MG SS: JUNOON - Epilogue, PG 16, 23rd April - Page 7

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oh oh half truth is really more dangerous than full truth
geet is in full of pain and here maan came to know the truth and shocking fact and shocked beyond anything
oh no geet attempt to kill herself
Thank God ,
maan saved her
so finally maaneet r getting married and talked with each other
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Chapter 19(Last Part)

This part is unedited and i tried my best to make it sensual, hope that it will meet your expectations.

There is a pin drop silence in the hall where Handa's and Khurana's are sitting. Everyone have the same question in their mind. Maan stood near mantap staring at the sacred fire which is still on. It's been a hour since Maan & Geet got married and bounded to eternity. Mohindar Handa, Geet's Dad broke the silence by clearing his throat "Maan Puttar! Aapko Kab Nikallna hain?". Maan saw the old man's eyes are still moist from doing Kanyadhaan. Maan "Subha 4 baje Papajee! Base camp se Chopper humhey pick karnewaali hain". Dhanraaj, Maan's Dad " Lekin Maan " Mohindar Sighed and turned to look at his best friend Dhanraaj "Raaj! Tu bhoolraha hain kit um bhi ek Faujee rehchukey ho! Jab Desh ki hifazat keliye bhulawa aatha hain tab maake ghod main kelta huwa baccha bhi chang uttha hain! Mujhe garv hain apne daamadh per ki usskeliye sab rishtye Desh ki baad aathi hain!" Mohindar " Ja Puttar aapki jaane ki tayyariya karlijeehe! "Maan's Daadi "Per bte! Shaadhi ki bahut saare rasmey abhi bhi baaki hain" Mohindar "Maajee! Wo sab tho hum Maan ki wapas aane ke baad bhi poora karsakthey hain na". Maan wanted to spend few moments with his Guddi! He have seen those eyes were moist when Aditya spelled the news of him getting back to battle field. His eyes instantly searched in the hall but she is nowhere to be seen. Meera saw Maan who was searching his WIFE, came to him with a teasing smile "Jijajee! Aap kisse Dhunderahey ho! " Meera kept her index finger under her chin acted like she is thinking deeply. "Wo! Ha! Kahi aap Geet ko miss karrahey hain..ittni jaldi! Abhi abhi tho shaadhi huwhi hain..thodha humehy bhi mazalene deejeye aapko Tadapthey dekhtehy huwe..Aapne Geet ko ittni saal takk tho tadapaya hain! ." Vicky "Meera! Hey maazak ka waqt nahi hain! Bayya ki paas bahut kaam waqt hain! " Meera "Arre aise kaise jaanedoo!" Vicky pleaded her to leave his bhai and Bhabhi alone. Meera "teekhey! Lekin ek sharat per! Wada keejehey ki aap hamesha hamari Geet ko kush rakheyngey aur usse jaada tang nahi karenge" . Maan being a man of action, words look dull infront of his actions.

