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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: mandy15

awesum:) 👏

loved it:)😊😊



thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz

osumeee yaara

luvd it

aaoww shoo cute na maaneet gurti
suprb
conti soon 😉



thanks yaar... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: ritusoni2233

me too lov dis yr


maaneet n gurti 1 sath

wowww

waiting 4 next



thanks ritu dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: kamiya

wow





thnx for the pm dear



thanks dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



Awesome OS...

rare concept...

continue soon...

thanx for pm...



thanks kiran. yeah rare concept...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: fatema_007

nice...plz do continue soon 😃



thanks dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Audiwalia

Awesome start...where is 2nd part...



thanks dear..
2nd part will update at night...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: coolmaan

it was gr8 luuuv it very sweet want to no more wat happen

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awww thanks a lot dear...
loved all pics...
hugs to you...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49


part-2



Maan-aah geet.. yeah I am curious.. any problem.. we are friends na.. so you can tell us' geet smied and felt embarrassed at her blunt reply' she is the one who is observing him top to bottom and now she is blaming him in her mind' this is not right' .

Geet-umm maan, I am from Mumbai but my native pace is Punjab'

Maan-so you are Punjabi' she nodded.. he thought tabhi to sherni hai' Punjab ki sherni'

Geet-and you guys?

Maan-like you' I belongs to delhi but lives here'.

Drashti-I am from mumbai' trio became friends'.

Maan-so geet' we are now friends na?

Geet-yeah, ofcourse'.

Maan-so let's have a coffee' (maan babu koi mauka nahi chhodte time spend karne ka')

Geet-okay.. let's go'. Trio left to the canteen and had their coffee'

Later in the day she got to know about the schedule and about the faculty, 3 days classes and 3 days projects & seminars in a week' there is no class today only for get together.. geet found it nice.. actually he is liking the environment moreover she likes seniors(wink)' net day principal called maan, as principal likes him so much.. he is so much intelligent and has a different status in this college.. all the faculty like him and some lady faculty drooled over him,,,, but he started drool over geet' principal told him that introduce all the students to the seniors and made them understand about the rules of this college' principal trust him so much.. he is a star of this college.. best in everything..you know all about him like he is rude and arrogant but sometimes he is very polite towards others' maan said ok to principal and went out.. he arranged everything.. the introduction session went well'. A week passed like this' maan & geet drooled over to each other secretly from far away, never say much about the things which is avoidable for them' but when she saw him, her breath got stuck in her throat'. She borrowed notes from him knowingly' she can borrow notes from drashti but no.. she only went to maan so that she can talk to him' but maan is maan' he gave her wrong notes sometimes so that she came again to him and she did the same' she made a new friend aditya (adi). He is so sweet just like a brother for her.. she has no brother and adi has not any sister so both of them found a brother & sister to each other' next day geet is in library making some notes.. college is going to be close'. Everyone is leaving slowly-2 but the library is open till 6pm.. on the other hand maan & drashti are in music hall' maan is playing violin and drashti is busy in her cell chewing her gum' this college is not only for management, several streams are there'(I don't know is such kinda college exist or not which has several streams, this is only my imagination'.) then drashti got a call and went out.. after talking , she came inside and hug maan happily' maan opened his eyes and looked at her happy face'

Maan-why are you so happy D?

Drashti-maan, my photographer called me, the date has been fixed of my next photo shoot'

Maan-ohh wow.. congrats.. you must be waiting for this'

Drashti-yeah.. now I am so happy'

Maan-which magazine?

Drashti-zing magazine

Maan-ohh wow'

Drashti-now, I have to go.. tomorrow is my photo shoot .. so have to prepare so many things' both bid bye together' it's 5:45 pm now'. Man came out from music hall and went towards the library.. he want to clear some doubts on one topic.. so he has to pick ****** book for clearing his doubts' he went inside and that time geet got up and went in one corner of library for find one book which she needed in her notes' there are some latest editions and maan went in another corner for find his book' the library seems empty like no one is there.. the librarian came there and found it empty.. he closed the lights and closed the library'. Geet afraid suddenly because the sudden lights off' she jumped back in fear' and maan looked her and there why this lights went off? He came out from there and heard some noise of anklets' he thought who is here? Geet is searching the way slowly-2' on the other hand'..

Ruk jao''peoples turn and followed the voice'.. all looked at gurmeet'. Dulhan's father stood and all the guests also stood' Ye shaadi nahi ho sakti'. gurmeet said with his determinant voice'.

Dulhan's brother came.. who the hell are you to stop this marriage?

I am her love' she loves me a lot'. Dulhan's father came' oye bakwaas na kar' chal dafa ho yaha se'

Aap log soniya ki shaadi jabardasti nahi kar sakte.. she is adult and she has full right to take her decision' gurmeet said'.

Oye hum nahi maante aisa kuch' aur ye shaadi soniya ki marzi se hi ho rahi hai' dulhan's brother said' soniya is crying.. she loves him a lot' but she is in pressure of her family' gurmeet is taking his steps towards soniya' soniya sirf meri hai' aur meri hi rahegi' bolo soniya tumhara kya faisla hai'? gurmeet asked'. I love you gurmeet.. I can't live without you'. Please mujhe yaha se le jao.. she is begging from him' he smiled and nodded'. .he is taking further steps but soniya's bother came with some another mans' one man kicked him on his back' gurmeet fell down on the land '. Gurmeet'. Soniya shouts' she is about ran towards gurmeet but her father caught her' pandit ji aap mantra padhna shuru kijiye' her father said'.

