MAAN EK MRIT INSAN-UPDATED TEASER PG 16

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

part 10
nice part...
whoa Maan kissed Geet...
still she doesnt remember Maan...
cont soon dear...

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maaneet0887

@maaneet0887

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

PART 11

After sometime Geet got up & saw around her that where the man went?But he wasn't there while Geet thought abt that man...how he shut her mouth by her accuse kssing her lips.She felt bad for accusing him like that & then she remembered his cocolate brown eyes which had the effect of hypnotising her.

Then she saw towards her sri chakra which she wore & thought that it didn't do any harm to him...Geet knew that if someone who is bad try to harm her then...he'll reach to very painful end.Becoz she had the experience after wearing that sri chakra.But why that man went from here without saying anything to her...just he kissed her on lips till his fill & went from there.

Geet was confused becoz of these incidents & pouted cutely to babaji,"Hai babaji...yeh aap mere saath kya kar rahe ho...pehle yeh daraawana sapna dikhathe ho...aur usse bhoolne ke liye malam bhi bhej dethe ho...!"By now she came to know that the man was no stranger to her.She always felt that she had seen him somewhere...but where she couldn't getting that memory...

But now Geet was confirmed when he kissed her on her lips that he's in love with her crazily.Becoz no one can't enter HM so easily...if he has entered so easily then he is the special person & after touching her had confirmed her that he's the man whom she's gonna marry...Marry😲...how can I marry that person one who sneaks inside her house and kisses her...😡

Geet cursed herself that she's gone crazy...Meanwhile Thakshak's power came back feeling defeated.The white pale ghost said palely,"Master...meine bahut koshish ki Vaidehi ko rokne ki lekin woh Vaasuki beech mein aagaya aur mera saare kiye karaay par paani pher diya...Ab mujhe jaane deejiye...!"And the pale ghost vanished into thin air.

Thakshak was so angry & said angrily throwing the kumkum to yangya kund,"Shatru naashanam kuru kuru swaaha...!"And a power went to destroy Maan urf Vaasuki to his home.So after one day of the gap Danish made Geet once again went into trance & made her to say her past.Maan stood near the window watching Geet & Danish.

Danish said moving his fingers,"Ab tum subconscious stage mein ho...kaun ho tum?"Geet said,"Mein Vaidehi hoon...!"Danish asked further slowly,"Tumne kaha tha ki tumhaara sarpanch ka beta Vaasuki aap dono ko love letter diya tha...!"Geet said,"Haan...!"Danish asked curiously,"Kuch huva tha kya usse...mera matlab hai ki kya usse Maan durga ne kuch kiya tha kya...!"Geet said slowly,"Nahi...!"

Danish asked,"Kyun...?"Geet answered cutely,"Pata nahi...Kyunki woh mera honewaali jeeja tha...mere behen Lavanya ki honewaali pati...!"Danish was confused now by her answer then he said,"Saaf saaf bolo Vaidehi...!"Geet started explaining...

Lavanya was Geet urf Vaidehi's god sister who met each other in a mela of their village.On that time Lavanya was hurted & was so afraid of the people.

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When she was got by Vaidehi & her parents then she had came to Vaidehi seeing her eyes which had the warmth which she always saw in her elder sister.On that time Lavanya was not in the state to talk to Vaidehi & her family that who she's becoz she had forgotten everything.Then Vaidehi & her parents treated her as their second child with Vaidehi.

They looked after Lavanya as their daughter & Vaidehi loved her like her sister.They would go to the college or any other place always together becoz Lavanya was protected by Vaidehi & Vaidehi was protected by Maa durga.Both daily would fulfill their mannat by dancing & singing the songs of Maan durga in the temple of durga of their village.

Here Thakshak was the uncle of Lavanya was searching her to make her sacrifice for Devi Kali so that he can get the immense power from Maa Kali.That's why he became the student of the very famous black magician called Bhootnaath who poured his knowledge to him & made him able to fight against Maa Durga.But unfortunately Bhoothnath was killed by his student Thakshak only.

But when he came to know that his teacher's power isn't gonna reach him after killing him then he captured his spirit in his wand & always tortured him to give the power for which he was badgering his teacher.But his teacher cursed him that what he'll learn from anyone can't be remembered when it is needed.

Thakshak saw his niece who was living with Vaidehi's family & tried to make Lavanya to come to the control of his power.But everytime Vaidehi would come between them & his power would backfire him only.One day he came as a ragged beggar & stood in front of Vaidehi's house & called,"Maa...maa...koi toh hai is ghar mein...!"Lavanya came holding a basket of rice grains to give him then Thakshak saw Lavanya who was looking beautiful just like his bhabhi whom he had mercilessly killed her for property.

Thakshak said politely,"Beti...mujhe khaana nahi chaahiye...mein bahut door se aaya hoon...mein yahan Amarnath ka yatra karne ke liye aaya tha...lekin raasta bhatak gaya aur meri beti ki kapde phat gayi jungle mein kaanton se chub kar...ab meri beti jungle mein akeli hai aur woh baahar bhi nahin aa sakthi kyunki unki kapde phat gayi hai...!Kya aapke saath koi puraana kapde ho to mujhe deejiye...aapki mehrbaani hogi...!"

