CAN WE FIX IT ??? ~2 EPILOGUE PG 72 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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When will u update today??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on new thread
waiting for ur update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHAPTER 16

Geet woke up after she herself didn't know how much hours …………………. She didn't find maan and sid near her it was unusual that her sleep lovers woke before her …………………. She went to the living room only to find maan and sid watching cartoon ……………………….. maan was sitting leisurely placing his legs on the tea poy and sid was on his lap …………………….. both were drinking something …………………….. she looked at the glass closely and was shocked to see sid was drinking milk that to without any drama and maan was drinking coffee …………….. is that possible that sid could drink milk without creating a big scene she wondered ……………….. geet walked near them …………………


" good afternoon sweet heart " said maan
" good after noon mom " said sid

" good after noon " she said sitting near them


" is it really u who is drinking milk so silently ? " asked geet in astonishment
" its magic of MSK " said maan proudly


Geet rolled her eyes and he just winked at her


" did u both have break fast ? ……………….. why u didn't wake me ? …………………… its already 1 ……………….. now what will I do ? " geet bombarded in her style
" relax sweetheart ……………….. why do u ask so much questions ?... we had our break fast and u should have some food now …………… u don't worry we don't mind u sleeping as we can get some peace from ur talks , right champ " asked maan

" right " said sid lifting his hands in air


Geet's mouth formed a big 'o' ………….


" how dare u both tease me ?... do u think I talk a lot ? " she asked making baby face

" no not much but a little lot " chuckled maan


Geet made angry face and was about to move when maan caught her wrist and made her sit …………………………….. she hugged her from one side and sid from the other …………..


" u talk a lot but we love hearing to u , right champ ? " asked maan
" right " said sid

" u r such a puppet " geet said pulling sid's cheeks

" I ll prepare lunch " said geet getting up
" don't bother u just have ur food and we ll start soon " said maan


Sid wanted to play in water one last time before going back ……………………. So they went to beech …………………….. Sid was playing while maan and geet were sitting watching him play in the same place where they shared their intese kiss last night ……………………

Geet placed her head on maan's shoulder and he put his hand around her


" I m sorry maan …………… I can never forgive myself for how I behaved with u last night " said geet her eyes were wet with tears …………………….

" geetu plzzz don't think abt it ………………. U don't have to feel guilty in fact u shd feel happy that we r together only after that small fight ………………………… if u r so much particular about thinking abt last night why don't u think the good things that happened between eyes " maan said with mischievous smile ……………….

" maan …. Shameless ………." She said playfully hitting his chest

" you ought to get used to this sweety ………………….. u ll get to face most naughty side of MSK " maan said with a wink

" really ! "

" a lot "


Geet smiled and nodded ………………..Maan received a call and excused himself …………………….. geet started to play with sid as he insisted …………………….. after about half an hour when geet and sid were exhausted they went back to home only to find the living room decorated with lights and candles …………………….. Maan was sitting in a chair holding his guitar ………………… he began to sing once geet entered …………………

Kisi ko sapna lagey tu, kisi ko behti hawa
Kisi ko bas baaton mein, kare pal mein yahan wahan
Kisi ke sau jhoot sun le, kisi ka sacch bhi ghunah
Kisi ka bas yaadon mein, kare hulchul saara jahaan
Te amo me te amo
Tu chaon hai, tu dhoop hai
Te amo me te amo
Tere hazaaron roop hai
Koi samja nahin, jo bhi hai bas khoob hai
Falling so crazy in love
Te amo me te amo
Tu chaon hai, tu dhoop hai
Te amo me te amo
Tere hazaaron roop hai


Geet stood watching him in awe ………………… she has seen him play guitar a lot and always wondered how it would be if he play for her …………………….. but now when it happened it seemed like a dream …………………… her thoughts were broken when sid clapped ……………………….. maan walked towards them ……………………. He knelt before sid


" are u not interested to see what I have bought for u " asked maan …………………….. sid's eyes widened in eager
" its in the bed room " maan said and immediately sid ran to see his gift ……………………..


