BECHAIN DILL a maaneet ff update on pg 51 - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago
hi guys thanks for the love u all r giving to bechain dill😃
a big thanks to mayapari😃
Note- Ok my one of the friend asked me to write
in

Engilsh But i think by writting in english i wil not be

able to Show the emotion fuly but if u all want it i can Tranclet hindi diglogs in english in bracket.

Chapter 10

Past...

The hole collage was quite not a single sound was Coming as if whole collage was a graveyard 😲just Wating to know who wil make this basket

Yes a basket mach was going on but it was not a normal mach as every one knows that who ever wone this match wil be killed

and the game was finished but there was no

recation😲 few min passed then every one started to shoute oh god save him, use bachao ara koi mayank ko bulo samrat usa mar dala ga😲

ane here was the best friend no no sorry not best friendbut the revile the dushman ready to kill eachother😲

arman and samrat

a collage student ? koi in dono ko alag karo nahi to ak dasara ko mar dalaga🤢

another student ? tum pagal ho kya in logo ka bich ma bol na ka natija jan ta ho😆

hama nahi marna🤢

student ? to kya kara 😕

principle- tum log mayank ko bulao😡(call mayank)

student ? par wo hai kha 😕

another student ? ara apana prami ka ghar mai😆

student - ok ma jata hu😃

till the time mayank came both were still fighting like dog and samrat head was bleding along with arman hand😲

seeing this mayank nod his head in negetive and sat there on stair🥱

student to mayank y dont u stop them 😕

mayank - itana acha tamasha(show) dakhana mil raha hai kon roka ga

listining to mayank words both samrate and armane stoped there fight arman shouted😡

arman - sala ak to hum kab sa lar rahai hai bichara samrat ko chot bhi lagi hai aur tojha maja araha hai😡

mayank - hai 😆

samrate - mai kab sa wait kar raha tha tu ajaya ga to hama rok la ga tab tak mai is arman ko thora mar lo par to dakh kita na late kar diya bichara ko hat ma chot bhi lag gai😲

mayank - ho gai tum logo ki notanki(drama)puri tho bandage kar walo🥱

arman - tu khabhi nahi sudha ra ga😡

samrat - tu tha kha😕

arman - aur kha hoga apa ni wife ka sat😉

samrat - thik kha tu na 😆

and both started to make fun of him😉😛

and no one cane belive that few min before they were redy to kill each other 😕😲

as they were not stoping mayank shouted😡

mayank - hai to khrab hi kya hai agar mai books phar raha tha libery mai ⭐️(guys they all call book as mayank girlfrend and libery as her girlfrend home😆)

a boy sorry sory not a boy but all the girls fevouret boy came "adi"

adi - oh finely i found u all guys👍🏼

all three(mayank,samrat,arman) look at adi amaking a face like asking why us dud😕

adi ? ara maan is coming back😃

full collage shouted in execitment realy😃

but rest three were ready to go to jail😲(ara guys understand na maan ka ata hi usa ka khun jo kar na hai akhir bigar bola jo chala gaya tha mumbai wo bhi pura week ka liya😆)

arman aksed in an anger tone to adi😡(me thinking adi na kya kiya😕)

arman - kha hai wo😡

and a voice came from back deep and sexey which stoped girls heart beet 😍and left a smile on boys face(ara boys ka love guru jo hai)

mai yaha hu😎

and all fore ran in his direction and hug him all five hug each other ❤️

and after like yers got sepreated 🥺only to see the anger in eyes of all four 😡which make maan to step back🤢

but it did not help and our dr maan got good biting 🤢😭till the time maan said (in a sweet&low voice) ab to bus karo khun bhi nikal raha hai😲

they stoped and principle came to them⭐️

principle - so if u all had finished ur fight then her is the firstaid box😆

taking the box from prince all four help maan to stand and tet him self firstaid🤗

princple - i am happy maan that u also came now u five come in my office😕 and (shouted) all other student back to class😡

as prince left all five again hug🤗 and before the foure will ask maan some thing maan told😃

maan - guys i think first we should go to princi office😆

and other noded there hed in agrement😲

in princple office😕

the four came in and sat as if it was there room😆😲

seeing this princi nod his hed in negetive 😆and thought to talk about main think😛

prince - ok so i will like to come directly to the point⭐️

arman thought - ha pata hai hum bardas nahi hota na is bhudha sa😆

but as if samrat listen his thought and glair him as if telling stop it he is my father😆

maan - yes sir we r wating to hear u😉

prince - a new group of girls r coming 😲and as one of them is my fring daughter i want u all to treat them special and look after them😃

and listening to this all four(arman,samrat,mayank&maan) look at each other only to smile but an evil one😉

and seeing this adi look at princi as he thought 😕-ya hi mila thai app ko ab un lar kiyo ka kya hoga😲

and here our princi is thinging 🥱- ab dakh ta hu kasa tum sab line pa kasa nahi ata ho 😲

precap - girls😳😡😲
author note - sorry guys for the colour😭 will give next time 😃and i saw my likes r going down 😭so if u all r geting bore of bachain dill😲 do let me know
ps : do press like button and do comment😃
Edited by anvashakhurana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey anvasha...mishty here...

can you please update your index...i want to read all the parts!

Mishty
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


very interesting update...

waiting for next...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wel done yr..
keep it up...👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc update...continue n like nt working...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 10
nice part...
that gang is a riot...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome dear….😳

Loved the gang….😳

Omg GIRLS…😲😉

Am sure ki koi bhari khichadi pak rahi hai inn bando ke man mein…😉

Loved the update….😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

thanks😊

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