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Posted: 13 years ago
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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2828936/jeevan-sangini-ran-mysore

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CHARACTER SKETCH
SUKHDEVLAL HANDA-He's very humble,kind & down-to-earth persons.He's agriculture graduate & farmer in profession & is very protective to his family.He gives his importance for his principles.Chairman of Panchayat of Hoshiarpur & has a very strict man in giving justice to the suffered people.

BALWANT HANDA-Father of Brij Handa & Rajji Handa & is also post-graduate in History.He's the lecturer of PU college in History in Hoshiarpur town.Very good father to his children Brij,Geet,Rajji.Tito.He's man of actions & never sits silent for any gossips.People is feared of him in the town as he's hot tempered man.

MOHINDER HANDA-Father of Geet Handa & Tito handa & is also graduate in Sociology.Soft spoken & highly patience man.He's the PA of commissioner of the Hoshiarpur.

DALJIT HANDA-She's the wife of Balwant & mother of Brij & Rajji & is an Economics graduate but is house wife.She looks after the financial affairs of the house & very supportive to her husband.

RANO HANDA-She's the wife of Mohinder & mother of Geet & Tito & is very obedient to her husband & her family.She likes Daljit very much as she looks after her like her daughter.She's Home Science graduate & an excellent chef in the house.

BRIJ HANDA-He's an hot tempered guy like his father but is an M.Sc graduate in Agriculture & is a farmer in profession.He's the next successor of the chairman seat as he's very kind,humble,down-to-earth person.He's only rough from outside but very soft from inside.He loves his family & wife Dolly.

DOLLY HANDA-She's also co-operative to her husband & is a Physics graduate & is a government high school teacher.She's so friendly with her sister-in-laws,Geet & Rajji & Brother-in-law Tito.

GEET HANDA-She's 21yrs old girl who has completed,B.E.Architecture in IIT Delhi.She knows Martial arts as it has become very need now in this world but is avery cute,bubbly & innocent.

RAJJI HANDA-She's 18yrs old doing MBBS second year in the medical college in Delhi.She's like her elder sister Geet & is idealising her in everything.She also know martial arts as she has learnt it from her sister.

LALA AMARNATH KHURANA-Grandfather of Maan Singh Khurana,Dev,Vicky,Anwesha.

SAVITHRI KHURANA-Grandmother of Maan,Dev,Vicky,Anwesha & is the head of the family.

RAJEEV & YASHODA KHURANA-They are no more & died in an accident.

MAAN SINGH KHURANA-He's 24yrs old hot tempered guy.He's arrogant,egoist,attitude person.


note-guys,i've started the story of this character sketch at another post.Please read that post.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2828758/jeevan-sangini-ran-mysore

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PROLOGUE
The cool breeze started fan her face & her hairs blew opposite to the air.The girl stood at the premises of the IIT Delhi hostel seeing the full moon which glared at her as if she had done a big mistake.That girl had hazel brown eyes,long nose,baby pink lips & she was perfect in body structure & stood seeing the moon intently.This was Geet Handa.Those hazel brown eyes had pain & disappointment.She remembered the previous events which went in Khurana Mansion in Maan Singh Khurana's room.

Maan,mein yahan tumhare aur Sameera ke baare mein baat karne ayin hu,"said geet politely.Maan frowned but said sternly,"Geet, mein is baare mein baat karna nahin chahta.Mein Sam se bahut pyaar kartha hoon & you also know this that I won't tolerate any words against her."
Geet said politely,"Paar maan ek baar meri baat to suno,Sam tumhare liye sahin nahin hai.Woh tumse nahin thumhare paison se pyaar karthi hai."Maan was now irritated & shouted at her,"Enough,tum meri khushi nahi dekh sakthi isiliye aise keh rahi ho.Ab mujhe pata chala ki tum itni possessive kyun ho.Kyunki tum meri paison ke peeche padi ho."Geet was shocked & said,"Maan..."Maan said angrily,"Agar itni shock hai amir baneka toh mein tumhe doonga paise bolo kitne chahiye tumhe?"Geet said angrily,"Enough Maan,mein tumhari best friend hoon iska matlab yeh nahin ki tum mere baare mein avainyi samjho.Lekin meri ek baat aakhri baar sunlo Sameera achchi Jeevan Sangini tere liye nahin ban sakthi aur jis din tumhe samjh aajayega us din bahut der hojayegi.And she left the mansion immediately.

A tear rolled down from those hazel eyes & said to herself,"No,you've insulted me then that doesn't mean that I won't save you.I'll save you from Sam."Geet went to Adi's home.Adi was amazed seeing Geet there & asked,"Geet,tu yahan kya kar rahi hein itni raat ko,ander aavon."Geet entered his house & said,"Veerji,I wanted to give you this CD.Woh kal aap seniors ki farewell party hein na.Isiliye yeh CD dene aayi thi,isme music meine download kiya hai after Maan proposes Sam,you please play this,veerji."Adi said confused,"Lekin choti tu hi lagathi to kya hota & Maan wants you beside him while he proposes Sam."Geet said hiding her tears,"Haan Veerji lekin mein kal Hoshiarpur jaa rahin hoon,kuch zaroori kaam aagaya hai.Mujhe jaana hein & best of luck for your future."And she was about to go then Adi held her hand & said,"Choti,mein drop kar detha hoon.Itni raat gaye mein tumhe akele hostel jaane nahi doonga.Aur tu permission nahin lekar aayi hein na.Mein tumhaare saat chaltha hoon."Geet nodded hiding her tears not giving any doubt to Adi that she's crying but Adi was her brother & best friend.He would understand her perfectly.


