BE MY LOVE ... AGAIN-MG- SS epilogue pg 122 - Page 36

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Posted: 13 years ago
Before going into next update i wanted to make two things clear

1) Why is geet comfortablw with maan ? what is she planning ?

I already mentioned in earlier chapters that geet still have feelings for maan so she still feels comfortablw in his presence . The whole thing is about maan starting to like geet . I wanted to show that before proceeding further . UNLESS SOMETHING IS CLOSE TO YOU , YOU LL NOT BE WORRIED WHEN IT GOES AWAY FROM YOU that is what is all about geet's plan . She wants to hurt him emotionally playing with his feelings . In further chapters it will involve more of maan's realisations of love , mistake etc

2) does maan really love geet or is it just for the baby ?

You will get ur ans very soon .
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Posted: 13 years ago
Well if geet is doing all this to tk revenge then m fine... Maan should be hurted emotionally n deep... I want him to suffer... End mai chaiye kuch bhi ho ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
will be waiuting for update thanx for information
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the note dear
it made things clear
waiting for the update
continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
oh thanks for clearing the doubt...
even i was having the feel why geet so nice to maan...

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Posted: 13 years ago
will be waiting for the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey nandy for the first time i am commenting on ur fs they r simply great do please entertain us fromur ffs if u read my comment pls reply😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: NANDY_BRU

Before going into next update i wanted to make two things clear

1) Why is geet comfortablw with maan ? what is she planning ?

I already mentioned in earlier chapters that geet still have feelings for maan so she still feels comfortablw in his presence . The whole thing is about maan starting to like geet . I wanted to show that before proceeding further . UNLESS SOMETHING IS CLOSE TO YOU , YOU LL NOT BE WORRIED WHEN IT GOES AWAY FROM YOU that is what is all about geet's plan . She wants to hurt him emotionally playing with his feelings . In further chapters it will involve more of maan's realisations of love , mistake etc

2) does maan really love geet or is it just for the baby ?

You will get ur ans very soon .


GEET KA REVENGE KA IDEA ACHCHA HAI
HE DOESNT DESERVE THEM BOTH
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Posted: 13 years ago
maaneet ko sath rakhna but pehle geet ko revenge lene do phir sab equal ho jayega then mahiii
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CHAPTER 10


The day is unforgettable ...i was with her whole day sharing each and every second with her ... i never knew spending time with geet would give me so much satisfaction ... but when the day came to an end i can't make myself walk away from my baby and my mirchi ... I still managed to lift my rooted legs from there when i heard her saying


" do u have to go leaving us ? "


The word rang in my ear as a music ... The next thing i remember is that i was sitting in the couch of the bed room with my legs leisurely placed on the table before and geet beside me in the same position ...


" what do u want name her ?" i said refering our baby not liking the silence between us
" i will think a name for him later " she said emphasising the HIM
" its her " i snapped
" maan don't argue " she said
" i m her father i know better" i said
" and i m his mother who is carrying him " she snapped in my face
" don't fight this time u can have ur baby boy but next time i want my gal "


I didn't realise that my statement has intense meaning untill i studied her expression ... In reality we both are not together nad that is the hardes truth of our lives ...but why ? ... why aren't we together ... may be we aren't together today because of me ... but i didn't wanted to think about it ... this situation is too good to think about problems ...


" i wanted to tell u something geet " i said but she was missing ...


Where is she?... she was sitting near me till now ... where did she go?... did she went leaving me ...

I imeediately ran to the hall but i was stopped before that when is spotted her in the extended bolcany ... she was walking with her hand wide open trying to catch the rain drops in her hand ...

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qt_TosmcDIw[/YOUTUBE]

O Re Piya Haye
Udne Laga Kyon Man Baawla Re
Aaya Kahan Se Yeh Hosla Re
O Re Piya Haye

I walked towards her held in a trance ... i knew she like rain ... yes she has told me once ... i looked at her how she was enjoying childishly trying to hold the rain drops in her hand the gracefully let it down such each drop was dripping from tip of her finger ...

Tanabana Tanabana Bunti Hawaa Haaye Bunti Hawa
Boondein Bhi To Aaye Nahi Baaz Yahan
Sagish Mein Shaamil Sara Jahan Hai
Har Zare Zare Ki Yeh Iltiza Hai

" geet u will catch cold " i said concerned
" maan don't spoil the feel " she said still enjoying the rain
" feel? " i raised my eyebrows
"maan have ever tried to catch the rain in ur hand? " she asked me with glowing eyes
" hold? "

She took my hands in hers and bend my fingers as if holding something ...

" close ur eyes " she said and i followed

Holding rain drops ... it really happened ... i can feel it ... i opened my eyes and she was already far away leaning on the parapet ...

O Re Piya
O Re Piya Haye
O Re Piya
Ni Re ,Re Re Ga
Ga Ga Ma
Ma Ma Pa
Pa Ma Ga Re Sa

I went near her... I touched her hand ...

" umm " she asked still eyes closed

I pulled her towards me in a jerk ... her eyes napped open ... she looked at me questioningly ...i put my hand round her waist and she involuntiarly held my shoulder...

There was no music still we bagan to move to the sound of the rain drop ...

Sa Re Re Sa
Ga Ga Re
Ma Ma Ga
Pa Pa Ma
Dha Dha Pa
Ni Ni Sa Sa Pa
Pa Sa Ma Pa Dha Ni Sa Ni
Re Ni Sa Sa Sa.. . . . ..

In these many years i have seen rain million time and experianced it equally but it never felt so much special ... A chill ran in my spine and i know it is not because of rain ... it was defenitely because of the the 'Rain Princess' before me ... I looked at her in awe ...she was something else ...she was enjoying the rain dros on her face closing her eyes and i was indeed enjoying her ...

Nazrein Bolen Duniya Bole
Dil Ki Zaban Haaye Dil Ki Zubaan
Ishq Maange Ishq Chahe Koi Toofan
Chalna Aahiste Ishq Naya Hai
Pehla Yeh Vada Humne Kiya Hai
O Re Piya Haaye
Piyaaa...


" geet " i called her
" umm "
" look at me " i said and she obeyed

I moved a little closer and kissed her froehead ... she looked at me confused ...I looked into her eyes to capture her expressions ... Her eyes were as big as bounce ball , her nose was nothing less the typical shape of mirchi , her lips take after orange pulp ... My entire worrld stopped just by looking at her ... that moment for some reason i felt lucky...
Yehhh Piya
Nange Pairo Pe Angaro
Chalti Rahi Haaye Chalti Rahi
Lagta Hai Ke Gairo Mein
Palti Rahi Haaye
Le Chal Wahan Jo
Mulk Tera Hai
Jahil Zamana
Dushman Mera Hai
Haaye

I moved closer to her to her lips were pulling me like a iorn towards a magnet ... for the first time i wanted to touch her not to satisfy my lust ... i wanted my soul to get connected with her ... i wanted her lips to erase all the err in me and take me high ...
I inched close to her lips...as reflex action she closed her eyes ...distance reduced and our lips touched ... just a simple touch took me beyond heaven but it didn't last long ... ishe moved back i opened my eyes to see her ...

she looked at me for brief seconds

" i have to go " she said before running
i stood seeing her retreting figure ... that moment i gave name to my feelings ... that moment i decided to sort out everything between us ... that moment i decided to surrender true maan to her...

O Re Piya Haye

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PRECAP : ARJUN AND GEET TALK

I THINK I HAVE CLEARED ALL DOUBTS IN THE NOTE SO STILL IF U HAVE FURTHER CONFUSIONS FEEL FREE TO ASK



Edited by NANDY_BRU - 13 years ago

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