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Posted: 12 years ago
can u plz add me to ur pm list and pm when all ur ff updates esp this one
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update is confirmed on Friday!!!
I have exams till 6th Dec so I'm slipping one in on Friday on my free day
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Maan took her in his arms securely' Geet lost in his passion managed to indicating him to let go of her' He slowly placed her down and Geet pulled his hand to him causing the two to collide harshly yet briskly' Geet wrapped her arms around his neck and pulled him even more close closing the gap'

PART 15

When one dreams about a loved one, they wish the dream never ended. The partnership of Maan and Geet' well it is kind of peculiar when you think about it. The Nawaab Sahib already found the love of his life in the nick of time, kissed her, married her and has already spent his nuptial night with her. Now that's royalty summed up in, well' basically one sentence. But, that is how you all view the love story on Maan and Geet so far' But ask the lovebirds themselves' they would explain how dear they are to one another and take the doubt out of your mind of their 'fast-forwarding' relationship.

Poor Geet dosed off waiting for her Nawaab husband to actually come to where he asked her to go for their Official Nuptial Night. They have had their first night together but the 'official' is to let the house members realise that this time it is OFFICIAL!

Chhote Nawaab Sahib Maan Singh Khurana was still awaiting his wife's arrival and that too in their bedroom not where she was waiting!

"Maan, ab humari biwi kidhar ghum hogayi? Uss ko to yahan hona chaiye' Anvesha use itni der se tayaar kar ri hai'?" he thought confusingly. He blushed for the moment and thought that Anvesha's hard work will go into waste, as he was not intending her to stay in that state for long'!! Nor was he intending to stay in his annoying white Shalwar Kameez for the whole night.

"Wo kaun ti jo humare paas se ghuzari ti?? Usse yahan ka rasta kahan se pata challa?" Lustful thoughts were zooming through his mind and the thought of her fragrance drove him insane'

It was 12AM. Great. Absolutely, overwhelmingly great. The Nawaab of Khurana Mehal, who never waits for anyone nor is this patient is still waiting for his Miss SHAIRNI's dramatic arrival'

Poor Maan was restless to see his wife and was restless to see his wife and actually see what speciality his sister put into his angelic wife.

A sudden fear took over him' where was she truly? Was she safe? Has Meera or worse enough has Vikranth caught her'

He speedily ran out of his chamber and started looking for her' he was aware not to shout her name or else Meera would get suspicious over himself and Geetanjali's relationship.

Rani Sahiba Meera was chanting prayers to Radha and Krishna in a loud and monotonous tone. Maan got startled seeing her up and that too at this time chanting her bhajans to the respective ones.

Even though Meera was concentrating on her bhajans, she saw Maan out of the corner of her eye spotting something wrong by his facial appearance.

"Chhote Nawaab Sahib! Aap iss waqt yahan kya kar re hain?" she asked in a mainly frightening and suspicious tone, questioning his every movement.

Maan thought for a while, as he cannot blurt out the truth about himself and Geetanjali but he will and a hundred percent, he will say what comes to his mind' "Hum bhi aap se yahi sawal puch sakte hai Chachiji' ab iss waqt kya kar re hai??? Apne Mayke ka rasta bhool gaye hain aap? Hum aap ko yaad dilade?" he said that all in one go, remembering his conversation about his Chachiji's Mayka and how one day he will leave her there purely out of his own will.

Meera unwillingly left the room after his nephew's taunt about her Mayka. He set trek through his large Mehal, trying to find the epitome of beauty he married.

Here Geet had dosed off at the Gazebo with her dreams of her beautiful husband in her mind. Geetanjali realise as per her dreams, whenever Maan is in them, he is acting like a total badmaash in them. Geetanjali recognised her husband as a kind, sophisticated and loving man but these dreams! Oh My God! Changed her whole perspective on her husband and often mumbled "Chhote Dhusht Dhanav" in her dreams and pulled pouted face which would make the ordinary fall for her innocent magic.

Maan searched everywhere inside the Mehal and thought to search outside of it too.

And there was her cute little angel' her milky skin shining under the moonlight and her sweet smile forever implanted on her intricately carved lips. She was mumbling something under her breath, which was making her facial expressions look cuter than ever. He went by her side and sat ever so gently so he could hear her complaining and by the looks of it she was definitely complaining about her husband!!

"Yeh Maan bhi na, sach mein bada apne aap ko Chhote Nawaab Sahib kehte hai aur dekho sab, akal bikul chuwe (mouse) ka' aur iss chhote dhusht dhanav ko kya kahu?? Dekhna jab humare bache hoyege na Babaji' har taraf chhote chhote dhusht dhanav phire ge aur apne papa ke tara mera dimagh kharab karde ge!!"