CHARACTERS-Handa family
SUKHDEVLAL HANDA
BALWANT HANDA
DALJIT HANDA
MOHINDER HANDA
RANO HANDA
BRIJ HANDA
DOLLY HANDA
GEET HANDA
RAJJI HANDA
TITO HANDA

Khurana family-
LALA AMARNATH KHURANA
SAVITHRI DEVI KHURANA
MAAN SINGH KHURANA
DEV SINGH KHURANA
NAINTARA KHURANA
VICKY SINGH KHURANA
ANWESHA KHURANA

Other characters-
PRASHANTH KHANDELWAL
ADITHYA KHANDELWAL
SASHA
TASHA
PINKY MANCHANDA
Mr.MANCHANDA
SHISHUPAL
VIKRAM MALIK

Part-1-page-1
Part-2-page-2
Part-3-page-3
Part-4A-page-3
Part-4B-page-3
Part-5-page-4
Part-6-page-5

PART-1
Two girls wearing patiala with full arm entered the Delhi IIT campus.The girl who had dark brown hazel eyes,long white nose,baby pink lips wore a white colour patiala & looked like n angel.Another girl was having light brown round eyes,long white nose & slightly red-tinged rosy lips & wore a sky blue colour patiala with full arm.The girls entered the premises of Delhi IIT nervously but didn't show that on the face.The two girls saw around them,the girls & boys were immersed in their own world.The girls wore modern dresses like jeans long or short dresses which would cover only the knees.After seeing them,the two girls walked silently towards administration office.Both the girls took the time table from the office & walked out of the office.The girl who wore blue dress walked ahaead leaving behind the white coloured dress girl.The white colour dressed girl was about to go outside the administration office but she bumped to someone & about to hit the floor & she closed her eyes immediately but was saved by strong arms.A handsome looking man held her from the waist & saved her from hitting the floor.That girl saw him & was amazed.He had chocolate brown eyes,long nose & exact 'M' shaped pink lips & clean shaven.He wore a tight jeans pant & shirt & his first two buttons of the shirt were opened which exposed the hard chest & his torso was seen as he wore the tight shirt.He glared at her immediately but that girl lowered her eyes & muffled,"Sorry,"and ran without giving the glance backwards.She was scared when she was in the arms of a stranger & first time she felt comfortable.He felt that she was scared giving one penetrating gaze to her eyes which were the window of her soul.He also felt hesitation & fear in those hazel eyes & shrugged & he also went from their taking his books which were scattered on the ground.The girl who wore white color patiala was Geet Handa & the girl who wore sky blue color patiala was Pinky Manchanda her best friend.The man who saved Geet from falling was Maan Singh Khurana.Geet walked towards Pinky who was seeing the notice board intently & said about the scholarship to Geet.On that time someone said from behind a cool girl's voice which has turned into sarcasm in her tone,"I didn't know that this college gives admission to charity cases like you both.Pinky was taken aback by her comment & saw her nervously.The girl wore a very short deep blue denim jeans & white color top.She wore a diamond belly chain which was seen as her top was tied tightly exposing her front waist.She wore high heeled golden sandals & the jeams short would barely cover her thighs.The girl had seen Geet bumping Maan Singh Khurana near administrative office & was furious that she had bumped her boy friend & came to Geet to confront her.This was Sameera Shroff who saw Geet & Pinky top to bottom & gave a disgusted look.She had applied so much make up to her face which was resumed of the make up to a spirit.Two girls stood besides Sameera like body guards to her & saw Geet & Pinky like they're seeing some aliens.
Pinky came closer to Geet & whispered something on her ear & both giggled immediately.Sameera or Sam saw them giggling & asked sternly,"What is so funny?"On that time Maan & his gang of friends came there & saw the situation to be tensed.Other girls & boys also not resist Sam as she was girl friend of Maan Singh Khurana.The two girls remained silent which made Sam shout,"Speak up."On that time Pinky was scared & shivered at her sudden action which made Geet livid.Because if anyone messed with her friends then she would never tolerate that.Geet said carelessly,"Usne kaha ki tum bhoot jaisa dikhiti ho seeing your over applied make up."Hearing this everyone squealed with laughter those who stood around them.Sam glared at them & the crowd became silent immediately seeing her deadly glare.Maan saw Geet angrily as she was insulting his girl friend.But Adi saw Geet & was impressed seeing her guts of resisting Sam.Because Sam was the daughter of notable politician Mr.R.S.Shroff who's the M.P.for Delhi constituency.Sam was spoilt,pamapered girl in her house that had lot of attitude.Sam saw Geet & fumed at her,"Just behave yourself am your senior,so give some respect to me."Geet saw her sternly & went from there dragging Pinky but stood halfway & turned towards Sam & said sternly,"Before I give you the respect to you think that do you have the ability to take respect from me?"Sam saw Geet like daggers are pointed towards her.Geet saw her anger & gave a sarcastic smile to her & went from there immediately for her orientation class.

