MG SS: JUNOON - Epilogue, PG 16, 23rd April - Page 2

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Chapter 5


@Handa Haveli. Delhi


GEET 'got! Up from her bed with teary eys'. suddenly and rushed to a small mandir in the haveli''.bragging the door loudly which had woke up all '..

GEET " BABAJEE! '..mujhe bahut gabbrahat horahi hain'.please aap mere maan ka raksha karna'" '*her heart is beating so fast and some tingling sensation in her stomach making her more anxious*'

GEET's Mom *rushed down when she heard the door slamming*'..

Rano " Puttar! Kya huwa?...Tum ittni gabbrahi q?...Aur ittne raath ko tum mandir main kya karrahi ho..." *asked patting her head*

GEET " MAA!...woo...! "...*everyone in house gathered.. mohindar handa, Arjun,nandini,meera and nandu kaka(handa's Loyal servant) '.hell worried for GEET *

Mohindar Lal Handa " Puttar! Sabb teek hain na? " '*at the same time Arjun's Cell started to ring...* Arjun saw caller ID and amused coz at this late night why Dev is calling* '

Arjun " DEV!! Iss waqt! Sabb kuch teek hain na? " '*he somewhat guessed '.that it's something doing with maan who is a very good friend of him since from childhood'..as he was aware of the problem in india-china boarder and also knew that maan is on mission to rescue the hostages. he is in the same battalion as maan is and he was cursing himself for agreeing with maan to take a leave for some days to spend time with blossoming family '.he knew that dev never calls him at this hour unless it is very important matter. his heart beats raising and his thoughts broken when he heard DEV's voice*'.

DEV " Arjun! 'Arjun! Tum sunnrahey ho! '."''

Arjun "ah! DEV! Main sunnraha hun'.."'..

DEV " Arjun!... ''BHAI! Hospital main hain'..abhi Ladhak base camp se yaha delhi army based hospital main shift kiya hain! ''. " '.*dev's voice is choking *

..Arjun " DEV! Tum fikar matt karo! Hum sabb aarahey hain!!!...mamma-pappa ko sabalo'.aur JAI bhai tho hain na udar'." '*he cut the call and turned back *'.

Rabo " ..Arjun ! kya huwa! Dev ne kya kaha! aur'.Khurana mansion main sabb teek hain na!!!..."'.* geet ran towards arjun*

GEET " Bhayya! App kuch bolthey q nahi! 'WO(MAAN) !!! teek hain na!!!...*her heart knew that something is wrong with maan and that call confirmed her instincts*'.

*arjun amused of the correct guessing by geet and he knew how much his pagli is in love with this RUTHLESS man'..he just patted her head and said*

Arjun "guddi! (GEET) ussey kuch nahi hoga! Main hun naa! Ussey main kuch honey nahi dunga! '.."

*everyone in the handa haveli'.by now knew that MAAN is in hospital'.*'.

*Anwesha came down holding her big stomach, now she is in her 7 months '*'..rano helped her to step down slowly'.as doctor advised her full bed rest and should not take stress*

Anwesha "maa! Kya huwa'aap! Sabb'iss waqt! 'sabb kuch tho teek hain na?...*she saw arjun's face and understood something is definitely wrong*'."Arjun! aap kuch bolthey q nahi! '..*she guessed* 'AAP!! PHIR SE MUJHE BATHAYE BINA CHALEY JARRAHEY TEY! '.* and started to cry'.due to pregnancy'..her hormones testing HIS patience'.*'*between her hiccups '.* .." Wait! Main abhi Maan bhai ko phone lagathi hun!...and she grabbed cell from arjun's hand and started to dail his number'..then '."

