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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow beautiful updates...
lovely ending..
thanx a lot..
waiting for the epilogue..
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 14 z shocking too me

geet esi ho jayegi

ufff i cant evn inagine dis

she is 2nd msk


part 15 z also shocking

geet is no more

ufff divzi 1 sath 2 2 jhtke

part 16
its awesome

nw its clear our geet is same

she is nt change

waiting4 next
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Priya291188

Tanks for this lovely SS & a happy ending by the way this SS started in hospital & ended in hospital
A request can you give us an epilogue where maneet live like normal husband wife alongwiht their daughter manvika just a reuest its fine if you don't as it had a happy ending


aiee le yeh ek cheez to main sochi hi ni 😉
nyways thkx
stry ka plan tha hi aisa n it rly dint came in my mind
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelic_analyst

Heyz dovzioiioii hiii
Ufff 1 of ma fav stpry ended again...
Haaayeee pne kisss for u tooo make both of th, aliveee
Boc swear throughot ds part I was thimking how mr gonna kil u wd ma bare hands nd praung god is cruella ko thoda kind bANA Adena
Waisd I shoild say one thmg
Ur story started whefe geet was lyng unconcioisly in hoxpital ncin ghe it was maan who was bedridden lolzzz


hehhehehehehehhehehehe
i was thinking the same writing 😉
n unconcious n bedridden 🤣 truly yeh mere dimag main b ni aaya 😆
bt stry ka lay out tha hi yeh 😉 so i guss sochne ki zarurt hi ni padi 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

main kaa kalu i have it written but mah net
its not wrking
m still waiting fr electrcty to cum so dat i can call for net's repair

euu m gtting hell angry now
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Posted: 13 years ago

A Life For You
Epilogue

Dreams...that was what he uses to say...his dreams come true...
Dreams she always dreamt...dreams he was about to destroy...dreams they always longed...dreams they always lived...dreams they still treasure...dreams they will always cherish...

The fairytale, the enchanting story of a prince and a princess came to an end...
Was it really and end or beginning of a new story the story where they lived with each other in the family they always loved more than their own self...where her longings ended and his remorse faded

his fractures, hi stitches were all well...he was perfectly fine but still she won't let him get up from the bed, as if he was willing to...her care, her love always had this effect on him...

Maan have your medicines now...Means NOW Mr. Maan Singh Khurana...she warned pointing her finger to him with angry eyes...making Maan back off
he looked at her eyes and a shiver ran through him...she is again angry...why god she always comes to know I skiped my medicine, I dont like it...eeewuu they suck...he made a yucky face

NOW...she gave the deadly angry glare which was enough for him, he instantly took the medicines from her hand and gulped all the in one go looking directly into her eyes praying her anger to calm down a bit...even a bit would work

that's like my good baby...she said with a cheeky smile kissing his cheeks and turns...was about to go when he held her wrist...pulling her to him...making her land on his rock hard chest

now where you going...he asked with the smirk...

Maan...she whispers feeling vulnerable of his proximity...

He smirks at his effect on her moving a little closer to her...Maan leave please...she managed to wave the words out...please...she tried her last attempt...

Manvika
Maria is there for her

Maan someone will come
So what

Maan someone will see us
No one will dare see our private moments I'll kill him

Maan please
Mishty...I want you...

The words hit her...making her shy, the blushy red cheeks were enough to make him get lost in the angelic beauty of his wife...
She closes her eyes feeling his piercing gaze on her soothing her soul, heating her desires...she hides her face in his chest hugging him tight closer to her feeling him this close all for herself was her dream...he possessively slides his hands to her bare waist pulling her closer almost crushing her into himself...while she snakes her arms round his neck...hugging as if there is no tomorrow nothing will be there if they lost this moment...

Ahm ahm...a voice came from behind making them come out of there trance...they moved there gaze just to see the teasing smile of Arjun...Maan's best friend...the sudden instant left both baffled and flushed...being caught like this, that to by Arjun...Maan knew he's gonna get killed with the teasing session...

