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Atiffa

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Posted: 13 years ago

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awesome updates 10,11,12,13,14 &15

it is awesome

loved the way each event turn out and make Maan realized what he has been missing

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love2_soma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

awesome n lovely updates...

its really amazing to see geet kissing maan n maan is happy with d kiss...he is smiling...wow...

i loved it...

thank u sooo much fr such a beautiful update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting...

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monika

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Posted: 13 years ago

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awesome update👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 13 years ago

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PART-16

Geet ran into her cabin & bolted the door & sat in the couch.She remembered the events which went down in the basement.Her eyes welled up & tears started to pour from her almond eyes.

Geet slapped herself & said immediately,"Kya zaroorat thi uske paas jaaane ki."Then she saw upwards,"Aapko tho maza aatha haina babaji aise situation creat karthe huye."Then she slapped herself once again & said,"Kya zaroorat thi unhe kiss karne ki...aur woh bhi moo peh...hayi babaji woh kya soch rahe honge..."

Then her almond eyes widened with shock,"Ab agar woh phirse mujh pe shak kardiya toh,phirse kehdiya toh ki unke paison ki peeche pada hoon mein..."Then she said thoughtfully,"Lekin Geet unhone bhi toh respond kiya tere kiss ko...par kyun????Kya woh bhi mujhse pyaar karne lage hain???"

Geet said remembereing their quarell 5 yrs back,"Geet tu bhi kisse umeed rakh rahi hain.Yeh MSK hai,yeh sirf woh aadha kapde pehnewali Sam ki tarah ladkiyaan hoti haina uski taraf dekh sakthe hain.Yeh patiala suit pahnewaali Geet nahi..."

She felt like her heart has been squeezed by someone & she choked & started crying.She kept her head on her knee which was folded against her chest.She started crying hoarsely.On that time someone said,"Tu kyun ro rahi hai...tu toh khush hona chahiye ki Maan ne tumhe respond to ki..."Geet lifted her head & saw around her that who said that.No one was there & she said innocently,"Kaun bola..."

No one answered but someone said from inside,"Abe gadhi moo khol."She opened her mouth & a tiny Geet walked outside from her mouth & leaned to the table & smirked at her.Geet asked innocnetly,"Kaun ho tum aur tum meri tarah kyun dikh rahi ho?"

That Geet answered,"Mein tumhara conscious hoon aur woh bhi achcha."Geet said puzzled,"Conscious!!!!"Her good conscious said,"Tum ro kyun rahi hai..."Another Geet came from inside good conscious & said,"Usne galathi ki hai isiliye ro rahi hai..."Geet said innocently,"Tum kaun ho."

That Geet said,"Mein tumhara guilt conscious hoon..."Geet saw them both innocently.Her good conscious asked to guilt conscious,"Woh kya galathi ki hain?"Guilt conscious answered carelessly,"Usne Darji ke ussoollon thoda hai.Darji ke yakeen ko tukde tukde kar dala hai."Good conscious saintly,"No,Geet ne sirf apni dil ki suni hai..."

Guilt conscious said,"Tum to wakay mein kamzor hote hain aur insaan ko kamzor bana dethi hain."Good conscious said calmly,"Nahi humari kamzori hi insaan ki takath hain.Jab rishte jud the hain tab yeh kamzori hi insaan ke sabse bada takat hoti hai.Hum kamzor nahi tum ho jo ander hi ander insaan ko khokla bana detha hai.Geet iski baat mat suno,yeh sirf tumhe kamzor kar raha hai.Tumne kuch galath kiya nahin hai.Tum sirf apna pyaar dikhayi hai Maan par jo tumne iske wajahse chupa diya tha 5 saal se."

Guilty conscious said sarcastically,"Haa...pyaar...isne toh dosti ke ussoolon ko bhi tod diya hai.Jis pyaar ke baare mein tum baat kar rahi ho kya tumhare woh Maan samjhega kya???Are woh 5 saal se nahi samjha aur us Sam ke peeche bhagtha raha,woh ab kya samjhega..Woh kya tumhe kadar karega,Tum uske peeche bavadi hote jaa rahi ho.woh sirf apna attitude dikhayega aur kahega kal jab tum usse milogi tab Geet kal jo hamare beech huva woh bhool javo.Hum dono aise kabhi nahi bansakthe,hum sirf dost hai aur aise hi rahenge."Good conscious said,"Kabhi nahi kyunki meine uske aankhon mein mere liye pyaar dekha hai."

Guilty conscious asked sarcastically,"Tumhare liye ya Geet ke liye."Good conscious asked irritatedly,"Mujhe ka matlab hum dono ko kyunki hum dono Geet ke ander se aaye hain,aur tu kya aasman se tapke hai kya???"Guilty conscious said insulting Geet,"Mein toh aasman nahin tapka hoon lekin teri tarah mein aasman ko choone ka advice nahi de saktha.Woh sirf dard detha hain Geet keliye."

Geet was silently listening their conversation & couldn't resist & said,"Bas karo aap dono aur chale jao yahan se..."Guilty conscious said angrily,"Hum toh chale jayenge lekin phir hume blame mat karna ki humne agah nahi kiya..."