Arjun'" Anu! (Anwesha) 'MAAN hospital main hain! '"'

*Anwesha dropped the cell and started to cry. Her favorite Brother is in hospital'*

@OT, Army Base Hospital, Delhi

Dr. Mayur asked to his senior doctor'. "Sir! Are u sure! I mean'are u damn sure he will survive! '.*Dr. Shekar shot a glare to Dr.Karthik who was new intern *'

Dr.Shekar "DR. Mayur What do you mean! He will survive! '..? 'its our job to save patient life"'

Dr. karthik " SIR! I am sorry'..but u see'.he was shot! That too four bullets! '..i am surprised ! still he is breathing! '..one bullet into his shoulder, second bullet into lungs, third bullet is almost priced his heart'.damn lucky fellow! And third in his right thigh! 'and'."'.*again DR.Shekar shot him a deadly glare before throwing him out of the OT*'..

Dr. Shekar "Nurse! Call! Bahudur! And throw him out! Make sure he should not be seen any near to this hospital!...

Dr.Karthik'"So-so-sorry! Sir! I didn't mean it'."

Dr.Shekar "SHUT-UP! 'JUST SHUT-UP and GET LOST! '."'*Karthik ran out without giving a second look and he knew his life and career both are at stake!*

Another couple of hours later'.Dr.shekar " Call Dr.Bhushan! *he is best heart specialist in the city*'fast'.GOD.!!!...he is sinking'*'.*nurse'..nurse'..*

There is fog covered all over and maan is walking slowly towards the light'where he is trying to reach that light since from long time in his journey ''.and then

*snowy angel with beautiful almond eyed girl sitting on the white wall watching this man from past 3 hours who is trying to reach that light'..and finally she asked *

Angel " hey! You! '.where do u think u are going?..."'.*maan just stared at the angel and his eyes got widen due to shock '.*'..*only one word came out of his mouth'.*

MAAN " TUM!!!!"

Angel " ah! Main! '"'.*she came down by flying*'.."you are not allowed to go there '..not until another 100 years!..."'..*pointing towards the light *

MAAN "WHAT??? Aur tum hoti kaun ho mujhe rukkney waali'.."'*by saying this he resumed his walk towards that light'.*

Angel " Oye! Hello!! Aapko ek bar main samjnahi aata hain kya!...app waha nahi jaasaktey'..hain tho nahi jaasaktey'."'

MAAN "DON'T "'..*greeted his teeth and took a threatening step towards angel'.showing his index finger to her'."DON'T TRY TO CROSS MY PATH! "

Angel "YOU CAN'T GO THERE! DO YOU GET THAT! "'.*taking all the strength she pushed him back 'he lost balance and fell back'*'.* he started to float '.then someone pulled him'*

Dr.Shekar *took a relief sigh coz finally he got him back. Maan's heart started to beat again! '*

Dr.Shekar " nurse! Check with oxygen pressure! And shift him to ward! '.*turning to dr.Bhushan '* Thank you Dr.Bhushan''you have done a good job! '"

Dr.Bhushan "it's my duty Shekar! And my pleasure to treat a real hero! '.thanks to you..he is so real'I can't believe it'..no one could survived if anyone in his position'..definitely angels are guarding him'' "

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Edited by GurtiWonderland - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome parts...continue soon n pls pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Owesome updates loved it so much... Pls continue soon...
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Nice to see the updates on IF...
Vry hooking storyline
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awesome parts


continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear i suppose you had already
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I already have read this FF dear as you had already written this before, waiting for your other new maaneet FF.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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only one angel is dere to save him...n dat is only geet...

awesome update...


thank u very much fr such lovely update...

loved it...

continue nxt prt soon...

waiting eagerly...
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Hey, gr8 concept! Update soon n plz! PM me wen u update n accpt my buddy rqst..
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Chapter 6


Outside the OT


The Khurana's and Handa's are eagerly waiting to know how is maan doing'..

Dr.Shekar'. "Congratulation! Mr.khurana! lt.Col is out of danger'.but still he is under observation for 48 hrs ! 'you can see him after shifting him to ward'".

Dhanraj khurana *took a deep breath* "Thank you doctor! "'.


One hour later''.


After seeing maan, the handa's and khurana's forced to leave but no one wanted to leave maan alone. Jai, maan's big brother asked everyone to leave and he will be with maan to lookafter him''later everyone left except one person who was standing far from everyone and watching maan''..through ICU glass.