So...I guess I dint disturb you two...Arjun commented sheepishly making Geet go embrace with beetroot cheeks, she hugged Maan back hiding her flushed face in his crock...while Maan just gave angry glare to Arjun for teasing His Mishty

oohhkiz bhabi now stop blushing i dint really saw anything...move your face else your husband gonna kill me...he smiled cheekily

while she made a pouting face to Maan to stop his teasing

You gonna stop yourself or shall i do it in my style...Maan warned

oo hoo chillax dude...am not saying anything now...Arjun came sit on the couch next to Maan

so kitni haddian tuti...Arjun jocked
Kyu you wnna repair them...he smiles back
naa yaar I wnna break the rest...Arjun winked...

You guyz carry on I'll get some snacks...Geet took a chance and gets out hiding from the embracement...
Ok bhabi you go waise bhi I won't be able to say anything, else your angry husband won't think a second before killing me...

After a while she came with snacks and coffee in her hands...
She gave coffee to both and sat silently accompanying there chat with her tea

Acha how did this happen...means 5th floor, what were you doing on terrace Man...Arjun asked out of blue sipping his coffee

wo...Maan mumbled...

Wo i was doing something on terrace when my feet slipped and I was about the process he lost his balance and tripped off...she cuts him but the remembrances of the events and the incident left him baffled and she shrieks with getting the flashes right in front of her eyes again...
He was drowned...drowned in those hazels holding so much of love for him, love she always bestowed on him unconditionally, selflessly...but he like an idiot never recognized
what have he ever done to deserve all this...
what have he ever done a good to anyone to have her in her life...yet he got her but in his ignorance he ruined her under his ego...his life style...himself he ruined her to win her back

He looks into her eyes lovingly with all the emotions flickering on the corner of his eyes promising to redo everything with his eyes...promising never to let her cry


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it was late night Maan was alone in room looking outside the window deep into the dark skies crossing his arms round his chest...lost in his thoughts still wondering about his deeds, her love, his mistakes, her longings...about his life...
Those deep dark eyes were blankly looking into that dark sky finding answers looking for some punishment for his own deeds

when two soft hands came creping round his toned hard chest stroking his senses...he closed his eyes in contentment...knowing she is here, she was here and whatever it may be she will be there for him...he caressed her hands slightly over his chest...

She came more close crushing herself into him from back and kissed his back over the exposed vest...love you...

That was it he lost his control and turns round looking deep into her eyes, finding answers of his quries...

She knew what he is feeling, what is his inner soul yarning for, what turmoil his heart was having inside...yet he wanted him to get rid of it...this remorse, self hatred she wanted to vanish even the trace of it...

Maan...she whispers...

Am sorry...am sorry...am sorry...he mumbles and hugged her tight shedding those pearls meant to slit her apart...
Am sorry, am really sorry jaan...please will you ever forgive me...please mishty punish me...

She closed her eyes in helplessness...she knew, she always knew the day he'll come to know about his deeds, his mistakes his remorse will kill him inside and this was what she wanted to save him from...she opened her eyes in determination, she have to do it, she will do it...take HER Maan away from all this

she moved a little away breaking the hug looking into his eyes...cupping his face in her palms she looked into his eyes...

Maan you'll have to forget it

am sorry...am really sorry...he broke into tears thumping on ground holding her waist...

Maan...you will forget this...she said sitting down beside him...holding him from his shoulders...

He shook his head in denial...I can't forgive myself...
I cant...he whispers...

You will...

Am sorr...but she cut him slamming her lips over his hard suppressing his words, taking his pains...she chewed nibbled his lips in urgency...in a need to take all his hurt away...she snakes her arms round his neck pulling him closer and closer with each second...slowly making his fingers way to his hairs slowly massaging his hairs...while he drowned in her kiss, the kiss he wished always...Maan couldn't deny her...specially when he needed the same...he let her force her lips on his...their lips met sending shivers down to their entire existence...creating a havoc letting them drown in the ecstasy of their love

His hands went around her waist...pulling her closer to his body...She parted her lips as he tucked her closer...this time he took the charge and she let him do that knowing this is the only way to let him drift his mind away...his lips rubbed over hers continuously trying to feel them all the way possible...she knew all he need right now is her...ONLY HER

His tongue rolled over lips...making them moist while his teeth sunk into her skin driving her insane

Tears down from his eyes as his own filthy deeds came in front of his eyes

His tongue broke d barrier n moved in to meet her tongue...their tongue tasted heavenly to each other...they touched each other with love, longingness, pain...they needed it more than anything they could ever ask for...

