App ki nazron ne samjha UPDATED NEW THREAD LINK @ pg 1 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome story cont soon!
urrgghhh hate brij:(
awww maan geet annie are so so cute
natasha is so cheap
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update soon.
Awesome story😍
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello buddy read all 5 Parts of ur ff in one go,its really interesting & emotional too.At couple of times my eyes were moist reading d story.Its really good & next time wen u update pls pm me too.And thanx 4 informing me abt d story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

Brij is such a ... kya bolu..

update more
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 6
Anie pls bata na..main kaisa lag raha hu ??dekh..sach sach bata,mujhe use aj propose karna hai.(anie pls tell me na,how am I looking?? Look ,pls tell me truly as I am going to propose her today)
Bhai for the 40th time I am saying..u are looking great..
Accha anie maine sach me 40 bar pucha hai kya..(really?? Have I asked this for 40th time)
Ha bhai..(yes bro)
Wo mann jayegi na??(will she accept me??)
Hmm..let me think..u are a little chubby,dekhne me..ok ho..kamate,mmm..thik thak ho..aur(hmm..let me think..u are a little chubby,u look umm..ok..u earn ok..&..)
Anie !!!mujhe dilasa de rahi hai ya mujhe dara rahi hai??(anie are u pacifying me or scaring me?!!)
Anie laughed..are bhai..don't worry..agar wo sach me acchi hai..to wo sirf apka dil dekheegi..jo bohut accha hai..jaisa kisike pass nahi hai(bro don't worry,if she is really good at heart,she will see only your heart..which is great & no one has a heart like that)
Thanks anie..
Waise bhai..she asked keeping her elbow on his shoulder,apnea abhi vi uski tasvir nahi dikhayi..(bro..u haven't showed her pic yet)
Oh ha!! Mere mobile me ek pic hai uski..(oh ya! I have one pic in my mobile )
Chori chori khicha hai..mmm..not bad bro, (hmm..u have taken her pic without her knowledge..not bad bro..) she said naughtily..

Maan smiled at her teasing..he gave his phone to her..
Anie excitedly took it,bt when she was going to see her pic..it automatically switched off.
Kya hai bhai..phone pe charge dena tha na..main dekh vi nahi payi unka pic..(what is this bro!! u have not charged your mobile, I could not see her pic)
Oh!! Sorry anie..waise main kaisa lag raha hu??sach sach batana..(sorry anie..bt tell me na how am I looking?? Tell truly )he asked fixing his shirt GAIN!!!
BHAAAIII!!!!!!!!!!!!(BROOO!!!)
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Pammi!! What have you done!! Asked her mother??
What??
Why have you suggested akash's name for geet?? Don't you know that his father will demand a lot & thus nothing will be left for you & brij..
Chill mom...i have planned it all,that akash always sits & stands up on his father's words bt after this marriage we will get all the wealth for sure
Kaise?? Wo to sirf apni papa ki baat manta hai..(bt how?akash always listens to his father only)

par main jo bolti hu karta hai.. chahe apni DADDy se chup ke hi ho kyu na..mujhe DIDI jo manta hai.. .(bt he does what I say even if he has to do it secretly..after all..he thinks me as his big sis!!)she laughed..so we will enjoy all the wealth at the end..
Pammi's mother also laughed..wa beta..kya dimag lagaya hai..brij to tumhe sabashi de raha hoga..(wow!! WhAT a plan u have thought!! Brij must be praising you)
MOM!! Ye baat brij ke smne nahi ani chahiye..(MOM! This should not reach brij's ears)
Kyu?? Ab wo koi sidha admi to hai nahi..(why not! After all he is no saint!)