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prologue
interesting...
so Maan and Geet are best friends...
Maan loves Sam...

part 1
nice start...
wow such a comeback to Sameera...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part-2
The orientation class started & the seniors & lecturers of Architecture dept welcomed the juniors.In this programme,seniors & juniors were left alone to interrogate each other & the lecturers left them alone.The seniors were Sameera,Maan,Aditya,Hemanth,Vikas,Meera,Niharika,Preethi & Priya & the juniors were Geet,Pinky,Rishi,Jagan,Ritwik,Panchi,Prachi & Srikanth.Adi,Geet & Pinky became friends very easily but Maan was feeling angry when Adi became friends with Geet & Pinky.During the orientation class Maan was assigned to Geet to interrogate which made both awkward.Sam saw them both & was feeling jealous & unfortunately Pinky was assigned to Sam.Sam couldn't see the closeness between Geet & Maan & spoke harsh words to Pinky angrily.Pinky didn't like that & she also spoke harsh words to Sam which made slap Pinky by Sam.Geet saw the slap & was livid & she went & slapped Sam angrily which made Maan livid.Maan said to Geet furiously,"How dare you?"Geet said furiously,"Shut up."Maan was shocked seeing a girl shouting at him on top of the voice.Everyone saw Geet & Maan with shock who stood there giving deadly glare to each other.Maan showed the indez finger to Geet & said angrily,"Listen..."Geet saw his finger & folded it & lowered it immediately which made him livid.Geet said furiously,"Mr Romeo,we're not assembled here to listen the harsh words of your Juliet.If she can't shut her mouth then she can leave.Speaking hrash words to us what she's going to prove that she's superior & we're her slaves.She can say anything to us & we'll listen to her like slaves then she's wrong.Make your Juliet to shut her mouth further or else she have to be ashamed of herself in front of everyone."Maan said angrily,"Tum bhool rahe ho ki tum Maan Singh Khurana se baat kar rahi ho."Geet said furiously,"Tum jo bhi ho insan ho bhagwan to nahi.Sam se kaho ki woh mere doston se door rahe.Mein apni insult bardaasht kar sakthi hoon lekin mere doston ki kabhi nahi.Aur jo woh gande politics khelthi hai yahan sabke saath use band karne ke liye kaho nahin to yeh Geet Handa zaroor band karvadegi."Maan stood there with shock & everyone enjoyed the shock on his face.Adi was impressed seeing Geet's guts & decided that she's the girl who bring Maan from Sam's charms.Because no one had guts to talk against Sam as she's the daughter of politician.If someone tried to misbehave with her or shout on her then that man would be found next day in the gutter murdered.But Maan was surprised at Geet because all the girls of the college drool over him because of his good looks & body but Geet didn't gave another glance to him,just mumbled sorry to him when she bumped to him.Maan was furious hearing her words it was hitting his ego.Adi was impressed by his decision of befriend Geet which had the power to make Maan come out of Sam's charms.Because Adi knew that Sam is after Maan's richness not of his love.And Adi tried to convince Maan about Sam but Maan didn't listened to anyone & always insulted his friends in front of Sam.Adi like Geet as his sister seeing her soft spoken nature to everyone.Geet would be good to her enemies but she was very possessive to her friends.If someone tried to harm her friends then her attitude would change entirely.She would forgive the person if he tried to murder her but if that person tried to harm her friends then she would kill that person without thinking.

Adi liked this attitude of Geet & was always protective to her.Adi liked Pinky very much & soon their love started to bloom in speed.Maan was having restless whenever he saw Geet but didn't understood this restlessness but tried to mingle with them because of Adi.Sam hated the appearance of Geet & started to become an obstacle in her pathway during classes but didn't work as Geet would have overpower her immediately.Sam would stop Geet & Pinky halfway & tried to insult them.Geet would be silent but Pinky would livid seeing Geet's insult by Sam & would oppose Sam.Sam would have tried to harm Pinky seeing her attittude & would ended up screaming with pain because Geet would twist her hand immediately.Sam was such a b**** that she would try to use her father's party workers to threaten Geet & Pinky.But Geet overcame that problem & fought with them because he had tried to threaten Pinky instead of Geet.

Classes started as usual & Geet & Pinky were in the close of watching of Adi after that Sam's party workers fiasco which Maan didn't know.But Maan had seen that whenever Sam's father's party workers heard Geet's name then they would wet their inners immediately.Because no one had seen such a good martial arts skilled woman like Geet & was afraid of talking about her in front of anyone.Maan was feeling a magnetic pull from Geet which was unknown to Geet.Maan was slightly convinced that Geet isn't wrong in her behaviour but hasn't forgiven her the insult of Sam.Then he also decided to befriend Geet as he saw that she's not a bad person because she's only possessive about her friends that's all.

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part 2
wow so nice...
Sameera is really such a spoilt brat...
wonder what Maan saw in her...
and like Geet's courage...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part-3

Days passed & Geet & Pinky became comfortable in college & hostel.They were in constant eyes of Adi saving them from ragging which Sam had the charge.Sam was hating the appearence of Geet even more powerfully & tried to destroy her image by sending the rowdies which she assigned to rip Geet's honour.But unfortunately they tried to rip honour of Pinky thinking she's Geet & got beatings by Geet touching Pinky in that way by them.Then Geet came to know that the rowdies were sent to threaten Her not Pinky by Sam.Geet was beoming thoughtful seeing Sam's behaviour that she's trying to treat them as slaves & can do anything.She also warned Sam directly to stay away from her or else she'll pay for it very dearly.But Sam didn't give any attention to Geet's warning.Geet & Pinky were enjoying college life & was enrolling themselves to the curricular activities while Maan came to know about the rowdies fiasco from Sam & was furious at Sam & confronted her.Maan thought after this truth about Sam that she's trying to defame Geet & warned Sam to stop these actions then Sam poured crocodile's tears in front of Maan & accepted her mistake in front of him & asked sorry to Geet.Geet noticed that Sam isn't asking forgiveness from her heart & was on her guard but forgave Sam infront of Maan silently.Maan saw her nature of sweet bubbly girl & became friend with Geet.Geet was happy to become best friend of Maan but she didn't know that what type of emotion is this.Meanwhile Maan was also contented having Geet beside him as if he has the biggest power in this whole world.Maan was attracted towards Geet but thought that it's only the affection of friendship.But Geet felt about him differently.She was feeling jealous whenever she saw Maan with Sam but would tolerate that because of Maan.Maan loved Sam truly but Sam loved Maan's money truly.Sam wanted power,money,richness beyond her father's richness but saw that she's going to become unsuccessful.Because Maan had appreciation to Geet which made Sam livid.No one would never impress Maan Singh Khurana but Geet had become the praising piece in front of Maan.When he explored Geet then he thought that why she didn't came to his life firstly before Sam.But he kept his thought to his mind only & was comfortable with Geet as a friend.Adi saw the change in Maan who was spending time with him & his friends instead of Sam.Sam was not getting any glimpse of Maan because of Geet she thought.Maan always liked Geet's company in these days & had forgiven her all mistakes which was done by her previously.Sam was trying to insult Geet one or the other way which wasn't going on because of Maan's presence.Sam was feeling frustrated because of Geet that Maan has stopped giving importance to her.Sam was doubting Maan's loyalty towards her & always having a row with Maan.