Maan stood on his leg ………………. He caught geet's wrist and made her sit in the chair ………………………he knelt before her ………………


" for which I was waiting for past seven years I m gonna tell to u in this seven seconds will u be mine for next seven births " asked maan with full glow in face


Geet nodded her head with happy tears in her eyes ……………………… maan took out a ring from his pocket and placed it in her finger then he took her hand and kissed it …………………….

" I love u geetu " he said looking into her eyes
" I …………. I love u too maan " she said

" may I have a dance with my princess ? " asked maan extending his hand


Geet placed her hand in his ……………… maan played the song from his phone and they began to dance ………………………. They were looking deep into eachothers eyes …………………….


" this was always my dream " said geet
" I didn't know u dream about me " said maan who spun her and hugged her from back and placed his chin on her shoulder ……………..


"that was the problem that u never knew " geet said
"i always thought that u liked me but u never expressed so I wasn't sure " said maan
" how do u expect me to express didn't u see in my eyes " asked geet making face
" umm…………… well I guessed after that party night but was a bit sacred to tell u ……………….. then u knew I had to go to London "
" and u came back with pari " said geet with sudden furry
Maan chuckled " she is just a family friend " maan said turning her to face him " I never saw anyone but u …………………… when I came back I was said that u were engaged to armaan "

" oh that ! it was all kind of drama " said heet smiling
" really ? ………… I m mean I knew u were good frds but I thought ………….."
" that we were a couple " geet completed
" not exactly but ……………."
" well amy's granny was suffering from cancer and she wanted him to married as soon as possible we had no other go then to fake this whole engagement thing …………….." said geet
" oh………… but ridz …….." asked maan
" they both met only after all this " said geet


" I should have done this all long ago " said maan " I wasted so many years "
" don't worry we ll compensate " said geet with mischevious tone
" how exactly ? " maan asked with naughty eyes

Geet put her hands around his shoulder and mann pulled her close to him ………………..

" I don't want an incomplete kiss this time u better don't stop me " maan said with a wink ………………… geet turned crimson red ………………..


He slowly took her lips in his ………………….. this time it was completely diff from their previous one …………………… both kissed more due to love to celebrate their togetherness than to desire to get each other ……………………….. he wasn't slow this time ………………. He was greedy to get all that she has ………………………… first it was difficult for geet to cope with him but soon she began to respond as he started to guide her ……………………. They broke their kiss after long time when they were breathless ……………………

" I love to feel u ……………… u r so sweet " maan said tracing his lips with his tongue ………………………….. geet blushed and hid her face in his chest ………………….

" we shd go now sweetheart champ must be waiting " said maan after a couple of minutes ……………

Geet smiled seeing his concern ……………………… They three drove back to geet's house maan was reluctant to leave …………………


" I really want u both with me " said maan making sad face
" but now u have to go ……………. U have meeting tmr " said geet
" I ll miss u……………. how will I sleep withut u both in my arms ………….. I ll end up dreaming abt u the whole night " maan said………………………


geet just smiled seeing how much he loved her and yet it took years for them to confess…………………. After lot of sweet talks and kisses maan left ………………………. Geet couldn't stop herself from blushing thinking what all happed in last 24 hours …………….It was her dream to be with maan he is always her love ………………………she promised herself that whatever happens she ll give him all happiness ……………………..

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crazydream thanks for so much post i hope u like this update

MY OTHER SS

BE MY LOVE ... AGAIN.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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[Quote=Nandy_Bru]crazydream thanks for so much post i hope u like this update[/quote]
U Are welcome. N ofcourse i like this update.
Bahut pyara tha.
A beautiful update
Liked the way Maan surprised Geet n
proposed to her in romantic way.
The song is my favourite.


Continue soon. Will be waiting.
Luved it.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
awesome part
awww loved their first date

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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
great part
liked it
plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Amazing part..
Luvd to c maneet together...
I loved when maan never failed to show his love for sid even when he s with geet..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update..thanks for PM😊

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