MG SS: JUNOON - Epilogue, PG 16, 23rd April - Page 3

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Geet its really very much on love with maan but why does maan hate her...
Everyone knows the depth of feeling that geet has excerpt for maan...
Poor geet..
She is so hopeful that one day maan will return her feelings...
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Chapter 7

@ICU around 1.20 AM

Maan " '.nnn! Mmmaa! '...nnhhh! '..Paa! Paani! ... paani...*tried to remove his oxygen mask*...*with still closed eyes..."...*geet got up at once from the couch where she slept... she heard maan's murmur ...came near to him and checked his forehead whether he is having fever..."... '

*she is hell scared of his reaction when he will sees her...*twisting her dupatta*...

GEET *pointing her index finger up* "BABJEE!! '.aap na bilkul bure ho! '.meri mushkil kamm karne ke bajahey ...app aur badarahey ho..."...

Maan " paanii!...amm...ahhh...paani..."...*his eyes are still closed and lips are dry*

GEET " Abb! Main...kya karu...*looking up* babajee! '.kuch kariyena..."...*saw a glass of water on the side table...dipped her two fingers in the glass '.and traced her wet fingers on his lips...that he can have some drops of water.*...her whole body shook due to the mere touch of his lips...it felt she will melt like ice at any moment if she wont stop to caress his lips...*

*geet snappedout from the trance when she heard him again...*

Maan ...*he traced his wet lips by his tongue "...aur! Paani...paani..."...*he relaxed when his lips got contact with a something smooth and warm...and he was getting to know the touch which he felt familiar. ...and his eyebrows knotted...due to sudden chillness upon his lips...his mind recognized the touch but his heart refused to aknowlegede '...*

GEET *slowly she moved another side of his bed and circled her hands around his shoulders so that she can make him to drink water...her hairs fell on his bare chest which tickled him...but still he don't want to believe it that '..its her...no this can't be her...*. although in subconscious mind he can feel her around, He can smell her sent'

*she hold him by her one hand and in other hand made him to drink water ...her chin touched his forehead and her warm breath comforting him '.. although in subconscious state of mind, her natural aroma tickled his senses and now he knew that she is here...his blood rushed and it angered him that his senses betrayed him and still his body can react to her touch like the same way it had did 'still she had the same effect on him..this angered him '..he tried to jerk from her hold...but it went vain as his whole body has no strength to protest...*

MAAN ..*he tried to push her hands which are holding him...he doesn't want to confront her...not now...he just kept his eyes closed to keep himself steady '..he knew that his heart will betray him if he stare at her eyes...those eyes which makes him weak 'which will make his self control to lose and miserable ...*...*somehow he managed to get free from her hold and pushed her aside '...*...*he don't want to see her ...see those eyes which will make him to drown '.*

GEET ...*shocked and tears started to form in her eyes...the rejection and hatred...her sobs '..subsided in her dupatta which she hold in her hand...*...*again her left hand automatically stoked his cheeks...and that's it...*

MAAN "DON'T!!!...DON'T TOUCH ME!...*and opened his reddened eyes...to burn her from his sight...which made her jump one step back...*

*he hated her '.he hate her tears and he hate her smile too...which will make him to forget himself and his surroundings...

GEET ...*her voice came like a wimp...*... "MAANNN!!!!"...

MAAN *shot a glare and showed his index finger to shut her mouth '..with a warning look and said each word with emphasized *... "DON'T '..TAKE MY... NAME... EVER...!!!...MEANS...EVER...YOU '.GOT ...THAT..."...*turned his face to other side coz for too long he can't keep his stern look infront her...*...

MAAN " OUT! "'...* he is seething inside * "I said GET out from my sight! "''.

Daadima '."Maan!!! Bete!! Hey kya battamizi hain! !! Aap!! GEET se iss tarha baath q karrahey hain!!!..." '."Hamey aapse hey umeed nahi thi!!!"

GEET .. " Nahi! Nahi ! DJ(Geet Call Maan's DAADIMA as DAADI JAAN since from childhood)'''Unnse kuch matt kahihey!!! *wiping her tears*'.unnki kohi galthi nahi hain!! 'main hi unnko '.!!!...wooo!!! *saw his eyes which are spitting fires to burn her at that moment*'.aah!! main na injection zoor se lagadiya'isiliye !!! wo mujhe! Par chillarahey thye!!! *asked him to say yes with pleading eyes* '.hain !!! na'*with shivering voice*'..MAAN!!..."''

Daadima *daadi very well know that GEET is leing*'."GEET!!! aap!! Chup rahihey!!! '.AAp!! innkey tarafdaari maat kijihey!!! Mujhe sabb pata hain!!! *shooting draggers to maan*'.

