An intrecate knok : Maaneet ss (COMPLETED)

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divya22

@divya22

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Awesome update yaar... Loved it...
Maan is right... Koi kuch bhi bole bt geet ko aisa nai karna chaiye tha...
Maan ka lasr dialogue was fab... Lets c kya hota hai aage... Update soon..

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

yes Rachna this is the best part of ur SS...👏

that is what I was trying to tell u in my all comments from the update where Geet met Nupur and she told Geet to take Maan's test...

I was really very angry with Geet's behavior...

I really appreciate Maan's concern for Geet and how Maan got to know what is bothering Geet...I really feel how much hurt he must be feeling when Geet tried to test him just to show her friend...

Maan is right in his anger and I second all whatever he said to Geet...

but it will be childish from Maan's side also if he streches this incident too much...Geet behavior was wrong but if she is feeling guilty and asking forgiveness then he should forgive him...whether he fails in test or now he is angry if they take any drastic step it will prove their love weak...

if Geet realize truely and Maan forgive her then they can show Nupur that their love is very strong and they can face any hurdle...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

nupur is really stupid

nd usse badi stupid geet

kisi aur ki baaton me aakar apne maan pe test kiya

ab bhugtoo

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Awesome update...

erhh geet is so stupid..

poor maan... he is so right... geet is at fault..

continue soon

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

part 4
nice part...
oh so Maan is angry in this way and POV...
poor them...
Nupur grrr...
cont soon dear...

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tania90

@tania90

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

yeh nupur ki bachi problem create krne main kitni mahir hai

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Pls update soon... poor maan

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

dear..😛.

...4 PMing me..😃.

...updates...😃

.. 4 ur GR8 work..👏👏.

keep the job up dear..👏..

keep ing dear...😃

n Last Wishing u

Happy Mother's Day...😃

lov,❤️

Tama

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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...

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Moody_Barbie

@Moody_Barbie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

seriously Man how can geet trust a lady who don't even trust her own friend... Poor Maan he was so hurt because of this stupid test... He sacrificed his life his job his tym .. God women remains women whether they are handling empires

loved it cont soon

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Rachana

@Rang_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

AN INTRICATE KNOK PART 5

I know guys u find this fight very childish , I know it's little childish , geet ka yu test lena and maan ka yu react karna

Bt just think once and move your head to the world , if you see the reality then you get to know many divorce , many suicides , many fight are happening in childishness , I have daily habbit to read news paper and I daily read like this

- A girl drink poision because her mother scold her that she don't know how to cook

- A wife try to kill her husband because he is not giving time to her

- A man try for suiside bcoz he has doubt on his wife

There are so many cases are , but I just describ 3 , u can see this all 3 are looks so childish ,even I can say it is more childish then my ss and that's reality

Har baar vahi nahi hota jo ham sochte he ,sometimes our mind took over our heart and sometimes we blind in our anger , but when this anger ll oer we ll regrain it bt in vain

In reality we can see the more childish acts , hope I clear your doubts if some doubts still in ur mind tell me , I ll cler it ,

Thanx who always commanting and gives me strnth to move further , keep suporting me

now enjoy the update and gives yur feed back

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geet goes on her knees cringly ,

geet : i am sorry maan i am sorry bt plz mujse ese naraz mat ho , tumhari geet tut jayegi , you are right it is my fault that do all this , but i was blind , batana chahti thi me usko k mera maan mujpe kitna trust karta he '''. bt it seems that i brock your trust '.mene apne hi hatho se sab barbad kar dia

i am sorry maan , i am sorry

she kept murmering sorry many times but maan is not there to hear it '''

maan goes to onther room and try to sleep but his anger didn't let him sleep , he was never be so angry , he always known as calm person , par kehte he na jo insan kabhi gussa nahi hota vo ek din esa gussa karta he ki vo khud bhi nahi janta ki uska gussa kitna he , kai baar esa hota he ham chooti chooti baato par gussa ho jate he and kai baar badi baat neglate kar dete he but it's a human nature ,

but whenever person's anger over then he realise his mistake and get to know his over anger also ,

hear maan was doing his ti-chi and there geet is continuesly crying

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In the morning she get up when the sun ray fall on her face , she yawns and move her hand to find maan bt after not finnding him she got up