Sam was totally frustrated seeing Maan with Geet so close & decided to insult her.One day Geet,Maan,Pinky,Adi & their friends sat in the canteen having lunch together.Geet & Pinky were eating their lunch in top speed.Maan said seeing them eating the food in top speed,"Are,geet aaram se nahi to hiccups aajayegi."Geet said impatiently,"Maan,mujhe abhi drawing class hai aur agar hum dono thik time pe nahin pohonche to Professor Batra hum dono kachcha kha jayega."Maan admired her face which were pouting cutely to him.But Maan said without thinking,"Kachcha khane ka haq to sirf mera hai."And he wacked his head immediately.Geet asked angrily,"Kya kaha tune?"Maan said folding his hand in front of her,"Kuch nahin meri maa,khakhe jao yahan se aur waise bhi mera dimag khati rehti ho aaj kal."Geet saw him with big brown eyes & said,"Aur tu kya karta hein sirf dekhta rehta hai."Maan muffled,"Yeah."Which made Geet furious & was about to retort but someone pulled her immediately digging their nails in Geet's shoulder.Geet screamed with pain & saw that who did it.Sam said furiously,"Stop charming my boy friend you charity case,it's not going to work because he's my boy friend.How dare you sit with my boy friend?"Pinky said angrily,"Leave her now."Maan saw the behaviour & shouted at Sam hoarsely,"Sam tum bhool rahi ho ki Geet meri best friend hai & she has sat here with that right only."Sam was furious seeing the changed Maan who never tried to oppose her decision & had followed her blindly.Sam took Geet & Pinky's plate threw it to the ground & said angrily,"Go & sit there & eat your lunch there."Maan was livid seeing that she has insulted Geet & said furiously,"Enough Sam,you're my girl friend but that doesn't mean that you insult my friends,leave her or else you'll feel my wrath."Adi saw Maan with shock who was supporting his friends & smiled admiringly that the original MSK is coming back who had lost when Sam came into his life.Sam was furious & tried to held Geet's hair but Pinky gave a jerk & her grip was loosened from Geet.Sam rised her hand to slap but Geet caught it immediately & said,"I told you don't harm my friends.Aur waise bhi agar tumhe Maan ke saat koi problem hai toh civilise tarike se solve karo naaki yahan tamasha mat khada karo.Tumhare reputation ka sawaal hai better behave yourself."And she left the hand & took her bag & pinky's & left the canteen immediately.Adi & his gang left the place leaving Maan & Sam alone giving disgusted look to Sam.Sam saw Maan & was about to say then Maan cut across her & said furiously,"Sam if you've problem with Geet then let me make you clear that she's my best friend & I can't tolerate her insult anymore.If you've problem with Geet then solve it directly & if not then you can leave me permanently."And he went from there following Adi & Sam stood there with shock & trying to digest Maan's last words now.

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part 3
OMG hate this Sameera so much...
good Maan at least now supported his friends...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART-4A
Next morning Sam came to Geet & held her feet immediately poring crocodile tears in front of her.Sam cried continously,"Am sorry Geet for yesterday,lekin Maan mujhe chodna chahta hai.Please Geet you're the one who can convince him.Please use kaho ki woh aise bartaav mat kare.I can't live without him anymore.Tum kuch karo,mein Pinky se bhi maafi mangne keliye tayyar hoon.Mein apni saari gunah kubul karne keliye tayyar hoon please Maan se kaho ki woh mujhe na chode."Geet try to free her legs from Sam's grip but Sam held it tight & Adi said immediately,"Nahi choti,iske magarmach ki aasu par vishwas mat karo.Kya kuch nahi saha tum dono iske wajah se.Isine Pinky par woh rowdies ko bheja tha.Isike kehne par unlogon ne meri Pinky ko badnaam karne ki koshish ki.Isse mat maaf karo & she can't become best partner to Maan also.Yeh sirf paison se pyaar karthi hai.Dosti,pyaar,yeh kuch maina nahin rakhthi isse.Are kal to sher ki tarah tum par attack kiya tha.Isse pooch kya yeh aurat hai ya nahin."Sam said crying,"Adi,mujhe maaf kardo,mein Maan ke pyaar mein andhi hogayi thi isiliye yeh sab kar baithi jo ek aurat nahin karna chahiye.Mujhe maaf kardo,aaakhri baar,mein apne aap ko badalne keliye tayyar hoon.Meine socha ki is duniya mein paison ke alava kuch nahin hai,na koi rishta,na koi jasbath.Aaj mujhe pata chala ki dosti aur pyaar ki ehmiyat kya hai.Mujha maaf kardo mein aapse vaada karthi hoon ki mein apne aapko badloongi.Mujhe maaf kardo."Geet saw towards Sam's crying face & said without thinking,"Meine tumhe maaf kardiya hai & I'll help you in the case of Maan."Sam said gratefully,"Thank u,thank u very much."Sam went but gave a sinister smile towards Geet & thought,"Ab mein tumhe poori tarah se dooba doongi Geet.Tumhe aise Maan se alag karoongi ki tum yahan se uski shakal dikha bagir hi bhag jaogi."And she went from smirking seeing her victory.Adi said angrily,"Choti,tumne use maaf kyun kiya,tumhe pata hein na woh sirf jhoot bol rahi thi.To tune kyun kiya aisa???"Geet said innocently,"Nahi Veerji aaj pehli baar uske aankhon mein ek bebasi dekhi jo Maan keliye tha.Shayad woh sach mein pyaar karthi hain Maan se."Adi nodded seeing Geet innocence but he felt that Geet's feeling restless & thought,"Why Geet is feeling restless?"