Nahi papa.. don't do this to me.. papa I love him.. please papa' soniya is begging'. Chup kar' tujhe sidhanta ke sath shaadi karni hi padegi' her father said.. while another man kicked gurmeet again'

Papa' mai shaadi ke liye ready hu par please gurmeet ko chhod do' usey mat maaro' soniya said' she is worried for him'

Nahi soniya.. tum aisa kuch nahi karogi'. Don't do this' you are only mine.. only mine' said gurmeet' her father said' mat maro usey par chhodna mat.. pakad kar rakho' her father said'. The marriage has been started'. Pandit ji start chanting mantras'. Nooo' don't do this soniya' gurmeet shout'. Dulha and dulhan stood for pheras'. An idea came in gurmeet's mind' he is palying like he is feeling dizzy' another men loosen ther hold on his arms and he fell down on land like he became faint' all looked at him' he laid there'. Slowly-2 he removed his belt from his jeans'. People's attention went to the marriage and in a fraction of second gurmeet stood removed his belt and start beating them furiously' one man attacked on his from behind but he is too fast for him.. he dig his elbow in his chest and he fell down on the ground holding his chest' he is beating another man with his belt then 3rd man came ther but gurmeet kicked him on his private place.. he thumped on the ground holding himself'. He almost beated all the mans of her brother then her brother came and punched gurmeet on his face.. blood oozed out from the corner of his lip'. But he didn't care and gurmeet held her bother's collar' 5th phera is going on' he saw the gun in his pant.. in a fraction of sec , he removed the gun from his pant and point on her bother's head' all horrified seeing this scene' he move towards the mandap taking her bother with him' all moved from his way' he said to her father that open the knot of their clthes' her father did the same' gurmeet take that cloth and tied the knot with the soniya's dupatta'. He said to pandit..

Gurmeet-pandit ji, fir se mantra shuru kijiye' poor pandit' he did the same' gurmeet held her hand and in his other hand he is holding the gun' they both start taking phere around the fire' 7 pheras are complete' he filled her maang with his blood and tied his chain around her neck'. Now they are married' gurmeet took her with him showing the gun to other.. they can't do much things except shouting to him'. Now they are married'. Both went to their secret place' soniya cleaned his wound and he held her hand in pain' after some time gurmeet played a song in his mobile'

Mere Bina

Rehne laga hun

Teri hawaon me

Behne laga hun

jaane main kaise

tera hua hu

mujhe to lagta hai main shayad tere dil ki dua hu

Haan

Tujhko jo paaya ahan

To jeena aaya

Ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye bas jaye hum Dono ke darmiyaaan

He bend on his knees and asking her for a dance' both love each other to the core' she gave her hand in his hand' gurmeet held soniya's hand and stood up' he put her both hands on his shoulders and he held her from her waist'. They start moving slowly-2 according to the beat of the song'..

Pehle se zyada

Main jee raha hu

Now i am very happy before after marrried with you'

Jabse main tere dil se juda hu

Rahon pe teri main to chala hu

Tu meri manzil hai tere kadmon pe bas rukne laga hu

Tujhko jo paaya ahan

To jeena aaya

Ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye bas jaye hum Dono ke darmiyaaan'

I don't know when my heart is attached with your heart but it looks so perfect being with you'. I am walking with you on your way'

Tujhko jo paaya ahan

To jeena aaya

Ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye bas jaye hum Dono ke darmiyaaan

Teri nazar me nayi si adaa hai

Naya sa nasha bhhi ghula hai

He looked in he reyes' and lost.. her deep sky blue eyes'. He found something new feeling in her eyes.. a new excitement'.

Kayi dino se bandha tha baadal jo

Tere hi baalon me khula hai

His hand slowly-2 went in her hairs and set her strands behind her ear'..

Teri hadon me meri basar hai

Ab tujhe bhi

Janu kidhar hai

Jahan rahe tu main wo jahan hu

Jise jiye tu main wo sama hun

Teri waja se naya naya hu

You are my world and i am yours'. Today broke the limits between us'

Pehle kaha na maine ab ye tumse kehne laga Hun..aaa

Tujhko jo paaya ahan

To jeena aaya

Ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye bas jaye hum Dono ke darmiyaaan

I didn't said you before how I was feeling when I saw you first time but today I'll tell you'

Tujhko jo paaya ahan

To jeena aaya

Ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye bas jaye hum Dono ke darmiyaaan.

On the other hand drashti reached to her home and suhaasi & drashti both entered in their house together' suhaasi, drashti's bhabhi'.

Drashti-hey bhabhi, you came early today? (guys I don't know that from which name dd called suhaasi coz dono ko sath kabhi dekha nahi hai.. niether in any party nor in any nterview' so this is my imagination' if you guys are not confortable to it then pls take it in your way' you can think from which name dd called suhaasi')

Suhaasi-hii drashti' haa actually aaj director ne jaldi pack up kar diya'

Drashti-ohh thank god.. you came early.. I have some work with you'. Waise hows your show going on?

Suhaasi-it's going nice..as usual'

Drashti-yeah.. I have seen that' Iqbal khan entered in your show na?

Suhaasi-yeah'. He is too good in his work'

Drashti-wo to dekhne se hi pate chalta hai'

Suhaasi-okay' have you got any new assignment?

Drashti-yeah.. some photo shoots are lined up for some magazines and 1 calender photo shoot also'

Suhaasi-ohh.. great' hows maan? He didn't came here from a long time..

Drashti-he is fine' yeah he is little busy.. business and studies n all' poor baby' busy rehta hai full day'.

Suhaasi-ohh.. chalo lets get freshn up'

Drahsti-okay.. you go' I have some work'.


precap

what will happen in library?

gurti meeting and photo shoot


tell me friends hows this?
i know you will be confuse after reading it
but it'll clear in next update...
waiting for your response.
love neha

Edited by neha5058 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yeah me 1st 4 the first tym...loved it...
Edited by Vinsh23 - 13 years ago

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