BECHAIN DILL a maaneet ff update on pg 51 - Page 17

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Posted: 13 years ago

note - soory guys but i cant update today😡 i had typed 2 time but both time it got erese and now after typing for 5 hour 🤢i dont have power to type it again🥱 soorrly will update tommrow😃😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

hi guys thanks for the love u all showed me😃

a big thanks to mayapari 😊
note - guys in this chapter many character going to be introduce so if u had any confusion about any character do ask i will try my best to clear ur confution😃
chapter 9
listening pinky wored a shocked adi stood up and told
adi - what do u mean
pinky - o come on adi u also know wht i am talking about when u were talking to geet mam i was there and pls dont think i listen ur talks for my benifit realy belive me i am asking u Q because i want to help u but if u dont want to talk about it then its ok
adi - pinky its not like that but ...
pinky - its ok adi lets eat denire
adi - no i will tell u ,i also want to see my best frnd happy
pinky - best friend(confuse)
adi - yes best frind
adi - i and maan r friend from 9 yr
pinky - 9 yrs (shoked) means from yr collage days
adi - yes
adi - 5 dost asa dost jo ak dosara ki jan bhi lala ga par us ka mo sa uf tak nahi nikalagi
asa dost jo hamasa ak dosara ka khun pina ko tiyar rahata
par agar kisi dosara na 5 ma sa ak par ungali bhi utai to us ko babaji bhi nahi bacha sak ta
ak dosara ki jan tha
aur collage ki shan tha wo
par ajj ...
5 dost
arman,samrat,mayank,adi aur in sab kamino sa bara kamina maan
arman is mahan hasti ka to nam hi kafi ha larki ka dil ki dharkan taz karana ka liya aur in ki jan basti ha apana basket ball ma (arman jha basket wha aur ya dono jha larkiya wha)
sab sa bara dusman bas ak hi hai aur wo ha samarat
aur sab sa acha dost hai samarat
samarat inka to khana hi kya sach ka samrat hai larkiyo ka dil ka, par books aur samrat ka rista to khud babaji na likha ha ,ya jha ho aur wha books na ho asa ho sak ta hai kya? (bil kul nahiii)
in ka dusman? (ara ya jawab to pura collage ko pata hai )aur wo hai mayank
aur jis ka pas jaka ya apana dukhra(sadness)sunata hai wo hai mayank
mayank(par ya janab hai kha, ara aur kha apani pramika ka ghar mai ho ga) in ki tho din ki surwat aur rat ki samapti hoti hai inki pramika pa ,par in ka aur teacher ka rista whaa us ka tho khana hi kya aj tak koi nahi samaj paya kon kis sa jayada nafarat karta hai ya teacher sa teacher insa
in ka dosman to ho hi nahi sakta(ara samjho pramika sa fursat milagi to na dusman banaga)
dost ara choro in ka to ak hi fanda hai adi jha raha waha
adi ara ya to sab sa mahan atama hai teacher ka sab sa feaverout aur larkiya ara larkiya to hamasha in ka aspas mandra ti rahiti hai larki yo ka sab sa faverout jo thara
dusman nahi nahi inka dusman kasa ho sak ta hai abhi kha tha na mhan atama jo thara(par insa pucho to list hi khatam nahi ho gi)
dost ara in ka to rakshak hai hi maan (par aj tak samaj nahi paya bichara ki kya ya sach ma raksak hai)
maan in ka barama to app logo sahi sun lo
teacher - ara maan jasi student to aj tak mugha nahi mila, kita na acha bacha hai
senior - maan jasa obident junior hama aj tak nahi mila
junior - maan jasa senior babaji sab ko da
boys - wo to hama ra liya love guru hai
girls - -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------(ara bola gi kasa maan ka nam sunta hi sas jo ruk gai aur darkan itani jaz ki sari duni ya sun la)
dost (dakho bacha log is ka aga nahi pahar na agar kan lal ho gai to mari jimidari nahi)
arman - kamino sa bhi bara kamina hai ya sala maan
samrat - kota(dog) ki dum(tail) to fir bhi sidhi ho jai par is sala ki to ...
mayank - fu*k off
adi - ha ha ha lag ta hai mugha koi bula raha hai sorry bad mai batao ga maan ka bara mai(aur man ma socha - bhag la adi khi maan na sun liya ki tu na us ka khi laf bola hai to ...)
precap -😉
author note - guys if u did not like it aur i had done any mistake then pls do tel me and as u all know its my ever first time to write any thing so plz do tell me if i can make my self improve in any way
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Edited by anvashakhurana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
after a long time i m commenting 1st 😊


awesome description of maan


thanks for pm


continue soon
Edited by angelic_cute - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I would have to read to catch up with your updates...had been too busy to read anything...give me about a week!

<<<Mishty>>>
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely one...
waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice description of the group/...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago


so u r starting past story...

Adi is telling Pinky about Maan and what happen...

very interesting update...

yes i want to say one thing...writing dialogues of Hindi in English is very difficult to read and very confusing...I don't understand half of what u have written...please don't take otherwise u said to tell u that is why I am telling...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved the group
good that adi is telling pinky the truth
continue soon

thnx for he pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice description of the gang...
lovely...!
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Posted: 13 years ago

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