maan kissed her deeply till his tongue searched every hidden corner of her mouth... she started to kiss him with same passion she never knew she had...all she needed was maan...HER MAAN

His teeth nip down on her lower lip...she groaned into his...and he sucks her lips to sooth her pain with his tongue...He caressed the silky inner lining of her lower lip by his tongue

He pulled out after a long time when they felt loss of breaths...but he couldn't part away from her...His hand dipped into her waist as he started to rub her waist over her dress irritated by the piece of cloth...while his lips started evading her neck and skin with her moist kisses

Maan...she moaned and he opens her eyes a little and looks deep into her eyes

What else he needed eer in life her pure submission was there, the love she always had for him...he stood up still looking deep into his eyes and scooped her into his arms holding her tight not letting anything break their eye contact...he kept her on the bed and came rolling onto her...

maan held her both hands tight in 1 place wanting to be dominant on her while his lips passed through every inch on her face..Pecking everywhere...geet looked up in submission as his lips touched her right in d middle on her throat... his teeth held skin into his teeth followed by his moist lips dat he rubbed desperately onto to it...

He moved from 1 side to another kissing n biting everywhere on her neck...her skin became red n alive under his touch... his tongue licked d skin behind her ears and she wriggled under him losing all d self control...his kisses only became intense and her desiring eyes were adding onto it

She moaned with his each bite while his licking and sucking drove her insane...she turned giving him enough space for his hands to snake her back passionate...

Not able to control anymore...he snapped open d string of her

Maan...she whispered...

Wildly bending down, he held onto d end of shirt ripping it apart in two pieces with all d force he had...

geet gasped with his move closing her eyes back in submission...he threw her shirt away and fell back on her...giving a deep kiss right on d pulse on her nape...her almost bare skin shivered under his weight...while his hands moved passionately onto d bare skin of her back...as his teeth sucked onto her collar bone...His lips moved from her collar bone to her shoulders...kissing her and tasting her all d way...he bite the strap with his teeth...

Tears were still making their way down his eyes...but she knew she have to fade this in this moment else she will not be able to get him back from the deep ocean of remorse he was drowning in

Her hands went to his shirt and started to unbutton them...she unbuttoned his shirt and removed it away from him leaving him bare with his toned body...her hands went around his back snaked them passionate...feeling his skin in her smooth fingers, digging her nails in them...Her hands desperately rubbed him everywhere...moving from his waist to his back and above...

It was then she lost it...he came back to her sucking needing her...while his hands rubbed on the hook of her bra and finally broke open it...

She hugged his tight closer...her cheeks flushed with the thought of feeling him close his Maan was close to her...JUST HIS MAAN...the thought gave goose bumps in her stomach...maan crushed her closer into his arms while his hands snaked her complete bare back...

His tears rolled down moistening her neck and she held him even closer...geet's heart cried along with him...you have to Maan and you will...she said in determination

She rolled on top of him... she smashed her lips onto his..kissing b biting him harshly as possible...her hands rubbed onto his chest desperately..wantting to feel him all d wild way possible..leaving his tempting lips, she moved down kissing her way till she reached his nipple and bite hard on it...

geet...maan groaned in pain and pleasure...rolling on top of her again...

maan stared right through her eyes as his fingers slowly caressed her upper chest...making smooth patterns... his fingers touch d hard nipple gently...Caressing it...then walking to another one...his sudden gentleness just drove her crazy...it was new, new for her...she wanted him to be harsh n passionate d way he always was...but his gentleness was creating a havoc with a certain restlessness in him

He planted a kiss on her throat and started to move down...he bite everywhere he kissed...and he sucked everywhere he bite...he kisses passed right through her valley but dint touched her curves..she wriggled in passion underneath him till his kisses reached her tummy...her stomach went in as she felt his tongue rolling on to her belly button and moving in...he sucked and latched her stomach with his own sweet time...she held her breaths till his tongue left her belly button and finally coming back d same way...

