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A combination of Maaneet Gurti



this os is dedicated to my sweetest friend VARSHA KHEDEKAR... wishing you a very very happy birthday dear... love you.. always be happy... may god shower his love on you always...







Maan and drashti are good friends'both studiedin same college and now both are doing MBA in mumbai'maan is the hottest hunk in the college, rude, arrogant while drashti is the hot girl amongst in all girls, very chirpy, fun loving girl' today is the ragging day in the college I mean a day for freshers' while both are in last year of MBA' today freshers are going to join the college' maan rested himself on the bonnet of his mercedeez benz'and drashti is beside him talking to him how they will rag the freshers' then the girl entered in the gate of the college in white anaarkali suit , open hairs, her flicks covering the view of her face' but the white skin of hers is glowing more in the shine of sun' she scared that she heard about the ragging' actually no one can rag her because she was the ragging queen in her college but now she changed her college and now she is scared a little bit' slowly-2 she entered in the college ' she is too bubbly, topper of the college, record breaker, queen of the beauty but she is so nave.. sometimes so bold and sometimes so innocent' her strands are ticking her her cheeks and her neck too'

Drashti-hey maan, see first fresher is coming'

Maan-yeah D, I am seeing that'

Drashti-so what say dude?

Maan-D, just wait.. lets her enter in the college na'

Drashti-okay'!!

Maan called drashti as D.. beside of maan, no one can dare to call her with this name.. maan has the special right' slowly-2 she is removing her strands from her cheeks giving the full access of maan's eyes for niharing her face' he mesmerized after seeing her beautiful face.. maan went blank seeing her angelic face which is the symbol of cuteness, shyness and innocent gal' he is staring her without blinking .. she gets scared after seeing the seniors and top of that with maan's gaze'. She is so scared but a somekind of spark in her eyes'she is passing beside of them but suddenly drashti stopped her..

Drashti-hey you '!

Girl-did you call me?

Drashti-yeah babe' you.. come here' ow she gets more scared, she caught by seniors' ab to ragging pakki.. she immediately shot a prayer to her babaji and went towards drashti.. maan came back to his sense when drashti called her'

drashti-what's your name babes?

Girl-geet.. she is praying continuously to her babaji.. bacha lena ha..!! geet name rang in maan's mind.. wow what a name..!! geet means english me song.. drahsti thought soething now she got the task which will be performed by geet'

Drashti-so geet.. what are you doing here? Geet promptly replied, obviously for studies.. gana gaane to nahi aayi hu mai yaha.. then she bit her lip what she said just now' omg babaji raksha karna ha'she shot a quick prayer' maan was amazed by her reply.. no one in this college can dare to reply back to drashti like that' geet is the first one' interesting'

Maan-so geet, geet you are not here for sing the song' right? She shook her head in yes then no then again yes' looks like you are so confuse' chalo I'll clear your confusion.. maan said to geet' hey babaji yeh kya karne wale hai.. now she is scared more from maan but she didn't knew his name.. she checked him top to bottom.. hmm not bad .. hunk huh..! she thought in her mind' she is too impressed by his physic' he knew that she is checking him' he chuckled by her expressions but didn't show on his face'

Maan-so geet dear.. now ragging time' geet thought what he is upto now? What he will give the task to me? Again shot a prayer to her babaji' drashti got up from her place and checked her by roaming around her' geet clutched her side bag tightly' so maan kya socha hai? Drashti aksed'

Maan-wait D.. just wait and watch.. drashti went towards maan and rested her arm on his shoulder' and geet is looking down' so geet your name is geet means song so you have to sing a song for us' she looked at him' song..yeah she sings well but now her voice stucked in her throat' she couldn't thought that she will be rag by smeone else' who always rag to another ones and todays she is ragged' maan smirked at her conition.. he came down from the bonnet of his car and called osme students.. some students gathered there'

Drashti-geet baby, sing na.. kyu maan/ she laughed at her situation'

Maan-yeah.. we can't resist hear your sweet voice.. just sing a song nothing more.. she is stil looking down but gathereing her strength'

Drashti-lokks like geet baby is shivering from fear.. she pass to her nasty smile' maan move towards her and stood beside her' just behind her back..his breath is fanning on the nape of her neck' he said huskily geet sing na..just a song' maan arrange a mike middle the hall of the college.. and she is standing middle there holding the mike in the hand' all students is gazing her , waiting for her song'. all think that she will sing a typical hindi bollywood old song but when she opened her mouth and a sweet voice came out.. their mouth fell open when they heard her voice like a sweet honey.. her eyes are closed but her fingers are moving on her bag with the rythym'.

