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abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

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lovely upadte
precap is 😲

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Krupa

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Posted: 13 years ago

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very good story moving at its pace better than original serial story like it update soon.

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

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GUYS I WOULD LIKE TO START THE NEW TWO FF.PLEASE SEND ME YOUR OPINION.GUYS IT'S A SUPERNATURAL STORY.GIVE ME UR OPINION GUYS ,IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT THEN PLS GIVE ME UR OPINION.

MAAN-ek mrit insaan

PROLOGUE

A man was lying exhausted & half burnt & his eyes fell upon the half burnt house which has engulfed the life of his beloved Geet.Geet,when the name came on his lips always then he felt a peace in mind.But now it has turned into sorrow & agony losing her.He closed his eyes & said painfully,"Geet."And he had remembered the previous events.Geet was screaming for help trapped in the burning house & when the situation became out of control then she had decided to sacrifice her life in return of her beloved Maan's life.When Maan jumped inside the house to save Geet then she had pushed him forcefully to safer side & has saved his life sacrificing herself.Maan opened his eyes & felt 2 bats flutter past him & turned to a man & woman.The man & woman had sky blue eyes & the man bent to Maan's neck & bit him immediately.Maan felt that his venom is coursing in his body with pain & he closed his eyes fainting immediately.

Maan & Geet-do jadugar

PROLOGUE

A man came to street of Jankapuri in Delhi & lighted a cigarette lighter like object holding a small bundle.The lighter sucked the lights of all street lights & the street became dark.That man came near no. 4 house & saw a tabby cat sitting on the wall which had strange marks around its eyes.That man chuckled,"Good to see you here Professor Mittal."The tabby cat had turned into a 40 aged woman who frowned at the man but said with respect,"Professor Dayashankar,aap yahan kya kar rahen hai?"Prof.Dayashankar said smiling,"Mein yahan nilemma ki nishani uske bhehen ke ghar pohunchane aaya hoon."Prof.Mittal said nervously,"Meine sunah ki kaale jadu ka baadshah Kaalbhairav ne Khurana's ko maarne ki koshish ki aur Maan ko bhi."Prof.Dayashankar gave a grim expression & Prof.Mittal whimpered,"Ab Maan Singh Khurana ka kya hoga."Prof.Dayashankar didn't say anything & kept that bundle near the door which revealed a baby boy who was fast asleep in the bundle.He had a cut in the forehead which was the shaped as lightening bolt.Profs.Mittal & Dayashankar whispered to the boy,"Good luck Maan."And they vanished into thin air.

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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stuti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

I love the first concept...
Woh kya hai na mujhe khoon chusne wale mrit insaan kafi romantic lagte hai... 😆 😉

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

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PART-12

Maan searched Geet in the party while Rahul had gone behind Pinky to catch Geet alone there.Pinky couldn't hear Geet's pleas & she went out of the washroom crying & Rahul entered the washroom immediately.Pinky saw Rahul entering the washroom from the mirror which was placed in the corner.On that time Maan came to know that Geet ran into washroom from Sasha & he also went towards washroom to meet Geet there.

Sasha patted her back that she had done a very good job & waited for the result to come.Here Rahul had entered the washroom & stood seeing Geet lustfully from his eyes.He was in drunken state & said shaking his hands towards Geet who came as fives & eights to his vision,"Hum to fan ho gaye aapke,tum jitna khoobsurat sari mein dikhti ho usse kai zyaada bina..."Geet turned & saw him with shock but said sternly composing herself,"Listen Mr.Rahul am not in the mood of talking to you sweetly so piss off now."Rahul said trying to focus his gaze on Geet in flirting style,"I wanted to see you naked now,take off your clothes."

Maan & Pinky entered the washroom in unison & saw Rahul was trying to smack Geet's lips but Geet resisted him which made him pressurize her under him angrily.Anger coursed in her veins & before Maan stop him Geet punched his nose powerfully clenching her fist with gritted teeth with full of frustration & anger.Frustration on god & anger on Rahul becoz of touching her which had only the right of MSK.Rahul's nose started bleeding & he saw Geet with utmost anger & shock.Pinky hugged Geet to make her calm from the anger & she hugged her squeezing her waist to make her anger calm.

Maan held Rahul by the collar & dragged him into the main hall.Everyone saw Maan dragging Rahul angrily & Rahul's nose was bleeding.Geet & Pinky followed Maan immediately.Sasha was angry seeing Geet prefectly alright & she was furious at Rahul for not using the opportunity.

