I ll see through ur eyes/Epilogue Pag 58 /12 March - Page 26

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome n emotional update
well written dear
love it

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow wow jass...
awesome and emotional update dear...
oh so maan attemped suicide to give his eyes to geet...
thats really great and sad too..
his love for her is great...
but geet is angry and is in pain... that she is the reason behind it...
continue soon dear...
sorry for late comment...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it...
hw much maan loves geet..it is unconditional...
how can maan think dat geet wll live happy without her maan...
reaction of geet is right...
continue soon...nw past is out..nw eager to knw wat wll happen...
waitin 4 next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
dear..šŸ˜›.
...4 PMing me..😃.
...updates...😃
.. 4 ur GR8 work..šŸ‘šŸ‘.
keep the job up dear..šŸ‘..
keep ing dear...😃
n Last Wishing u
Happy Mother's Day...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Jass, this ff is turning out to be beautiful. Keep writing and updating soon,
Thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting
when will you update ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
~*~Eighth ~*~

'Geet plz listen to me' Maan tried to back call Geet in his feeble voice..' Plz Geet don leave me alone...I can't live without u '...

But Geet she not listened to hm.She moved out of room.Maan tried to go behind her but fell on floor due to extreme weakness

Pinky who was just outside door over hearing every thing grabbed Geet from shoulders 'Pinky take care of her ..don leave her alone.I hav to be with Maan Sir .We can leave any one alone...' He whispers near to Pinky

Pinky nodded her head and took Geet away from there.Addi rushed toward Maan who was trying to get up from floor.

'Maan Sir uthiye...' he took Maan in his arms and helped him to sit on bed

'Addi I can't live without Geet..plz ask her to forgive me once...I was wrong...but ' he was unable to complete and started to cry bitterly hiding his face in Addi's chest

'Maan Sir even Geet can't live without u...I think now u can feel her pain...When she left u...how she may hav felt when u insulted her and pretended to throw her...If u did wrong..u hav to face her anger But this anger is just becoz she loves u more than any thing else' he brushed Maan's hair

'But Addi Geet ...Geet k binna main nahi reh sakta..I was wrong that she can live without me.How I can forget that I m Maan Singh Khuraana..how can I bent my knees in front of situation...Ya she is rite I insulted her..her love She is my strength not weakness' he tried to realize his mistake

'Its good Maan Sir apko realize to hua...But don worry Geet ka gussa wo just for some time he hai...She has rite to be angry on u..But u hav to win her trust again..Me and Pinky are with u as always' He cupped Maan's face ...'Okey take some rest let me check what is happening outside'

After helping Maan to lay on bed Addi moved outside to estimate situation.He knew its not easy to handle things.But things gonna be alrite one day

Outside ICU Geet was sobbing resting her head on Pinky's shoulder

'Pinky why he did so..Why he thought this that he can make me c colors of life at the cost of his life.' She had lump in her throat saying this

'Becoz Sir loves u..Plz try to understand him Geet...Forgive him once' She rubbed her cheek.

'No not that easily...Maan Sir did mistake he has too pay.Geet not gonna forgive him soon...' Addi winked looking at pinky .She understood he is upto some thing.

'Addi Sir aap...How is Maan is he alrite...boliye Aadi Sir ' Geet fumbled for Addi's hand

'Geet he is fine...Ya he is weak.Per every thing is under control...I know ur anger is false.But u hav rite to make him feel ..so that he ll think again and again before taking any foolish step..We both r with u okey don worry about Sir...Main hu na' Addi placed her hand on Geet's head like any brother or father is here to protect her ..to protect her relation

'Ya Addi Sir aap hai na...U saved my life today..Mere Maan mere jindgi hai...But I m angry with him..not gonna forgive him' She said

'Okey theek hai Geet...aab chalo ghar chalo...Addi Sir is here with Maan Sir...Tumko bhi chot aayi hai...U need rest too' Pinky pushed her up

