MAAN EK MRIT INSAN-UPDATED TEASER PG 16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Maan saved Geet from that Bhootni...

Geet is ready to fight with him because he was staring at her...

one thing is confusing that if Maan is a Vampire then how come he is saving a woman from accident...Vampires don't have emotions why he is concerned about that woman...

awesome update...

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

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PART 7

The power which Thakshak had sent came back feeling defeated to the cave.Thakshak who was meditating came to know that Bhootni had accepted defeat & vanished immediately.Thakshak took a fistful of kumkum & threw that into the havan kund & said,"Maa Kali,mujhe dikhaavo ki woh Vaidehi kaise bach gayi..."On that time the fire showed how Geet urf Vaidehi was saved from his powers.He saw Maan protecting Geet standing as a big wall against bhootni & bhootni was defeated.Thakshak saw the vision & was shocked & threw fistful kumkum & said,"Rakthbeej aavahyaami..."A white & pale looking ghost appeared from thin air & said politely,"Mere liye kya aadesh hai maalik!"Thakshak asked him angrily,"Yeh Vaasuki Vaidehi ko kaise bacha raha hai...Kya usse pata hai ki yeh uski vaidehi hai...???"Rakthbeej answered politely,"Jee han maalik lekin Vaidehi ko pata nahi aur woh raat bhar Vaasuki ki sapne dekhthi rahthi hai...lekin woh nahi jaan paa rahi hai ki yeh uske pichle janam ka kadva sach hai."

Thakshak was happy that Geet wasn't remembering Vaasuki.Here Handa family went to temple to offer puja for maa durga with Danish.After their prayers they were abt to go back to their cars then Geet bumped to a fakir.Geet made him to stand up & apologised to him.When the fakir saw her then said collapsing to her feet,"Mata aap aagayi unhe uddaar karne ke liye...mein bahut khush hoon mata..."Then he saw Geet's forehead & was panic & said,"Yeh kya hai mata...aapke liye khatron ka saaya..."The family thought that the fakir is a semi-crack & was abt to walk but the fakir stopped Geet.The fakir put the sri-chakra locket around Geet's neck & said,"Mata yeh aapki raksha karegi...alak nirnajan..."And he went from there.

Geet was appalled seeing the sri-chakra locket around her neck & was abt to take off but the priest of the maa durga said politely,"Beta...usse nikaalo mat...woh bahut hi shakti shaali locket hai...shayad mata ne us fakir ke roop mein is locket ko diya hai...usse kabhi nikaal na mat beta..."After the priest convince Geet kept the locket around her neck.

Here Thakshak sent another power to make Geet to forget her past.Next morning Geet got up & was feeling so peaceful & she didn't even get those nightmares & this was possible becoz of the locket.She had slept without taking the dreamless sleep tablet.Then Geet said to Misha,"Misha tum jaanthe ho kal raat ko mein bin davayi liye so gayi...lekin tumhe pata hai ki mujhe woh daraawna sapna nahi aayi mujhe neend mein..."Misha was happy hearing the news & she shared this news to Danish & Panchi.

Danish was a bit suspicious & went to his guruji once again.His guruji said,"Aapko kya lagthe hai bachche ki sri-chakra ek saadharan ring hai...???Nahin bachche...jab koi pishach,bhoot ya kaale saaya insaan par ya kisi vastu par phel tha hai tab isi sri-chakra ko lagaya jaatha hai...darne ki koi baat hi nahi...haan lekin is baar woh apne aashiq se mil nahi paayegi...par dekhthe hai...sab kuch bhagwaan par chod do bachche..."And he went back to his meditation.

Precap is same.

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

he wants her to forget her past...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Srichakra will save Geet from all black magic and powers but Maan is also Vampire so he will also can't come near her...

why that Fakir told Geet Mata as if she is incarnation of devine shakti...

how will they meet then...

interesting update...

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

PART 8

Danish confirmed that the srichakra locket is not harmful to Geet from his guru.Geet was still thinking abt the strange dreams which has changed since she saw Maan in the hospital.Maan was thinking abt Geet only.Geet was now-a-days dreaming abt Maan that how they were made love to each other.She dreamt of Maan kissing her lips & celebrating their suhaagrat in some caves.But their suhagraat was interrupted by someone which she didn't remember that face.She didn't even saw her nowhere.

While Danish & Panchi's marriage was performed & they both revealed Geet's condition to Mohinder & Rano.Rano was hell worried becoz of Geet while Mohinder didn't accept the truth first but Geet explained everything to her dad.Mohinder said worriedly,"Geet,tumne mujhe bataya kyun nahi...aur Misha tum toh keh sakthi thi na...Geet ke baare mein...!"Misha said,"Dad,mein kaha bhi tha ki mein aapko bataa doongi lekin Geet ne mana kar diya...!"Mohinder was very angry on Geet of not telling abt her but Danish said calmly,"Papa pls...there's no use on remorsing on spilt milk...jo huva so ho gaya...ab humein aage ka sochna hai...!"