Geet came to talk to Maan in their free period in canteen.Maan was immersed in his own thoughts that he woke up with a jerk when Geet shouted at him.Maan said hiding his restlessness which Geet had noticed,"Geet tum yahan,tumne to kahan ki tume library jaoge aaj.Kyun kya hua?"Geet said taking a deep breath & sitting beside him,"Maan,kya mein pooch sakthi hoon ki tumhari yeh bechaini kis keliye?"Maan was alarmed & thought,"Ab mein kya kahoon ise,mujhe hi pata ki meri mann mein aisi bechaini kyun."Geet observed Maan's expression intently,"Mujhe pata hai ki tumhari yeh bechaini kis keliye."Maan saw her eagerly as if she can explain about his restlessness."Sam keliye,right???"Maan's face became wrinkled & smiled weakly & thought,"Mein kabhi yeh mehsoos nahi kiya jab Sam meri pas hoti thi lekin..."He kept his hand on his heart & thought,"Yeh dil kyun bahut tezi se dhadak raha hein?"Geet said simply,"Maan,aap Sam ko ek aur baar chance kyun nahi dethe.Woh sachme aapse bahut pyaar karthi hai.Am sure she'll become perfect partner to you."Maan feeling even more restless & Geet became restless.Maan didn't answer anything but just nodded.Geet smiled seeing his approval & went to bring Sam from there.

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part 4 A
Geet is so innocent...
she loves Maan but for him sacrificing her love...
and Maan so dumb...
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PART-4B

Maan forgive Sam & once again hey were together because of Geet.Sam was planning to defame Geet in front of Maan so that Maan once again comes into her charm & she can make Maan act on her accord.But everytime she would fail because Maan knew Geet's behaviour.Geet was sweet bubbly & non-stop chatter box & was always made Maan laugh teasing him or Sam.Sam was feeling furious whenever Geet would make fun of her but resisted for Maan.Maan had become totally addicted to Geet & would always feel sad not seeing Geet for a second also.Sam was feeling difficult to seperate Geet from Maan as Maan always felt happy with Geet.Geet also felt happy with Maan whenever she was with him.Maan & Geet would always be together in every time.Soon time went off & they both discovered that Adi & Pinky are in love deeply & they both co-operated with them to confess their love.The air was filled with romance then only their exams came & they prepared for them.

Maan & Adi were first & second topper of IIT Delhi with highest GPA & Geet & Pinky were two year younger but they were also first & Second topper.Next came farewell party as Maan & Adi & his friends have to leave.Maan had decided to propose Sam & he first shared this news to Geet.Geet was excited but was sad also but she was wondering that why am sad?Geet kept all her thoughts sideways & organised the farewell party as it was their responsibility.Geet wanted to give this news to Sam & she went to Sam's house.When she entered Sam's house shouting then she heard someone's giggling.It was male voice but when she went near the room then Sam was blabbering.Geet opened the door slightly then she saw that Sam was sleeping on a man without clothes.They both were wrapped in the blanket & Sam had buried her head on his chest.Geet was shocked seeing her position & took her mobile & recorded it.Geet recognised the man immediately who had came to rip Pinky's honour thinking as her.Sam said smiling sinisterly,"Raj,our plan is successing & your advice worked in the case of Geet.I became friend with Geet showing crocodile tears & she believed me.Ab mere aur MSK ke beech koi nahin aasaktha.Mein jaldi se Maan ke saath shaadi kardoongi aur uske saari property ki eklouta malkin banjaoungi.Aur uske baad us MSK ko divorce dedoongi & leave him.And then we both will be rich forever.Lekin us Geet ko toh sabak sikhana hoga.Usne mujhe bahut nachaya,mujhe uski pair pakadna pada Maan ko mujhse shaadi karnekeliye raazi karnekeliye.Mein usse kabhi maaf nahin karungi."Raj said lovingly,"Relax Sam,jab sab paisa humare paas aajaye tab hum is Geet ke baare mein sochenge.Usne bhi mujhe bahut maara hein,mein usse chodoonga nahin."Sam said smiling lovingly,"Tujhe ek khush khabri dena hai,kal farewell party mein Maan mujhe propose karne wala hai."Raj was so happy & he took Sam's lips immediately & they proceeded further.But Geet took the mobile clip & ran from her house immediately which security has seen her.The security had went to take some tea then only Geet had entered Sam's house to give surprise to her but she caught Sam red-handedly.Then security dialled to Sam & said everything about Geet & Sam dialled Maan & controlled the situation saying the Geet wants to broke their relationship which was a lie.

