her coz of cool breeze, she is shivering like a wet cat...and trying her best to keep her eyes wide open to adjust the dark in her cabin '...she tried to keep her mind cool and shut the unwanted thoughts...going on in her mind.

" Babajee!! hey mere kya saath horaha hain! '..aap jaanthe hain na ki mujhe andhere se kittna darr lagtha hain...*made a cry baby face* ...main aapki pyaari aur acchi bacchi hu na! '.tho please aap mujhe daroho matt...*suddenly she heard someone 's footsteps '.which is nearing to her cabin...like someone is in hurry to their life...* '...plus *heard the fox howling somewhere far '.her heart beat is...racing like mad horse... *

'. "Kaun hain! '..kaun hain waha! " '.* slowly her hand reached table drawer to grab something '.to hit that shadow which is scaring her to death*...*the door slightly opened with crack sound...*

" crrrkkk...!!!" '...

..*now the shadow is moving towards the table '..where DR. GEET HANDA standing with her Tailed Comb to stab the creature which is coming to her..." '.

*squeezed her eyes for once and opened to see the shadow '..the moon light fell on face of that moving shadow which is moving slowly... she knew who it is, she saw him with terror...filled eyes

" YOU!!!" '...*her breath stuck in throat and forgot to breath for few seconds..."...

immediately the shadow, Grabbed her wrist and pulled to him...with full force which made GEET to hit his broad chest which is hard like ROCK...

she was struggling with words '. "What? How? ...Whhyyy??...U here? And...you were?..." ...*her questions cut off in mid... her mind went blank when her lips are captured by him...* '..

When he saw her in a cream color sadi wrapped around her petite body...he couldn't control himself from growling ...saw her backing off which made him more furious...he immediately shut her questions by forceful kiss...

He twisted her hands to her back and pressed his body on her where there is no place for air...his one hand locked her both hands and other one is grabbed her hair '...her lips are so soft so tender that he is not getting enough access which made him drive insane and bit her lips...her body is whimpering under his strong hold...she is scared to open her eyes...when she tasted salt y liquid in her mouth...she immediately opened her eyes and took some moment to understand whats happening she gathered all her strength and pushed him...which made him to trip to the chair behind him...she tried to run...but within no time her upper half body is now laying on the table...and her both hands were pinned either sides of her head..."...

He... " DON'T Try to play Tricks With me! '.." '.he started to bite her cheeks and moved to her jaw lines by licking...which made her to scream...but her voice came out like a faint gasp...he placed his strong legs between her legs '...his eyes were like red hot iron.. it scared her to death what he will to her??...

his left hand locked her both hands '. pinned them on the table above her head...and his right hand holding her chin to face him '..to have a clear view of her features '..

He '. " This is my LAST! Warning! If u don't come to me! I will make your life HELL! ...do you get that '."...* she got super angry and she spit back to his face"...

GEET ' "WHAT Will you do! If I don't!...com!!!..."...*this iricked him a lot *

he '. " TRY Me!"...*his right hand ripped her sadi pallu and he started to bite allover her exposed skin. '..by leaving marks on her milky skin...*...

somehow she managed to release her both hands and covered her chest '...

Geet ..." Please Stop! ...Please For God Sake!... Please Stop It! ...Don't Touch me! ..." Again His Hand started to wandered on her waists by squeezing it roughly...

HE : ..."not until ...you come to me...i will be waiting for u ...mind my words seriously...or else ..." He pinned her hands on table and started to lick her cheeks ...then he moved to her navel...taking her scent...

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Edited by GurtiWonderland - 13 years ago
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Chapter 3


He pinned her both hands on table and started to lick her cheeks ...then he moved to her navel...breathing in her scent..he began to give sensuous wet kiss on her throat..neck.. .. '...finally he made a way to her blouse hook...he caught the hook in his teeth, started to open it...then all of a sudden ...she started to hear someone calling her name...