On that time Vaidehi saw this incident & said coming forward giving Rs.500 to him,"Ye leejiye aap unhe sheher jaakar kapde le aayiye...humaare paas koi puraana kapda nahin hai...!"And Vaidehi made Lavanya to go inside,Lavanya went inside silently while Thakshak was dumbstruck seeing the 500 rupees on his hand.Thakshak saw Vaidehi once again & was abt to say something but someone said immediately,"Tum meri beti ko itni asaani se nahi bhaga kar le jaa sakthe...!"

Thakshak saw Vaidehi who had turned into someone who stood in front of him smirking.It was woman who wore a green bordered red color sari & had wore so many jewels.She wore a golden crown on her head & put full moon shaped kumkum on her forehead.She had a very kind face & lovely eyes which had the power to hypnotise anyone.She wore nose ring which glittered for which Thakshak's eyes closed not able to tolerate the light.

The woman had a pink lips which were curved to a smirking smile.She held a trishool which was glittering due to sun's light.She also wore bangles,waist band & her hair was let loose.That woman's eyes had turned lovely to anger.She was Maa Durga who was watching her daughters from childhood.

Thakshak was abt to send some power but she banged her trishul on the ground which made him thrown far away.Thakshak stood & said angrily,"Durga...tum jitni bhi koshish karo tum un dono ko nahi bacha sakthi...mein unki bhavishya ko badal daaloonga...!"Maan durga said angrily,"Tum kuch bhi nahin kar sakthe Thakshak...aur agar tum bhavishya ko badal lene ki koshish ki toh tumhi us bhavishya ka shikaar banoge...!Meri betiyon ko tum saadharan mat samjhna...unme apaar shakthi hai jisse tum aur tumhaari taantrik vidya usse kuch nahi karpaayegi...Abhi bhi samay hai Thakshak...apne galathiyon ka praayshchit karo...shaayad mein tumhe maaf kardoon...!"Thakshak said with attitude,"Kabhi nahi...aur mere paas jo shakthi hai usse tum mujhe kuch kar hi nahi sakthe...dekhna chaahogi meri shkathi...!"

And he closed his eyes & mumbled some charm & showed his palm towards maa Durga.Maa durga stood seeing the power which reached her & was abt to hurt her but it changed & it kissed her feet dearly & turned to garland & went directly into her neck.Maa Durga smirked seeing his power which he saw with shock & cursed his teacher who had taught him these magic tricks.

But his teacher came in front of him from thin air & said calmly,"Thakshak..jis din tum mujhe dhoke se maara us din tum paapi ban gaye...aur tum Maa Durga ke saamne toh kya koi insan ke saamne tum sirf ek maanav ho...!"And he vanished into thin air.Maa durga said angrily,"Ab is sansaar ki swami ki shakthi dekho...!"And she blew the air softly in which a storm came & Thakshak floated in the air & the air was blew outside the village neatly.

Maa Durga vanished into thin air immediately & went inside the Tulsi plant & a light came around the Tulsi plant & lamp which was kept in front of Tulsi plant got lit itself immediately.

At present Maan was watching the hypnotism standing near the window where he was recollecting his memory.On that time Thakshak's power came to kill Maan.Maan saw the power & came between the power & Geet.The power was abt to enter Maan's body to kill him but couldn't enter it.Maan was also amazed seeing the power couldn't enter inside him then remembered...yesterday's events.

Maan saw towards Geet who was smiling in the trance as if she has done a big thing & gave a wide smile.When Geet hugged Maan tightly during kissing then her protection was spread over Maan also which was protecting her from Thakshak's power.Maan was happy that Geet's power is protecting him.Thakshak's power went back feeling defeated once again.

So guys u r thinking how Geet is so powerful so much & she was protecting Maan...am not gonna tell u just tell me ur ideas...how can she protect him by just a mere hug...so guys rack ur brains...

Precap-rack ur brains...😉

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

update geet power protected maan from takshak

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Maa durga came in front of Takshak to save Lavanya...

Geet is securing Maan from takshak powers...

how Geet became so powerful...this question arise later...first tell us if Geet can save Maan from takshak power then why can't she save herself...Maan is always saving her from Takshak---in hospital, last time when Danish hypnotize her...

Vasuki was Lavanya's fiance and he wrote love letter to both...kaafio kamina jeeja hai...gharwali to gharwali hai aur adhi gharwali bhi apni...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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shristi1

@shristi1

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Awesome dear.

Loved it.

Update soon.

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

geet hi toh maan ko protect karegi na...nehi toh aur kaun karega?

beautiful update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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sapna sharma

@kamiya

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

update

loved it

thnx for the pm dear

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

part 11
nice part...
interesting...
cont soon dear...

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

geet protected him...wow...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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sneha

@snehaluvmaaneet

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

read all parts in one go
aww i just loved this
there is suspense
and past
supernatural powers something i didn't get
like maan is vampire?? how come he drink milk ok theni got answer he i shuman day time vampire at night
then how come he protect her at day during her session first time
well its nyce story
do pm me also
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