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abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: luv_GurTi
aww such a sweet n cute os ❤️
sameera went dwn 👎🏼🤪😆

thank u
yeah sameera went down😆😆

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abinash079

@abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: ritzy09
Awww...that was so sweet Abi...

thank u di😳

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abinash079

@abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: kamiya
aww
that was simple sweet
loved it

thanks dear 😃

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Abi loved ur first OS
it was reallyyy sweeet😳
Sameera😡
thanks for the pm dear
hope u write more OS
Mariam

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abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan
aww.. Abi.. Dis ws sucha sweet OS...
Bt i jz felt it ws a lil fast paced..
I mean u knw me nah Abby.. M tooo greedy... Hehehe...
So nxt tym u write... Make it slow babes...

Bt d story ws vry cute...
Hahaha.. Sameera got it in her face... Hahahhaa...

Love u Abi...

thanks abby
yeah it was fast paced as i dont know how to delail
each and everything

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abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Mariam94
Abi loved ur first OS
it was reallyyy sweeet😳
Sameera😡
thanks for the pm dear
hope u write more OS
Mariam

thanks mariam
more OS😕
actually i dont know how to form a story properly😆
but just gave it a try
let's see what happens in future😳

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: abinash079

thanks mariam
more OS😕
actually i dont know how to form a story properly😆
but just gave it a try
let's see what happens in future😳

ur most welcome dear
haan ji mujhe aur OS chiye, i am sure u will definitely do gud as u write more and more
this is ur first one and it was really a best one so u should try more and more
zidya practice karo gi tabhi na aur acha likho gi
tu i want u to try writing's more of OS samjhi meri Abi ji

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Nickname : Zee

@Mrs.ZSK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

i agree with mariam. . . should i say i am working on an OS. . .lol

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK
i agree with mariam. . . should i say i am working on an OS. . .lol

thanks for agreeing with me Zee
lagta hai aaj kal OS ki barish ho rahi hai
even i am writing OS well its in two part
first part tu lik di second part likne ka chance hi nahi mil raha hai
wonder when will i get to post it😕
Abi I am telling ur should often write OS dear, sachi u will get better and better each time u write
plzzz meri baat ko yad rakhna and when ever any ideas come do write
will love reading it believe me😳

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Nickname : Zee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Mariam94

thanks for agreeing with me Zee
lagta hai aaj kal OS ki barish ho rahi hai
even i am writing OS well its in two part
first part tu lik di second part likne ka chance hi nahi mil raha hai
wonder when will i get to post it😕
Abi I am telling ur should often write OS dear, sachi u will get better and better each time u write
plzzz meri baat ko yad rakhna and when ever any ideas come do write
will love reading it believe me😳

yeah try describing abi. . . like i do. I try to explain what maan and geet are feeling ...basically giving a narration, which helps keep a better flow to the story.

try it...u never know u may be good at it...or it will become easier.

i never even liked to write before...so u never know.

and yeah i wrote like 4 pages. . . it's for Shreya's birthday coming up. . . i still need to finish it lol...don't think i am even close. ..

Edited by Mrs.ZSK - 13 years ago