Maan got fed up with listening all these conversations taking place between 'Daadi and GEET'.made an attempt to get up from bed''and slipped ..

GEET ..*saw his effort whiling getting up from the bed and rushed to him'* "MAAANN!!!...giving support to him''Sambalkey!!!...*he clinched his fist due to excess pain which is causing him where ever the stitches made'*'.he rely on her letting his almost body weight on her'.slowly GEET made him to sit on bed by keeping pillow behind him!!! On the bed'..Maan's jaw tightened coz of close approximate and his each cell in a body aching to hold her to his body at that moment '..his sensory organs betraying him over his physical pain '.he felt miserable 'gathering the left out strength he pushed her ''which made GEET to fall on Vicky!!! Who has just entered '.

Vicky '"Guddi!! '." Made her to stand straight!!!...asked her with concern'.." tum teek ho!!!..."'."Bahi!!! aap 'hey kya!!!...kar'"'..

When Daadi witnessed Maan's behavior towards GEET '.got pissed off and Raised her '.voice .." MAAN!!!! That's!! it'.You have crossed all your limits'..main aaj takk aapkey hey russva bardasht karthey aahey hain '.abb aur nahi'." 'Geet tried to stop daadima'..but '" aap chup rahihey geet "'.." aapko kya lagtha hain GEET yaha kisiliye hain'aapke peechey peechey ghoomney keliye'.???? 'nahi MAAN '.."''*maan raised his eyebrows with questioning look*'..*daadi turned to GEET and winked at her to be quite*'.."GEET iss hospital main Doctor hain aur wo ek doctor ke hesiyath se aapki ilaaz karaahi hain'..samje aap'."'..

Vicky ...*understood what daadi's intension"''GEET's face is full of terror what next???...Maan's face color started to change into rainbow'.DOCTOR?????...hell no''s

Tabbi!!!

Dr. Satyam came '" How are you feeling Lt.???" '*while checking his reports'*'"Hmmm!!! Good progress!!! In one day...I must say Dr.GEET Handa has taken good care of you!!!..."'.

Maan's Facial expression started to change hearing'..and learning that HIS''Little GEET''WHAT??? Did I say'MY Geet'.????...Oh!! GOD Why are you making it so hard for me'..'"CALL Me MAAN'."

*now GEET got worried coz of Dr.Satyam 'what if he says that my duty is over and somebody will be taking over this case'.no!! no!! that can't happen'..i won't let ANY FEMALE come near to him'.he is only mine '.ALL mine'whole Package'.*she blushed for claiming HIM all hers'*''

GEET '"err..emm!! Dr.Satyam!!! 'Dr.Tia was asking you'..she is in General word''"'.

Dr.Stayam'*gave her cheeky smile and scratched his head *'"Geetaaa!!! '..i will go once I check Mr.Khurana's Stitches '. 'and turned to DAADI and Vicky 'requested them to go out for 5 min that he want to do check up' "'.

Maan'(ST) *wait!!! What did he Call her???...GEETAAA!!!!...oh! god what s wrong with this Creature'..???...he is calling MY'GIRL'.GEETAAA'!!!...how dare he'..??? he has the only right to call her such names'..*But poor MSK didn't know that Dr.satyam is south Indian and he have his own way of calling names..due to FLI ' First language impression'*'..he got confused of his own behavior and now he sure that why he didn't come to meet GEET in these 8 years''..how much he is filled with hatreds for her in his heart but still his heart beats only for her'..always hatred is over taken by Love'.But yet his ego '.never let go the pain which she has given to him and made him stone hearted'.

Dr.Satyam'"mr.Khurana??...mr.Khurana???..." 'waving his hand ..are u alright??...could u lay down'please'...i need to check your stitches'. ''*signaled GEET to close the curtain''* 'While putting gloves*'GEETA!!!...

MAAN'.*Tightened his jaw* ..hearing yet again HIS geet's name from him''."Dr. .!!! could you make it fast!!!...i need to go washroom'."'.*he just want to shoo away Dr.satyam from this room'''

Dr.satyam "'Okay! Here we go!!!..."

After 10 '.Long min'.

Dr. Satyam'"Ok Mr.Khurana '.you should need physiotherapy !!!...we will start !!! after your wounds got healed''"'."GEETAA!!! I forgot to tell you something '.."'.