"GEETTT!!! '..GEEETTT!! uttto!!!!...tumhe kya horaha hain...GEEETTT!!!...Nurse! Doctor satyam to bulake laho..." '. *the girl with big specs informed to a nurse who is standing beside GEET's table...she rushed out to call doctor satyam...*...

"GEEET!!! Ankhey kholo...Geet!!!..." '.*Dr. Tia, same age of GEET and her best friend...calling GEET Since from half an hour...* '.she is worried for half an hour to see geet like this who is murmuring something in her sleep...

Flashback

14th March, 2012

GEET Fainted in OT after the death of that man due to nervousness coz that's her first day in hospital as an intern'..Later Dr. Karan made her to take some rest.

Flashback ends

Dr.Tia " Oye! Geet!! Utt!...Bahut hogaya tera drama! '.."' *she patted her cheeks many times*'.

GEET '."Chodo! Chodo! Mujhe! ''.aahhh''"'.*and she finally opened her eyes panting heavily'straightened herself in her chair'. *

Dr. Tia "GEET!!! Relax!!!..." *gave her a glass of water*

"GEET! 'tereko kya huwa! Phir se Sapna dekhrahi thi! "'.

GEET ' *she is not listening a single word what tia is saying*'..*shoot her face up directly to talk with her babjee*''. " BABAJEEE! Hey kyat tha! Maine to Trailer Dikane ko kaha tha ! aapne tho mujhe poora Picture Dekhadiya!!!..." ... "maine Tho MAAN SINGH KHURANA ko dekna chahathi thi! Per aapne tho unnko DRACULA SINGH KHURANA banadiya!...hey aapne teek nahi kiya!!!..." *made angry baby face*''

Dr. Tia ' "GEETTT!!!!"'..*holding her shoulders'..*

"Oy! Tere ko Mental Asylum bejna chaiye! Kal se tere harkate bikul pagalo jaise karrahi hain''pehale OT main Faint hona ' Kya tum pehali baar Assist karrahi thi'.Doosra, Dinn main sapne dekhna! Aur teesra apne aap main bathey karna''HO KYA GAYA HAIN TUYJE!!!..."

GEET .. " Choddo! Tia! Tum nahi samjogi ! Wo! Mujhe yaha! Waha! Aur pata nahi kaha kaha! Haath lagaye! 'hasal main mujhese baath karna tho door'.mujhe dekhtebhi nahi! 'per mere sapne main aahkey pata nahi kya kya karte rehte hain''"

*now Tia is super confused and annoyed*

Dr.Tia(ST) .. " Isse tho Man ke sivaye kuch aur nahi sochti..main kya karu iska! '.Ek tho Usse ittna pyaar karti hain aur upar se uss pyaar ko jatanese darrthi hain'..Pagal hain'..bilkul pagal''"

*Geet Saw Tia lost somewhere else'*

GEET ' " Oye! Tu kaha khogahi! ''"'.*at the same time Dr. Satyam entered *

Dr.Satyam " Dr. GEET! Aap teek tho hain! nurse kehrahi thi! Ki !!!..."''*his sentence cut off by tia*'..

Dr.Tia ' "Sir! She is alright! '.*glared at GEET* '.wo! ussne raath teekse sohinahi thi! Isiliye! '."

Dr.Satyam, 30 years old Neuro Surgeon '.Very charming and handsome who likes TIA.

Dr.Stayam " OK! Dr.GEET if u not well u can take Off!"'

*GEET thought for a while and said*

Dr.GEET " Thank you sir! But I am perfectly fine!...Now its my turn to go rounds in children ward'." she excused herself to take exit '.didn't forget to wink at tia before taking a leave''

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Chapter 4


Somewhere at China Border


Lt.Col MSK is leading a team of commandos who are best at their work! He had made plan to get back the hostages safely without spilling a single drop blood.

3 commandos from north side and 2 from south side another two are giving back up to the leading commandos and rests 2 are watching the movements of enemy soldiers. Lt.Col.MSK is waiting for signal to his next move.