Geet entered KM silently & entered Maan's room.Maan stood there drinking his drink & saw Geet entering KM.Geet said politely,"Maan..."Maan didn't answer but didn't face her also.She took the silence that he's listening to her & said politely,"Maan,mein yahan tumhare aur Sameera ke baare mein baat karne ayin hu."Maan frowned but said sternly,"Geet,mein is baare mein baat karna nahin chahta.Mein Sam se bahut pyaar kartha hoon & you also know this that I won't tolerate any words against her."Geet said politely,"Par Maan ek baar meri baat to suno.Sam tumhare liye sahi nahin hai woh tumse nahin tumhare paison se pyaar karthi hai."Maan was now irritated & shouted at her,"Enough tum meri khushi nahin dekh sakthi isiliye aise keh rahi ho.Ab mujhe pata chala ki tum itni possessive kyun ho.Kyunki tum mere paison ke peeche padi ho.Sam was right about you but I only argued that you're not like that but...abhi Sam ka hi phone tha tumhare aane se pehle aur ussne kaha ki tum uske saath jagada karke chaligayi yeh kehke ki Pinky ka balatkar karne ke liye ussne apne addmi ko bheja tha.Tum itni gir gayi ki tum apne dost ko nahin choda."Geet said with shock,"Maan...meine nahin kiya yeh sab.Yeh sab kuch Sam ne kiya aur usne mujhpe inzam lagayi hai aur wo bhi jhoota.Mein apne dost ke saath kabhi aisa nahi kar sakthi."Maan said angrily,"Jhoot bol rahi ho tum...agar itni shock hai amir baneka to mein tumhe doonga paise bolo kitne chahiye tumhe."Geet said angrily,"Enough Maan,mein tumhare best friend hoon iska matlab yeh nahin ki tum mere baare mein aivanyi samjho.Lekin meri ek baat aakhri baar sunlo Sameera tere liye achi jeevan sangini nahi ban sakthi aur jis din tumhe samajh ayegi us din bahut der hojayegi."And she left the mansion immediately.Maan felt that did he spoke harsh words to Geet but his ego didn't permit him to think about it.

Geet came back to the hostel & stood seeing the full moon which glared at her like she had done some mistake.Geet's eyes welled up immediately hearing Maan's harsh words & tears poured down immediately.Then she closed her eyes & darji came to her vision & darji said lovingly,"Puttar,tu haar manana math,usse kaise bhi karke bata."Then she opened her eyes immediately & saw towards the full moon & said,"No,you've insulted me then that doesn't mean I won't save you.I'll save you from Sam."She transferred the mobile clip to the CD & went Adi's house immediately wrapping herself from head so that no one recognises her or followes her.She knocked Adi's door & Adi opened it.Adi's father opened it & saw Geet there & said,"Are Geet puttar,tu yahan kaise?"Geet asked politely,"Uncle Adi veerji hai kya ghar pe?"Adi's father nodded yes to her & told to come inside.Geet entered & sat on the sofa.Adi came from his room immediately & said,"Geet.tu yahan kya kar rahi hai itni raat ko."Geet gave the CD & said,"Veerji,I wanted to give you this CD.Woh kal aap seniors ki farewell party hai na,isiliye yeh CD dene aayi thi.Isme meine music download kiya hai,after Maan proposes Sam,you please play this CD veerji."Adi said confused,"Lekin choti tuhi lagathi to kya hota & Maan wants u beside him while he proposes Sam."Geet said hiding her tears,"Haan veerji lekin kal mein Hoshiarpur ja rahi hoon,kuch zaroori kaam aagaya hain.Mujhe jaana hai & best of luck for your future."And was about to go but Adi stopped her & said,"Choti,mein drop kardoonga itni raat gaye mein tumhe akele hostel jaane nahi doonga.Aur tu permission lekar yahan nahin aayi he na.Mein chaltha hoon tere saath."Geet nodded yes hiding her tears not giving any doubt to Adi that she's crying but how can she hide it as Adi is her dearest brother & best friend.Adi knew something wrong because Geet won't come like that at midnight from the hostel but left Geet giving some space so that she'll be cheerful when she goes to meet her family.

Next morning Adi took the CD & went to play it after Maan proposes Sam.Maan proposed Sam in the farewell party & Sam accepted his proposal & he put the diamond ring to her.Adi was praying babaji so that this proposal will be broken down any other way & was cursing himself who stood there feeling helpless seeing the sight.

PRECAP-shocking news of death of Geet & Pinky.

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part 4 B
disgusting Sameera...
poor Geet...
the precap is scary...
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PART-5

