An intrecate knok : Maaneet ss (COMPLETED)

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prologue


Life is not so easy as we thinks 😲

its very difficult
😲
All was perfect 😊
first metting 👏
Then love ❤️
Then marriage
aah !! Then real happiness comes in their life 🤗
Their baby .⭐️.. A cute baby ⭐️
Now a complete family ...
A lovely couple ...
They loves eachother crazilly
everone fells jealousy after😡 seeing their love ..

bt fate has their another plans😲 ...

That 5 min ; only five mins change their whole life ...

their life changes in heven to hell ...🤢
They are living in one roof ; in one room like a stranger ...

like they dont knw eachother

After all what happen in tat bludy 5 mins ???😭
will they again love eachother ??

will their prob shortout ??😒

An intricate knot
Can they solve this knot ???
Ya pir us knot or tight hogi ??



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Excellent prologue buddy...😊
interesting concept...
please update soon...

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awesome prolouge dear...
loved it...
plzz add me in...
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Promising Prologue

Waiting For CS 👏


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Nice prologue dear...
interesting!!!
plzz continue soon
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Interesting prologue...
Love it graphics

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part 1


read prologue bfor read part 1

part 1

Bell rang...

Maan goes to open the door...

He opens the door ..

He saw a person and a smile comes on his face

(Maan was go to open the door in apron )

Maan : Aah ! Aa gai tum ...

Geet : Yeah i m very tierd yaar...

They both went inside the home...

A sweet little Girl came from inside Runningly...

Ruh : Momma Momma ...

Geet took her into her arm ...

Geet : How are you my baby ? What was u doing ??

Ruh : Tuch nahi..PA k jale hue tane ta vait tar lahi thi ( KUCH NAHI PA K JALE HUE KHANE KA WAIT KAR RAHI THI )

Maan made a Funny angry face...

bt Geet laughed

Geet : Achha !!! Chal milke tere PA k jale hue khane ka wait karte he...

Maan poped his eyes

Maan : Geet , Ruh when ll u stop to making fun of me ???

I am cooking only for u ...and u both ???

Me kitne pyar se khana banata hu ...aap dono k lia

muje aap dono mese kisise baat nhi karni

Maan turn and trying to go kitchen

bt Geet imideatly Left Ruh from her arms and held maan from back

sliped her hand on his waist , took her head on his solder

and gave a back hug to him

Geet : Sorry sweet-heart , i was just kidding...

Maan smiled With in...but still showing his Funny anger...

Geet kissed on his check..

That melted him...

He smiles...

Geet smiles back...

Maan turn back on her arm...

Both lokking in each-others arm...

Eye-lock

(Rachana-Mahiii ; Mahi ve Mahi Mahi ve... Mahiii )

Ruh pulled Maan's jins...

Breck eye lock

both sees her..

Maan took her in his arm ..

Geet gave a hug to both...

Like a family hug hehe

Maan : what happen my pari ??

Ruh : aap dono to bal bal tyu yaad dilvana palta he ki aapti ak BEAUTYFULL beti bhi he...

(AAP DONO KO BAAR BAAR KYU YAAD DILVANA PADTA HE KI AAP DONO KI EK BAUTIFULL BETI BHI )

Maaneet look at her ...nd smiles...

Then they took lunch

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After lunch...

Geet : Maan chaliye na so jate he ...

Maan : u go . I ll came after tis kitchen clening

Geet : Maan u r at home whole day...plzzz baad me kar lena i cant slept without u...

Maan : ok ... U go i ll came after took out tis apron...

Geet : ok jaldi aana...

Ruh & Geet move to bed room

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After a while Maan came and sees both are in deep sleep...

He goes to bad , laid beside Geet ...nd gave a back hug to her..

In sleep Geet turn into his arm...

Both slept hugging each-other...

After some time Ruh got up

nd sees tat Maaneet are sleeping & hugging...

Ruh patted his head wt hand...

Ruh : ufff !! Ye dono tabhi nhi sudhlenge ... Hamecha muje atela chol k so jate he

aaj me bhi dekti hu into

(UFFF !! YE DONO KABHI NAHI SUDHRENGE...HAMESA MUJE AKELA CHOD K SO JATE HE ...AAJ ME BHI DEKTI HU )


Ruh put her lag between maaneet'

Ruh sat between them and seeing maaneet alternatly..

She tring to wake up them ,,

Ruh : momma , pa udho na

Maaneet : sone dona pari

Ruh : nahi udho

Geet : so ja bachha

Ruh :theek he to me aap dono te(ke) bich me choungi (soungi)

Geet(still her eyes are closed) : baby aap to hamesa pa k sath pura din hote ho na to aabhi momma ko sone do na plzz

Ruh : dhik (theek) he to me niche ja lahi (rahi) hu thelne (khelne) k lia ,,

(Rachana ' byeee ruh tata )

Ruh left from there and go down for play

After she left

Maan roled over her and kissed on her nose .

Geet's eyes are still closed bt she smiled

Maan also smiles seeing her smile .

Maan kissed on her eyes one by one .

She slowly open her eyes ,

Both looking at each other naughtyly

Geet kissed on his cheek one by one ,

Maan closed his eyes to fell her ,

Maan : oh now u don't want to sleeop huh ???

Geet : hmm, yup wanted bt ur daughter wake up me ,

Maan pick her lips ,

Maan : kitna bolti ho tum

Geet smiles

She immediately gave a tight liplock to him .

That was so passionate kiss .

Both was lost in that

And go further for love making

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After one hour

U can see both are sleeping hugging each other '

And a duvet is over them till chest ,

They both spend a memorable time with eachother ..

Aware of that 5 minute , aware of their future ,


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Maan & Geet was in same collage nd class ...

Maan is a middle class orphan boy

And now a HOUSE HUBBY(:p)


She comes from a rich family owner of handa Constaction

She is not orphan from child hood bt when she is in last yr of collage nd just married to maan 6 month before she lost her parents in car accident

Maan is very self respected person so he did a job in some other company though her wife is a owner of handa Constaction , Bt when Ruh was born, he have to Resigh from his job ,..

Bcoz geet cant left her own office alone

And maan don't want to leave the responcibilty of his angle(Ruh) on any servent ,

Pinky ' Secretary of geet

Adi ' C.A. of H.C.

Tasha,shasa ' junior staff

(not bad in nature as ghsp)

Other staff ' romio , pande ji

Precap : coming that 5 min soon which change their life !!!!!!


pg 1 prologue

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next part 2-pg 5

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Edited by Rang_ - 12 years ago
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sounds good...add me in plz
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hope nothing happens to ruh...

continue soon...
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LVLY UDT
BT AAGE KYA HOGAA
5 MIN
MUJKO 5 MIN SE DARR LG RHA HAI...🤢

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