MAAN'"GEET!!! I want some water'could you please pass me the glass'"'*geet nearly fainted hearing her name from MAAN'' am I dreaming'.she pinched herself'.*..no no this can't be'.she heard her name for the first time'.in 8 years''

GEET.."What???? "'Maan.."WATER!!"'.GEET "'.ah! wo '.err..emmm!!!"'..she handed him a flower vase'.which was on side 'table'."'

MAAN "'.raised his eyebrows!!!..is this a Glass!!!????s"'..

GEET "'Took vase from his hand and placed back on table then handed him a glass of water'."..

Dr.Satyam'*he got call from Tia'*.."'Oky mr.Khurana'..i will meet you at afternoon''.and rushed out of the room'..

Once Dr.satyam '..was out'MAAN'thrown glass to the floor and shouted his lungs out'. "WHAT DO U THINK of yourself'..???...Why can't you leave me alone???..."'

Sudden outburst made GEET to jump one step back '.and tears started to flow '.now she decided that whatever he says'she won't give heed to any of his accusations'..once he get well she will tell him the whole TRUTH'..now she knew that he STILL loves her and his actions proved her which are enough to make her determined ''.

Maan trying to move his right leg to get down for washroom''

GEET'.. *with modest* "Mr.Khurana ..I'm DR.GEET HANDA' here..I mean DOCTOR'..not more than that'...so please keep your ego aside and let me help you ''.s"'

Maan is too engrossed in emotional turmoil taken over him and his own feelings erupting and pain which is causing him to block his hatreds towards her'.and GEET supported him to stand on his feet and took him to washroom'.. where on other side DAADIMA and Vicky spectacle all these things' when vicky saw his bahi is making an attempt to getup'.he wanted to help bhai'.DAADIMA stopped Vicky instead she wanted GEET to help maan..'..

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Originally posted by: icy_magma

Amazing update...
Geet its really very much on love with maan but why does maan hate her...
Everyone knows the depth of feeling that geet has excerpt for maan...
Poor geet..
She is so hopeful that one day maan will return her feelings...
Continue soon...
By the way...one of the readers said that you have already written this ss long back...is our true..
Wonder why I missed it 😭

LOVED IT 😃❤️

Chapter 8

MAAN ' *holding one side of the sink in bathroom* ' "now get out!!! Kade kade mera moo kya dekhrahi ho''do you want to join me???..."'.

GEET '."jobhi ho main nahi hilungi yaha se''aap teek taraha se chall bhi nahi sakthey '.*with worried expression*'agar aap yaha girrgahey tho'..???..nahi nahi '..aisa main hone nahi dungi'."'.

Maan : ..*his physical pain is enough to make him sour and over that GEET nonstop bak bak making him to lose his left over patience '. * '.. "SHUT!!! UP!!! '" *by greeting his teeth *'. "Tum kiss janam ka badla lerahi ho mujhse'.????..." his legs are getting weak '.*closed his eyes'and took a sharp breath'*'.

"DEKHO!!! Mujhe Loo ko jaana hain'.aur mujhe kohi aithrazz nahi ke tumahare saamney hi main karsaktha hun'..soochlo!! tumhey yaha rookna hain '.ya '.bahar jaana''.*hoping that she will get convinced '*

GEET' *her cheeks turned into crimson red and not able to look into his eyes'.*,,,,her sudden turn made MAAN to lose his grip over sink and he fell on the floor holding her shoulder sleeves and his wrist stuck with dupatta.which caused a ripping sound ' of cloth '..

MAAN and GEET both landed on floor in sideways '.it took few seconds to know what actually happened and what ripped and whose dress exactly''

MAAN's eyes widened at the moment when his eyes transfixed on the exact place where the duppatta used to wrapped around are Fully Grown Bosoms'.which made him harden at that very moment '.the expressions on his face was evident that '.this is the first time he is seeing her ' Fully grown women assets '..Almost his eyes are making love to her '..When she felt warm breath on her curves'..slowly opened her eyes to look at him'.then she realized what actually happened and now they are in compromising position ''anybody could guess that now what they are up to but for real there is nothing ''.he forgot his all pain and kept looking at her womanly features which is making him loose his sanity'.slowly his left hand moved up to her face to move the brown curly strands which is troubling her and blocking his view ''.when his warm hands touched her cold skin she trembled and left out a gasp'.her lips are shivering and aching to be captured by his lips and she wanted to feel his rough beard all over her soft and smooth skin'. 8 long years separation caused them to crav for each other. slowly he cupped are face in his hand and bringing her close '..her shy lashes not lifting up due to coyness which made him groan and he silently demanded her to look into his eyes'.his hot breath fanning over lips and her shaking hands holding his wounded shoulders very carefully not to hurt him'.she wanted to make sure he is ok and same time scared of the reaction once he regains his sense s'their lips are half millimeter away and aching to feel each other lips'.but the moment didn't last for long'.maan came into senses when he heard her payal sound 'then his ANGER meter started to raise supersonic'..if he had an supernatural power then GEET have been turned into ashes by the look he was giving to her'.when geet felt chilled air 'she slowly opened her eyes and that's it!!!...

