Opposite World- [Thread 2 link Pg.148/1]

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Hey guys,

So I decided to start a new short story after I finish Bramachari Maan in two or three weeks so until then enjoy this prologue and I will start this SHORT STORY as soon as I finish Bramachari Maan.

Prologue

What if we fall in love with someone who is the complete opposite?
What if that person you love has everything and anyone he could possibly imagine except for you?
What if that person doesn't know you exist? Does anyone for that matter?

He is the sun----she is the cloud
His voice is like music to ones ear---her voice makes people cry
He is the star of the party--she is the laughing stock
He is from rich background---she is from middle class
Everyone dies being close to him---she is dying for his one touch
His one look makes girls die---his ignorance of her presence makes her die everyday
He is handsome with great looks--she is ordinary girl

This is the story of a girl name Geet who wants nothing much but mere attention from the one person she loved since childhood. The same person that doesn't even know that she exists.


*Bitting nails*

How is it? Do you guys like it? I won't be able to update at all until I finish Bramachari Maan...
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mrs.msk thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ooh sounds good
looking forward to it !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sounds interesting...👍🏼i hv already started imagining GC & DD in ur story☺️...eagerly waiting 4 ur updates...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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one more story 😲 😲 😲 purane wale kii updts ka tho koi khabar hain nahi abhi tak 😕
but a sigh of relief... dat its nt somethng wid dark stuff 😆 😆 😆 thou ur stories r quite interesting 2 read on... but bak 2 bak dark stories were getting a bit steryotyped 😉
but honestly Simi dii... I luvvv ur dark n sheitan Maan more dan anythng else... u knw why... bcz they inroduced new n unique methods of getting paybaks 4m Geet 😳 seriously kaha se milta hain aise paybaks k ideas apko diii?????? 😆
eagerly waiting 4 d end of BM now... so dat I can get rid of one sweet torture of phycho Dev n cruel Madhuri 😛 lo ab tho apne dusra wajah bhi de diya dii... will get a new shade of MannEet 😊
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Interesting! Waiting to read more.
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Sounds good :-)
Waiting for it !!:-)!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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welcome back
great prologue dear
will be waiting for this start
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sound amazing
i already stat to like it
continue soon
plz pm me
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awesome concept will wait for you to star
how are you are you still in a lot of pain don't worry i in the same condition like you in bed rest i am in stitches and cast and wwill be for 4 -5 weeks so all i do is sleep and read ff in the forums and play games hope you feel better soon

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