Mohinder said politely,"Puttar...tu hi batavo iska solution kya hai...!"Danish said calmly,"Papa,Geet ko mein hypnotise karna chahtha hoon...aur uske pichle janam ke saari baatein yaad dilaana chahtha hoon...toh behtar hai...ki aap log mere saath co-operate kare...!"Everyone approved to that treatment & Danish explained the procedures to the family.Geet was sent to a dark room where Danish sat silently while all the family saw her in the camera which was fixed inside the room.

Danish said to remove her srichakra as any negative energy can't be influenced on her when she's wearing it.Becoz to hypnotise a man he'll be not having any god's locket which he trust most becoz it will destroy the negative energy which is gonna cause damage to that man.Danish held a pendulum & said to Geet to concentrate on it.After few minutes of concentration Geet couldn't go to sleep which he felt weird.What is the power which is protecting her powerfully.

Here Maan was sitting in a dark room meditating closing his eyes felt a restlessness & his concentration broke.He opened his eyes & saw towards the full moon which was glaring at him.Maan closed his eyes & he saw that Geet's in danger as Thakshak is sending his power to prevent her to remember her past.Then Maan ran from there immediately in top speed.Maan came to a halt to the window of the dark room where Danish was trying to hypnotise Geet but couldn't as she was having some power inside her which was preventing him to hypnotise her thought she took off the srichakra locket.

Maan thought in his mind,"Tum jitni bhi koshish karlo Danish tum Vaidehi mera matlab hai Geet ko apne vash mein nahi kar sakthe...!"Then Danish made her unconscious giving some injection & did the hypnotising after that.Danish was amazed seeing her powers which she wasn't recognising as she had a curse on her.To know what is the curse it has become important to know her past to Danish.Danish somehow hypnotised Geet & Geet came to sub-conscious stage.

Geet had lied down on a couch comfortably while Maan witnessed her procedures protecting her from that evil wizard's power.Danish said moving his fingers,"Geet...ab tum sub-conscious stage mein ho...u r relaxing...!Geet said,"Hmmm!"Danish said,"Tum 1990's ke year mein jaa rahi ho...tum jaanthi ho ki kab paida huyi ateet mein...!"Geet answered perfectly,"Mein dhanur maas mein poorna dwadashi ke din swathi nakshatra mein paida huyi...!"Danish was amazed with her calculation & he asked,"Tumhaara naam kya hai...!"Geet answered,"Us din lakshmi ji ki pooja ho rahi thi humaare ghar mein...aur mein ussi din paida huyi toh un logon ne mera naam Vaidehi rakha...!"

Danish was amazed & asked,"Tumhaare mata aur pitah ka naam kya hai...!"Geet said,"Mere maat aur pitah ka naam hai...******(guys am a bit lazy to give there names so don't think it otherwise)Danish asked,"Kya karthe hain...!"Geet said,"Mere pitah bahut bade jyotishi hai aur mata bahut badi sanskrit upadhyay...!"Maan saw her confession in sub-conscious state & was happy that she's remembering her parents.Danish asked,"Tumhe koi bhai ya behen hai...!"Geet said,"Haan...!"Danish asked,"Unke naam...!"

Geet answered,"Mere behen hai jo humein mele mein mili thi...woh meri saghi behen nahi hai...phir bhi mein unse bahut pyar karthi hoon...!Uska naam hai Lavanya...!"Danish asked,"Woh kaisi dikthi hai...!"Geet explained...

Precap-Geet's past story continues...😊

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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SweetestPari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

awesome... amazing yar ... cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

amazing update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...

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renjini263

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Awesome update dear!!!!

w8ing 4 d nxt part!!!! plzz cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

u updated this after so long...

awesome update...

Maan has come there in dark room to help Danish to get Geet remember her past...

yaar Geet ke Maan and SR wale sapne ke bare mein detail se batao na...

thanx for pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

PART 9

Geet told Danish that how her sister Lavanya looks like as if she was there in the scene 100yrs back.Danish asked curiously,"Tumhaare aur tumhaari behen ki hobbies kya hai...!"Geet said meekly,"Woh gaati thi aur mein uski gaane ke liye naachti thi...!"Danish asked,"Kahan...!"Geet answered,"Maa durga ke mandir mein...!"Danish was amazed while asked,"Tum dono kya padti thi...!"Geet answered,"Mein us waqt B.Sc CBZ combination mein padthi thi aur Lavanya 2nd yr PUC padti thi...!"

Danish asked,"Jab tum dono gaathi aur naachti thi tab kuch adbhhod ghatna ho rahi thi...!"Geet said meekly,"Haan...maa durga ke daye haath se humein prasad de kar humein aashirwaad dethi thi...!Yeh humaare roz ka karya ban gaya tha...!"Danish noted somethings on his notepad while he asked,"Kya tum ek incident yaad kar sakthi ho jiss se tum aur tumhaari behen dono hairaan reh gaye the...!"