Maan proposed Sam not seeing the happy face of Geet am mean in absence of Geet.Maan was feeling restless as if he had betrayed someone but didn't know who he betrayed.Meanwhile Adi stood feeling helpless seeing the proposal & was praying to babaji so that this proposal will be broken down soon.When the dance of Maan & Sam's moment came then someone's voice said from the projector,"Raj our plan is successing..."Every man who were present in the farewell party witnessed the CD which was played by Adi.Adi didn't know that this type of content is there in the CD & remembered that this was the CD which Geet gave him to play in the farewell party convincing that it is only music CD.Sam saw the CD with mouth hanging open with shock.Maan saw the CD with shock & now understood why yesterday Geet had come to KM.When Adi saw the CD then he recognised the man who was with Sam & said,"Yeh aadmi tumhare saath kya kar raha hai,isine Pinky ko badnaam karne ki koshish ki."On that time Maan's eyes widened with shock & he remembered his harsh words to Geet accusing that she tried to defame her best friend in front of society.Maan said slowly,"Adi tum is aadmi ko jaanthe ho."Adi said angrily,"Jaantha hoon,agar yeh aadmi miljaye to mein iska khoon kardoonga,isine meri Pinky ko choone ki koshish ki.Are yeh aadmi toh Geet ko balatkar karne keliye yahan aaya tha leking badkismathi se meri pnky phas gayi.Us waqt hi Geet ne Pniky ko bachaya tha is se lad kar.Pniky mujhe sab kuch bata diya tha us waqt.Aur yeh aadmi Sam ke kehne par yahan aaya tha."Maan asked frozen Sam,"Sam bolo kya yeh sach hai,yeh sach hai,batavo."Sam stood silently not able to handle the situation lowering her head with shame.Maan saw her & shouted at her,"Speak up."Adi stood seeing her fuming & said,"Yeh kya batayegi,yeh to apne hi jaal mein phaas chuki hai ab."Maan stood there with guilt & remembered his harsh words to Geet & said,"Hey babaji,yeh meine kya kardiya.Geet to mujhe aaga karne aayi thi lekin us par kabhi meine vishwas hi nahin kiya,us par jhoota inzam laga diya."Sam gained up courage last time to control the situation & said,"Maan,don't believe Geet,she's the tricky cheater & b****.On that time she got a tight slap from Maan & said furiously,"Don't you dare talk about my friend like that,she's my friend,my best friend."And he pulled the diamond ring from Sam's finger & ran outside in search of Geet.Adi gave a disgusted look to Sam & followed Maan immediately.Sam stood there angry on Geet that she has flopped her plan completely.

Maan ran to hostel but the room was empty & came to know that Geet & Pinky both have left to Hoshiarpur from roommates.Then Maan & Adi ran to bus stand & asked about the Hoshiarpur bus.But on that time in inquiry the man got the news that the Hoshiarpur bus has fallen into ditch because of break failing & none were alive.Maan & Adi stood there frozen in shock hearing the news on that time their friends came there & try to make them to present world.Then Maan,Adi & his friends drove to accident spot & came to know that Geet & Pinky both died.They couldn't see the body as the bus caught fire falling to the deep into the ditch.Maan's heart stopped to beat & saw the disaster scene completely blank.Adi couldn't bear this departure of Pinky,his beloved & his little sister Geet.Maan & Adi's parents couldn't bear the state of Maan & Adi & they sent them to London to further study.Maan & Adi didn't came to India till the need came & now they're coming back after 5yrs of the Geet's & Pinky's death.




AFTER 5 YEARS---------------


The two girls climbed down from the train holding the luggage in the Delhi junction.The hazel eyed girl took the luggage while light brown eyed girl called taxi.They sat in the taxi & told to the driver to go to Janakpuri keeping their luggage in back of the car.The driver drove the taxi to the place & the light brown eyed girl paid the taxi driver & took their luggage & entered the house.The hazel eyed girl was Geet & the light brown eyed girl was Pinky.The two girls entered & ringed the bell.A man came & opened the door with aarti thali.The two girls smiled to the man & was about to enter but was stopped by man & he did the aarti.Geet frowned & said,"Yeh kya uncle aap bhi aarti kar rahen hein.Meren ghar mein bhi aise kar rahen hein jab bhi mein jaathi hoon tab.It was only the small accident,this is ridiculus."Manchanda said sternly doing aarti to them,"You may think ridiculus but how much we've suffered we only know.Jab tum dono ko behosh wahan dekha tab meri jaan jake waapas aayi."Geet felt bad hearing her uncle's words & said guiltily,"Am sorry uncle if I've spoken u rudely."Manchanda said,"Oh dear you're so sweet that I never be angry with you."Geet smiled sweetly."Are mein to poochna hi bhool gaya that ki tumhara interview ka kya huva tha us din."Geet said happily,"Uncle,i've been appointed as junior architect of Khurana constructions.Par kaash mein Maan ki company ke baare mein pata karthi to mein ek baar usse mil lethi."Pinky asked frowning,"Kyun phir se ek baar kehlwane ke liye ki tumhari shakal mat dikhana."Geet said innocently,"Lekin usne aisa nahi kaha tha us din..."Pinky said angrily,"Lekin matlab tho aisa hi tha..."Before Geet retort back Pinky uncle interrupted them & said sternly,"Enough girls get ready for your first day of work."Both the girls got ready gulping down the delicious breakfast which was prepared by Geet & went to catch the bus to KC.

Precap-Adi-"Maan,you're going to see the biggest miracle in this world."

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part 5
awesome...
Maan now knows the truth...
present
so Geet and Pinky are alive and Geet is gonna join KC...
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PART-6

