SS : Khamosh Zindagi Part 9 @ pg 27; 16 Feb 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello everyone..🤗

This is a new story from my side...

I wrote it a long time ago...but discontinued it or rather kept it on hold...

Now I am reviving it...and will try to write it once again...

Do let me know how it is...😳





"Khamosh Zindagi"



INDEX


Part 1 -- page 1 -- scroll down

Part 2 -- page 2

Part 3 -- page 6

Part 4 -- page 9

Part 5 -- page 13

Part 6 -- page 15

Part 7 -- page 19

Part 8 -- page 21

Part 9 -- Page 27
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1:



She always thought that her dream man will come and sweep her off her feet...




She will be like a princess and her prince charming will come...who will take her away...to the place where only love exists...




She will spend rest of her life with him in complete bliss...where only love will be present ...




But life had other plans for her...




Gurmeet...her love...her prince charming came...he did sweep her off her feet...he was madly in love with her...just like she was madly in love with him...




There was no opposition from either of the family...it was a fairy tale...everything was perfect...




All of them were happy...content...




Her family was happy as she would remain in HP...




His family was happy to have her as their daughter in law...




What more could they ask for...they had everything...




But one moment changed eveything...




One moment and everything was vanished in thin air...




One moment was all it took... to him away from her...




And in that One moment he was gone...




No survivors...No nothing...all because of one false accusation on his family by his sister's in-laws...




And the next thing everyone saw was fire taking down the whole house along with everyone in it...




Everything was destroyed...




Her dream shattered...




The man she loved was gone...




She had no will to live...




Years had gone by...




She was 18 when her engagement with Gurmeet was fixed...




She is 25 now...living...Why she was living...even she had no idea...




She asked the same question to God daily...WHY...WHY HIM...WHY...




She wanted to kill herself...




She had survived everytime...




Her family was worried about her...




But ever since she turned 23...all her attention focussed on her education n career...




Nobody questioned her...




Nobody stopped her...




They were just glad that she had stopped to hurt herself...




Though she had stopped speaking to anyone...yet they were just glad that their child is safe in front of their eyes...




So when she got a job offer from delhi...she accepted right away...




She was feeling suffocating there...




Everything reminded her of him...




Every lane, every building, reminded her of him...




Every night she cried herself to sleep...




But now was her chance,...




Her family members were wanting to get her married...




She didnt want to...she couldnt...she won't...at any cost...
and this was her chance of going away from everything...




She got a very plum offer from an overseas firm who wanted to establish there office there...and were looking for suitable candidates...




She grabbed the opportunity...




It was the only was she could remain with her man...her gurmeet...his dream...




But destiny...once again... had other plans for her...




Delhi was looking forward to welcome her with open arms...





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Jyoti
Edited by jyoti_l - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sounds pretty interesting...

will maan n gurmeet look same???just A question
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

sounds pretty interesting...

will maan n gurmeet look same???just A question


thnx dear...
no they r not same...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow nice start yaar ..loved it so much !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start

but it is good that she focussed on her career
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Part 2:




She came to this big city not for the first time...




She had been here to give her exams...




Sometimes with darji for meeting the doctors...




But every time she came here someone accompanied her...




This was the first time she came alone...




Came alone to face this world..




Came alone to be with him...




Came alone to be with his memories...




Just thinking about him made her smile and at the same time tears welled up in her eyes...




But she had to brush it aside...




Otherwise people would think that she was weak...




And he never wanted anyone to think that his sherni was weak..




She came here for him...




She didnt tell anybody but it was his dream that kept her alive...




His dream that she wanted to fulfill...




His dream to come to delhi ...




---------------------------------flashback------------------------------




Both of them were sitting near the river, their secret spot...




They knew that if anyone of them is lost...they wud find each other here...




Gurmeet said to her, "Tum jaanti ho main yahan bachpan se aata tha...pata nahi yahan kya hai iss jagah me...jo itna sukoon milta hai."




Geet answered him, "Mujhe ye nahin maloom...mujhe to bas ye pata hai...ki jab tum here saath hote ho to mujhe sukoon milta hai."




Both were sitting close by with Gurmeet's head on her lap...and Geet stroking his hair...




Gurmeet said, "Geet tum jaanti ho hamesha se mera ye sapna raha hai ki mai ek bada aadmi bano."




Geet while laughing said to him, "abhi chote bacche ho kya?"




Gurmeet in a stern tone, "Geet."




Geet then instantly apologized, "ok ok...sorry."




Gurmeet said, "thats better...I mean I want to become successful."




Geet asked, "meaning...??"




Gurmeet replied, "You know I visited my friend adi in delhi a while back..."




Geet, "hmm..."




Gurmeet continued, "There is something about that city that captures you...like you dont want to ever leave again...


I saw him become successful...he was struggling at first...but now he has a profitable business...his own house...his company...and I want to be just like him..."




Geet was not happy and said, "No...I don't want you to be like him..."




Gurmeet was shocked when Geet said this. He asked her, "What? But why?"




Geet smiled and said, "I want you to be better than him, I want you to be more successful than him, I want you to fulfill your dream and conquer the world."




Gurmeet was shocked, "Whole world??"




Geet gave the expression of thinking for sometime and then said, "Thik hai...thik hai...abhi ke liye Delhi...phir India...phir world...ye chalega."




Gurmeet smiled at his love and said, "Agar tum saath ho to kuch bhi chalega."




Both stared into the sun as it was gradually coming down...with a promise in their heart for a better tommorow...to be with each other...




-----------------------flashback ends----------------------------




She came here to complete him...to make his wish come true...to make his dream convert into reality...




Just as she got down from the bus, she heard someone call out her name.




A man came near her and asked, "Geet...tum geet ho naa..??"




Geet was confused. She did not know this man and here he is calling her by her name. She asked, "aap??"




The man replied, "Hi. I'm Adiya, you can call me Adi."




Geet again had tears in her eyes because here she was thinking abt him and here God sent her a message...that she is right.




She quickly wiped away her tears before he could see anything.




Geet then asked him, "Par aapne muhe pehchana kaise??"




Adi replied, "Meet ki Geet ko main kahin bhi pehchaan sakta hoon," with a heavy voice.




"Chalo ab tum mere saath chalogi."




Geet denied him and said, "Nahin...meri..."




Adi replied, "mMain kuch nahi sunne wala...mere liye tum meri choti behan ki tarah ho...sochna bhi mat ki mai tumhe yahan chod doonga."




Then he grabbed her with him...she was unable to say no to him...




From far away...a man standing in a corner was watching everything...watching her...watching him...watching her every move...









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Edited by jyoti_l - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Jyoti 🤗...awesome updates...poor Geet...so much pain 😭...glad Adi is there for her now...waiting to see who is the man watching her...plz continue 😊




Edited by --Ratna-- - 13 years ago
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noice ...
dhaasu start hai jyo
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing jyothi!!
i guess the person watching her must be gurmeet!!

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