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Posted: 13 years ago
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~*~*~*~*~*~Chapter 2~*~*~*~*~*~

Its 7:05 in the morning . Maan has reached at main entrance of KC. But still there was no one except security staff.

Ram Lal gate keeper opened main entrance door.He parked car outside complex as under ground parking was yet to be open.

'What I do now' Maan fumbles his pockets for keys.Took out whole stuff from car .From laptop bag to seats.Even put our his waist coat shoes.

Whole staff gathered there looking Maan's stupid acts

'What has happened to Maan Sir yeh kapde kyo utaar rahe hai' Vinay one of security staff surprisingly asked Ram Lal.

'I haven't that courage to ask him why he is doing this ? If u can push lo' Ram Lal pushed him .

Hesitatingly Vinay came near to Maan 'Sir waise why r u doing this.'

'What I m doing...kya kar raha hu main ..dikhta nahi ' Maan burst

'Sir we can't c more .Any insect etc has bite u or u hav any allergy that u first threw whole stuff out n now removing ur cloths' Ram Lal at last came n said gathering full courage

Maan looked at his condition.His beg was near to tyre. waist coat on floor n shoes upside down teasing him near to waist coat.

'Oh u said two things first if some thing has bite me..answer is no..n second if I hav any allergy...no I haven't' placing one hand on waist and scratching hair with other he said.Actually he was also unaware what he was doing.It was Vinay who made him realize

'Oh there is third possibility also .I think u haven't taken bath due to busy secdule.That's by u have itch' Ram Lal said...who also dared to come close to him looking at Vinay.

'What u mean I came here without taking bath' He was fuming

'Humme kya pata ' whole staff said in one voice


Maan's condition was miserable.So it was better to leave place

'Dekh lunga ek ek ko...let me come back'Maan roared throwing his stuff in car.But his one shoe had been disappeared in crowd of security staff.

He pushed staff back n laid down on stomach to search his shoe under the car .But he failed. Actually he had thrown shoe with waist coat but he not noticed

'Maan Sir what happened.U hav more itch'Rahul one of staff members said bending on his knees near to Maan

Maan got up 'You all r fired.When I ll come back no body should n here' he yelled

He pushed all n in this condition without shoes he moved out of KC.

All staff was looking at each other.

'Ram Lal bhayia aab kya hoga' Vinay said...he made sad face.

'Nothing Maan Sir usually fire us twice or thrice in year.U r new. U ll b used to it ' Ram Lal made fun of Maan n circled his arm around him


Actually no one had keys of administrative area.Jst house keeping head had that.He gonna be here around eight.But Maan also keep master key n in hurry he had forgotten at home.


Maan stopped car outside his favorite coffee house .But he had jst one shoe so how he could go inside.

'What I do now.Can't go back KM...I can't ask Nakul to bring my other pair that duffer will create any scene.Even bare footed can't go to any shoe store.Addi se he kahna padega' He mumbled n called Addi to bring pair of shoes.Till now he decided to sit in near by park to KC outside Mandir.He also told this to Addi

He stopped car outside temple n bare footed started to search a lonely place Where no one could find him.Addi gonna call him after reaching here

But Maan was not aware .He gonna get much bigger shock in park.A big blast was waiting him even after searching lonely place in park.


I think u ll find this part lil bit interesting.So plz tell me what u think don forget to tell me n hit tab.


Lov


Jass😆


tense liberties according to situation

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Awesome update!!
Yeh maan ko kya hogaya??
hehehehe
😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
its hilarious update🤣
bechara maan.
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
ye ka tha i dont understand
Sonia.KN thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: bulbul164

ye ka tha i dont understand



What u wanna say ? U don get this
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
wow awesome update dear :):) keep rocking and plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
wonderful update...
looking forward to know the next...
Sonia.KN thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
Guys I m confused .Tell me what I wrote u get it or not.Plz tell me truth.U digested it or not.Becoz this is my first attempt with comic elements.If u hav any suggestion don hesitate to tell me.

I think this is peak of stupidity But Maan did nothing jst his surrounding made his acts stupid .I promise no onward u ll get good story line
Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
awesome part...😛
uff ye maan...😆and his staff members...😆
adi nahi hota tho humare maan ka kya hota...
and park me kya honewala hai..😲...
continue soon...
thanks for pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing dear, i think maan is funny.😆

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