BECHAIN DILL a maaneet ff update on pg 51 - Page 21

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Posted: 13 years ago
updating😃
Edited by anvashakhurana - 13 years ago
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hey guys thanks for the lovely comment and likes

i had reply all of u so if u want to cheak u can find the reply from pg 44 to 47

a special thanks to mayapari

note - guys mayapari is on vecation so no pm for one month so if u want to read then do prefer daily update

chapter 11

as the five came out of the prince office maan told

maan - guys i think we should do a grand welcome for the girls after all our prince had told us

mayank - see dont include me i am off to home so dont except any help from my side

arman - see i have a date today so i am also off so by guys

adi - i have to prepare for test so i am also leving

samrat - i think maan i also need to practice basketball so by

maan - ok guys by but remember that if i go to mayank house and to meet kriya(arman recent girlfrind) and also to simran(sam recent girl frind)and after that what happen is not my head pain

listning to maan words all stop in their way and turn to look at smriking maan

they all came to stand near maan and said

all together - ara hum kha ja rahai hai hum to tara sat mil ka girls ki welcom ki planing kara ga

in mean time arman thought- agar ya kriya ka pas chala gaya to sab bata daga ki maina hi usa ka us ki ex ka breakup karwaya tha aur wo mara hat sa nikal jayagi

samrat - agar ya simran sa mila to jarur bata da ga ki mai us ki bhan ko bhi pata rakha hu

mayank - agar maa sa mil;a to phir sa maa ko mara aur us profecer ka bara mai batadaga aur phir maa mugha lucher dagi

as their thinking seasion finished maan said

maan - ya hui na bath ab suno ...

as they fnished their planing mayank said - so kal mil ta hai un larkiyo ka welcome karna ka liya

and all left with a evil smile

next day in front get of collage all five were standing

mayank - r u sure guys ki wo larkiya abhi aegi(come)

samrat - ha dad na to ya hi kha tha

maan - ok arman u know na what u have to do

arman - yes boss

as they were talking fore bycike enter in such a speed that every student face turn to look who it was

as the bycike stop everyone became stunt to see the site

foure girls came in the site all wearing salwar suit

the girl in blue said - the race was superb right gunjan

gunjan - ok redhima but u know that what so ever we do the race is always worn by geet

the girl in red said - by god geet tusa koi nahi jit sakta

geet - nupur asa nahi hai tum bhi jit sakti thi bas tum log chalange ko joke samaj ta ho aur ma nahi

all three girls said together - hame pata hai tu kitani serious hoti hai

while the girls were talking to each other a girl in mini skirt said

girl – look at the small town girls realy some people r so cheep by doing some work like us they think they can be the best but they don't know that people like them can never be like us

a girl wering jiens said – u r write see their dress so cheep

but the both girls don't know that the girls for whom they r talking r already being admiring by the boys

and here the four (arman,samrat,mayank,maan) r looking at the girls by hanging mouth

precap - face off😉


author note - sorry guys for late update and i also know that this update was boring but belive me i tried to do some thing about it but... sorry again😭

ps ; if u like then do press like button and do comment

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 11
nice part...
cont soon dear...

PS - u can pm me dear and i will post it on the thread and u can too post the link there like u used to do before...so fikar not and pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely...

cant wait for the face-off...

continue soon...
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love at first sight
boys flattered
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hi guys realy sorry for late update i was gone to attend my brother marrige so plz dont be angry
a special thans to mayspari😊
Chapter-12

Maan-guys stop looking at them and u arman get to ur work

Arman-look who is telling,khud to mu khola dakh raha tha aur hama kha raha hai

And maan gave him a dangerous look and arman shut his mouth

Mayank-look guys I think that we should be working on our plan nor keep giving look to each other

All said together-ok

As the girls were walking in the corrider some one came vicling and holding a coke in his hand and he bumped with redhima and whole liqued fell on her

