MG:OS:As Long As You Are With Me-Part 2:Pg 8-19/03

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Hey friends , I'm again back with one sweet and cute OS . Few of my friends 🤗 Remya di (Ramya_Pillai) Reshu (mayapari) and Jyo (Jyothikrish) wanted me to write one such cute OS..I'm not sure if it's a cute OS 😆..but it's surely a happy wala OS 😃. So here's the first part and there are two more parts of this OS. Enjoy and do comment after reading😉 , I love reading them .😃

So here goes the first part 😃

---As Long As You Are With Me---

Part 1

He looked at her from the glass partition ,she was playing with her pen and talking to herself with various kinds of expressions on her face that were changing with every passing minute. She was complaining to her babaji about something with a frown and then again started to smile to herself like an innocent girl . She and her complaining sessions with her babaji ...Maan got used to it ,he kept looking at her and smiled inwardly but something suddenly striked his mind and he wondered how much pain is hidden behind her smile .

It has been three months that Geet joined Khurana Constructions , they knew each other even before a lot of unforgettable incidents in Hoshairpur that always made them stand against each other face to face , Now Maan was just happy that she is fine and happy with her new life that she has chosen for herself so decided not to re-open her past wounds as he was not sure about her reaction regarding that. . They started their Boss-Employee journey as strangers .

He got to see a new face of her everyday .

There Geet was sitting in her cabin ... Hey babaji ...Why are you showing such miracles to this innocent , simple soul !! Aj Maan Singh Khurana ne Sorry bola??!! Haila...His sorry is still ringing in my ears!! I don't know how many other miracles you are gonna show!!

Geet suddenly hit her forehead..Geet...how can you forget ,agar tu time pe nahi pahunchi na to Maan sir ke ek sorry ke badle tujhe 100 sorry aur bolne padenge!!

And it's not an easy task to jhelo his anger na ,so run Geet run!!

Geet knocked on his cabin and entered in .

Hello Sir .

So Ms. Geet is on time today , he said while moving his eyes on the screen of the laptop.

Geet frowned...Yeh kya?? Yeh to aise baat kar rahe hai ,jaise I'm always late...huh!! Dusht Danav!!

Sir ,you called me for the dictation right!!

Yeah Geet before that you remember na tomorrow we both need to leave for Manali ,I want you to be in the airport at exact 7 . 'Exact' He stressed on those words.

Sure sure...I'll be there at 7 'Exact' ,she said repeating the word in a same manner as he did.

Maan looked at her . Yeh ladki bhi na ,he thought to himself.

Sir...

Haan..Maan started dictating ,she noted down everything carefully and repeated his words .

Maan removed his eyes from the laptop and looked at her ,she was busy repeating the letter and he kept looking at her with a smile , There was something in her that always attracted him ,something so beautiful and magnetic . Those eyes had a lot to convey.

Maan came back to his senses

Maan what are you doing!! What's happening to you ...why is this girl affecting you so much.

He looked at her .

Geet ,it's over and there's no need to repeat everything ..leave ,I have a lot of work

Sir but...

I said Leave Geet! said Maan in an authoritative voice.

Oh..Okk Sir.

She left the cabin ,Maan tried to concentrate on his work but was unable to do soMaan Concentrate !! Why are you letting that girl affect you so much!!Just stop thinking about her.

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He reached Khurana Mansion and saw Geet and dadimaa sitting together and talking to each other.

Areh Maan beta ...aap aa gaye , Geet told me that you went to meet some-one after the office hours ,I was jst waiting for you ,did you eat anything?? You work the all day and now you have also started to meet your clients after the office hours and you don't even eat properly.

Don't worry dadima ,I had my dinner with my clients , so don't take much tension and please stop worrying about me .

Maan smiled and hugged his daadi .

After that He started to walk towards his room and saw Geet standing there.

Geet .

Yes Sir , Geet went near him.

Are all the files ready for tomorrow??

Yes sir .

Geet it's a very important meeting and I don't want any single mistake.

Ji Sir ,Geet nodded

Aur haan...

Ji sir..

Maan please , this is your house and not your office ,so stop behaving like a boss all the time.Here Geet is not your employee she is our guest ,samjhe aap

Okk..okk..Dadima ...I'm leaving . No more office talks here ,he left to his room.

Geet went to dadima ...It's ok dadima...Office ho ya Ghar Maan Sir to Maan si r hi rahenge!!she giggled

Dusht Daanav!!! she muttered under her breath.

Her last words didn't go unheard and daadi ma smiled looking at Geet.

Chaliye na Dadima , I want to learn to make Pasta ,you'll help me na..

Bilkul bta ,chaliye.

Maan was busy in his files and just then he heard some noice of the vessels ,It disturbed him a lot ,

He stood up and went towards the Kitchen from where the huge noise of vessels dropping came.