He came to her curves and planted a smooth kiss at d climbing and started placing sensuous kisses on her curves climbing up...he latched, sucked and kissed her curves...and came to other...geet cried in desperation and held his hairs harshly into her fist...forcing his lips on d hard nipple...he bite her already swollen nipple...his tongue relished...Licked...sucked each inch...maan relish her nipple with his own sweet time and finally moved to another to repeat it again and again

geet wriggled her head from 1 side to another...Pulling his hairs as harshly as possible...digging her nails ruthlessly into his chest while he latched her nipples...became red and swollen under his raw touch leaving her breathless..

Moving down kissing his way to her tummy...he let his hand climb on her curves...and his fingers pinched d already swollen...wet and hard nipples...making her cry in pleasure...he cupped her curves into his palm and kneaded them in every sensuous way possible...his fingers rubbed d swollen and wet nipples again n again

Rubbing his hands down her arms..his hands reached her tummy and he snapped open d string of her salwar...she stared at him motionless as his hands went to her salwar and pulled it down...leaving her with only barrier..

She felt contented having HER...ONLY HER MAAN so close was a dream come true for her...her dreams were coming true today...smiling in tears...she pulled him even closer on her...and maan landed all his weight on her almost bare body...she shivered under his manly touch...he rubbed himself on her and she felt his hardness rubbing her feminity

plz maan..,she cried in happiness tears and desperation...

Bending down, he took her lips into his for a smooth and caring kiss while her hands went to his pants and pulled it out...geet's hands crawled to his chest and she pulled him back on top of her wanting to get crushed under his weight...

his hands walked on to her waist...moving down ..making patterns on her smooth skin till he reached her thighs...lost in d passion, maan possessively held her thigh and pulled his to snake his bare waist...breathing and moaning his name, geet just went along...

Goose bumps passed through her stomach when his hands wandered on to her lower waist...somehow wanting to get rid of that last bit of barrier...he let his fingers move between her legs and squeezed her feminity..

maan...geet gasped as his finger filled the difference while his lips sealed hers...they kissed to each other while maan's hands went crazy over her...rubbing her delicate skin desperately

Maan please...she cried...and maan almost ripped the last barrier not able to bear anymore...pulling away his own boxer, maan adjusted himself on her feminity...and entered her slowly at first letting her adjust to him and then thrust in again with force...She screamed as he touched her soul..bending on her, maan caressed his lips with hers in soothing manner and thrust her again...

Geet closed her eyes in pain n pleasure while her nails pierced his shoulders...

Soon the pain n screamed were converted into pleasures and moans as Maan started to move gradually into her...tears of happiness n delight rolled down from her eyes as she stared into his dark eyes with all the love she had...finally he was her ONLY HER...the thought gave her all the happiness she ever longed for...her pains, longings, deceives, hurt vanished in his warmth...

Hr could never ask anything else ever in his life after this moment...her warmth gave him the strength to fight against any possible damn thing

From now they both knew they will be leading A LIFE JUST FOR OTHER...promising A LIFE FOR YOU

maan saw d tears rolling from her eyes and licked them with his tongue...her tears were precious than any diamond he could ever treasure...how would he let them go waste like this...he would rather drink them...

as they felt there climax he drove him inside her with more passion, and possessive...his thrust only became aggressive and demanding yet submissive... he just couldn't stop himself from being aggressive on her...

He was not at all gentle...but she couldn't stop him knowing or shall I say she dint wanted him to stop...his every strong thrust made her realize how much he craved for her all thy while...how much he needed her...with each thrust he went deep n deep inside till their bodies felt almost joined into each other...

His hand went under her thigh and spread her more for him while his other hand mercilessly squeezing her curve...crushing his lips on it to suck them passionately...his passionate love make just made her forget d entire world...while her moaning his name didn't seem to end..

Their love making became intense, passionate and wild with every passing moment...while both cried out in pleasure as they felt there orgasm...the bliss to be one...ONE IN REAL SENSE

Am sorry jaan...I won't do it again...mumbled maan in his high breaths...n geet could only hear his raced heart beats...but she smiled naughtily with closed eyes and whispered...What if I want you to do it same way every day...

He shook his head and kissed her forhead...I love you

I love you more...she smiled showing her full dimples

geet laid on bed while maan collapsed on her trying to catch his breath...pulling her closer holding her waist possessively...still lost in d magical feeling...their bodies crushed into each other's...silently catching their breaths...

Maan...she said with closed eyes...

This time it's my turn to name him...she shied...