Ohh wooaah (3x)

You know you love me,I know you care

Just shout whenever, And I'll be there

You want my love, You want my heart

And we will never ever ever be apart

Maan heard her voice and he all set with his guitar' he is the rockstar of this college.. he is the star of the music band of this college'.

Are we an item? Girl quit playing

Were just friends, What are you saying

Said there's another, Look right in my eyes

My first love broke my heart for the first time,

And I was like

Baby, baby, baby ohhh

Like baby, baby, baby noo

Like baby, baby, baby ohh

I thought you'd always be mine mine

Baby, baby, baby ohh

Like baby, baby, baby noo

Like baby, baby, baby ohh

I thought you'd always be mine,mine (oh oh)

For you, I would have done whatever

And I just can't believe, we ain't together

And I wanna play it cool, But I'm losin' you

I'll buy you anything, I'll buy you any ring

And im in pieces, Baby fix me

And just shake me til' you wake me from this bad dream

Im going down, down, down, dooown

And I just cant believe my first love would be around.

And I'm like

Baby, baby, baby ohh

Like baby, baby, baby noo

Like baby, baby, baby ohh

I thought youd always be mine, mine


Baby, baby, baby ohh

Like baby, baby, baby noo

Like baby, baby, baby ohhh

I thought youd always be mine, mine

Luda

When I was 13, I had my first love,

There was nobody that compared to my baby,

And nobody came between us or could ever come above

She had me goin' crazy,

Oh I was starstruck,

She woke me up daily,

Don't need no Starbucks.

She made my heart pound,

And skip a beat when I see her in the street and,

At school on the playground,

But I really wanna see her on the weekend,

She know she got me gazin',

Cuz she was so amazin',

And now my heart is breakin',

But I just keep on sayin'...

Baby, baby, baby ohh

Like baby, baby, baby noo

Like baby, baby, baby ohh

I thought youd always be mine, mine

Baby, baby, baby ohh

Like baby, baby, baby noo

Like baby, baby, baby ohh

I thought youd always be mine, mine

(I'm gone)

Yeah, yeah, yeah (6x)

(Now Im all gone, now im all gone, now im all gone)

Gone, gone, gone,(gone)

I'm gone.

After the song, a;; are amazed with the song.. all clapped for her and now she is feeling like she is in heaven.. omg she cleared the ragging round' she passed the ragging session.. she is dancing inwardly and todays she felt that how the person felt when he ragged' she ragged so many people during the time of her BBA.. maan move towards her and raised his hand in-front of her'she looked at his hand blankly'

Maan-congrats, no one can pass our task,but you are the first one who passed our task' she smiled weakly at him.. oh god her simple smile touched his heart' hii , I am maan .. your's senior' she shook her hand with him, hello I am geet' oh god her hand giving him burning sensation in his whole body' suddenly, he felt ike this for the first time in his whole life till yet' he had so many girl friends but his touch..this is something different' drashti moves towards geet.. hey geet, I am drashti, drashti said to her' geet smiled at her' she shook her hand with her too'

Drashti-nice to meet you.. you sings very well'

Geet-thanks..!

Maan-we thought, you will sing like a typical old bollywood song but you surprised us'

Drashti-yeah geet, we were shocked when we heard your voice'

Geet-thanks guys' thanks a lot for the appreciation' she smiled at both of them'

Maan-I think you are made for the appreciation' she blushed a little hearing his compliment for her'maan chuckled at his statement what he said just now' Maan singh khurana is appreciating someone' and shock' he never compliments to anyone but today he compliments to an unknown girl' he knows nothing about except of her name.. but he felt nice' everything is the first time in life so this is also' he shook his head shooing away his thought.. he told to everyone that move to your classes' geet thought seems like he is the DON of here, tewar to dekho but geet you forgot, tub hi aise hi rob jhadti thi college mein sab par aur aaj.. ek min geet, sochne eali baat yeh hai ki waha par bhi sab tere bare me aisa hi sochte honge jaisa tu aaj isss maan ke bare me soch rahi hai' she was lost in her thoughts.. maan is observing her' she snapped her thought when maan called her'

Maan-aah geet, from where you belongs? He want to know more about her but this is a casual question' everyone wants to know about their friends' is she leaving here alone or with her family? This question is ringing in his mind' but drashti is also curious' she liked geet and top of that her song and one more thing she observed that maan is interested in her.. maan never talked much with anyone and that too with fresher.. he always ragged them and left from there'

