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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it ,i hope'hum tum ek kamre mein bandh ho 'sequence hoga😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part-3



Gurmeet and soniya hugged to each other lost in their world then the DIRECTOR said CUT… both broke the hug and now took a relief… director said well shot gurmeet and anushka… gurmeet and anushka doing a movie together.. gurmeet has a real name in the movie while anushka's character's name is soniya… it was the last shot of the day and also the movie… after the hug movie has been finished….. director shook his hand to gurmeet and anushka and with other actors too… director said pack up and all packed up their stuffs and left to their respective places… while going to home , gurmeet is trying to call someone but the number is going unreachable…. He murmured that why this number is going unreachable? I have a very important issue and want to discuss but this network… god… he became very restless because he is worried for his best friend and the phone of his best friend can never be unreachable but why today? Well what he can do now.. he gave up and move to his apartment… while in the library… geet get scared due to darkness and the fact is… she afraid from the darkness… and top of that no one is in the library and door is also closed… and she is here all alone but there is one person also… geet is coming out slowly-2 from the place where she was and so maan also… he listen the slow sound of payal which is like a music system for him.. he thought maan library me bhootni.. no no maan.. what are you thinking? You are believing on bhoots… no way.. (neha is thinking that bhoot ulta maan singh khurana ki bari-2 aankhein dekhkar dar kar bhaag jayega… lol) geet starts shivering due to fear in darkness ,, she tried to speak something but nothing is coming out from her mouth… her throat went dry and voice stuck in her throat… maan is approaching her side without knowing but he is following the seductive sound of payal which is making him crazy… haaye his heart is throbbing against his chest rapidly.. she heard the shoe sound which is approaching her.. he clutched her dupatta tightly.. she gulped hard , cutely looked at her babaji in fear.. shoot a prayer under the breath…. babaji raksha karna haan…geet tu dar mat. Jo bhi ho darna mat.. tub hi Punjab ke sherni hai.. she took a deep breath and move ahead…maan is some feets away from her…..he can listen the clear sound of payal …but still don't know who is there? Suddenly a book slide down from the shelf just beside her…she jumped back in fear and scream loudly…. Aaa aaa aaa……. Closing her eyes and ran ahead…. Maan heard her scream and close his ears with his hands suddenly he felt tug on his chest, I mean she hit on his chest while running but due to sudden hit she frightened and her leg twisted, she clutched his collar in the fear of falling down on the floor but loosing their balance.. maan held her by her waist with his strong arms because she is pulling him towards her….he wanted to save her but she fell down taking him along with her… and she is screaming continuously in his ear…both landed down on the floor… but nothing happened to her… maan held her head from behind for save her head hitting to the floor… geet is between the floor and his rock type body… she stop screaming feeling the familiar hold.. both can't see each other's face but feel to each other… his breath is fanning on her face on her lips.. she closed her eyes feeling his breath and her lips opened just a little… she can feel that it's maan and maan can feel that it's geet… she is underneath him… there is full darkness… they can't see each other face , she stopped screaming but suddenly reality hit her and starts screaming again in his ear…. Maan couldn't control on himself and cover her mouth with his palm… chup bilkul chup… she stopped screaming and blinked her lashes couple of times .. he removed his cell from his pocket and saw her face in cell's light.. her eyes widen open when his cell's light switch on not because of that he is maan but because of that her pic is in his cell as a wallpaper… what the hell her pic is doing in his cell as a wallpaper…. But maan looking at her with so much love.. he removed his palm from her lips and slowly-2 removed some strands from her cheeks and tucked them behind her ear… she is looking at him without blinking…. And maan also staring at her…. Her heart beat throbbed against her chest heavily and maan can also feel her throbbing heart against her chest… he traces her face with the tip of his fingers… she closed her eyes and start breathing heavily… he doesn't know what happened to him after seeing her so close to him.. he became lost in her eyes which are staring him.. her big almond hazel eyes… he is feeling like he can swim in her eyes… he can feel her b***** against his chest which are moving up and down rapidly… her hands went to his waist and clutched his shirt from his back tightly… he can feel her hold , this is very tight… closed eyes, breathing heavily. She called his name in a meek voice maan.. his name sounds so perfect on her lips…he bend down his head to her neck and kissed her collarbone slightly…she