And She vanished but Good conscious was abt say something but guilty conscious dragged her immediately & both vanished into thin air.Then Geet saw that she was still kept her head on her knee sleeping & thought that it's only a dream.But Geet decided that she'll distance herself from Maan.

Here Maan was standing in basement half naked & remembered the whole events which went on here.Maan remembered how Geet had muted his guilty blabbering by kissing him.And how the kiss had soothed his pain,the time she kissed his body,soul & heart had become Geet's...only Geet's.

On that time someone said,"Kya baat hai Maan bahut khush horahe ho?Yeh khushi kiske liye???"Maan saw around him but no one was seen & asked innocently,"Kaun bola,who's it???"Then he turned & was scared to see himself there.That was his good conscious & said,"Mein tumhare liye bahut khush hoon Maan.Dekha kaise tere chehre pe muskarahat ladhi Geet ne.Mujhe Geet hi tumhare liye achchi jeevan sangini hai.Aur koi nahi...Tum usse shaadi karlo Maan."

Guilty conscious who came from Good conscious,"Oye tu karna bhi mat,agar uske pas tu jaakar apni dil ki baat batayega tab woh tumhe joote se maaregi.Bhool gaya us din jab usne Sam ki sachayi tumhe batane ke liye aayi thi tab tumne dant kar bhaga diya tha.Are yaar samjha karo,agar tu uske saamne apni dil ki baat batayega to woh apne martial arts ke skill se teri haddiya tod ke rakh degi aur tumhara tai-chi skills uske martial arts skills ke saamne tai tai fish ho jayega."

Good conscious said saintly,"Nahi woh Maan se pyaar karthi hai,aur woh aisa kuch bhi nahi karegi...kabhi nahi."Guilty conscious said carelessly,"Woh hello sapne mein jeena band kardo.Tumhe kyaa lagtha hai ki woh is khadoos pyaar karegi jo har waqt apni badi badi aankhen dikatha rehta hai apne saamne wale ko,kabhi nahi..."

Good conscious asked saintly,"Toh phir usne kiss kyun kiya Maan ko???"Guilty conscious said carelessly,"Usne toh Geet ke haath ko bahut zor se pakda tha toh woh kya karthi,usne isse chup karvane ke liye apna moo use kiya aur kuch nahi.Iski badi badi aankhen toh chup nahi hoti dekhne se toh usne moo band karvadiya."

Good conscious said saintly,"Toh phir maine kyun mehsoos kiys uske pyaar ko jab usne mujhe kiss kiya tab..."On that time guilty conscious was abt to retort back but Maan said,"Tum dono ab vanish hojavo nahi toh mein tum dono ko tai-chi se bhagana hoga."

Both good & guilty conscious vanished immediately.Maan turned his opposite side but said confidently,"Geet,jitne bhi door mujhse chali jaane ki koshish karo lekin mein tumhe paa kar rahoonga aur tumnhari moo se mein yeh kehlakar rahoonga ki tum mujhse pyar karthi ho."He wore his dresses & went to his cabin.

Precap-Geet's guilty trip

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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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Whypadhu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

i just love it

plzzz add me in ur pm list.

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Atiffa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

awesome

loved it the way both fight their conscious

Maan has realized that she love him but what about him??

let see what happens now?

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monika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

great part love the way you show their inner feelings awesome

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kkiddoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

awesome ...

do pm me dear

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abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

just loved the update

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

i hope u dont mind posting the snippets here from the previous threads of urs...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2828602/ran-mysore

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Hi friends,since am new to this forum but i've started a story called JEEVAN SANGINI.Read it & tell your opinion.I want your support further guys.
JEEVAN SANGINI
CHARACTER SKETCH
SUKHDEV LAL HANDA-He's the head of Handa family.He's called as darji in the whole village.He's residing in Hoshirapur in Punjab.He's the chairman of the Panchayat of Hoshiarpur.He's kind,humble & down-to-earth person who loves his family very much.The whole village respects him because of his attitude.He's B.Sc graduate in Agriculture subject & is a farmer in profession.The very rich family in the whole district & has so many enemies because of his principles.He's the man who gives inportance for his priniciples.
BALWANT HANDA-Elder son of the Handa family & is an excellent player of Sitar & gave so many stage performance in the whole country.He's greedy slightly but if it comes to the case of his family then he won't step backwards by spending his money.He's an History graduate.
Daljit Handa-She's the first daughter-in-law of Sukhdevlal Handa & wife of Balwant.She's hot tempered woman & often loses temper with her husband but is very kind in heart.She's Economics graduate & an excellent Kathak dancer thought her dance is confined to the home only but is an excellent teacher to Geet & Rajji who're learning the dance from her.Balwant didn't wanted her wife to dance in front of public that why he stopped her & made her dance confined to the home only.She looks after the financial affairs of the house.She's like her mother-in-law & is very supportive to her husband.She loves her & her sister-in-law's children very much.
MOHINDER HANDA-He's the Second son of darji & is a very patience man.Never becomes angry on anyone & is a very good man.He's kind humble & down-to-earth person & is PA of the commissioner of the Hoshiarpur
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nice one...

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