'Arry Pinky...how can I go when Maan is here...I can't leave him alone...Darr lagta hai mujhe...ek baar dur gayi to unhone yeh sabh soch liya...not now...' scared she said

'Don worry Geet...Maan Sir ko akal aa gayi hai...he not gonna do such thing again...Some where I m also responsible for all this...Mujhe Maan Sir ki help nahi karni chahea thi...yeh sabh na hota tab' he felt ashamed

'U r wrong Addi Sir..but I hav forgiven u becoz what u did today...uske aagay nothing matters..Giving life to Maan u gav me my life back' she said with tear filled eyes

'So trust me..go home Maan Sir is safe as his mind is under control now okey...Pinky take her with u' Addi grabbed Geet's shoulder and asked her to go home

Geet went back home after Addi assured her.But next day she again come hospital early and discussed Maan's progress.She was happy Maan is totally fine now.But she not went near to him.Just listened his talk with Addi from outside.As she had already requested Addi to talk to him in her presence so that she can hear recovering Maan's words with her hear. His voice was enough to judge he was alrite now.But missing Geet more than any thing else.

Maan's parents came back just after hearing this news and Daddi also returned from Badari nath . They were too much angry on Geet.Made her responsible for every thing.Mr Ranvir Khuraana forced Maan to go with them.But he denied .

'Maan r u mad..itna sabh ho gaya..aab bhi aap apni zid per adde hai...U hav to be with us .We can't c our only son suffering due to that girl' Piya (Maan's mother) said

'No mom I m not going any where...Why u r blaming Geet for this..this was my thinking...and why she is responsible...she met with an accident but to save me...Agar Papa aur apko itna he khyal hota mera to aap mera har rasta na bannd karte...When I was able to get good job to get good money..But Papa closed every door for me...I had no enough money for her...so what was other way' Maan shouted

'Shut up Maan..u stubborn child..U r going with us this is final...otherwise instead of U...I ll do suicide' Piya blackmailed him

'What ?' Shocked Maan said

'Ya u listened same what I said' Piya said

' U r blackmailing me ..that's fine...I ll go with u but I hav one condition...Geet ll also go with me instead of KM we ll live in OH and I ll do my same job' he condition gav jerk to every one.

'But Maan betay how is this possible...when she is angry with u.I hav no problem to take her with us' Daddi saidd

'Maa what r u saying how she can go with us...when her father did so much with us ' Ranvir shouted.

'Ranvir don shout...If u want ur son to follow u..U hav to follow me...I can't c my child so much suffering...What is Geet's fault...she is blind due to Maan to save him she lost her eyes ' Daddi made his mouth shut

'But Maa how she gonna b ready' Piya said

'Its ur problem not mine...make her ready if she comes with me I ll also come back' Maan cleared

'Okey as u wish I ll try'

Maan knew Geet gonna be ready for this.How much angry may be she.She can do any thing for him.Even she can go with him just to unite him with his parents.But Maan ..he was not going due to his mother's blackmailing but for Geet as he knew She gonna be with him.

This is the only way to win her trust once again.But real problem was Geet's eyes.When she needed operation as soon as possible...how he can get money.If he begs in front of his father.Which he can...it gonna hurt Geet's self respect when she had denied her parents help.How can she take help from Maan's parents.

Even when she ll came to know why Maan is going back.Just due to his mother and if he not gonna work with his father it just means only he can beg in front of him.

Some how Pinky make her ready to go with Maan as telling her about Maan's mother's threat and Maan's condition to go with them.She became ready for it.But how their life gonna take twist and turns only almighty knows

But Piya was not happy.Her son was only reason she was ready to bear this blind girl.but she had to think what she can do with her...


Hey buddies plz tell me u want more extension to this story or I should wrap it .Plz give real reason.It may be positive or -ve upto u...I ll accept..

Till then plz read comment and hit loke

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Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow emotional part but was so gripping...lovd it dr...šŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome..superb Part!!
Loved it
continue soon
thankx for pm


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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da intense emotioanal update!

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