She tried to get up '.but MAAN's torso was wrapped by her duppatta '.. which made both to fall back on the floor'..at every attempt '..her soft skin is like a fur brushing his bruises which making him to sigh and her natural scent 'is working like a drug which making him calm and cool'.his each cell making him to feel her'..but his mind is knocking him to come back to senesces'

MAAN *frowned *..." TAKE OFF!! your dupatta!..."...

GEET ..*blushed hardly *... " MAANNN!!!... "...

MAAN ".WHAT????...this is not first time...i'm seeing you without dupatta...i have seen you even when you are n..."...*closed his mouth by her palm and removed immediately *... "If you don't take it off! 'NOW!...i will!...then don't blame...me!..."

At last GEET stood up slowly not causing him more pain '.leaving her duppatta under him and gave him a hand to get up '..one of his stitches started to bleed causing more pain'.he clinched his fist to suppress the pain '.but it was too late and GEET noticed his bleeding wound and big tears formed and threatening to fall'.from her beautiful eyes'..automatically MAAN's hand lifted up to her face to wipe those tears'..but something stopped him to do it'.and turned his face'..

MAAN '.*breaking silence he called her name '"* .."GEET!!!!.." '.is sounded like a hypnotizing for GEET'.her all sensory organs flinched '.and hairs on her skin spiked up'..yes she heard him call her name like he always use to call '.8 years back'.with full of love and compassion'.. he wanted to break the awkward silence'.

MAAN : 'raising his volume '."GEET!!...kya tum bahar jahogi ya aise hi mujhe goorthi rahogi'''

Maan (ST) : Why my heart still beats raises whenever I see her? WHY???...aisa kya hain main uski aur keechthey chalajatha hoon'..jabbhi wo mere saamney aathey hi kya hojatha hain'..kya phir se wohi ehsaas louat aaya hain mujheme'..main kaise aise mesoos karsaktha hoon'..mujhe aaj bhi yaad hain '.jab ussney apne moose kubool kiya tha'."'..saw GEET's worried face who is bandaging his bleeding wound'.her twinkling eyes are reflecting his pain!!!...".main kisspe yekin karloo'.uss din maine jo dekha… uske upar yaa jo aaj GEET ki ankhon main abhi dekraha hain!! mujhe kuch samjmain nahi aaraha hain'..woo'.Kyaa!!!..."ARRRHHH!!!!...*GEET panicked hearing his scream*''

GEET : "MAAN!!! I'm sorry!! !! '*brushing on shoulder bandage *'.Bahut darad horaha hain'.*a big tear escaped from her eyes'* mujhe maaf kardigiye '..agli baar main dhyaan rakungi'.*he saw her tears 'he wanted to wipe those tears but his ego stopping him to do it'.he can't stand those tears''*

MAAN : (ST) Bass bhi karo GEET'.Mujhe aur matt tadpaho!!! Mujse teri ansoon dekhinahi jaathi''EK bar kehado ki job hi tumney uss din kaha tha sab Jhoot hain'ek bar'kehado'!!! *he saw her with pleading eyes'to say something'..*

GEET (ST) : MAAN aap ek baar meri ankhon main jhankar dekhkey '.Appko kya dekhta hain'.kya main aapko dhoka desakthi hun'..???...mujhe ek moka dediya hota!! Main aapko ussi din sab kuch bata deti''Bina Batahey chaley gaye!! Mujhe ek bar bhi mod kar nahi dekha '..mujhe chodkey cahle gaye'.apki GEET ko'.!!...mujhe aapki ankhon main sirf meriliye pyaar dekhna hain'aur kuch nahi'..please mujhe maaf kardo'..maan'..*and she ran away from there *'.

MAAN : '.he tried to stop her 'but couldn't voice it'..

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Loved part 7...
So maan was in love with geet too but something happened in the past...
I wonder what..
Bichari geet..maan ne usse kitna sunaya...geet was heart broken..
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Waiting for the next update...

I am glad that you wrote this ss again...I missed it before but not now 😃

Feeling sorry for Geet 😭

Do have an inkling though what might have happened ! 🤔

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lovely concept and story.loved all the parts.

Awesome update...
Maan thinks that geet betrayed him...
But it was just a case of mis understandings...
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