KHURANA MANSION AT 6AM

A man of 24yrs aged doing his working out in gym & practising Tai-chi with the help of the stick.That man had chocolate brown eyes,M-shaped pink rosy lips,long nose & stuble.This was Maan Singh Khurana.He was the most handsome man having 6 packs abs & the perfect body shape.He's perfect in everything but his eyes had a strange pain & guilt & today his eyes had the pain even more.Because today only he had heard the death news of Geet & Pinky.Maan closed his eyes but Geet came to his vision smiling then a smile crept on his lips.He remembered Geet's pranks & his smile had widened remembering Geet's pranks & pouting face.This wasn't unnoticed by dadima who was the head of Khurana family when she walked to the gym to talk to him about his marraige.Dadima said smiling,"Kya baat hai aaj hamare pote ke chehre par itni achchi muskurahat dekh rahe hain.Kya baat Maan aap kise yaad karke itna has rahe hain."Maan saw his dadima walking inside the gym & said composing his grim expression,"Koi nahi dadima,aap yahan kyun aayi hain."Dadima said politely,"Hum aapse aapki shaadi ke baare mein baat karna chahte hain..."before she continue Maan said,"Please dadima,mujhe shaadi nahin karna.Aap is baare mein baat karna mujhse band kardijiye."And he took his towel & exited the gym before dadima insist him to listen to her.Dadima twisted her lips & said,"Hum ek ladki ke baare mein baat karna chahte hein jinhone hamari jaan bachayi thi doobne se jab hum Amritsar gaye huye the aapke liye.Woh ladki bahut khoobsurat hai,bilkul pari ki tarah.Thik he Maan bete,agar aap hamare pote hai to hum aapki dadi hein.Kaise bhi karke hum aapse haan bulvahi lenge Maan bete."Here Maan reached his room & sat on the bed & closed his eyes then once again geet came to his vision then he opened the drawyer of his bedside table.There was a photo frame which was kept upside down.He took the frame & saw the photo.There Geet stood beside him with Pinky & Adi smiling at him peacefully.He remembered his row with Geet & a tear rolled down from his eyes.Maan said wiping it immediately,"Kyun mujhse door chaligayi Geet ek baar bhi mujhe mauka nahi diya apne galathi sudharne ka.Aaj bhi mein pashchatap ki agni mein jal raha hoon.Tum par jhoota inzam lagane ki saza yeh hai ki mein apne doston se door hogaya.Kya tum wapas nahi aa sakthi mere liye.Mujhe tumhari hasi mahsoos karne do,tumhari shararate mahssos karne do,tumhari mazak mahsoos karne do."Then he took the photo & kept it in the drawyer back & said in disappointment,"Tum us jagah chaligayi ho jahan se wapas aana bahut mushkil hai."Then he closed his eyes & then once again Geet came to his vision & then a small smile crept on his lips but opened it & went to washroom to freshen up.He got ready wearing the white colour shirt & coat & tied the tie to his neck on that time dadima called,"Maan,breakfast is ready,jaldi neeche aajavo."Maan took his laptop & some files & came down & gave that to driver to keep it in his car & went to dining table to have breakfast.He had his breakfast silently & went to the office.

Maan sat there in the usual traffic but saw outside through the window then he saw Geet & Pinky there who were waiting for the bus.The bus came & no one was there when Maan blinked once again.Maan was disappointed & he made grim face once again thinking its only a dream.Meanwhile Pinky & Geet entered the KC at correct time & sat there waiting for the boss.But someone who was familiar entered the office before the boss,it was Adi.Adi saw Geet & Pinky there & was shocked & stood there with frozen state,his heart stopped beating as if he has seen a bhoot.On that time Sasha who was wearing short skirt entered the office & walked ahead Adi not glancing him for a second & saw Geet & Pinky there.Sasha came near them & asked,"Kaun hai aap log?"Geet & Pinky took their appointment letter & showed it to Sasha.Sasha saw that & said,"MK,abhi bhi aate honge,aap dono unse milke report kijiyega."Both nodded politely & Sasha gave their appointment letters back & called Adi.Adi stood there stunned seeing Pinky & Geet but his Pinky alive & Geet my little sister she's also alive.Both Geet & Pinky turned towards Adi & saw them with amazement.Geet saw Adi & said,"Adi veerji."And saw towards Pinky who stood there with shock seeing Adi.Adi walked towards Pinky & touched her & felt her soft feathery skin & familiar scent for he was crazy 5yrs ago.Adi hugged Pinky immediately feeling her skin & his heart started to throb in top speed feeling her there.Adi asked feeling her,"Where were you been,pata hai kitna dhoonda maine tum dono ko aur aaj purusat mili aapko mujhse milne keliye.Mera dil kabhi nahin mana tha ki tum dono mar chuke ho lekin is duniya se mein chaltha raha.I won't talk to you both.Tum dono meri jaan hi nikal di aisa karke."Geet said politely seeing his angry face,"Lekin Adi veerji aap yahan kya kar rahe hain."Adi was about to say that this is Maan's office but resisted fearing that Geet would exit immediately hearing his name & said simply,"Mein yahan kaam kartha hoon aur mein yahan ke accounts dept handle kartha hoon."Geet said smiling,"Achcha tab to Pinky ke liye bahoot achcha hoga kyunki woh aapke under hi kaan karne wali hai."Sasha didn't saw their get together & went from there to do her work.Adi smiled at Geet & took the appointment letter from Pinky & said,"Mujhe nahi pata that ki meri beloved yahan kaam karnewali hai lekin Geet tumhe meri boss se milna hoga"seeing her appointment letter,"You'll have to report him only."Geet said nervously,"Adi veerji aapka boss kaisa hai?"Adi smiled but said frowning,"Khaddos hai,bahut hi hot tempered guy hai."Geet gulped down her saliva nervously & asked,"Itna gussewala insan hai?"Adi nodded on that siren sounded & all the staff who stood freely started running this way & that way nervously.Sasha ran near the door of his office & kept some file there & ran & stood in front to say him good morning.Adi gulped down saliva & ran immediately to his office dragging Pinky & Geet from there.Geet saw only back of the boss who went to his cabin nodding to Sasha only from Adi's cabin which was in his left side.Maan went inside & dialled to Adi & said,"What is it Adi,tum kis miracle ke baare mein baat kar rahe the.I was in the lift that 's why I didn't listen u clearly."Adi said nervously,"Wahi mein dikhatha hoon sir,kya mein aapke cabin mein aajavoon?"Maan said bossily,"Thik hai aajao."Adi took Pinky & Geet to Maan's cabin immediately.

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part 6
lovely...
cant wait for the aamne saamne meet...
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part 7
very nice...
Maan's dream was nice...
Geet just forgave him easily...
oh ho Sasha has crush on Maan...
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part 8
very good Sameera gayi Sasha ko chodke gayi...
nice part...
Maan still hasnt realized his feelings for Geet...

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