Yes mom..bt after fulfilling his dreams his sister's happiness is biggest to him..yah!! he wants to fulfill all his wishes by hook or crook..bt he never lusted after the wealth kept for his sister..he also..like other brothers..wants his sister's happiness,his family's happiness..bt he looses rationality when the question is of his wishes.
Oh!! So all the drama he created..were never money related??
It is not like that..sometimes it was money related..bt ..actually he is like a kid..who wants what he wants..by hook or crook..like our marriage..he is a selfish man..always looks at himself first..then others.
Bt loves his family..specially that stupid behenji geet!
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Maan was watching geet through the glass window..umm..kaise kahu..(how should i say)
I should just give the roses & say..Geet I LOVE YOU..
Tch..naaa accha nahi lag raha hai..(naaa it doen't sound good)
he looked up,geet ke babaji..pls meri vi aj help kar do na(geet's babaji!! Pls help me!!)
He was talking to himself..not noticing that geet was looking at him weirdly..

She looked up & said babaji ye inhe kya ho gaya hai..ye akele akele kya bate kar rahe hai..(babaji!! What has happened to him! What is he mumbling alone to himself??)
Geet ye apne app se baate to tu karti hai na..HAAAWWW!!! kahi ye tujhe nakal to nahi kar rahe hai!!(geet, this habit of talking to urself is urs!! Haawww..is he mimicking me! )
Avi batai hu!( I will show him) she made an angry face

O ho!! Ye card vi to dena hai.. ..(o ho! I have t give this card to him also)she thought blushing
Sir..geet peeped through his cabin door..
Maan jumped from his seat..
k..kk.kk..kkk kya hai??(what is it??)
sir main andar au??(can I come in?)
h..hha.. (yes)

sir mujhe apse kuch kehna hai..(sir I want to say something to you),she said blushing with her eyes low
his heart leaped in joy..maybe she loves me..bt a man should tell this first..isn't it?? So the girl feels less nervous!
he promptly presented the bundle of rose to her...at the same time..she presented a card towards him..they both smiled & took the presents for each other..

sir how do you know??? Ummm maybe mom told you.she said happily.
Maan also smiled seeing her happiness ,bt one look at the card..his happiness vanished ,his world collapsed infront of his eyes bt he could not even FLINCH .
Geet..what is this??
Sir my wedding card,she said shyly..i know that I am a bit late in telling you..bt what I can do sir,all happened so fast ,bt thanks for the roses ..he said chirpily & left..

Then again she peeped through the door..maan aana zarror apko aana hi parega..apni dosti ki kasam..(you have to come maan,in the name of our friendship)she smiled & left.
Maan did not know for how long he had been standing there...with the card in his hand..
When he gained a little power to move..he did not waste any time & ran to his home..to his one & only friend..anie,his little sister..
Yes he had his daadi with him..bt the old lady was so fragile physically & SPECIALLY mentally that maan could not even think of sharing his pain with this old lady..breaking her more..
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As soon as the door opened anie hugged him smiling broadly..he wanted to share his pain with her,bt stopped seeing his sister's happy face. He thought he would tell her later.

What happened??he asked trying to sound as normal as he could
Bhai bhai bhaiii!! Anie held his shoulder & circled him round & round.
Bhai I am so happy GEET is going to be married.
GEET??
Yes! My di!! Geet..that wonderful lady about whom I always go gaga about.
She invited me,& I am going for sure!! Nothing can stop me.oh what happened to your proposal..Did that lady accepted it..she better accept it or I wil break her teeth!!!!
Relax!! She did not come today..she is suffering from viral fever
Oops!! Wrong day maybe..better luck next time..saying this she left.
Ya anie!! You are right!! Wrong day indeed! He whispered .
Precap- marriage & teaser
for those who have not seen the teaser yet, it is at page 21


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Edited by Shilalipi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet marriage fixed maan heart broken waiting for lajja film dialogue in ff and maneet marriage do next soon



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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update

i read this one first time although read its prologue before

awsome concept
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update dear waiting eagerly for the teaser 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update...
geet's family 😡... poor maan 🥺😭
eagerly waiting for the teaser part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the part. Oww, poor maan
Yeh geet is getting married! Aur Annie knw geet.
Oww, feeling really bad for Maan yr, yeh to wo hi purani filmo jaisa ho gaya.😆
Waiting for their love story to proceed. Continue soon
-LUV Anyaa😳

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