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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Neha, me finally here.

Woww...what a beautiful way to end...except SR imagination at our own riskšŸ˜†šŸ˜†..its just not fair😔😃.

This update definitely is very nice because the way you wrote the one month leap and how Maneet and Gurti's bonding was developing in that time frame is šŸ˜Ž.

I just loved Gurti's wedding the most in the entire update...its very unique and amazingly awesomešŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ‘.

hayeee just loved the way they accepted their love and Gurmeet all blushing after proposing hearing whistles...me just can't imagine it.

And then Maan...drooling all over Geet while daydreaming during haldi is very funny and awww...cho..cho...chweet.

Aiyoo...why always boys are teasedšŸ˜†...but just love it yaar...and wish for more.

Well, just loved the way you describe their attires and functions and adding up Maan becoming the MD of KC made it include all and was short, simple and beautiful...just doing justice to it.

All I could say at the end is "Job Well Done" but still would have loved to read the SR...I know...me way too getting bold and naughty..and asking for more and more...never satisfiedšŸ˜ƒšŸ˜‰.

Once again muaaahhh for the wonderful endingšŸ¤—šŸ¤—.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Well dear don't think who is this Cherishh...its me your own brain eater Anu (Anu13).

Just would love to add that I am happy to see Maneet and Gurti as a couple and their love for each other.

Thanks once again for such a lovely SS Neha.
Edited by Cherishh - 13 years ago
Ash1991 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update n beautiful SS...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
superb ending

thankx for pm😊


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Posted: 13 years ago




EPILOGUE


After 4 years of the marriage….

Maahi please baby stop… beta have milk na….. Called geet….

No mama… mujhe milk nahi peena…. Replied maahi….

Please beta stop na…. dekho mama aapke pichey jayada nahi bhaag sakti… please listen na…. said geet

No mama…. No milk… she ran… geet also ran behind her with her slow pace,,,,,

Maahi beta.. dekho maine isme chocolate bhi milaya hai.. please beta pee lo na… said geet

No mama… no chocolate…. Strawberry….. Replied maahi

Achha beta you want strawberry… to chalo mama aapko starwberry milk shake dengi… geet went in kitchen with maahi and made a new glass of milk with strawberry…

Lo beta abhi ye pee lo…. Said geet….

No mama… mujhe nahi chahiye and she ran away from there.. geet also ran behind her and shouting on her Maahi.. please pareshaan nahi karte.. dekho mama ke andar aapka chhota bhai hai na… said geet to maahi… maahi come back to her kissed on her baby bump… and said my blue baby… and then ahain ran away from there…. Geet again ran behind her in hall around the couch holding the milk glass in her hand…. Her leg twist and she was about to fell down on the floor, she closed her eyes at once & screamed but before she land on the floor two strong arms held her by her waist…he panicked seeing the sight… he felt like his life slipped from his hand….he pulled her in his embrace and hugged her for assuring himself if she is ok or not?? She was breathing hardly but assuring to her husband… maan I am fine.. see nothing happened to me… maan was coming from the office and just entered in the hall when the sight was hell scaring for him…

Maan didn't leave her, hugging her and murmuring something… maan.. maan I am fine… she broke out the hug and cupped his face… then he burst on her….

Maan-tum dekh kar nahi chal sakti thi… abhi tumhe kuch ho jata to… tum apna bilkul bhi khayaal nahi rakhti… he turned his face.. his red angry eyes were spitting fire.. she knew she is at fault… she went in front of him and hold her ears… maan I am sorry na… wo mai maahi ke pichhey bhaag rahi thi.. dekho na wo milk nahi pee rahi thi…

Maan-to tum uske pichhey bhaag kyo rahi thi.. agar tumhek aur baby ko kuch ho jata to… no I made my decision…

Geet-maan..kaisa decision?

Maan-now I'll shift my office here… mai ab ghar se hi kaam karunga.. taaki mai tum par nazar rakh saku… geet pulled his cheeks… okay my possessive hubby and dada… aapki wife and mama ko koi problem nahi hai… maan took the glass from her and went to maahi.. he lift maahi in his arms and told something in her ear and she drank the whole glass of milk…

Maahi is maan & geet's daughter… she is 3 years old.. very cute and very naughty too… now geet is 7 months pregnant.. maan became over possessive now… he was very possessive when maahi was about to born but now he became more possessive… he didn't want that geet will became again pregnant because he can't see his jaan in pain… that was the toughest time for him when geet was struggling in labor room…. Geet kept looking at him what he told her that she drank the whole glass…

Geet-maan, aapne maahi se kya kaha? Mai kabse try kar rahi hu par usne milk nahi piya…