Lt. Col.MSK 'holding his ear piece " 'East Delta! I repeat East Delta! Over "

Another Side!!!! " 'Crkkkssshhh'.Delta Receive ! I repeat Delta Receive ! Your Position! Eagle! "

Lt.Col.MSK ''*saw his hand compass "'. " 55 degree south! Over! "'..

" Ok! Path is Clear! Move you have 6 min to cross the wall'..until next sentry gunman come there"'

Lt.Col.MSK " Over an All! 'Will meet! After mission accomplished! Exactly after 35 minutes get the copper ready! '.in east! Will meet u there! 'Over'..JAI HIND! "

Lt.Col.MSK 'signaled other commandos to follow him''Captain .Aditya Ranka is also one of them ''.

There are 17 hostages inside the building! They are all tied up and tortured. Bulled them to the 6X6 cell where there is no place to stand properly'.this is one kind of torture. 4 guards are watching them with their machine guns! Alternatively taking watch on the building!

Lt.Col.MSK signaled two commandos to watch the entrance of the building and other two to take care of gunmans.

Lt.Col.MSK took few steps like a cat! Pointing his Rifle..he moved towards the cell 'very slowly by checking each cell'..and signaled Captain.Aditya to move forward'..

The guards are lazy enough and over confident that none dare to enter their tertiary'..Captain.Aditya Stood like a statue coz the guards Gun is pointing him and Lt.Col.MSK took the advantage of that and grabbed one guard and twisted his head'. And another commando did the same too for second guard.

Lt.Col.MSK Fished the guard uniform for the cell keys ''. He released all the hostages and checked them if they can run to catch the copper. But bad luck two of them are hurt and couldn't walk properly'.

Outside two commandos made gunman's silent and waiting for the Signal. But their bad luck one truck is moving towards the building.

Lt.Col.MSK and Captain.Aditya Ranka told the hostages to run as fast as they can towards east '.without looking back'.and Lt.Col.MSK wanted to take revenge of the loss caused by these bas***ds so he wanted to demolish the whole building which is the main base of the china army which is attached to boarder and acquired the area. So he planted the Bombs everywhere and told aditya to move the injured hostages out. The bomb time was fixed for 5 MINUTES. And MSK hurried outside to catch the copper. But enemy soldiers are quick and smart enough to guess something wrong inside the building. When MSK started to run towards east one gunman pointed his gun towards MSK and asked to stop'..

4 MINUTES LEFT

Gunman " STOPP!!!! Or you will be dead"'.

" hands up! Turn! Around! "'..*there is pitch black* 'none could see their faces properly'..

Aditya was watching this from far and asked one commando to lead hostages to copper. He moved back to cover MSK'..

3 MINUTES LEFT

MSK 's heart was beating rapidly''the head of the base came forward to take clear view of the man standing in dark'..by that time all the hostages were settled in copper and waiting for MSK and aditya to return'.

The enemy soldiers are unaware of the bomb and escape of the hostages. Gunman poked MSK by his gun to move inside the building'.at the same time Captain.Aditya started to fire in air'..enemy soldiers panicked and distracted by the firing. MSK utilized this time to kick gunman and turned back to run towards the copper.

2 MINUTES LEFT

But its too late to notice'..another gunman '..shouted

"...you dirty indian soldier, son of a bitch... this is your last day on this earth! .. " '..*4 Bullets fired back to back '.*... *thud*...Captain . Aditya ' " Nooo...BB(BIG BROTHER)..."..."U bas***d..."

1 MINUTE LEFT

'.MSK felt something warm liquid started to flow from his body'.and he lost his sense 'lastly he remembered that his head lay on Captain.Aditya's Lap '.Adi's words lingering in his ears'" BB ..don't give up on me please"'and MSK closed his eyes'..

*Booommm* Whole building smashed and no one survived around the building'..

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Edited by GurtiWonderland - 13 years ago

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