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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 6 & 7



This is biggest part I ever typed 2180 words , so plz cmnt biggg


PART 6

Maan :uff !!! heart is saying something else andmind is saying else , what should I do ??
He is confuseee

Hear maan is confuse


In office

Pinky :do u even know what was happen after you left the office ?

Nupur : I don't know , plz tell me pinki plz ''''. She pleaded

Pinky told her everything , nupur couldn't belive that her simple jest can spoil 2 lifes

Nupur : oh my god !!! it was only for jest , for fun , bt if my plan
has spoil their life then I have to do something

Pinky : don't do anything which can spoil their whole life

Nupur : trust me pinky , I don't want to do anythig like that , me geet ki zindagi ese barbad nahi karna chahti thi par ''. She cried a little

I will clear all the misunderstanding between them , and make them a loveable couple like in collage everone fells jealousy after seeing their love

Nupur smiles through her tears , pinky's eyes also wet remembering maaneet's love and Then separtion

Nupur : plz pinky call geet and said her to come hear

Pinky nodded her head to yes yes

Pinky called geet and told her to come office, first she refused Bt when she said that some important papers need her sign , then she agrees

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Hear geet reached office and nupur reached her home

She goes to her bed-room and placed a LETTER beside her bed , then left home immideatly ,

Maan was not at home , after a while he came , he checked every where but he didn't saw geet , then he goes to their bed-room bt didn't see that letter

Maan : geet never goes anywhere without telling me , how can she be so irresponsible ?
he paniced

He tried to call her many times but it said SWITCHED OFF

Hear pinky took geet's phonewithout geet's notice and switch-off it
Then maan's gaze stuck on the letter , he took that letter and started to read

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IN LETTER

My love , my everything Maan

PERHAPS I LOST THE RIGHT TO SAY SORRY TO YOU , THOUGH I AM SAYING U SORRY , PLZ FORGIVE ME IF POSSIBLE , , maan's eyes got wet I KNW U HURT AFTER KNOWING TAT I DONE THAT ONLY FOR MY FRND BT TRUST ME IT WAS ONLY MY STUPIDITY RATHER I CAN SAY CHILDISHNESS AT THE AGE OF 28 YR he smiles through tears , PAR TUMNE TO ISHI BACHKANI HARKAT KARNE VALI GEET SE PYAR KIYA THA NA! U SAID ONCE THAT U LOVE MY KIDDO BEHAVIOUR , THEN Y NOW U HATING ME maan nodded his head to no no and murmered I m not hating u geet , tumhara maan chah kar bhi tum se nafrat nahi kar sakta BT ME TUMHARI NAFRAT NAHI SEH SAKTI , I M GOING MAAN I AM GOING ''. FOREVER AND EVER , PLZ DON'T TRY TO FIND ME BCOZ THIS TIME I AM GOING NEAR TO GOD , PLZ FORGIVE UR GEET

Yours and only yours love
Geet
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Maan scremed

Maan : geettt

Geet u can't do this , now how can I find u , geet plz come back to ur maan , look I forgive u , muje tumse koi gila nahi he geet
He was crying on top of his lungs

after some time he get back to reality

Maan : nahi geet , I will not allow to left me like this , kabhi nahi , u promissed me that u will stay with me forever if u will kill ur self then I will also kill my self

Maan then thinks about ruh , and think to find geet , he called pinky

Pinky :ha maan ,

Maan : pinky , is geet yhere ?

Pinky : ha maan wo 'wo..woo

Maan : speak up damm it , geet waha he kya ?

Pinky : ya maan geet is hear but 'but

Maan : but what pinky , is she alright ?

Pinky is not saying anything only stemmaring , so maan hang up the phone and rushed to the office

He rushed to office , his eyes are swollen bcoz of cry , his hair all massed up and his shirt buttons are open ,

He enter in office by screming geet's name

Maan : geettt , geettt ,

All the staff of office got up from their seats , geet was in her cabin , she too got up


Geet wishperd : maan , maan

She rushed out of the cabin by wishpering his name and maan rushing toward her cabin by shouting her name

(wah kya jodi he lol)

Both stopped when they show each other , maan took a relif breath that her geet is alright , he smiles through his tears ,

geet's eyes got wet when she show her maan infront of her that to smiling at her , she also smiles through her tears

Both is only 1 feet away from each other , they lost in each other's eyes forgatting the damm world , they started to walk toward each other , there is only 1 feet's distance but for maaneet it's like a killomitre ,
Maan immideatly took geet in his embrace , geet also hugged him back
maan's eyes got fresh tears but it was a tears of joy , happiness to see his geet alive and safe

Maan loosen hug , he cupped her face with both palm , and kissed all over her face that to infront of everyone bcoz after seeing his geet he can only see her

Geet really got happy that her maan is back after so many days , a tears of joy made their way and came out of her eyes , maan wiped it immideatly by nodded his head to no no like saying don't cry

Maan came back to reality

Maan : kya karne ja rahi thi tum ha !!! what are you going to do ? kya mera itna bhi haq nahi tumse gussa hone ka ! , isn't it my right to angry on u ?iska ye matlab nahi ki tum apni jaan de do , it doesn't mean that u kill urself , tumhari jaan ab tumhari nahi he meri he now ur soul it not only urs it's mine aur tumhe koi haq nahi meri geet ko takleef do and u have no right that u give trouble to my geet , samji tum ???

Geet smiles through her tears after listaning the word MY GEET from his mouth , and nodded her head to yes yes
He hugged her again , and kept saying I m sorry geet , I don't want to angry on u , but I could't controll my self ,I was blind in my anger that I ..

Bfor maan can say anything geet kept her palm on his mouth ,
Geet by nodded her head to no no : bas maan ab aur kuch nahi , plz don't say anything

Maan removed her palm and smiles , she also smiles back
Both totally lost in each other's eyes

Bg- mahiii mahi ve mahi mahi ve , mahiii

All staff's eyes got wet after seeing this pure love of maaneet ,

geet always behaved proffessional in the office so for them this is a new ,real geet , nupur pinky & adi's eyes also get wet bt it was tears of joy , of happiness

Suddenly geet remember maan's words "it doesn't mean that u kill urself"

Geet : maan

Maan : hmm

Geet : maan , why did u said that it doesn't mean that I kill my self , who said u that I m going to kill my self ?

Nupur bit her tungh

Maan : geet I read ur letter at home

Geet : my letter ?? bt I didn't wrote any letter

Maan showed her a letter , geet read that

Geet : maan this is not my hand writing

Maan again saw tat letter

Maan : ya this is not ur writing , wo actully I didn't noticed that in tension

Geet : but then who wrote this ?

Maan : I don't know , it was beside ur bed-side , bt it means u r not going to do anything wrong to ur self

Geet : no maan , ya I was in so much tension bcoz uwas not talking to me bt it doesn't mean that ur geet can harm her bcoz I knw if I ll harm my self it will give pain to u

Maan looks her in aweee !

Maan (sadly) : I m sorry geet , mene kuch jyada hi react kar dia

Geet (cutting in ): no maan I should say sorry it was my fault

Maan : no geet , I should say sorry , u r stiil kid bt I shouldn't take this so seriously

Geet : maan , u said me kid ?

Maan : ha , aur nahi to kya ? u always behaves like kid , rather I can say u r little then a kid

Geet : little then kid ? how can u said ?

Maan : how can I said ?? if u can behaves like kid then y can't I said ?

Geet : maan , I m not kid bt I m mother of kid

Maan : no my daughter is looks elder then u

Geet : ur daughter ?? hawww she is my daughter and she is looks elder then me ha ???

Maan : ha (with attitude)

Geet : then u '..u '.. u,,.. (she forgot the word)

Maan : me kya ha ?

Geet : then u r also younger then her

Maan : no u r

Geet : no u

Maan :u

Geet :u

Maan Loudly : u

Geet loudly :u

Both stands like this <||> <||>

Nupur adi & pinky happy to see maaneet as before and their silly fights , nok joke

: u both are younger then me and I m elder then both of u
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PART 7


: u both are younger then me and I m elder then both of u

A sweet voice came from behind

, it was ruh's voice

She run toward maaneet , maaneet see her with baby face

Nupur came forward and took ruh in her arms

Maaneet : tum dono yaha ??

Nupur : hmm , so finally u got the time to see us

Maaneet looks arround and see the smiling & teasing face of office staff , they remember that how they hug and kiss eachothr and fight with each other tat to infront of everyone they embarressed

Nupur : first of all u both should decide that on which topic u want to fight ?

Maaneet look her with joint eyebrow

Nupur : I mean who will said sorry ? or who is younger then kid ? or ruh is whose daughter ?

Maaneet smiles at eachother

Nupur : isse pehle ki tum dono pirse ek dusre ki aankho me kho jao (maaneet blushed a little), don't u want to know who wrote that letter?

Maaneet toghter : who ???

Nupur smirks

Maaneet togather shouted: youuu

Nupur : dhere dhere , I m not deaf

Maan : y ??? do u even know how I paniced ? I was so scared ?
ese bhi koi mazak karta he kya ?

Nupur : I m sorry maan , bt it was important for make u a one and to stop ur silly fight which was only bcoz of me I m sorry geet , If I didn't tell u all this then this all will not happen

Geet : no nupur it is not ur fault , it was my fault tat I do all tat
Pinky came

Pinky : oh ho ! kya nupur tu bhi suru ho gayi , now stop saying sorry to each other

Nupur : no I have to say sorry bcoz I am at fault

Maan : nahi nupur , u r nt at fault rather I can say if u didn't wrote this letter , we can never solve this knok , we shold say thanks to u , only bcoz of u we are again togather , thanks nupur

Geet : ya nupur maan is right we shold say thanks to u

Nupur : ok ok ok now noone said sorry and noone will said thank u okay ?

Maaneet : okay

Geet : cricket team ?

(she meant by group hug , they used to do it in collage )

They was about to hug when a voice came from behind
: Aur me

It was mayank's voice

Maan : abe tu ? aa ja chal

Pinky-adi : chalo

Pinky, adi , maaneet &mayank nupur hugged eachother

Ruh : again all forgate me

Maan : aa ja mera bachha

Again hugged

Loosen hug

Maan : nupur how did u know tat I love geet's kiddo behaviour and I said it to her

Nupur : are in letter na , ya u forger bt I know u tell tat in clg

Maan hugged geet side way and kissed on her cheek

Maan : I love u jaan

Geet : I love u too maan

She place a kiss on his cheek ,

All cheered : Ooo

Geet blushed and hide her face in maan's chest , maan smiles seeing her mishty's shyness

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After 6 yeurs

In the morning

Maan came after bath he only wear a track and geet combing her hair standing in front of mirror

Maan sees her angalic beauty , he goes to her and hugged her from back and kept his hand on her waist

geet kept her hand on his hand

Maan kissed on her cheeck , geet almost lost in his touch , maan smiles seeing his effect on her

Maan : geet today , u are looking beautyful

Geet: only today ? she said by making baby cute face

Maan hugged her more tight

Maan teasingly : hmm only today

Geet's mouth went O : Hawww, what ?

She turn herself to face him

Geet : achha Ji ??

Maan : ha vese aaj bhi kuch khash nahi

he teased her more

maan ran from there , geet try to catch him

geet : maan me na tumko chhodungi nahi wait

geet was running behind him , and geet fall on bad maan also lose his balance and fall on her

geet's hair was coming on her face which was blocking maan's way to watch his wife

he toughed her face and slowly removed it ,

geet ( she said with baby sad face ): leave me maan , I m not preety na , so leave me , I don't want to talk to u ,

bfor geet can say anything further maan took those complaining lips with his , first geet shocked with his sudden act but then she is also resiprocate with him

he took her lower lip and started chewing it , then took her upper lip and does the same process with it , after some time geet partade her lips to let him come inside ,

both's taungh were playing with each other , he was exploding each corner of her mouth , for him it was tasted like honey
after some time they loosen lip-lock to get air

maan : geet , u r most beautiful gift for me from god , noone is more preetier then u

geet : oh so u was pulling my leg

maan : hmm , I loved to tease u

geet smiles and pick his lips

geet : maan it's 11 yr of our marriage and u still love me same as collage

maan : not only 11 I will love u always till my last breath , and u also love as clg he na !

geet : forever and ever I love u maan

maan : I love u mishty

both hugged eachother tightly and go further for love making
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So this is the end from my side , bt maaneet story will never ends ,
how's u find this ss , plz tell me honestly ,and I hope now u get to know tat y I was said tat plz don't get nupur wrong

a biggest thanks to them who was with me from starting ,not taking anyone's name bt I really meant that , ur commant give me encourage to write further , love u guys

Silent readers , jo like karke bhag jate he and jo kike bhi nahi karte at least commnt on this last part
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THE END
Edited by Rachanachag - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
it was just awesome, you ended it so well, nice to read, i am so happy to read this,...keep writing more, all the best,...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
update finally nupur ne kuch acha kaam kiya all mu cleared



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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Awesome update!!
Aww maaneet moments were very cute!!
Me sad Story khatam ho gayi...
Nupur got them together
😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Awww nice updates..
beautiful ending..
luved maneet nok jhok's..
thanx a lot..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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just read it!!1its really good!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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arre wah double dhamal...
both parts were awesome...
nupurs idea was good...
awee maaneet kuch karne se pehle apni surrounding bhi dekh liya karo...
chalo.all sort out n maaneet together again...
nice ending
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was just mind blowing,amazing,awesome and fabulous
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Posted: 13 years ago
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finally... ek kiddish misundrstnding se bhara story MAANEET k milan k sath khatam hua 👏 👏 👏 last 2 parts were awsome Rachana 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 specially dat who is younger than RUH wala part 😆 😆 😆 bcz RUH is absolutely right... her mummy n pappa both r so kiddish na dat RUH seems more intelligent & mature than them 😳 😳 😳 thnx for giving us such a light hearted story... though I agree it has loop holes... but still at last it pesters a big grin in my face wid d ending of a happy MAANEET 😃 😃 😃

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