Maan-ye dada aur angel ka secret hai… hai na angel… maahi nodded… maan gave her his wicked smile to her…

Geet-maan please batayiye na.. she stood from her place and sat beside maan…

Maan-geet, wo na maahi wants blue baby but I want pink baby… to I told her this time pink baby then next time tumhari aur maahi ki choice blue baby fir uske next time pink baby ki choice ka baby.. arey dadi ki choice ka bhi baby banta hai na… bas mai usey wahi bol raha tha… maan said so shamelesely but geet was all red in embarrassment.. she hit him hard on his shoulder…. Maan aap bhi na… mai aise kaise itne bache… she hid her face in her palms… doesn't able to meet her gaze with his naughty gaze… maahi ran from there in dadi's room… maan removed her palms from her face and saw her cheery red cheeks…. He has naughty plan s in his mind..

Maan-achha geet tum mere liye ye nahi kar sakti….

Geet-maan aap bhi na.. bahut besharam ho gaye hai… he smirk…

Maan-achha.. chalo mai tumhe apni besharmi dikha hi deta hu… she saw naughtiness In his eyes and in acts too… he lift her in his arms… and move towards their room… he kicked the room from his leg and shut it too with his leg.. he rest her on the bed, and he was on her totally.. he bit her red cheeks and took her wet anticipated lips in his… she circled her arms around his neck and pulled him closer.. he couldn't put his wait on her stomach.. he aid beside her and kissing her… and start undressing her and now both are engross in their love making session….

It's been 4 years of GURTI's marriage too… gurmeet & drashti opened their own production company named GURTI PRODUCTIONS… they did so many films together and acted together in so many films… both produce so many films and directed too… now a days gurmeet busy in his new movies and drashti too but now she got a very interesting offer.. she come back on television… she is playing the character of madhubala on small screen.. she was so much excited about this character and gurmeet too… it's very new thing for her… she never did anything like this.. it's very big opportunity for her career… they didn't decide about the child… both decided that when her new show went off air then they will think about the child… it was usual morning for both of them… it's 5 am early in the morning… both were in bed in each other arm cuddling in each other arms….

Drsahti-guru….??

Gurmeet-hmmm… please sone do na while nuzzling his nose in her neck dipping his head in her curly hairs…

Drashti-guru.. please utho na… dekho tumhe bhi jaldi jana hai na aaj…. She said while kissing on his bare chest…

Guru-ab tum itne pyaar se kiss karogi to mai kaise uthunga….

Drashti-nahi wo to mai bas aise hi…

Gurmeet-now you start it like that but it's my turn now… he turned her and now she was underneath him… he held her both wrist and start kissing on her neck.. she was giggling feeling tickled with his sensuous kisses… he nibbled her ear lobe and trailed kissed to her collarbone… he sucked her collarbone while his hands on his way.. he held her curves in his hand playing with them… she gave him more access… his hands replaced with his lips suck them, bite them making cry in pleasure… that was their morning love making session… he increase the temperature of AC because they felt sweaty because of their hard work… (you know hard work.. wink wink)… both are ready for the climax and then he entered in her and a pleasurable cry came out from her mouth but gurmeet captured her lips in his… after rocking back & forth he laid beside her panting…

2 months later maan was pacing in hospital.. while maahi sat beside dadi… gurmeet and drashti also were there… geet was struggling in labor room again… it was 4 hours now… she was crying and screaming…. But maan was like OMG outside the room… he was sweating badly… gurmeet also afraid seeing maan's condition and hearing geet's screams… he scared for drashti.. he told drashti that we'll adopt baby but he couldn't see her like this screaming in labor room… after 3 hours nurse came outside the room and congratulate them… it's twins… 1 pink baby and 1 blue baby.. he was so happ but tears of happiness in his eyes… after some times nurse gave both babies to maan and maan went inside the room.. both saw ther babies together then geet fed them one by one and then maan kissed her on her forehead and thanks her for coming in his life…

After 2 years maan and geet blessed with 3 kids.. 2 daughters & 1 son… they are living a happy family and now drasshti also expecting with 3 moths… both couples have so much fun with each other.. gurti loved maaneet child like their own and maaneet children also love them so much…

Here is the end of this ss… hope you liked the journey of this ss..

Please give me your feedback about this one… and thanks to all of you for supporting me so much and you all gave me so much love… thanks a lot… love you all…!!! neha


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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
hayeee u made me imagine my GURTI also
which i do everyday hayeee😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful.
Its such a lovely epilogue
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ss. all 7 parts and epi was too good.
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was so cute...
Loved maan's planning for kids...
loved guru's concern for drashti when he told they will adopt baby..
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Posted: 13 years ago
tat was a sweet one...cute,lovely...

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