Geet-seems like someone is very curious to know about me.. she smirks at him'she knew these type of guys'but gave him her innocent smile.. maan also smiled back at her answer' he thought hmm she is like a sherni wrapped in human beings' drashti doesn't like this' no one answer maan back like this.. how dare y.. maan cut her.. he knows how short tempered she is.. she can't hear anything about maan but as a best friend'

Maan-cam down D.. she is new here.. it is our duty to made her feel comfortable in our environment' drashti agreed and geet sighed' she thought he would answer her back'

Maan-aah geet.. yeah I am curious.. any problem.. we are friends na.. so you can tell us' geet smied and felt embarrassed at her blunt reply' she is the one who is observing him top to bottom and now she is blaming him in her mind' this is not right'

Geet-umm maan, I am from Mumbai but my native pace is Punjab'

Maan-so you are Punjabi' she nodded.. he thought tabhi to sherni hai' Punjab ki sherni'

to be continued...
tell me friends hows it?
should i continue this or not?
waiting for ur response..
love neha


part-2
part-3
part-4
part-5
part-6

part-7 last part
epilogue


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anisha_maaneet thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome !!!!!!!😛
loved it...😳
cont. soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome!😍 😍
Edited by RiMa_972 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u than k u so much...first of all for d dedication...n second for making me feel so special...gurti n maneet r my life...n u writing on dem for my birthday makes me feel so out of dis world...love u so much...

awesome os...loved maan n drashti...der frndship seems so special...n our hoshiyarpur express seems like disguising her real self under a chui mui mask...waiting for d sherni to cm out...n where is my gurmeet? missing him...one request i want a macho entry for him...
And I'm like

Baby, baby, baby ohh

Like baby, baby, baby noo

Like baby, baby, baby ohh

I thought youd always be mine, mine
wow awesome song...u just rocked wid part 1...waiting for next one soon...:))
love u so so so so much...itni khush mai kaha sambhal paungi...meri jholi tune itni khushiyo se bhar di ki...ab sambhali nahi ja rahi...😭😊😃👏
Edited by varshakhedekar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it .. do continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome starting...

its amazing...

thank u sooo much fr such a lovely update...

really loved it...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: varshakhedekar

thank u than k u so much...first of all for d dedication...n second for making me feel so special...gurti n maneet r my life...n u writing on dem for my birthday makes me feel so out of dis world...love u so much...

awesome os...loved maan n drashti...der frndship seems so special...n our hoshiyarpur express seems like disguising her real self under a chui mui mask...waiting for d sherni to cm out...n where is my gurmeet? missing him...one request i want a macho entry for him...
And I'm like

Baby, baby, baby ohh

Like baby, baby, baby noo

Like baby, baby, baby ohh

I thought youd always be mine, mine
wow awesome song...u just rocked wid part 1...waiting for next one soon...:))
love u so so so so much...itni khush mai kaha sambhal paungi...meri jholi tune itni khushiyo se bhar di ki...ab sambhali nahi ja rahi...👏



thank u so much shona.. glad that u liked it so much..
muah.. yeah it is for you... again happy birthday dear...
yeah gurmeet ki entry next part me hogi na.. thoda patience rakho na..
hmm sahi pehchana tumne geet ko...
thanks for the song...
arey sambhalo na.. ab maine itni khushi di hai to sambhalo usey...

love u so much..
hug to u tight wala..
like crushing ur bones in me... but don't take it in wrong way ha.. lol...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome loved t yaar
noww waiting for guru's arrival😆
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wow!that was a cute start..
geet s a real sherni...

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Originally posted by: neha5058



thank u so much shona.. glad that u liked it so much..
muah.. yeah it is for you... again happy birthday dear...
yeah gurmeet ki entry next part me hogi na.. thoda patience rakho na..
hmm sahi pehchana tumne geet ko...
thanks for the song...
arey sambhalo na.. ab maine itni khushi di hai to sambhalo usey...

love u so much..
hug to u tight wala..
like crushing ur bones in me... but don't take it in wrong way ha.. lol...

bas sambhal rahi hu n khush ho rahi hu jaise mann mai laddu futate hai waise...😆
n love u lots...n mera bhi tight hug tumhare liye...n iske baad ham dono maise kisike bhi bones nhi bachenge for sure...n mai wrong way mai le hi nhi sakti na...kyuki kahi hamara dostana part 2 ho gaya toh maan ka kya hoga hamare bina😉

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