Geet : maan , maan

Then suddenly she remember last night , her eyes got wet

She goes to other room where maan was half lying on sofa and half on the floor

Geet sit besides him , and seeing him without blinking her eyes

Geet : maan , I know you are angry on my childish behaviour ,but trust me that time I was blind that I couldn't see anything even I couldn't think on it ., I am sorry , but if you are feeling pain bcoz of my childish work then I promiss u that now my childish act will sooth your pain

She smiles through her tears

She sees that maan's hand moved so before maan got up , she leaves from there

Maan got up , he is still angry on geet , he goes to washroom and got ready

When he came out , he saw geet is in kitchen , all stuff is hear & there

And geet is all mass with flour

Maan couldn't control his laugh , he brust out of laughing forgetting everything

Geet sees him

He goes to geet

Geet hide her face with her palm

Geet : ye sab mene nahi bigada , me to w'.o w''o

Maan removed her hands from her face

Maan (with smile) :I know , u didn't do this all ,

Geet (with baby face) : ha , I didn't do this

Maan : ya bcoz ye sab to mene kia he na !!!

Geet(happily) : haaa

then she realise

Geet : you are pulling my leg he na !!!!

Maan goes near her

He started removing flour frm her face , geet get hypervative , no doubt they made love many time bt still whenever maan goes near to geet , her breeth always going high and high

He put her hair flirks behind her ear and niharoying(watching) his angalic wife ,

Geet looks down feeling shy

Maan : geet , tum bhi kamal karti ho , ek to sab kuch ulat-pulat kar k rakh dia , if you don't know how to cook then what's need to do this ?

Geet : bcoz u are angry on me ! that's why me tumhare lia kuch banana chahti'

Maan (cutting in) : did u really thinks that , this kind of your childish act ll effect on me ??
geet : vo bhi to meri childish act hi thi , tumhari test lene ki !!if it can effect on u then why not this !!

Maan goes from there without utter a simple word

Geet cried a little

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Maan's heart : ya she is right , it was her childish act , itni chhoti si baat par muje itna sara gussa nahi karna chahiye tha muje

Maan's mind : if she could do childish act then why not I ??
heart : pagal he kya ? , tu apni geet , apni geet se esa karega ?

Mind : ha karunga , usne bhi to kia

Heard : but you know her na ,she is so innosent ,'''' a smile comes on his lips

Mind : oye ye dant dikhana band kar nd take a revange

Heart : revenge ??? maan don't listen your mind , tu apni geet se badla lega!!!

Mind : tu chup re , maan do as I said , and use sabak sikhao

Heart : maan , use pyar se samjao

Mind : no , do as I said

Heart : maan listen to me

Mind : maan your heart is going mad , just listen me not him

Heart : you are mental ,I think u should go now

Mind : I think u should go and take rest

Heart : no u go

Mind : if I ll take rest then u ll die foreever , maan listen to me , mind is always right

Maan : STOP IT BOTH OF U ..he rored

Hear maan's heart & mind are fighting with each other and maan is listing their non-scence talks ,being a silent specteter

Same as maan , we are also sees oops listening our heart & mind's fight ,

Dil aur dimag : DIL hamesha vahi karta hejo sabke bhale k lia ho par DIMAG hamesha vahi karega jo hamare bhale k lia ho ,chahe dusre ka nuksan hi kyu na ho ! hamesha dil ki suno

Maan :uff !!! heart is saying something else andmind is saying else , what should I do ??

He is confuseee

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Now back to prologue's line

THAT 5 MINUTE CHANGE THEIR WHOLE LIFE

Their whole life going so good , the happy family

But in 5 MIN nupur tell her a plan , in that 5 MIN she disided to take a test , In 5 MIN she tells maan that she loves someone else , in 5 MIN maan says her that she gives him pain

Now bcoz of that 5 MIN , their relationship , their all distroy , not bcoz of their childish acts a loveble couple not talking to each other

They tide in an intricate knok , EK MUSKIL SE BHARI KNOK

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Precap

Maan : Geettt

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Edited by Rachanachag - 13 years ago