MG FF: Femme Fatale (2)

Maaneet4eve

@Maaneet4eve

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Posted: 13 years ago

#371

Aweosme... so they remained friends... so what caused this to happen???

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

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Posted: 13 years ago

#372

Wonderful plot. Loved it very much. Awesome.

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#373

the insane secretary changed into an elegant lady

the khurana women must meet her

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#374

hi u back! thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Love dadi n anjali! Poor Maan! Maan impressed with Geet! Past n Present well incorporated! update soon

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#375

Maan is staring at his traditional and crazy secretary like a fool at her transformation...she always prove him wrong...

wonderful update...

thanx for pm...

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#376

Welcome back...missed you so!

I totally love Maan's character in this story...of all your other stories. I dont know why, maybe he touches a string in my heart...

Loved his silent apprehension about losing his friend and then boundless joy on getting her back...

And Pari, well loved how she was waiting for her friend as if that one year didnt exist...and yet over the years we see the same...as if the yrs of separation never existed between them..

Geet never fails to surprise. Her change of dress is just an example. Thats why Maan is ever fascinated with her - she always seems new and unfathomable - not under the famous "MSK" control LOL

The change from Pari to Geet is so evident here. The little girl who was so expressive in her actions - hugging Maan so naturally when he left and again came back now just pats Lady L's back not used to those show of feelings anymore...how difficult can life be !

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Marvee Khan

@marvee-khan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#377

oh sanjana!!! i will never get over the eloquence of your writing style!!! you're amazing darling👏

-marvee

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#378

part 10
lovely part...
Maan and Pari are so attached...
Maan is amazed seeing Geet...
he has entitled her pesky Sect...
cont soon dear...

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Sanjana

@maan-ki-sanjana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: mandymore
Yipppieee m second to comment 😃 welcome back sanju...supeerb prt..

geet to khurana khandan me famous ho gai...

luvd it 👏

Thanks Mandy! 😳
LOL yeah, she is already popular!

Originally posted by: paponecon
maan can never forget his pari...nt still nw...

Nope...she is unforgettable 😃

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Bharathi_gurti

@Bharathi_gurti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#380

Sanju your update makes me wonder what would have happened to that beautiful kid PARI to turn into such a gang leader..😲..what happened was that all i think about.!!!😲...a nice and a good update..are we gonna get a romantic /sizzling umber from Geet dressed in that gorgeous gown!!!!..😳..waiting for your next update..great work..keep writing Sanju...👏...

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