He saw Geet standing between a lot of vessels lying on the floor.

Geet ,What are you doing??!!

Sir..woh ye gir gaye!!

Woh to dikh hi raha hai!! Tum har waqt kuch na kuch kyun giraati rehti ho??!!

Kabhi files ,kabh pens and kabhi Vessels aur kabhi kabhi toh khud bhi gir jaati ho!!

Haaw!! Geet opened her mouth wide into an O.

Accha ji...Aur aap ?? Aap bhi toh hamesha chillate rehte ho , Kabhi Office mein ,kabhi ghar mein aur toh aur aaj Kitchen mein bhi..dekha babaji!!

Accha now If your never ending sessions of talking to yourself have ended would you care to tell me the reson behind your presence in this Kitchen??!! Maan said while picking up some of the vessels lying on the floor.

Main..woh..main..woh..Pasta ..haan Pasta banaane aayi thi!!

Pasta ??

Haan...

So what is this Sugar can doing here??

Do you know that there's no need of Sugar to prepare Pasta.

This is not some halwa!!

Sir ,you shout at me in the office regarding work and now why are you shouting in this Kitchen and that too for this Pasta ,Geet said while making an innocent face.

Geet ,Maan shouted angrily .

Geet agar kuch sikhna hai toh dhang se seekho!! Aur...

Geet ,tu na yaha se bhaag ja varna inka not-so-jhellable gussa na jhelna pade tujhe!!

Geet where are you going.

Sir I'm running..I mean I'm going..kal Exjact 7 pahunchna hai na...!!

Bye Bye..Good night ,she said while leaving.

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Precap : Maan -Geet in Manali 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it!!!!
yaar yu are too awesome!!!!
its gonna be interesting!!!!!
cute...
hamara the MSK fullto latoo on our princss geet!!!!!!
superb writing...
ohho manaali!!!
chill chill climate n maannrt alone!!!
dangerous combination😉😳
ll be waiting for next part...
thanx for writing on our demends!!!!!!
love yu loads
reshu😳
Edited by mayapari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great os...
I love maan and geet's boss and secretary relationship...its really cute...
Continue soon... 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey babaji main tho bohot bohot khush hu...
babaji aapko pata hain nam ne pehli baar kuch sweet sweet updates de rahi hain...
main tho bohot excited hu nam..
awesome update yaar...
it was so cute, funny... geet self talks n maan is admiring her... hayeee 😍
u used ur jhelable here... 😆
wow their talks kabhi files, kabhi vessels aur labhi tum bhi gir jaati ho... hahaha that was funny dear...
hayee geet will ready by 7 EXACTLY.. lolzzz...
wow maneet in manali...
eagerly waiting for next update nam...
continue soon na...
thanks for writing such a sweet os... me loving it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Cont soon plz. I was searching 4 a new light hearted maneet story . Start is gud made me recall d glorious day of ghsp.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome
i loved it



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayapari

loved it!!!!

yaar yu are too awesome!!!!
its gonna be interesting!!!!!
cute...
hamara the MSK fullto latoo on our princss geet!!!!!!
superb writing...
ohho manaali!!!
chill chill climate n maannrt alone!!!
dangerous combination😉😳
ll be waiting for next part...
thanx for writing on our demends!!!!!!
love yu loads
reshu😳

Aaww...thanks a lot dear..I'm glad you liked this part ,will be soon updating the next part 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: icy_magma

Great os...
I love maan and geet's boss and secretary relationship...its really cute...
Continue soon... 😃

Awww..thank you dear. 😃..I'm reading such comment in my thread probably for the very first time 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyothikrish

hey babaji main tho bohot bohot khush hu...
babaji aapko pata hain nam ne pehli baar kuch sweet sweet updates de rahi hain...
main tho bohot excited hu nam..
awesome update yaar...
it was so cute, funny... geet self talks n maan is admiring her... hayeee 😍
u used ur jhelable here... 😆
wow their talks kabhi files, kabhi vessels aur labhi tum bhi gir jaati ho... hahaha that was funny dear...
hayee geet will ready by 7 EXACTLY.. lolzzz...
wow maneet in manali...
eagerly waiting for next update nam...
continue soon na...
thanks for writing such a sweet os... me loving it...

Hahaha...ab itne logon ke jhootis ke baad ,I jst wanna have the pleasure of their smiles and hugs 😆
Yeah..."Jhellable"...It's always on my tongue so used it here 😆
Thanks for the lovely comment Jyo 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nitya

Cont soon plz. I was searching 4 a new light hearted maneet story . Start is gud made me recall d glorious day of ghsp.

Even I tried to weave sone lovely maaneet moments 😍 in this OS ...I'm glad you liked this part dear 😃

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