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Posted: 13 years ago
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yeh kaise ho sakta hai...

Dev is an Angel of Geet's life...

who was her first husband...u did not clear it...but as all stories revolve around Maan-Geet-Dev so everybody assuming him to be Maan...

waiting for next part...

please update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful one swati👏
awww thanks for the dedication😳🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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To hate Dev has become a second nature to most of us so if u r not keen to give part 2 , i'll just assume that it was a syntax error and u actually meant maan, and that u were out of time/felt lazy to rectify it.

But, nicely written .
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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swatttsss 😡 .. bohat maron gi tujhay ... lady if u dont want one BIg laat on ur bum .. kick Dev out and let Maan comeback with ...
Dev and Geet ,,,, is ,,, is ,,,, is tooo .. ewww ...to handle ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😲 geet n dev??? where is maan then?? waiting for the second part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow brilliant writing Swati! This is going to be very interesting! Cant wait till Maan enters <33 u rock! Looking forward to another part ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome yar
waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was awesome i want a part two for sure!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful os
lovely
heart touching
plz do update another part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😡😡

will comment after reading Part2

I hope you love your life baby😡😡

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