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Geet is still in her bridle dress, her eyes have become puffed red from constantly crying. She stood near window looking at the Dark sky counting her lucky stars. When he stepped into Geet's bedroom..he stood rooted to floor when he saw her petite form stood near window showing her back; Maan "Geet! ". Geet without wasting a minute she ran into his arms hugging him tightly sobbing continuously. Maan hugged her back tightly; he could feel Geet's body is tensed and throbbing trying to consume him into her body making his bones to crush. Maan separated from hug to see her flushed face and tears, he cupped her face by his both hands and wiped her tears with his thumb followed by a Kiss. First on forehead, his tip of nose lingered on her temples before moving on her puffed eyes to kiss them tenderly. Removing her curls from her cheeks maan licked her tears from cheeks followed by a kiss. And then his one hand caught her Dupatta which was on her head slowly he removed all the pins making dupatta to fall on ground. He still haven't kissed on her lips, his tip of nose nudged her law line causing her to tilt her head back giving him more space to relish her skin. Slowly maan removed clips from her bun making her thick silky hair to fall till her waist. He dipped his head in her hair to inhale her natural scent. He again cupped her face in his hands and demanded Geet to open her eyes. Geet long back stopped crying and lost in his torturing kisses. Man huskily said in her ears "Geet! Open your eyes doll, I want you to see me when I make you mine" . Geet couldn't control herself and thrown her both arms around his neck crying bitterly. Geet "Maan! Please mujhe akhele chodkey matt jaahiye! Main aapke bina nahi jeepahungi..Mujhe aapko'"said between her sobs. "GEET, why are you making it so difficult to me", he voiced hoarsely, his voice catching, revealing a fragility she was beginning to sense. Geet "I Love you Maan, Make me yours, Mark me as you possess me, Make love to me maan..Please! Maan I waited so long 'I've no more strength to live without you.. " Maan couldn't take her tears anymore; he grabbed her long hairs into a fist and slammed his lips on her lips for a promising kiss. Geet felt her feet dangling in air. Maan carried her to a bed still sucking her lips like they are complaining to give more. He dropped her on bed carefully still holding her waist. When geet bit his lips, Maan squeezed her waist making her to whimper leaving his nail marks there. He brought his right hand to free her veil which has covered her blossoms. He felt a liquid touch his cheeks yet again and he lifted face up leaving her swollen lips to see at Geet who was still crying, Maan "No Geet, do not,' her gently whispered as he continued to soothe her sorrow. Once she had ceased weeping and he had caressed every tear away with his lips, he pressed a gently kiss to her lips. With a gentle nudged he eased her lips apart and inserted his tongue, invading her mouth with seductively. she had begun to move her tongue to match the rhythm of his. Before long their tongues were dueling much alike a pair of rapiers, and she had her hands pressed against his chest, enjoying the feel of his masculine muscles flexing underneath her fingertips. This time he kissed her neck, starting at her collarbone until he reached her earlobe, giving it a little nibble when he did. He could feel the tension easing out of her shoulders as he kissed and stroked her shoulders, neck and collarbone. Little moans of pleasure began to ease and slip out of her swollen lips. His Geet was driving him into derision with those little noises, she tensed slightly as he laid her gently on her back, but his attention on her skin seemed to make her lose her focus. His figures are struggling to remove her blouse hooks, geet was so lost in passion to offer him a help. Maan just tore her blouse to see her fully grown blossoms which are inviting him to possess them. Slowly his hands moved to her gagrha where the knot had been holding her waist. He freed her from the gagrha touching her bare thighs making her to tremble under him. GEET nearly leapt out of the bed as his tongue began to scrape down her breast, landing at her left nipple. Her shock was quickly replaced by enjoyment and sheer delight as his tongue licked and his lips sucked on the soon hard nipples. All the while he was inflicting a feeling of such intense pleasure on her that she had never thought this is how it feels like. Maan freed himself from cloths in no time and settled back on bed to take her hard ones into his mouth to taut them. Geet fear came back to her of losing him yet again, seeing him to go away from her to a battle field. Again she started to cry in his arms holding hugging-pressing his head to her blossoms. He exactly knew what she is thinking and he did not give her much more opportunity to think on these matters any longer as he ravaged her breasts, paying thorough attention to one breast before he moved on to the other. It was a while before she realized his sweet torture, his fingers had begun to creep down her stomach. He wanted to give her everything what she longed all these years, he wanted to erase all those bitter memories from her mind. He wanted to keep her busy with something while he was fighting with enemies at the war field. Still kneading her breasts maan asked her "Geet! I want a cute baby girl like you". Geet opened her eyes at once to look at his eyes which are speaking volumes of love only to her. The way MAAN said those words, with eyes staring deep into hers and a look of pure honesty on his face, made her loosens her guards. Geet couldn't ask for more than this in her life being a mother of her Maan's child is something she couldn't voice it in words. She just nodded before hugging him back. Has maan move on top of her, gently nudging her legs apart to allow him access. Geet had failed to notice how enormous is his manhood had become. She blushed looking at his naked form and turned her face to side hiding from his instant staring. He whispered into her ear reassuringly "I'll go slow" , the arousal clear in his voice sending shivers down her already sensitive body. GEET was brought back to reality as he broke the barrier of her, causing a searing pain to course through her.MAAN knew she was in pain, but there was nothing to be done until it passed. Lying as still as possible, he waited for her to want him to move, holding her close and kissing her gently as he waited."Geet! Tum..Tum teek ho? ".Geet bit her lip hard to suppress the scream as she waited, her hands firmly presses to Maan's shoulders, holding tightly as she willed the pain to pass. After a short while she began to notice a change, instead of a pain, there was a tingling. This tingling only became more intense, making her wish Maan to move. After few seconds Geet felt comfortable with his and started to snake his spine marking with her nails telling him to move. Smiling at her eagerness, he began to move back and forth inside her, slow and gentle at first, but soon creating a rhythm that was no doubt going to please. Maan was splitting her in half, the pleasure he was giving her too intense to cope with making her to forget everything. He stared deep into her eyes, and not only making sure she was enjoying this as much as he, but that she was ok. He continued to stare into her eyes as he felt her climax swiftly appear, his own following closely. He almost squashed her when he finally collapsed onto GEET, both having joined themselves together in pure pleasure as their releases had appeared. They were both breathing heavily. Before he lay next to her to sleep, he took her petite body into his arms and kissed her passionately, feeling that he had definitely expressed the way he felt without words as best as he could. Feeling contented Maan kissed her flushed cheeks wiping the sweat from her temple pulled her more close to his body assuring her he will be always there to her. He promised himself not to hurt her and always keep her happy no matter how worst the situation would get. Maan whispered into her ear "Geet! Meri Beti ka kaayal rakkna! "Saying this he kissed her one last time before slipping into a sleep.