turned her face little aside giving him more room.. he moved his lips to her ears and kissed her ear lobe , clutching her shoulder tightly… both don't know when mobile's light went off….and it slide down from his hand…his hand went in to her hairs and her both went on his back caressing his back slowly-2 with her shivering hands… she never felt like this…both has the urge to feel each other deeply without any limit… his lips went to her jaw line and he presses his lips on her chin… she can feel next his lips will be on hers… .. she parted her lips little for giving him permission but maan kissed on the corner of her lips… she breath harder pressing her upper body to his chest giving him more pleasure , more urge to feel her , more to lost in her… same geet is feeling right now… but she is very shy to take a step towards him.. he moved his lips to her nose and kissed on the tip of her nose while closing his eyes… her lips are shivering and her hold on his shirt became tighter more than before … he move his lips towards her lips and he brushed his lips slightly on hers… her breath suck in her throat when he brushed his lips on hers.. he tok her lower lip in his lips and nibbled it slowly-2 while his hand caressing her arm and other hand in her hairs… both doesn't know how to kiss but they are trying… yet maan is a charm of the college but he never kissed any other girl in this college… she captured his upper in her lips and he captured her lower lip in his lips…. Both are nibbling each other lips… she starts responding back to him in the kiss…. Giving him pleasure unknowingly… then maan bit her lip telling her that open her mouth , she gasped and open her mouth for him to enter his tongue in her mouth.. he immediately enter his mouth in her mouth and entangle his tongue with hers… exploring the whole mouth with his tongue…this the pure divine kiss for them.. kissing to each other for the first time… a pure divine feeling they are feeling now for each other… slowly-2 her one hand reached into his hairs starts massaging his hairs.. the kiss starts with very slow motion in hesitation and flowing in slow passion for each other… lying in same position moving with slow motion heading in feel each other's body… the kiss became a little passionate and hot still closing their eyes and continue with their intense kiss…nibbling each other lips… like they are in heaven , no one is here to disturb them… alone in library kissing to each other in between the books… (haaye kya scene hoga…. Me day dreaming) just then left his lips for gaining some air , maan open his eyes due to sudden back out but she is breathing heavily and he too…. Her breath is fanning on his face and his breath is also fanning on her face.. their breaths are ticking to each other sense.. maan rested his head in the crook of her neck, their heart beats are mingled to each other , it's like two bodies and one soul… just then both realized that what they are doing? Maan immediately lift himself from her body and gave his hand to help her in stand up… she stood up with his help… geet is not able to look at him but her cheeks are beet root red due to embarrassment but her face flush due to kiss… thanks god there is no light now she can hid herself from him… but his stupid cell, he open his cell and looked here and there for some help.. he is not able to utter any word .. he want to apologies her for his action but his throat went dry .. there is no sign of any help… there is no network in their mobiles… geet find the couch with the help of cell and sat there and maan sat on the chair… not able to meet his gaze with hers… it's almost an hour they are silent… they are hungry too… just then geet stood up and took her lunch box, she has not eaten her lunch .she went towards him and both share the food… but still not able to utter any word.. after some time geet sat on the couch and maan on the chiar… she is sleeping but not in a correct position…her head is going down again and again… maan switch on the torch on his cell for finding some book because he is feeling bore…. But found geet is in discomfort position… he sat beside her and rested her head on his shoulder.. now this position is comfortable for her… and she slept peacefully holding his arm tightly..maan chuckled ate her position… he is feeling goose bumps in his stomach and butterflies too… but then he too fall asleep feeling her warm touch and her warm breath on his neck skin which is ticking his sense but he is controlling himself… next day both got up but still there is no light… but they can feel to each other… both are awake but pretending to be sleeping and sitting the same position…. after some time they parted to each other when library lock open and librarian came inside and both narrated him what happened with them.. how they locked in library then both went to their respective home without saying anything to each other… later in the day….drashti is going to maan's place before the photo shoot but in mid a bunch of boys stop her car…. She came out from her car but they are many for her… they starts misbehaving with her… gurmeet is also passing on this way… and he saw some boys are misbehaving with a girl.. he came out from his car and move towards them..