Hmm...he asked in confusion

Oye jhalle...ab to sudhar jao...you becoming dada again...she frowned

And he lost his expression

Showing any expression won't be right he just turned her and kissed her tight on her lips mumbling...I won't repeat my mistakes this time Geet

Promise

Pakka wala...yaa MSK wala...she asked in his mouth with a smirk

Geet ke Maan wala...he kissed her forehead again and took her on his chest...sleeping peacefully contented...

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MK...I need my bornvita...an angry voice roared the whole KM...yow have been making it since Lowwwng my bournvita...a cute little...oops angry little doll...ooppss angry little lioness marched the kitchen area with those cute nose pouting dangerously and that hands kept hardly on those little little hips giving a deadly glare to the person she was searching...

Maan...I told you I'll help but nopes you won't let me come down see here your princess all cranky mode now...you are the one who messed her up...Geet came to the kitchen with her cute little bump...looking extremely adorable and cute in her cute loose pink top with her salwaar...looking at the little angry devil and then turning to move have a glimpse of her husband...

Where your dadda...Geet asked Manvika turning her head right to left...
I dint know...the little beast shrugged of her shoulder

Aie lo...we finding your dad and here he's missing...Geet scratched her head...

Maan where you...

Here...and he get up from the beneath the basement shelf...covered with chocolate floor and Choc chips, wet hands dripping with chocolate sauce 'may be'...looking a total mess
having an empty dirty burnt sauce pan in one hand and an empty glass...with little traces of Choc milk in it
smiling idiotically...foolishly at his own deed...

The two gorgeous loves of his life looked at each other and then the man with most cutest baby face...and burst out in laughter

Hello you two suppose to praise my effort not make fun of mine...that's rude...he pouted...

Aoww my baby Maan Singh Khurana then who told you to come in kitchen and make bournvita for your princess I was here na...you could have let me in...Geet said still laughing coming close to her cute husband ruffling her hairs to get those Choc chips out...

NO...you not allowed to work...anyways you pregnant and you shouldn't do these works...you suppose to rest...Maria is out so I can at least make milk for my princess

In sauce pan...Geet asked muffling her laughter...

So...he asked in confusion...we make milk in it na...so what a big deal...Maan asked with confusion oozing out his face...

Aoww he was made to eat up alive...

She smile shaking her head...leave I'll do it...and takes all the utensils from him and keeps them aside...you go change...

I think I should...he looked at his state and the mess he made

by the way...You smelling like chocolate cake...she winked...

So...you wanna have some chocolate late as your sweet dish tonight...he smirked jerking her holding her waist...

Ekscuze me he iz mah MK...A little voice got their attention when they turned to see the little jealous beast moving away...

Aoww my princess...he leaves Geet and moves to hold Manvika in his embrace

howww Maan you promised you'll never leave me...and here she's snatching you...your all mine...Geet pouted

he shaked his head and moves to hold the other lovely lady jerking her waist...
Yap am all yours...and she's all our...am her Mk and your Maan...
He pecked Manvika's cheek and then Geet's lips, while Geet covered Manvika's eyes

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Maan...
Hmmm...

Maan...she again calls him...yaa Jaan lemme sleep na am really tired please...Maan tucks her more close

She pouted at his ignorance but then bits her lips knowing her way out

Aahh...she screams a little, but enough to make THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA PANIC

jaan...what happen pain...where...stomach
OMG labor pain...lemme call police...ohh...sorry ambulance...he said all in panic checking her each and every place while she just giggles

What...you were screaming and now you...and then it hit him

NOT AGAIN PLEASE...he rolled his eyes
while she just made an innocent face

what you craving for TODAY...he gave a lopsided look

Makta kulfi

What...it actually made Maan baffled...Matka Kulfi, at 2 in mid night and that to in winters...his eyes go wide

No...he said in utter disbelieve
hmm...she shook her head like a baby

Jaan...please
Maan...

Yes
No
Yes
No
YES
NO
NO
YES
see you agreed...she gave a cheeky look

and it hit him hard...Nooo...that was cheating...he gave a glare but she simply shrugged it off

Maan...