Maan pushed Rahul on Mr Chopra angrily & said,"Mr.Chopra,agar is project mein Rahul kaam karega to mein abhi ke abhi yeh deal cancel kartha hoon."Mr.Chopra was shocked to hear that & asked with amazement,"Why Mr.Khurana,what happened?"He saw Geet from Maan & Pinky.Maan said angrily,"Mein aapko wajah dena zaroori nahin samjhtha.I want to know that he's going to work in this project or not."Mr.Chopra was livid & said angrily,"Agar aap mere sawaalon ka jawaab nahin dethe to mujhe bhi iske baare mein kuch bolne ki zaroorat nahin."Maan said sternly,"Ok fine,then am cancelling this deal with you.Manish tear those papers which is concerned to his deal & give him his compensations.

Rishi asked in amazement,"But Maan tell him what the reasons for cancelling the deal or atleast tell us."Maan said sternly,"It can wait till we reach office,I'll explain you all there."Manish was about to tear the papers but Geet stopped him & said,"Mr.Chopra,you wanted to know the reason,I'll tell you."Maan said warningly,"Geet."Geet said immediately,"No Maan,he has every right to know as Rahul is his employee."She turned & saw Mr.Chopra with hesitation & said lowering her eyes,"Mr.Chopra,your half-drunk employee was misbehaving with me now when I was in wash room."Maan closed his eyes with guilt.Everyone were shocked hearing that Mr.Chopra was embarrased hearing about Rahul & gave a digusted look to him.Geet continued,"Isiliye mein apne appko bachaliya & mein unhe unke naak pe punch diya.That's why it is bleeding & Pinky & my boss saw this incident.That's why he wanted to cancel this deal so that I can't be in more trouble from Rahul.My boss wanted to save me from prying eyes."

Pinky hugged her immediately.Adi was fuming & held Rahul's collar & said angrily,"What do you think that Geet akeli hai aur tu usse kuch bhi karsaktha hai?"And he slapped him immediately.He fell on Rishi with force.Rishi held him with the collar & said angrily,"Tumhe lagtha hai ki woh hume veerji sirf mazak ke liye bulathi hai?"And he punched hard on his face.Then he fell on Maan,Hemanth,Vikas & Rohan started beating Rahul.Rahul squealed with pain & ran to save himself behind his boss but Mr.Chopra said angrily,"Mujhe nahi laga tha ki tum is hadh tak gir sakthe ho,you're fired,get lost."

Rahul was fuming seeing towards Geet & went from the hall immediately.Mr.Chopra was feeling ashamed becoz of his employee's behaviour & said with guilt not meeting Geet's eyes,"Am sorry Ms Geet that I've to ask you true reason.Ab mein aap par dabav nahi daaloonga is project keliye.Aap is par kam karna chathi hain toh I'll be happy if not then i won't be unhappy.Choice is your Ms.Geet & tell me your decision tomorrow when we meet in the office."And he exited the party immediately not meeting anyone's eyes.

Maan gave a penetrating gaze to Geet & said,"Tumhe sach bolne ki koi zaroorat nahin thi sabke saamne."Geet said not meeting his penetrating gaze,"Mein aapko aur nuksaan nahin karna chahthi thi."Maan shouted her hoarsely,"Har baar tum mere liye kuch na kuch karthi ho aur mein tumhare liye kuch bhi nahin kar saktha.Agar mujhe 1 ya 2 crores nuksaan jhota then I would've gained it from another projects.But what about you honour Geet,what about your reputation?Sabke saamne bina hichak ke tumne sab kuch kehdiya in logon ke saamne.Yeh corporate world mein akeli aurat ko kis tarah dekhte hein janthe ho...agar tumhe kuch hojatha to."

Geet was touched with his concerned words & said,"meri raksha karne ke liye aap sab log haina.Mujhe kis bhi cheez ki chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahin."Rishi aid sternly,"Tum Maan ki baat samajh nahin rahi ho Geet..."But Geet felt dizzy & she half-listened what Rishi & was abt to fall but some strong arms caught her & she fainted immediately.

Maan was panic when Geet fainted in his arms & he lifted her to restroom as they had come back to office.They were working for day & night for Mr.Chopra's project.Rishi called doctor & doctor came & examined her.Pinky was worried that she was in verge of tears.Doctor examined & said,"Kuch nahin,she's weak & aaj to usne kuch khaya bhi nahin subah se."