She carried on mumbling and Maan smirked at the idea of children' Wow she has already planned the brigade of Mini Chhote Dhusht Dhanav's. That too of his liking he thought. He went down to her little ear and cleared her face of her hair strands'

"Par Jaan, Mujhe to Chhote Chhote Dhusht Dhanav ke saath saath Chhoti Chhoti Miss SHAIRNI's chaiye' taake Maan Singh Khurana ki army complete hoye!"

Geet blushed in her sleep and whispered "Chhote Dhusht Dhanav'" and placed her palm on his warm cheek until she actually realised he was sitting next to her. She jumped up ecstatically and shouted "Sach Much Mein Humara Dhusht Dhanav yahan hai!" Maan opened his mouth at her claim but smirked at saying humara. Oh his Shairni is just perfect and no one can ever take that away from her'

"Shairni, ab zyada chu cha mat karna aur'" and with that he scooped her in his arms and ran off with her into his bedroom' sorry! THEIR bedroom for their first night! Geet got startled with his sudden action but giggled off but the look of his desperate face.

He kicked open their room and placed her ever so softly onto THEIR bed, where she has once slept before.

"Madam, aap ne itna humara waqt barbaad kiya hai! Ab iski sazaa to hum le kar hi rahe ge!!" He said with a large glint of naughtiness in his eyes. He blew all the candles and left the moon's light shine through their room to be the witness of their union!

The moon and the stars will take teachings from their eternal love and preach them to other lovers yet to come.

He planted soft kisses on her nape, which made an unexpected urge of passion wanting to spill out.

SONG ' O Saathi Re'

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O Saathi Re Din Dube Na

O my love, hope the day never sets

He looked madly into her eyes' craving the passion her wanted from her. Today, the wait had ended and the start of their true life had now started. He wanted no gap, no barrier between them. All these materialistic goods did not suit the Chhoti Rani Geet Maan Singh Khurana nor did it suit her Nawaab Sahib. Maan cleverly undid her pallu and threw it into one corner of the room away from the two lovebirds union! He planted kisses wherever he found skin and removed her jewellery via his M-Shaped lips and seductive hands. Geet lost all senses! Even though they have made love several times' they always found a way to make it just perfect!!


Aa Chal Din Ko Roke

Come on; hope this day does not end

Maan came on top of her gazing at her pink lips madly' carving for a sweet kiss off his Shairni and with no moment to spare took her lips in with his for a breath-taking kiss. Geet was used to these unexpected kisses by now and loved them to the core! He heftily undid her skirt leaving her in her Sari blouse and her panty.


Dhoop Ke Peeche Daude

Lets run after the sunlight

Geet was getting drugged by his kisses and pushed him with a force startling him highly! "Jaan, yeh kya" managed to come out, when Geet's long and slender legs made their way onto Maan straddling him ever so seductively, leaving a shocked Maan seeing his wife ever so brave and hot! Maan took support of his elbows making him see his wife clearly and saw her blushingly undoing his buttons of his Kurta.

"Jaan, this speed does not suit you, nor is it suiting me at the moment'" he purred into her ears moaning with ecstasy. He helped her with his kurta and moved it off leaving a bare chested Maan in just his boxers!


Chaanv Chhue Na

The shadows do not touch us

His Shairni was powered and covered him head to toe with herself hiding him away from the moonlight.

"Suniye, Wo Dekhiye na Who Chandh humare Chandh se sharmaa raha hai" Maan looked at her naughtily' "Aap ke chandh se sharmaa raha hai?" he asked back cutely gaining a feathered kiss from his beloved on his cheek.


O Saathi Re

O beloved

"Ohoo Jaan' isse kiss nahi kehte!" he exclaimed and rolled over he and took her lips in again for a breath-stopping kiss she was craving from him. His long fingers almost ripped her blouse off leaving her just in her flimsy-materialled inners, ready for her love to expose and devour.


O Saathi Re, Din Dube Na,
Aa Chal Din Ko Roke,
Dhoop Ke Peeche Daude,
Chaanv Chhue Na,
O Saathi Re
O Saathi Re Din Dube Na


Thaka Thaka Suraj Jab Nadi Se Hokar Niklega

When the tired sun (early evening) passes over the river

He pleasured her. He pleased her every command. He new her and her G-Spot very well. He removed her *** and devoured her chest. She whimpered and craved for more. He carried on kissing her rising chest, pleasing her thoroughly. She snaked her arms around his neck pulling him closer to her face and whispered' "Jaan, I love you!"

She placed hungry smooches on his neck and bit into his sensitive flesh powering his devil within. She bit his collarbone and soothed it with her tongue. She looked at his face. His eyes were closed by his Shairni's acts. She kissed his face bit and licked his lips gullibly.


Hari Hari Kaayi Pe, Paanv Pada Toh Fislega

The sun (time) may slip if it steps on rocks slippery by algae

He trailed his kisses down her torso to her navel. He pinched it and bit into it carnally. He removed her panty via his mouth and saw the amount she was aroused with his very own eyes.


Tum Rok Ke Rakhna, Main Jaal Giraaun

You hold the sun and I will try to trap it

Tum Pith Pe Lena Main Haath Lagaaun

You hold on to it and I will help you

Geet blushed with his sudden gaze' and that too where it was not supposed to be'

She got up and tried to escape his tortures but Maan just grabbed her in the nick of time and passionately loved her on her lower abdomen. He placed sounding smooches and nuzzled his nose on her thighs driving her utterly insane.


Din Dube Na Ha

Hope the sun does not set

He tuned her over so her back was nearing his chest' he lustfully yet lovingly kissed her back, occasionally biting into her flesh making her moan. He thought for a while and spanked her bottom three to four times making her blush profusely out of embarrassment!

"Suniye, yeh aap kya kar re hai' aise koi karta hai kya?" she managed to say out of her deep breaths and out of embarrassment. But, Maan was in a playful mood and said "Jaan, jaise koi koi chhote bacho ko aise karte hai' humne bi kiya hai! Hume inti der intezaar karwane!!!" Geet blused as it was not for a naughty sexual pleasure but it was for something she actually did and today she has just realised that HER MAN DOEN NOT LIKE TO WAIT!!!


Teri Meri Atti Katti

I am not speaking to you

He turned around flaunting his nose high up pretending to be angry. Geet encircled her arms from the back around his shoulders "Haye Humari Jaan, kaise hot hot dikhte ho ruthe ruthe" Geet had never used the word 'hot; with her husband. Maan just lost it and puleed her into his arms for a deep soul-searing kiss.


Daat Se Khaati Katti

Really not speaking to you for sure


"I'm not going to talk to you tomorrow' until you call me 'humare sexy se pati' acha?"
he said concisely' "Aur haan I am not going to make love to you either if you do not say that!" How besharam can her pati get?! She tried to pacify him into thinking otherwise but he was a fixed person!

Re Jaiyo Na

Please do not go

O Piyu Re

O beloved

He was about to get up but Geet grabbed his arm and pulled him harshly towards her, crashing him into her petite structure, with her legs around him.

"Ohoo humare sweet se, cute se, hot se aur sexy se pati ko to jaldi ti pyaar karne mein par ab kya meri jaan?"Her hands made their way to his boxers revealing his manhood and his intentions.

O Saathi Re Din Dube Na'

He laid her under him, he dominated her and came to the end of his own endure and entered her. She gasped loudly and he awaited her to adjust herself. He took hot, deliberate strokes asking for more and soon reached their climax, their leg entwined and their mouths finding skin placing hot kisses on each other.

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Edited by halemakhan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awee me reading it for the first time ever ...after ur current update went to read the prologue ...👏
n what a romantic one yrr ..me loving it

surely will be back after completing the story till now ..😎

glad i am here after ur come back ..
warna pata nhi kiya hota ...😆

okiee now me leaving its already 3:30 am here ..

gotta go ..
thnxx 4 this awesom story ..

plzz keep updating mujhe wait karne mien thori problem hoti aur phir mien writers ko buhat ziada problem karti hoon update karne ke liye ..😳

Luv Ya
Sobia ..


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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome hot update
after a long tym tooo

but woh kaun tha jisne geet ko bahar bhej dia nd woh v kaun tha jisko geet ne bahar dekha
waiting to know the raj and alll
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Posted: 12 years ago
NICE UPDATE
liked their sweet romance
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Posted: 12 years ago
bechara Maan have to wait A LOOONG😆😆😆 (as we had to wait a looong for this update))). Geet had such a sweet dream 'chote dusht danav''😆😆 nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely update.. my maan is waiting and his geet is sleeping dreaming of small dust dhanv, oh god.. my naughty teasing his geet and bold geet, hot sexy my maan , wow i love te update so much dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

super like update

chotte nawab sahib toh the hi besharam😳😳😳

but chotti rani saheba bhi...😆😆😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
thanx for the pm dear
thanx for adding me
lovely update
waiting for next part

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