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Me want to thank Roops, Hinal, Apporva and Mel for making my B'day super special…..Love you guys...ummmah…..😳

Here's my B'day VM by Roops on my fav song'Pls do check it out, it's awesome…..


Thanks a lot everyone for your lovely wishes...

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PART - 29 (part 106)

After all the shocking and emotional revelations, no one had the heart to question any further. Everyone retired to their rooms for the day and had their dinners there only. Maan was already quite disturbed due to Geet's health issues but after learning all this, he felt emotionally drained. He still had a lot of unvoiced questions in his mind-

"Dadima ne sab kuchh bataya par yeh nahi ki iss sab ke piche asal mein kisaka haath hai... Mujhe yeh pata lagana hi hoga... Rimi ke saath saath mujhe iss kis se ko bhi niptana hai...Aur yeh Maan Singh Khurana ka vaada hai apne parivaar se ki wo unke hare k dukh aur aansoon ka badla soot samet lega..."

He turned over to his left side and saw his little wify who was now actually a grown up woman, in fact she was carrying their little bundle of joy in her womb. She frowned in her sleep and he removed the tresses that were disturbing her and tucked them behind her ear. He slowly kept a hand on her still flat tummy and whispered-

"Baby...Mujhe intezaar hai ki kab tum meri baahon mein aaogi... I love you and you mama more than my life..."

He lovingly placed a peck on her forehead and cuddled closer to her and drifted off in a deep slumber.

NEXT DAY

Everyone had decided to visit the Khurana orphanage and spend some quality time there with the kids. They badly needed a break and also wanted to spend some time together as a family.

Maan backed out at the last moment on the pretext of a very important meeting. He made sure that Geet also stayed with him. Well his little wify didn't need any coaxing, she was more than happy to stay alone with him and drool over him the whole day!!!

After everyone left, Maan made his way towards his room. He made sure Geet was comfortable on the bed while he himself settled on the couch along with his files and laptop.

But abb hamari Geet shant bethne waalon mein se to thi nahi. She rested for a while then got bored. So she started talking to Maan who by then was very engrossed in his work.

"Maan..."

"Hmmm..."

"Main bore ho rahi hoon..."

"Hmmm..."

"Kya Hmmm, main kya karoon?? Aapne to mere kitchen jaane par bhi paabandi laga di aur mujhe aur koin kaam bhi nahi karne dete..."

"Hmmm..."

Now Geet was seriously irritated with his HMMM... She had seriously had enough of it.

"Maan main soch rahi thi kyun na hum ek pet rakh lein???"

"Hmmm..."

"Toh python kaisa rahega ya phir cobra..."

"Hmmm…."

That was it. The next thing Maan knew was a cushion being hurled towards him. He got very angry and looked at Geet. But all his anger went out of the window when he saw his Jaan's super annoyed face. He practically gulped but the she looked so cute with her red nose. So, he decided to rile her up further. Ab when he has to manayofy her toh he should have a fair share of fun also na.

"Arrey Geet tum wo sab chhodo...Tum bore ho rahi ho na??..."

She cutely nodded. A little happy that finally her dear Jaanoo was paying some attention to her, lest she knew what he is up to...

"Theek hai to chalo main tumse kuchh questions puchhta hoon ab tum mujhe yeh batao ki 4 ka square root kya hota hai..."

"KYAA..."

"Kyaa nahin answer is 2 , tumhe itna bhi nahi pata, main ne tumhe 6th standard mein padhaya to tha..."

He shook his head exasperatedly while peeping at her from the corner of his eyes. While Geet was super confused...

"Achchha chalo yeh batao ki IFU ka matlab kya hota hai..."

Geet blushed turning a shade of crimson red as she was reminded of that incident and the words she blurted out of her innocence along with the last few months of their passion.

"Wo..wo...main..."

"Yeh kya hai Geet tumhe itna bhi nahi pata after all tumhe to iska itna experience bhi hai..."

Geet was getting extremely uncomfortable with his open shamelessness and was about to retort but was stumped by his reply-

"...IFU means...Instruction Fetch Unit... Tumne 12th mein Computer subject mein maine padhaya tha na...Vaise tumne kya socha..."

Maan smirked naughtily at her while she cutely cribbed-

"Hey babaji mera bhi na dimaag kharab ho gaya hai...Yeh bichare mujh se kya puchh rahe the aur main…chi…chi...sharam kar Geet...wo tere baare mein kya sochemge jab unhe pata chaleha ki kaise anap-shanap kyal aate hain tere dimaag mein..Chi..chi.."

Now Maan couldn't control anymore as he heard her cribbing to her favorite Babaji. He started laughing so hard that tears came to his eyes and he fell off the couch still laughing. Geet was very confused but at the same time mesmerized by his melodious laughter-

"...Oh God jaan...Tum kitni badi TUBELIGHT ho... Tumhe abhi tak samajh nahi aaya ki main tumhe sirf tang kar raha tha...God your expressions were priceless aur tum to..."

He couldn't say anything further as he was smacked hard on his head. He looked up to see a seething Geet holding a broom in her hand. Next thing he knew was he was running in the whole room closely followed by Geet and the Broom...

"Aaj main aapko chhodungi nahi..."

Just then Maan twirled around and pinned Geet to the bed taking her by surprise. The broom lay somewhere forgotten while Maan brushed his lips over hers and huskily whispered in her ear-

"…Jaan... Tum bahut pyaari ho aur ..."

"Aur..."

"…I..."

"…Aap..."

"I love you..r cuteness..."

PRECAP

ACCIDENT ya ATTEMPT to MURDER...😲


so dears hope you liked the Irritating Maan...😆!!!

Me is literally writing my own version of deewangi, hope i am not disappointing you...😳.

Next update will take some time, Me needs to start studying😳

will wait for your views on this one...😳


PREV - PART 28


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Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi dear!!!
Me so excited to be the first one to comment today!!!🥳
Loved Maan and Geet nok-jhok!!!
Really sweet!!!
And wish you a very happy birthday dear!!!
Hope you enjoy this year ana your entire life to the fullest!!!
Edited by Maaneet4eve - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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kiska accident????😲😲😲
anybody want shock treatment shud read twisty deewangi.. 😆😆😆😆😆

😲😲
Edited by mannu1988 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
haaye loving all the pics.. specially this one!!!


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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
congos at the new thread
beautiful update
MSK ka promise bichari n all those ppl who hurt his family
nw they hv to face the wrath of MSK
anywayz IFU rofl🤣
precap sounds dangerous
whose accident Maan's or sm1 else
cnt wait for the next update
update soon pls
Edited by maanluver - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
tht was awesm
refresehed al memories of deewangi..
maan s such a tease!!
loved it!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
awesome ruchs
thanks for d treat
n wahhh
msk jisko koiii maar nahi saka aaj thak
usee hamariii geet ne maar aur vo bhi jaddu seee
superbbb
awesomeee
luved ittt
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for new thread ..
awesome update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome udate
cograts for new thread

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