Everyone were shocked that why she didn't ate anything today."I've given some tablets & tonics,please give it to her correctly.And please don't give her any stress,she's mentally weak now.Please let her eat correctly,she needs a lot nourishment for now to become normal."Pinky couldn't see her in that state & she ran to the terrace crying.Adi saw this & followed her immediately.Maan saw them both & he also followed behind Adi.Here Rishi went to bring some food while Priya caressed her head lovingly.

Precap-Geet's truth

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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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monika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

awesome part love it i love to read both one by one both concept awesome

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

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PART-13

Pinky came to the terrace crying & sat at the ground looking defeated.Adi came & sat beside her & kept hand on her shoulder.Pinky turned & saw Adi & hugged him immediately & started crying wetting his shirt.Adi asked with concern rubbing her back,"Kya baat hai Pinky,tum ro kyun rahi ho?Don't worry,Geet will be alright."Pinky said painfully,"Adi,mein Geet ko aise dard mein nahin dekh sakthi."Adi was confused,"Par Geet ko huva kya hain,thodi si kamzor hain.But she'll become normal in ur care.Just don't worry abt her."Pinky said slowly,"Mein us dard ke baare mein baat nahin kar rahi hoon.Mein us dard ke baare mein baat kar rahin jo usne apne upar lagaya hai.Tum kuch nahin janthe,tum janana chahthe the na ki meine kyun mana kiya tha yeh baat na kehne ki hum log zinda hain aur tum yeh baat do saalon se jaanthe ho, maan veerji ke liye.Mein yeh sab kiya sirf Geet ke liye."

Adi was confused & said sternly,"Pinky saaf saaf bol ki tum kya keh rahi ho."Pinky stood & said wiping her tears,"Adi,yeh us waqt tha jab hum dono dost bane the.That was so fresh & tender to us but Geet was never like child.She was given responsibilities to fulfill in young age.Geet apne darji ki tarah hai.She never despise her principles.Do you know what is the definition for friendship to her is?Loyalty,protectiveness & her possessiveness.That's why she have very less friends,she want to mingle with those who give respect to her friendship.Then she came here & met Maan veerji & you & your friends.She thought that there was a change in her heart & mind seeing Maan veerji for the first time,when she bumped into him on the first day of the college.First time she was in the arms of a young man.She felt the change when she felt his arms with hesitation & fearThat fear didn't have any explanation in front of her.And after that she quarelled with Sam,which was a difference I saw inside her for the first time.When Sam said that Maan is her boy friend then i saw a jealousy in her eyes for a moment but went off immediately.She has the high power to resist her emotions towards anyone but not in front of me.Woh yeh jaanthi hai ki woh mujhse kuch bhi nahin chupa sakthi pakade jaane ke dar se.Tum jaanthe ho kyun woh Sam se ladthi thi?It was partly for me & for her love also.Becoz as far as I know her she never felt bad for anyone's spoken harsh words.Then as you predicted Maan was made to come back to you from Sam becoz as far as I know Geet never felt comfortable with any man if he's related to her.But she became comfortable to a stranger,an unknown man & he's MSK."

Adi knew half about Geet but this new truth was making him shock.Pinky continued,"Maan liked Geet as a best friend & Sam as girl friend which was making Geet jealous but she never showed it becoz she wanted Maan's happiness as she knew that how much Maan loved Sam.First Geet didn't understood the new feeling of this as love & confined herself in a barrier of friendship with Maan.But her heart didn't listen to her mind & she started to open her heart to Maan.After deeply in love with Maan,Geet thought of telling the truth to Sam & ask sorry to her & giving her Maan to Sam.But something was hidden in fate & Sam's plan also which came in front of Geet.Geet didn't go there just to surprise her but to talk to Sam.Geet was shocked to hear the truth that Sam,Maan se nahin Maan ke paison se pyaar karthi hai.Par jab Geet ne suna yeh sach tab uska dil khush huva tha aur dard bhi par the major part was she was MSK's best friend.Phir se uske usool uske saamne aagaye.Par Maan veerji ne Geet dosti par hi shak kar diya aur jhoote inzaam laga diya ki uasne mujhe badnaam karne ke liye woh rowdies ko bheja tha.Geet ko bahut dard huva Maan veerji ki baathe sun kar aur woh wahan se mikal gayi hostel ki taraf.Then she decided to meet her mother,she wanted to engulf herself in her mother's arms to feel peace.Seh started packing her clothes when I saw that then she couldn't avoid me.She wanted to go alone,but I never let her go when she was so disturbed state."