Jaan listen...
1st...winters
2nd...Makta kulfi
3rd...jaan 2am
n 4th...baby Delhi bhi neeni kar ra hai lemme sleep na
It's next to Impossible...he gave a baby face...
but NOT Impossible...she said cheekily

NO...he said determined
Maan...she called in the huskiest voice possible and he knew it's his defeat

please...
Jaanu...

Fine...and he picked his trousers up, pulling his vest on, grabbing his celphone dialing a no.

Maan what you doing
calling adi what else

what...have you seen the time...it's 2am...
Exactly my point...2 A.M.

maan...
What...

Am your wife, am your love, this your baby, we your responsibility...
So you won't call adi sir...she told pointing her finger to him...pocking his shoulder

so what else am I suppose to do...
Take me out with you...she smiles lovingly

adi will help...but left it incomplete looking at her deadly looks...

Fine...he grabbed the keys and took her with him out...and made her sit comfortably in car...and took the wheels in hand

now where shall we go...

Chandni chawk wali wo pammi street wander ki kulfi...she said in a dreamy voice licking her lips leaving Maan a mini heart attack

and he practically screamed what

NO
YES
NO
YES
NO
NO
YES
see you agreed...and looked again smiling sheepishly

not again
yes again...

And started the wheels...

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she relished her kulfi licking, easting her kulfi...while Maan can't imagine
at 2am in mid night he practically made a street wander get up open his cart and give them KULFI just because his Queen, Geet had this pregnancy craving...

but the glow, the spark in those eyes while licking each dripping drop made it worthy...he can do anything and everything for that...
Lost in those licking lips, those glowing eyes he drooled openly over his own wife...

While she now and then looked at him smirking showing him a bite then taking it away winking showing her tongue to him then cutely make him lick a bite then taking more then what calls 10 bites

finally finishing her nth kulfi ends and he watches her sleeping on his shoulder still nibbling one kulfi in hand like a small kid

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Jaan see na only two days...justto days left please, please please please...he pleaded holding her hand while she looks at him in utter disbelieve

Maan...

Yaa mishty see...only two days...today it's 29th nov our wedding anniversary is at 1st dec

Please baby just two days...he pleaded while she screams in labor

Hell Maan you insane...am dying of pain and you want me to suffer this two more days...I so wnna kill you she said in cranky irritated voice on his continuous cribbing for delaying her labor pains 2 more days

Sir please...doctor said just to earn a deadly glare from Maan

Jaan see na we will get a new reason to celebrate the birthday of our baby and our wedding and her...but left incomplete seeing the angry glare of his wiffy

Wo...I mean and his...his, our baby boy right his birthday will be on the same day na

Please baby just 2 days

Please please please

You know na you very strong you can bear this pain please...Maan held her hand tight

Maan please someone slap him or else am gonna kill him...she gave a deadly glare in her painful convulsions

What...can't you do this much...see just this much...he showed her the slight gap between his two fingers

Maan...get lost

Sir please we need to go fast please...doctor said pulling the stretcher from Maan's strong grip just to earn an angry deadly glare

Am talking to my wife get it...you stay off...Maan said pointing his finger towards doctor

What...she calmed herself down to catch a little bit air and speek...jaan listem am really dying of this pain her...she gasped...

Please...and once again screamed just to kill the nuts out of Maan

Fine fine...you go but please take care of yourself

Please...Maan said with the concern oozing out his face

And you better take care of her...or else...Maan threatened doctor making her gulp hard

They started dragging the stretcher but again got stuck between by Maan with a thoughtful face

What...?? Geet said in utter rage now

I guess that's not fine...I agreed one thing of yours now pay me back with my demands...Geet looked at him with utter disbelieve...what was he even thinking am here lying half dead and he dealing with me

He is insane..totally insane...and chucked at her own thought

And am insanely in love with this Mad Maan Singh Khurana...

I want a baby girl now...final...a baby girl only and only...Maan said pouting like a baby cribbing for his favorite chocolate...and looked away folding his hands on chest...

The doctors, staff, nurses, wardboy, the spectators and even his mishty looked at him in shock, aow, astonishment, bewilderment, amazed, perpelexed

He is Mad...and here it comes the slap on doctors face and he looked at Geet who was buring in rage and anger, in shock now...what...marked all over her face...what she did to earn a slap

And here Geet again screams on top of her voice hiding the smirky lopsided smile on her face to slap doctor who called husband Mad...Overshadowing her deed with her pain now

Which were enough for Maan to panic...