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Maan bent to take blessings from Mohindar and Rano. Mohindar "Take care Puttar jee! " . Aniee's condition was worst coz Arjun had no choice but to go with Maan. Even he have some responsibility towards his country. Then Maan Hugged his big brother Jai, Jai "Man yaad rahey ! yaha ek jaan tumhari raha dekhrahi hothi hain'apna kayal rakkhna! " . Maan Hugged Vicky who was in edge of crying. Maan "Chote! Geet ko kabhi akehla matt chodna ". Vicky hugged him crying "Bhai! .." Dhanraaj and Bhumi put a brave face not to break down infront maan, one is their Son another one is Their Son-in-law, don't know what to tell them. Sunaina came out tagging Geet and Aniee who have pooja tali in their hand. Both took arti to their respective spouses praying for the Victory and wellbeing for them in the war putting thilak on their forehead. Daadi came forward and kissed both Maan & Geet before blessing the "Sada Khush Raho! ". Vicky ducked Maan's and Arjun's Luggage into a Army truck escorting them to a Army jeep. Maan Took Geet hands and kissed them infront of whole family causing Geet to blush. Maan leaned forward and kissed her forehead before pulling her into a bear hug, whispering something into her ear "Geet! I will miss you!". Until now Geet was put a brave face and holding tears which had now burst out soaking his uniform. Maan "Shhh!! Geet! Hamari Pyaar ke JUNOON ki kasam. Main jaldhi wapas aahunga" saying this he kissed her one last time before settling in a jeep. Geet sighed touching her still flat stomach. Geet waved goodbye at Maan telling through her eyes "I love you" .Maan acknowledged by a flying kiss to geet "I Love you Too"

~THE END~

Uff Finally The junoon of my "JUNOON" got completed. If you want long epilogue then i want my long comments & Likes. Yes i'm greedy as much like as you all for updates.

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