You bas***d leave her….…. said gurmeet

boy 1- kya be shaane, teri chhammak chhallo ko aise kaise chhod de… he laughed…

Hey you… don't you dare touch her…. Said gurmeet , one boy scratch his head… they are illiterate…

boy 2- kya be.. angreji me jayada udaan bhar raha hai… he punched him in his stomach….abbey jo bolna hai hindi mein bol… teri tarah hum angreji me bak-bak nahi karte…

Agar usey chhune ki himmat bi na to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga.. said gurmeet

boy 1- himmat… wo to hum karenge hi…pata nahi aisa maal fir kab haath lage….

I'll kick you hard you'll not able to f*** anyone in your life…. gurmeet said… his blood is boiling….

boy 3-kya bola be saale… jayada chapad-2 mat kar angreji me… that boy is moving towards drashti… goon is going to touch her… drashti is wriggling in the goon's grip and goon's hand is some cms away from her body….don't you dare to touch me…. Mujhe chhune ki koshish bhi mat karna..drahsti said…. Goons laugh…

boy 1- ye dekho bhai log.. ab iss chhamiya ke tewar dekho… lagta hai isey theek karna padega… she wriggled more in his grip…. He tore her dupatta….she was wearing on the jeans and top…. gurmeet's blood boiled… the anger in his eyes is visible.. his eyes are red… he shout…….aaahhh…. and ran a little taking goons with him then he dig his elbow in the stomach of both goons… both bent down holding their stomach…. gurmeet ran towards drashti … before he reached to drashti goons attack on him again….they are about to hold him again by his arms but gurmeet is too fast for them… he turned and hold the neck of one person while kick the another goon in his stomach by his leg… he fell down on the ground , gurmeet turned and gave him a full hand punch on his face…. Made him bleed on the corner of his lips… another boy trying to get up but gurmeet kicked on his private place and he flinched in pain falling backward….. on the other hand two boys are holding drashti tightly… drashti is wriggling in teir grip.. their grip is very tight…. Another boy attack on him but gurmeet start beating him furiously… gurmeet headed towards drashti, boys are warning him not to come towards them but gurmeet is not listening them… one boy of them afraid from him and ran away leaving his partner alone there… but he is determinant on his position… gurmeet reached to him , held his arm and twist it n his back… drashti ran and hid behind gurmeet… he kicked him on his stomach while twisting his arm behind his back… that boy fell down on the land in faint state… he turned to drashti for checking her if she is alright or not but suddenly drashti hugged him immediately…. First he hesitates a bit with her hug but she is crying , she is afraid from all this.. gurmeet too hugged her back for consoling her… caressing her head… his shirt getting wet by her tears… he cupped her face and wiped her tears… she looked at him with teary eyes blinking her lashes couple of times….

precap

jealous maan

geet's rapid fire

about gurti don't know what will be next but something is exciting... don't know it will be in next update or not..


tell me friends hows this?

may be you'll throw jutte chappal on me for gurti but it'll accepted...

i know maaneet part jayada ho gaya but kya karu

i couldn't stop me and went on & on...

waiting for your response

neha


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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
awesome update
just loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
simply awsum update luvd it
plzz cont soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok so Gurmeet is an actor and he was just acting...

tabhi main kahoon yeh Soniya beech mein kahan se aa gayi...

Gurmeet saved Drashti...

and there in collage Maan kiss Geet...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
total filmy entry of gurmeet...loved it...

continue soon..

thnx for PM..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



ok so Gurmeet is an actor and he was just acting...

tabhi main kahoon yeh Soniya beech mein kahan se aa gayi...

Gurmeet saved Drashti...

and there in collage Maan kiss Geet...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...



yup dear he is an actor...
hahah... tum darr gayi thi kya?
thanks dear...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
wow wt a relief😃
ye sb mivie tha😡
omg dra diya😆😆

wo maanet ka frst kiss woh b library mai
u r r8 kya scn hoga...😆😳
precap- intrstng
cont soonnn
😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

omg i am dead...love dis OS...awesome stuff neha...so apna gurmeet is actor...mai toh soniya n shadi wala scene padke dar gayi thi ki gurmeet toh kisi aur se pyar karta hai...lekin jab director n cut padha tab jaan mai jaan aayi😆...loved his entry...

n maneet ka library romance😳😉...hayyy maar dala tune...dat kiss was so passionate...bichare kiss ke baad itna akward ho gaye ki aankhe bhi mila nhi aaye😆...really looking forward ki unka aage ka reaction kya hoga towards eachother...
ooops drashti gundo ke bich fas gayi...bt thank god apna hero maan aa gaya...loved d dhishum dhishum...n then d hug😳...
precap sounds awesome...pls update next part soon...waiting😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update


thnx for the pm dear

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