What the hell you people waiting for go get in OT...Maan screamed getting the whole world on his head and the staff dragged the stretcher to OT...

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Half an hour...

What take so much time...

45 minutes...

Grrhhh it's so a annoying I want my mishthy and our baby now means now...

One hour...

Is she fine..godd why you giving her so much pain cant it be pain free please

1 hour 15 minutes...

Am gonna kill this doctor now...why my jaan screaming in so much pain

One and a half hour...

Baba ji...

1 hour 45 minutes...

Yaar yeh kitna der lahh ri hai meri mishty ki screams they meant to kill me now...she fine...

Two hour...

And finally he heard her final scream accompanying by the melody mixed with the cry of the little one their baby...their new life...and he pushes his hairs behind with the most gorgeous and the satisfying smile enchanting his handsome face with the thought of love and contentment filled

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He enters the room she was shifted and the sight was what he always wished, he prayed it the same way...

His Geet lying on the bed with the little piece of their heart close to her heart kissing smiling with that lone tear of happiness draining her face...he shakes his head wipping his own tears...and paced near them with the small steps and reached kissing her forehead

Thanks Jaan...Maan whispered on her forehead while she kissed his cheeks and then smiled naughtily and teased

Thanks for what I did not fulfill any of the demand you wished, neither did I waited for 2 days nor it's a baby girl of yours...she winked

Thanks for filling me...filling my life with love...scooping the little ball in his hands and smiled kissing his nose

He is replica of his Dadda...Geet smiled pulling Maan on bed beside her hugging him placing her head on his chest playing with the hands of the little blue cotton ball

I never knew holding your SON can als give you so much love...

That's why I was saying we shall have a baby boy...see am always right...Geet gave a cheeky dimple smile...

They looked in each other's eyes and then heard the little whimper of the baby...and looked at him but he was again in his deep sleeps...and starts laughing teasing each other's tensed looks

Oyeee hello he is mah bowhew and yow two fowgot mah...the little cranky voice broke there trance just to witness the little beast standing on the door with her hands on her hips with Maria...

Aoww my baby come to mumma see your brother was waiting for you...Geet extended her hands to her

While Maria came and took the baby in her hands and smiled wishing the two congrakes with flowers...

Whats his name...she asked

Geetansh...Maan said lost in the baby...while Geet smiled with tears...and adored the love he bestowed on her...

I remembered it...Maan said with a low voice

Am sorry

And she kissed his cheeks and hugged him tight...you promised...she pouted...and both hugged feeling each other...

While she mouthed Maria thanks she was her strength in all the while she was the one who always stood beside her...and Maria blinked her lashes saying she will be their always

Ooo Manvika katti with you two he is mah MK...Manvika faired anger

Nopes he is mah Maan...

And here goes the never ending Mother daughter fight

Mah MK

My Maan

Mah MK

My Maan

Mah MK

My Maan

Mah MK

My Maan

Mah MK

My Maan

And Manvika pops in Maan's lap saying...mah MK

howww Maan you promised you'll never leave me...and here she's snatching you...your all mine...Geet pouted

he shaked his head and moves to hold the other lovely lady jerking her waist...
Yap am all yours...and she's all our...am her Mk and your Maan...
He pecked Manvika's cheek and then Geet's lips, while Geet covered Manvika's eyes

I love you...

I love you more...

And here the fairy tales end...

Living A Life For You...

*****************************************************************

I know it was a painful journey throughout but yap hope to do jusitce with all your tears now 😃 thanks for supporting and helping me throughout luv u all...really do love you all


and i really req u all olease please i want all ut coments and like please mele cuto silent readers help it yaara


❤️Divzi sighning off

Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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awesome mindblowing 😍 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow divz...luv ya baby...muahhh
such an amazing epilogue...👏👏👏 luvd it completely...
maan making bournvita in sauce pan...😆😆😆...
had extreme fun in reading that one...
but thats MSK's style na...
thank you so much for entertaining us this much...
please continue writing many stories like this...
gonna miss this ff...
luv ya...😳😳😳
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aww

just too good divz

u made me remember Dooriyan...

god i miss u dooriyan...

and now i vil miss A life for U

awesum concept and awesum story...

u rocked

😛




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