Vicky khurana *when he came back to give jai's cell, he saw geet standing in one corner and trying to see maan'.."Guddi! 'tum yaha kya karrahi ho'.."'

GEET'"Vicky! Wo! Main'..yahan!!!...wo '.maan''.."'*stramppering *'..*started to cry '* ..

Vicky *wiping her tears* "Arrey! Pagali! Bayaa! Bilkul teek hain! '.roo matt'..*he pulled her in a bear hug'.*'.."tum ussey mili'.??? "'

GEET "'nahi! Wo mujhe ussey aise haalath main nahi dekha jatha hain'.isiliye!!..."'.*tried to hide her big big tear drops from Vicky*'..

Vicky "Jooth matt bolo geet! 'mujhe pata hain! '."'."ek! tho tum ho bayya se ittna pyaar karthi hain'..per Bayya!! '.*sigh* '"ussey kuch waqt do..guddi! tum jaanthi ho'..wo aise hi hain! …bahut hi ziddi '.."'..*he tried to cheer her up'.*''*jai came out hearing vicky's voice*'.

Jai " Guddi! '.tum! yaha! '"'..*geet rushed to him and asked'.*'

GEET "..ah! main yaha!!...*searching for a reason* 'ah! Wo main yaha intern hun'..bayya! ek afthe pehale hi join huwi hun'..*'.

Jai "Chalo teek hain kohi tho hain '.acchha huwa '.kohi tho apna hain'..yaha'.*jai winked at Vicky signaling him to leave *'

Vicky "Achha guddi! Main abb chaltha hun'" turning to jai and winked'"''..Bayya! office main bahut important meeting hian'.! Tho aapko bhi challna parega''..

Jai "'oh! No main tho boolhi gaya tha!! '.main maa ko bhi ghar bejdiya'..abb main kya karo'..! maan se badkar tho kuch nahi! Lekin mujhe jaana hi parega..'..".'..

GEET "'bayya! Aap phikar matt kijeeye! Main hun na! main unnki khayal rakkungi! '..aakir main bhi ek doctor hun'.aur FAMILY bhi'.*thanking her babajee'..for giving her chance to stay close to maan for some time'..*'

Both jai and Vicky exchanged smile and left to office'.jai called arjun and informed about geet taking care of maan and also called khurana mansion to inform that Dr. GEET is with maan to look after him'.and not to worry''.

The moment has come ''..

She stood behind the glass door and staring at maan, his body is covered with equipments '..she sighed! And started to move towards the bed'... She is seeing him after 8 years''she still remember that day when he accused her not for her mistake'.. she simply heard whatever he said and blamed her''still wonders why she is not able stop herself from loving him''her hands are shaking '..she kept staring at his features'..his eyes, his nose and lips'..a soft chuckle came out from her mouth''" perfect lips'" 'his stubble and his mustache''.GEET (self talk)"God! I'm in love with this man since when I don't know and how I'm gonna face him...he looks cute when he is sleeping '..don't know what he will do once he wake up from his sleep''.BILKUL DRACULLA SINGH KHURANA''per kuch bhi ho 'mera MAAN'.hian'..sirf mera MAAN'."''

She caressed his forehead'..and gave a soft peck '.on his forehead ...then she heard some footsteps'.

Dr. Mayur .." GEET! What are you doing here! ?..."'*GOD!...not again*

*Geet got irritated by his question and he always stays on her nerves*

GEET " App! Se matlab?"..."HEY mere PATI hain! ! .." ...*I heard someones heart break into million pieces*...

Dr.Mayur ...*disappointment written allover on his face* "Hmmm! ...Oky! Fine! ..." ...*Trying his best not to CRY*..."COOL! "...*showing his both thumps up! *...*just ran away from there...*

Dr. Mayur (self talk) "AAJ! Mera din hi karab hain! " ..."What? Wait! ..Pehale mere career abb mera Pyaar?..." '."hey sabb kya horaha hian mere saath?...pata nahi ...subha subha maine kisska moo...dekha tha?...*thinking*..."Maine tho apna hi chehara dekha tha.."