Adi then remembered how she was upset when she came to give CD at midnight.Pinky continued,"Geet was devastated,she didn't have any idea that what was going on in her life.This was the first words which she took it off by her heart.Do you think we escaped narrowly in that accident?Pinky nodded no & Adi was shocked.Pinky said painfully,"Mein tho bach gayi thi narrowly but Geet bahut ziddi hai,she made a way to get to the bus leaving me behind.Then I called my father,he knew Geet also.In face mere papa aur Geet papa dono bahut achche dost hai.He took his car & came to bus stand immediately.We chased the bus to stop Geet becoz she'll do to herself anything when she was upset like this aur pehli baar meri baat bhi nahin sun rahi thi.When bus reached Punjab border then it's brake failed aur woh khayi mein gir gaya.We were following the bus & came to know that the bus has fallen into ditch.We called the police & ambulance which came in half an hour to the spot.You know Geet that she always confident about her principles & she helped the people who were struck in the bus.After all the people were rescued she stood there blank thinking that what's going on in her life.When the police inspector called her then she didn't respond & stood there completely blank.After sometime she fainted in the bus only & the bus skidded & was about to fall deep into the ditch then one policeman entered the bus & rescued her.She was badly injured in head & had lost so much of blood.We shifted her to the Punjab hospital immediately & she was given medical aid.She went to coma for few days becoz she was still in that devastated state.After sometime she regained her consciousness when i informed her that Maan has broken with Sam.Geet was perfectly well after the news,she regained from coma & from devastated state.But when she came to know that you both had gone to London for further studies then she thought that becoz of her that Maan is in pain.She can't be able to control her feelings & she said everything to me & her family.Her family was supportive,they supproted her & made her forget those incidents & made her live for other once again."Pinky became silent & Adi asked,"Uske baad kya huva Pinky?"

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Pinky kept her head on his shoulder & started to say Geet's pain.Pinky took her deep breath & said,"Uske baad Geet ke darji ne ek ladka dhoonda uske liye."Adi said shocked,"Kya???"Pinky nodded yes & continued,"Geet ke darji thik se chaan been nahi ki aur Geet ka rishta to uske cousin ke saath ho raha tha.Geet ke dadibua ke pote jinhone kuch kaaran keliye darji ka rishta tod kar chale gaye the.Unhone ghar par aake Geet haath manga darji se.Darji socha is se toote huye rishte phir se jud jaayenge lekin huve babaji ke marzi se.Geet ka cousin Vikram unke saath rishta isliye jodna chahtha tha kyunki woh apne dada ki maut ka badla aur 20 saal se jo darji ne gaav se door rakha isilye.Aur Vikram toh Geet ko ek patni ki tarah nahi dekhna chahtha tha,he was seeing Geet lustfully.Yeh baat shaadi ke mehndi waale raat darji ko pata chal gaya ki Vikram Geet se rishta jodna isiliye chahtha hai kyunki woh pura Handa jaydad ki asli malik banana chatha tha aur Geet ko ek rakhel banan chahtha tha.After hearing the truth Geet was once again devastated becoz she killed her feelings for her marriage but she once again stood in the path where Maan veerji was standing 5yrs ago.Geet was mentally affected with this incident & she didn't talk to anyone not with me also.I tried everything to amke her come out of depression but nothing happened.then I got the news that you guys came back to India completing your studies then I told this news to Geet then her face lit up.She started to talk with everyone & she came to her original avatar.Then I decided to make my friend happy I've to get into Khurana constructions.Isiliye tumnse madat maangi aur mana kiya Maan veerji ko na batane ka.She always become happy seeing Maan from far away.She would come near Khurana mansion & get a glimpse of Maan & go from there making herself satisfied.Meine us se kaha bhi ki jaake Maan veerji se milo lekin usne sirf ek hi baat kaha ki agar woh milne ke liye chaloon aur woh phirse mujhpe shak kardiya ki mein unke paison ke peeche padi hoon tho mein kya karoon.I'm not having any strength to hear those harsh words from his lips once again Pinky,am happy like this.You know how much I feel calm when I see him every day.I feel so calm in my heart & am used to it.No need to talk to him,I can understand his way of moving."Adi heard this & his heart choked & tears rolled down from his eyes & he hugged Pinky tightly.

Precap-Geet's truth.

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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago