JEEVAN SANGINI THREAD 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on new thread.
Awesome update.
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Awesome update dear!!!!
Loved d jealousy part...
Maan is soo naughty...
plzz cont soon
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wonderfully beautiful update...

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Congrats on the new thread...
awesome part loved jealousy game both love each other so much so sweet
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awesome n wonderful update...

really loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update n also fr d pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update
love jealous Geet and than Maan
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congrats for the new thread ,Maan so romantic😳
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Congrats on the new thread..
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loved it
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PART 63

Maan took Geet in his arms seeing her with his lovely eyes while Geet blushed seeing his lovely but naughty eyes.Maan placed her on the bed & kissed her forehead & said,"So jao Geet...tum thak gayi ho...aur kal humein yeh jagah bhi dekhna hai...!"Geet saw him lovingly but said,"Nahin...abhi mujhe walk karna hai baahar...!"


And she got up but Maan said glaring at her,"Geet...tum ek hi jagah par teek ke nahi baith sakthi...!😡Chup chap ander raho...aur waise bhi tumhe raasta pata nahin hai...aur tum walk karna chahthi ho baahar...baahar andhera hai aur upar se jungle bhi...behtar hai so jao...kal dekhthe hai...!😡


Geet made baby face but said stubbornly,"Aapko nahi aana hai toh mat aayiye mujhe kyun rok rahe hai...!"And she went outside while Maan shouted at her,"Geet...meri baat toh suno...baahar bahut khatra hai...!"Geet shouted,"Mein khatro se nahi darthi...!"Maan couldn't swallow the fact that she had gone alone & closed his laptop & went outside locking the cottage.


Maan followed Geet & Geet was found near the cottage & he sighed taking deep breath.When they were walking then they lost the way to cottage & took the wrong turn which would lead to the forests.Maan & Geet started arguing seeing the parted roads to opposite direction.Geet said,"Nahi Maan humein left side jaana hai...!"Maan said politely,"Nahi Geet humein right side jaana hai...mujhe tracking karna bahut achche se aata hai...!Humein right side jaana hoga...!"



Geet argued & was angry on Maan & she went left side & Maan was going to right side but he heard a girl's screaming & he ran towards Geet.Geet was trapped between a tree & someone who was trying to snatch the belly chain from her waist.Maan pulled the man & beat him black & blue of touching his Geet & the man ran away immediately.


Maan shouted at her angrily,"Isiliye kaha ki mat jao lekin tum toh meri baat sunthi hi nahi...!"And he was abt to touch her but Geet hesitated thinking that the other man touched made her impure.Maan pulled her towards him & saw her almond eyes & kissed those lips passionately.His hands went to her waist & he squeezed it softly feeling her lips on his lips.Geet felt contended & she encircled her arms around him & came forward & plastered herself to his hard frame.



Geet moaned between those kisses feeling his hands around her body & waist & they broke apart to grab some air.Geet's eyes welled up & she burried her head on his chest & said,"Am sorry...mein aapki bat nahi maani...am really very sorry...!"Maan wiped her tears frowning & said,"Geet mujhe dard dethe yeh aasoon...jo kabhi beha mat...!"Geet nodded no immediately while Maan pecked her lips & saw around him.


They were still in forests & they were lost in the forests.On that time he felt something coming towards them as his chocolate brown eyes were sharp.They saw a rogue elephant running towards them & Geet shouted with panic,"Aaahhh...!"Maan said closing her mouth huskily,"Chup...chillao mat...warna jangli jaanwar jaag jaayenge...!"


Geet said with panic,"Aap itni badi haathi ko chodkar baake jangli jaanwar ke baare mein soch rahe ho...Hum kaise bache bataayiye is se...!"Maan said,"Run...!"And both ran immediately but the rogue elephant was faster than them but Maan remembered & said to Geet,"Geet...hum zig zagly bhaagna chaahiye...meine kahin pada tha uske baare mein...ki haathi se bachna hai toh zig zagly bhaagna chaahiye...!"



Geet nodded & they both ran in zig zag way while the rogue elephant was exhausted but both Geet & Maan climbed a banyan tree & hid them selves in the hollow of the tree.The rogue elephant stood there & waved its trunk to reach them but they didn't came to its hold & stood there only.While Geet started praying to god,"Jai hanumaan gyaan gun saagar...Jai kapish teeno lok...raam doot atulit bhal dhaama anjani putr pawan sut naama...!"


When she was repeating the mantras then Maan asked,"Yeh tum kya keh rahi ho...?With shock.Geet said innocently,"Dikhtha nahi Maan...mein Hanumaan chaalisa bol rahi hoon...!"Maan said immediately resisting his laughter,"Geet...mein tumhare jaankaari ke liye bata doon ki yeh haathi hai bandar nahi...!"Geet saw him as if he had lit a lamp in her mind & said,"Aap sahi kehrahe hai...Jai ganesh...jai ganesh...paahimaam...mat parvathi pitah mahadeva...!"


Maan was irritated & completely pissed off seeing her antics of calling all the god to help her.She even called the jesus christ to help her but no one came but the rogue elephant went from there silently.Maan sighed in his mind,"Shukur hai...us haathi ko yeh ped nahi hilaaya...nahi toh hum dono uske liye shikar ho jaathe...!"Geet was exhausted calling all the gods then she slept on Maan's shoulder peacefully.


Maan wrapped her in his embrace & kissed her forehead & nodded smiling at her naive nature.Sun dawned on the forests & Geet said feeling someone beside her who was tickling her.Geet said,"Maan...chodiye na...mujhe neend aa rahi hai...!"And she touched its arms which was soft slender & feathery.Geet wondered,"Maan's arms aren't soft slender & feathery with hairs...!


Geet slowly opened her eyes rubbing it & saw her left side & saw a baby monkey sitting beside her & showing its beady eyes to Geet.Geet saw the monkey & screamed,"Aaahhh...!"On that time Maan woke up with a jerk & he fell off the tree & he broke his waist.While the baby monkey had jumped to another branch hearing Geet's scream with panic & said,"Croe...croe...croe...!".Geet was screaming closing her eyes & she also fell off the tree & landed on Maan's arms when he got up.



Geet who had encircled her hands around his neck said opening her eyes innocently,"Good morning...!😕Maan glared at her & teased,"Nice way to say good morning to me...pehle chilla do aur mujhe ped se gira do aur khudh mere bahon mein aa kar giro aur kaho good morning...!"Geet said still scared showing towards the baby monkey,"Woh...woh...woh...bandar...!"Maan teased,"Kal to tum usse bula rahi thi na...toh tumhe milne aaya...!"


Geet glared at him with her almond eyes & turned her nose angrily with high up.Maan made her to stand on the ground & held his waist & said,"Haye babaji...mera kamar thod diya...!"Geet was concerned,"Dard ho raha hai...?"Maan answered her rudely glaring at her,"Nahi...mein toh aivanyi hava mein ud raha hoon...!"😡Maan walked forward holding his waist while Geet's eyes welled up seeing his pain.


Maan saw her & was shocked,"Tum ro kyun rahi ho...???"😲Geet said crying,"Am sorry...😭meri wajaise aapko pareshaani uthaani padi...!"😭Maan said wiping her tears,"Geet...kitni baar kaha hai ki mere saamne yeh aasoon mat bahaavon...kya tum mujhe har baar dard dena chahthi ho...?"Geet said horrified,"Nahi Maan...!"Maan said,"Toh phir yeh aasoon kyun...kuch nahi huva hai...mujhe...samjhe tum...aaj mein thodi der ke liye rest karloonga phir gohhomne chalthe hai...!"



Geet said,"Bilkul bhi nahi...aaj hum kahin nahi jaa rahe hai...jab aapka dard kam ho jaayega tab dekha jaayega...!"Maan nodded seeing his stubborn wife & nodded & was abt to go but Geet held him & made him to walk.Geet's hot breath was fanning on his lips which was driving him crazy.They somehow reached the cottage & Geet gave the hot water treatment to Maan on his waist & rubbed the waist with some hot oil so that the pain will be gone.


Maan was trying to control his urges whenever Geet moved her hands on his waist but couldn't & Geet was unaware of this & she was massaging his waist to reduce the pain.Geet was seeing outside the window & enjoying the scenery then Maan came behind her & hugged her from back.Geet pecked his lips & asked with concern,"Aap thik hai...dard nahi hai...?"Maan said making patterns on her bare waist & making moan his name with his touch,"Mein theek hoon...chalo kahi baahar chalthe hai...dinner karne ke liye...!"



Geet nodded & got ready & they both went to have dinner in the five star hotel.They had the dinner & returned to their cottage.Maan took her in his arms smiling mischievously while Geet blushed profusely seeing his lovely eyes & kissed his lips sealing her lips.They proceeded further & continued their love making session till they were exhausted & slept in each other's arms peacefully.


Precap-Shoot on Geet from an unknown person and she's badly injured.


PREVIOUS PART 62-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2924681/jeevan-sangini-thread-4?pn=2


NEXT PART 64-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2924681/jeevan-sangini-thread-4?pn=6
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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