@ICU

GEET ...*made herself comfortable beside maan's bed*...

GEET " Maan..???"..."aap mere awaazz sunnrahey ho!...*took his right palm in her hand and caressed with all the love she treasured since from past 8 years...*...a tear threatening to fall from corner of her eyes... his breathing rhythm made her to relax a bit...tears started to GEET "MAAN! Aap mujhe ittne nafrat matt kariye! '"main kaise aapko samjaho! Mera kohi gathi nahi thi! '...*took his hand nearer to her lips and pressed a soft peck on it *...*MAAN started to gain his conscious...he is murmuring something...his bandages started to soak in blood * '...*his pulse increased*...

GEET " MAAN?...*got terrified* MAAN?...ankhey kohliye! Aapko kya horaha hain!...?"...*took her cell and tried to call her senior doctors...but none are picking...*...

GEET "NURSEE!!!...NURSEEE!!!..." ...*he is getting difficult to breath '..his body is uncontrollably twisting on the bed...*...

GEET '.*patted his cheeks*..."MAAN! Ankehy koliye! Aapko ! Main kuch nahi honey dungi..*she hugged him to like a dear life '. '.and to her surprise...MAAN started to relax...his pulse gradually coming to normal...she hold him like an hour and she dosed off beside him...very carefully '.until she her friend DR. TIA...calling her.

@KHURANA MANSION, In Savitri Khurana's room

JAI '" DAADI! Iss baar! Maan ko shaadhi karwaey bina kahi matt jaane dijiye ...bechaari guddi! Kabb takk uskeliye intezaar karegi...wo kabhi nahi badlega...bechaari maan ka intezar karthey karthey wo. buddi na hojayegi ..."...

Bhumi Khurana " haa! Maajee! '..sirf ek aaphi hain jo maan ko manha sakthi hain..."...

DAADI " Jai! Beta! Aap teek kehrahey hain!...humney ussko bahut se moukey de hain...per abb nahi...unnko hamari baat maanni paregi...hum abhi! Aapke dadaji aur Dhanraj (Papajee) se baat karthey hain..."...

@ICU...

Dr. Tia " GEET! *poked her shoulder* GEETTT! '.."...

GEET ..." ah! ...ha! Kya huwa!...*startled* '.huh! Kya huwa...*immediately checked pulse machine and stroked maan's cheek...and sighed...*...turned to TIA*...

GEET "...kya huwa Tia! "...*straightened herself*...*while loading injection tia asked *...

TIA "GEET! Tu! Ghar nahi gahi! ...tum raat se yahi pe ho!aur khana bhi nahi khaya hoga shayad...! *raising her eyebrow* '..*TIA pulled MAAN's spread over his shoulders to give him injection...*...*geet watching her since she came in...and suddenly*..

GEET ..."NAHIII!!!.."...*tia shocked to her sudden scream* '."mera matlab hain! '.Tia ! Main bhi ek doctor hun aur main ...doongi na! INJECTION...*showed her full set of teeths*...*TIA gave her teasing smile and knew that GEET is very possessive about MAAN that she can't bare the sight of anyone touching him...that too infornt of her...while handing injection to her ...tia said...*

TIA "GEET! Kash tumhara maan '...tumhare pyaar ko samjpata...!!...*a fresh layer of tears formed in geet's eyes..*...

GEET..."Tia! Tum shaayad jhaanthi nahi ho...Maan ke pyaar karney ka tarika alag hain... usski nafrat main bhi mujhe pyaar jalkthi dikthi hain... mujhese bhi jaada pyaar karthey hain wo ...muje..."...*wiped her tears*..."Tum dekhna ...ek din aisa ayaga '...ki saari duniya maan ke pyaar ka JUNOON dekhega..."...

TIA " BABAJEE! Kare Wo din jaldi aajaye ! '..mujhe teri hey halath and deewangi dekinahi jaathi..."...*Patted her shoulders and left from there to attend other patients*


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