Ridhma ? hi u idot cant u see and walk

Man-opps I thing some one said me to say sorry

And the student standing their started laughing

Suddenly mayank pushed adi from back and a shoked adi came in frount and said

Adi ? arman tune ya kya kiya aura k to tuna in par coldring giradi aur sorry bhi nahi bol raha tum jao

Adi to ridhma ? I am sorry behalf of him app mara sath aeya (come) ma ap ko washroom dikhata hu

Nupur ? ha ridhma tu is ka sath ja aur gunjan ko bhi la ja ma aur geet principal ka pass ja ta hai

Geet ? hai tum dono jao

As the four went apart geet and nupar was passing a room when nupur heard some thing and got stoped and geet continued to walk

As nupur stoped they heard a boy saying

Boy ? wo I got the Q paper of history now I will pass easily

When nupar hear this she thought that she is also weak in history so she can ask this boy a paper for her self

And she entered in the room and said

Nupar ? agar tum rastigate nahi ho na chata to mugha bhi is Q paper ki ak copy dado

Boy ? tum kon ho

Nupar ? tum sa kya matlab , tum paper da ta ho ya?

Boy passing da paper

Boy ? ya lo

And nupar went from their but as she came out a new boy came in and said

New boy ? kya bath hai mayank tut ho sab sa acha dana kart a hai

Mayank ? kyu maan tugha kya lag ta hai drama sirf tu hi kar sak ta hai

Maan ok ab chal flim ka end agar miss kar diya to flim dakhana ka kya faida

Makank ? right chal

And there when gunjan and ridhma rich wash room redhma entered and gunjan was entering when samrat cane and pass his hanky to her

Gunjan ? y this and who r u

Sam ? hi I am sam and this is for rubbing ur face as some thing is stick their and secondly I u frind is finding u in corrider

Gunjan beliving him rubbed her face

Gunjan ? thanku aur mari ak frind andar hai mai usa laka ja ti hu

Sam ? dond worry tum jao mai thumari dost ko bajh do ga

Gunjan ? par

Sam ? ara job hi thumri frind parashan ho jai gi

As listning to him gunjan went from their samrat nock at door

And ridhma opned it she still did not washed her dress

Ridhma ? yes

Sam ? I think ur frind standing heir went to corrider running I think u should also go and find out

And listing that gunjan had ran to corrider ridhma without thinking ran to corrider

And here nupar riched in corrider in search of geet

Here as ridhma ran arman maan and mayank came laughing and dragging a confious and scaread adi

All four arman maan mayank and sam hi-five each other and ran in corrider to see the final show

In corrider

As gunjan came in corrider every one started laughfing

And nupar who was tring to find geet saw gunjan and said

Nupar ? tara chara ko kya hua ink sad ho ka aae(come) hai kya and started laughing with every one and when redhma rich their everyone started to fall on each other laughfing more when gunjan and nurpar turn they were shoked to see the dress of ridhma

A boy comment ? lagta hai aj kal black both chala hai ak frind chara pa to dusri cloth pa

And every one started to laugh more

Then suddenly All four arman maan mayank and sam came laughing and said

Guys I think they love black and all started to laugh more

Seeing mayank nupar told ? tum . tum to wo hi ho na jo Q paper chori kiya tha

Listning this hole environment became silent

Makank ? acha aur tum ya kasa kha sak ti ho

Nupar- kyu ki mara pass wo paper hai

Mayank ? oh realy then show

Nupar ? ok

And when nupar showed thepaper every one started to laugh more

sam? oh babes if u want to tell I love u then tell us directly y so much drama

when nupar saw the paper she got shoked as I love u was written all over the parper

(guys actually when nupar took the paper she forget to see it in exicment)

As every one was laughing a loud voice came

Stop

precap ?first kiss

and geet ?.. I love u?😉
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Edited by anvashakhurana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
PS - can u plz update the title? like part 12@page 48 and the date...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

PS - can u plz update the title? like part 12@page 48 and the date...


sorry dr i had came home and now i am from ph so cant updt we had to wati for mayapari bc she can now do this

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