Geet said meekly,"Haan...ek din hum dono apne college khatam karke aa rahe the...tabhi kuch awaara ladke humein chedna chaahthe the...!

Flashback-------->

Geet urf Vaidehi & Lavanya walked past a bridge which was tied across the spateful river which was flowing ferociously as anyone tries to swim in that will be flown away with the water.Some boys far from Vaidehi & Lavanya planned to trouble the girls.One of the cassanova,"Yaar aaj toh us Vaidehi ko chedna hi hoga...kehte hai ki usse Devi ka aashirwaad hai...dekhte hai ki kya devi us Vaidehi ko bacha paayegi ya nahi...!"The man came forward to trouble Vaidehi but on that time the bunches of bananas which were abt ripe fell on the man's head & injured his head while his head started bleeding.The man screamed with pain before he even reach Vaidehi.

Vaidehi saw this & rushed to see the man & said to take him to her house as her house was near.Vaidehi's father tended the man while the man who had planned to trouble Vaidehi apologised to her falling to her feet.The man said,"Mujhe maaf kardo behen...meine soch ki mein tumhe tang karoongi lekin maa durga ne toh mujhe sazaa dediye hai tumhaare baare mein aisa sochne ka bhi...!"

Vaidehi felt awkward but said stroking his head,"Maine aapko maaf kardiya hai...aap uthiye...!"When he got up he didn't felt any pain in his head & was amazed & said,"Behen...tumhaare hatho mein toh jaadu hai...!Maa durga zaroor tumhe raksha kar rahi hai...!"Vaidehi said immediately denying the truth,"Aap aisa kyun pooch rahi hai...maa durga ne toh aapko sahi raaste par laane ke liye yeh khel kheli hogi...is par meri koi yog daan nahi...!"The man was happy that she didn't had any attitude or ego becoz of the powers she was having & said thanks to the girl & went from there.

Flashback ends--------->

Danish noted something in his notepad & asked,"Kya kisine zid mein aakar tumhe chedne ki koshish ki...?"Geet said,"Haan...ek aadmi tha aur uska naam hai Vasuki...woh humaare gaav ke sarpanch ka beta...jisse mere aur mere behen ke baare mein pata nahi tha...!"Geet explained everthing abt that man's stature.(Guys,he's the very same Maan)

Danish noted his stature while Maan was observing with moist eyes as she was remembering him.He was blushing when she explained his stature in her sub-conscious stage.On that time Thakshak's power came to stop Geet to remember her past.The power tried to send some power inside Geet but her sri chakra stopped it immediately sending a positive energy which Geet had held it on her hand tightly.

Thakshak's power didn't accept defeat & send another red light which Maan stopped it standing like a shield to Danish & Geet who were in dark room.Danish was unaware of these while Maan battled with Thakshak's power.On that time Maan was exhausted due to it's power but still he fought the power with strength.Geet was feeling his pain when she was in sub-conscious stage & started mumbling in the sleep..."Chodo usse...!"As if she was in pain...!

Danish observed this & saw the numerous connections which were connected to the machines which showed some turmoil was going on in her head & Danish was alarmed seeing the machines & immediately made her to come to the normal stage.He asked her who's she then she answered in her sleep that she's Geet Handa then he breathed calmly & thought that it have to be done in sessions as it will give Geet to cope with her past.

But Geet had the curse that she never remember her past which made her innocent to all the actions which was going on around her world.Meanwhile Maan defeated the power & the power vanished immediately.Maan went to home feeling exhausted & tired.He was bleeding becoz of the power he succumbed & he collapsed in the lap of her mother.

Maan's mother Haseena was shocked to see Maan in that state.Haseena said in panic,"Maan...aapko kya huva bete...yeh sab kaise huva...!"And she made him to sleep in his room & dialled to Chand Maan's father.Chand rushed to home hearing Maan's condition.Maan had slept peacefully on Haseena's lap while Chand caressed his face & asked,"Haseena...usne bataya ki kisne kiya yeh sab...!"

Haseena said immediately,"Wahi aadmi ne jisne hum teeno ko yeh haal banaya hai...mrit insan...!Thakshak...!Woh ab Vaidehi beti ko dee huyi shrap ka galath istemaal kar raha hai...aur uski punarjanam ke baare mein yaad na kare isiliye uski shaktiyaan bhej raha hai...!Lekin Maan do do baar Vaidehi mera matlab hai Geet ko protect kiya hai...!"Chand was angry very much & said,"Haseena...ek din aisa aayega ki woh apne saare shaktiyaan kho baithega tab usse bachaane ke liye uski kaali bhi nahi aayegi...!

Precap is same...!

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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